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Surono
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Midnaait
Definitive BG :^






Topic Starter
Surono

Midnaait wrote:

Definitive BG :^



:eyes:



/me giggle
Aloda
:eyes:

[Metadata]
You have 'Smash' and 'BGM' in the tags twice.

I'm just gonna assume the rest of the tags are good, there's a lot to check through :o

[diff name]
I get what you're mapping to with the finisher on 00:20:806 (3) - but really it's way more intuitive to play as a normal note.

00:41:487 (86,87,1) - The sv here makes this pattern pretty awkward to read, try toning it down a little. I also think kkD fits better here, if only because it makes the finisher a little easier to hit.

01:33:445 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Maybe I'm just bad at 1/6 but this pattern feels pretty awkward to play to me. Maybe try changing 01:33:637 (31,32,33,34) - to kkdk or kkkd but idk maybe it's fine as is.

Again, I don't like the sv at 02:54:214 - It just feels kind of awkward dropping it a little then going back to normal so suddenly. Maybe you could increase it instead, or just remove it entirely.

04:05:560 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - Try k ddk d k, just fits better imo.

04:25:560 - 04:37:868 - a few of the patterns in here are kind of unintuitive to play. Just looking at the blue-tick sounds you've mapped doublets too, it's pretty inconsistent in the way you've mapped to them. Just comparing something like 04:26:618 (150,151) - to 04:28:060 (159,160) - It's the same rhythm here in the song with a different pitch, so having it structured differently makes playing it feel really unintuitive and awkward in general. Then, in the second half of this section for the same rhythms, you've just used single notes 04:32:772 (191) - and 04:34:310 (201) -. I'd be okay with you using a more complex version of the same structure, but consistency is key. For example, if you just remove 04:32:387 (188) - and add a note at 04:32:675 - instead, it's a much more consistent structure here that plays pretty nicely.

06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - The gaps you've left in this section are pretty inconsistent, and the way they break up the rhythm honestly feels pretty weird. Try making them more regular and in line with the music.

Sorry for being so petty about sv, but try making 07:10:031 - smoother, it seems quite sudden and I'd like it to be a more gradual change.


That's all for now. Let me know when you've applied this and I'll take another look.
Topic Starter
Surono
its time
Midnaait

Aloda wrote:

:eyes:

[diff name]

Again, I don't like the sv at 02:54:214 - It just feels kind of awkward dropping it a little then going back to normal so suddenly. Maybe you could increase it instead, or just remove it entirely. idk, for me it's nice as it is, maybe going to decrease the intensity a bit, because making the SV higher would overlap with the next little section of notes lol

04:25:560 - 04:37:868 - a few of the patterns in here are kind of unintuitive to play. Just looking at the blue-tick sounds you've mapped doublets too, it's pretty inconsistent in the way you've mapped to them. Just comparing something like 04:26:618 (150,151) - to 04:28:060 (159,160) - It's the same rhythm here in the song with a different pitch, so having it structured differently makes playing it feel really unintuitive and awkward in general. Then, in the second half of this section for the same rhythms, you've just used single notes 04:32:772 (191) - and 04:34:310 (201) -. I'd be okay with you using a more complex version of the same structure, but consistency is key. For example, if you just remove 04:32:387 (188) - and add a note at 04:32:675 - instead, it's a much more consistent structure here that plays pretty nicely. I agree, changed a bit the structure to be a bit more consistent

Sorry for being so petty about sv, but try making 07:10:031 - smoother, it seems quite sudden and I'd like it to be a more gradual change. Sure

That's all for now. Let me know when you've applied this and I'll take another look.
Thanks :^

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Topic Starter
Surono

Aloda wrote:

:eyes:

[Metadata]
You have 'Smash' and 'BGM' in the tags twice. ups

I'm just gonna assume the rest of the tags are good, there's a lot to check through :o XD

[diff name]
I get what you're mapping to with the finisher on 00:20:806 (3) - but really it's way more intuitive to play as a normal note. its fine for me since the bpm is low

00:41:487 (86,87,1) - The sv here makes this pattern pretty awkward to read, try toning it down a little. I also think kkD fits better here, if only because it makes the finisher a little easier to hit. right, 00:41:374 - added 1.05 and change that as kat to fit the similar sound around here such voice effect or rhythm

01:33:445 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - Maybe I'm just bad at 1/6 but this pattern feels pretty awkward to play to me. Maybe try changing 01:33:637 (31,32,33,34) - to kkdk or kkkd but idk maybe it's fine as is. its fine for me, it also 01:33:637 (31,34) - emphasized the impact voice then 01:33:701 (32,33) - these for low voice

04:05:560 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - Try k ddk d k, just fits better imo. I'd like to keep the current structure colors and also the emphasis of kkd pattern seems interesting at high percussion

06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - The gaps you've left in this section are pretty inconsistent, and the way they break up the rhythm honestly feels pretty weird. Try making them more regular and in line with the music. 06:38:300 - made the structures as K d K d K d K ddkkd K and the others i dont see problem with it,
since I intended to map some vocals and impact sounds with the gaps for variation


That's all for now. Let me know when you've applied this and I'll take another look.
thanks Aloda <3

Changed BG, please redownload.
Shadowa Pinkman
it's happening aaa
anikis 2069 when
Alwaysyukaz
NDANG RENGKED SUR SELAK BUTUH MEEMSSSSHHH PEPESSSHH AAAAAAAA :"""000
Topic Starter
Surono
WOKWOKWOKWOKW cecedes mengikechh

2017 anikis existd already

now.. what? :cryshrugs:
Aloda
mmmmm Just a few things

[a]
02:12:195 (4) - Remove? Fits the melody better and makes this a little nicer to play.

