mmmmm Just a few things
[a]
02:12:195 (4) - Remove? Fits the melody better and makes this a little nicer to play.
05:29:791 (18) - remove finish? Feels pretty weird having it here and not at similar places elsewhere in the section (like 05:35:945 - etc).
06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - Mostly okay now but I'd like more consistency between the similar rhythms at 06:41:762 - 06:47:916 - k dk compared to K d K is pretty weird.
lmk when you're done.
[a]
02:12:195 (4) - Remove? Fits the melody better and makes this a little nicer to play.
05:29:791 (18) - remove finish? Feels pretty weird having it here and not at similar places elsewhere in the section (like 05:35:945 - etc).
06:37:147 - 07:07:916 - Mostly okay now but I'd like more consistency between the similar rhythms at 06:41:762 - 06:47:916 - k dk compared to K d K is pretty weird.
lmk when you're done.