05:29:791 (18) - remove finish? Feels pretty weird having it here and not at similar places elsewhere in the section (like 05:35:945 - etc).

06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - Mostly okay now but I'd like more consistency between the similar rhythms at 06:41:762 - 06:47:916 - k dk compared to K d K is pretty weird.

lmk when you're done.
Topic Starter
Surono

Aloda wrote:

mmmmm Just a few things Anhgnhng

[a]
02:12:195 (4) - Remove? Fits the melody better and makes this a little nicer to play. pls, I focus Anikis voice :^)

05:29:791 (18) - remove finish? Feels pretty weird having it here and not at similar places elsewhere in the section (like 05:35:945 - etc). difference, the first intended for the strong vocal so yeah, not significant to emphasis/consistent which the second link you pointd out

06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - Mostly okay now but I'd like more consistency between the similar rhythms at 06:41:762 - 06:47:916 - k dk compared to K d K is pretty weird. its different emphasis, since the second rhythm intended for strong vocal so yeah da structures differ. I dont think about consistency but variation

lmk when you're done.
hnghgnghn
Warfu
another ANIKI? wtf suronuh xDDDD
holy shhtse collab with Midnaait :ooooo
good luck with another freakin' long map and make spanks gret agan (?
holy fkrkdsfjin TAGS
iloveyou4ever
no man in the BG 0/10
Topic Starter
Surono
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/720940 soonTM

iloveyou4ever wrote:

no man in the BG 0/10
pls d 3 3p looking da bg :^)) kwowkw
Aloda
Okay.
Lirai
Unsnapped timing lines :
07:41:762
08:31:089
Good Luck.

and Srry i cant help you with my Penoz w
Arzenvald
konmai will sue
Greenshell


should I shoot em out :WOKE:
Topic Starter
Surono

DE-CADE wrote:

Unsnapped timing lines :
07:41:762 fixed
08:31:089 it doesnt affect the gameplay except da above that makes error gameplay - _- but well fixed for N E A T
Good Luck.

and Srry i cant help you with my Penoz w
Pianos huee, papa thanks

ajeemaniz u dem anikis no konmai, konmai will let it cuz FOR FULUS MONEY $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

greenutshell dont let anikis nggghnnn to grandpa JUN
Aloda
Okay2.
Shima Rin
Why no mania diff :(
Feerum
👀
Topic Starter
Surono
:cry:

blame DCD and KK not being productive daddy and anikis 👀
Xinnoh
;-;
Warfu
Aniki isn't gone... he will always be here </3
Topic Starter
Surono
I cant belive it, I really miss that great man. anything is really happier from him, aa a.....
Stefan
02:57:483 (1,2) - Please try to implement an alternative to avoid the overlap between these two notes.
07:23:108 - just been wondering why you've skipped this sound.

okay.
Topic Starter
Surono
02:57:483 - I think the speed sv of this finisher looks fine for me and doesnt disturb 02:57:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - with the next pattern structure, yeh player just need to prepared for it.. maybe keep focus on structures then finisher noticed

07:23:108 - yahh weird to ignore it, added

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Stefan
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Midnaait

Stefan wrote:

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Thank♂you
amge
Thank♂you
Topic Starter
Surono
everyone ♂
Feerum
Thank ♂ You ♂ Sir
Raiden
as req
Topic Starter
Surono
I forgot to move 07:23:300 - this green line to 07:23:012 - here when 07:23:108 - I applied to add notes in here from Stefan suggestin, because its fatal overlap notes

ok now fixed, sorry guys.. lets make aniki great again
Aloda
Okay3.
Maxus
Kapan gulat internasional 2017
Topic Starter
Surono

Maxus wrote:

Kapan gulat internasional 2017
GYM EVERYDAY BROOHhh
Midnaait
Dem let me do a final mod before it gets qualified :^

[♂]

00:13:760 - Add a volume line of 60% or so to decrease the volume of the spinner, remember to put another one around 00:20:124 - with the full volume so it affects these notes 00:20:578 (1,2) -
00:43:253 - Not sure why this SV is here but if you wanna keep it make it a bit higher, if not you can delete :^
00:48:060 - Same as first suggestion (maybe around 75% this time), then add a 100% one in 00:49:310 -
02:17:627 (34,35) - I'm still thinking this should be dk lol, flows better into the finisher note and it follows better the melody
06:10:175 - Add a 1.05x SV here so the SV is equal on that little timing change

That's all kwkwkwkwk
(ʘ ͜ʖʘ)
Topic Starter
Surono
😒

will do tommorow, demm midnight time :sweat:

edited March 15

- im fine leave this as 100 since its short spinner with that sound like increasing .. not soft nor flat, but yeah why not since its bubble state lol 69%
- yes, just delete. not monika kwkw
- put 30% vol
- circle 34 the first noticeable impact, so yeah kd ahaha. not trying to make it flows but emphasized
- thank you sir added and put 69% lol

<3

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Stefan
Midnaait

Stefan wrote:


Thank♂You²
Topic Starter
Surono
kwkwkwk F2
Maxus
kpan2 ajak wa GD mania jg
Topic Starter
Surono
haruslach~
FAMoss
surono tampan
Topic Starter
Surono
kamu tampanz tidak C ^ :
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