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AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size)

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Astom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 07 de enero de 2011 at 2:08:11

Artist: AyaRuka
Title: Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size)
Source: Omamori Himari
Tags: frost-b-spec Mafiamaster KenezzEdward Rucker osuplayer111
BPM: 173,99
Filesize: 6463kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andrea's Hard (4,91 stars, 242 notes)
  2. fbs's Hard (4,48 stars, 168 notes)
  3. Insane (4,98 stars, 247 notes)
  4. Kenezz's Easy (0,8 stars, 54 notes)
  5. Mafia's Normal (3,68 stars, 127 notes)
  6. Ruc's Himari (4,76 stars, 216 notes)
Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kenezz's Easy 100%
Mafia's Normal 100%
fbs's Hard 100%
Ruc's Himari 100%
Andrea's Hard 100%
Insane 100%

SB 100%
Skin 100%
frost-b-spec
done~

suggestion
offset:also -5ms

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [fbs's Normal+].osu
frost-b-spec
Mafiamaster
NatsumeRin
Too Hard Loli Catgirl Avatar.
Kenezz
Hey!
Termine~
Espero que te guste y perdón por la tardanza :3

Take your Star!

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [Kenezz's Easy].osu
Rucker
frost-b-spec
plz add update my diff~ :o
Ishmon
good job
Topic Starter
Astom
Ok some changes, I added Kiai in all diff, if someone don't like it can take it off and post him diff. again.
Also some changes suggestion of Garven done, the next are changes than I don't do for respect to the mappers :P but frost and ruc need read them and do them if they want or not.

Garven wrote:

[fbs's Normal+]
-01:05:907 (2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't read very well due to the so much being on the screen at once. Consider rearranging.
The 2 stack doesn't lend well a small stream with a trap-gap like that.
-01:15:735 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't like these tiny overlaps.

[Ruc's Himari]
-00:54:873 (3,1) - Aaah, sudden normal sound set!
-00:54:873 (3,1) - Although it plays fine, I don't understand why this rhythm is here
frost-b-spec

Astom wrote:

Garven wrote:

[fbs's Normal+]
-01:05:907 (2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't read very well due to the so much being on the screen at once. Consider rearranging.
The 2 stack doesn't lend well a small stream with a trap-gap like that. ok
-01:15:735 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't like these tiny overlaps. no(?)
thx~

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [fbs's Normal+].osu
Rucker
Shulin
Kenezz's Easy:

-- Map to the same point as the other diffs? Ending early seems odd.
-- 00:59:356 to 01:17:287 ~ I found this part a little confusing because I expected it to follow the vocal as it's louder.

00:07:631 (2) - End at 1/2 later. Follows the synth from before.
01:00:735 (2) - Start at 01:00:562 ~ follows the vocal.
01:17:287 (2) - Start at 01:17:114?

Mafia's Normal:

01:26:769 (3) - Add finish xD

fb's Normal+:

-- Increase the volume by 1-2 ticks, it's too quiet.

00:27:459 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:50:390 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing?

Ruc's Himari:

-- Confusing difficulty name, just call it [Ruc's Hard]?
-- Remove the non inherited section at 00:54:873 ~ not needed and the only difficulty that has it.
-- 1/4 and normal whistles sound bad imo.

00:17:631 (1,2,1) - Looks odd. Remove the new combo from 00:17:976 (1) - ?
00:42:114 (x) - Note?
00:44:183 (5,6) - Sounds strange, maybe start it earlier like 00:44:011
00:53:752 (7) - Delete? Sounds odd.
00:55:390 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what rhythm your following here.
01:21:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rhythm is bad. I'd recommend following the synth like other diffs. >.<

Insane:

01:26:252 (1) - I think the jump is unexpected, also remove new combo xD

STAR.
frost-b-spec
Rucker

Shulin wrote:

Ruc's Himari:

-- Confusing difficulty name, just call it [Ruc's Hard]?
no

-- Remove the non inherited section at 00:54:873 ~ not needed and the only difficulty that has it.
no

00:17:631 (1,2,1) - Looks odd. Remove the new combo from 00:17:976 (1) - ?
fixed

00:42:114 (x) - Note?
no

00:44:183 (5,6) - Sounds strange, maybe start it earlier like 00:44:011
no

00:53:752 (7) - Delete? Sounds odd.
no

00:55:390 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what rhythm your following here.
del it will hard to catch next beat.

01:21:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rhythm is bad. I'd recommend following the synth like other diffs. >.<
no, sorry
thx your mod :)
In addition, i change some sounds.

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [Ruc's Himari].osu
Gonzvlo
General
  1. El mp3 parece ser de 320kbps
  2. Bonito SB como siempre.
  3. El nombre Ruc's Himari está fuera de contexto, todos los demás nombres están en Inglés.
  4. The name "Ruc's Himari" is out of context, all the other difficulty names are written in English.
Easy
  1. 00:01:425 - El ritmo en esta parte no parece seguir la música, intenta esto
  2. 01:26:769 - Termina la dificultad aquí, como en las otras dificultades
Mafia's Normal
  1. 00:53:838 (2) - New Combo
  2. 00:39:011 (1) - This doesn't sound good imo, remove it?
fbs's Normal+
  1. Normal + ? D: , Name it: Normal or Hard (Maybe Difficult)
  2. 00:43:493 (1) - Isn't this too short? Try a slider.
  3. 01:05:390 (1,2) - Unstack (2) it's too hard to see it.
Ruc's Himari
  1. 00:09:787 (1) - End this here: 00:09:356 (2) -
  2. 01:23:838 (4) - New Combo, Also this part doesn't not follow the music, try this

Insane
  1. Seems Fine
  2. Astom, solo hiciste esta dificultad :( ?
Go~
frost-b-spec

Gonzvlo wrote:

fbs's Normal+
  1. Normal + ? D: , Name it: Normal or Hard (Maybe Difficult) no
  2. 00:43:493 (1) - Isn't this too short? Try a slider. no
  3. 01:05:390 (1,2) - Unstack (2) it's too hard to see it. done.
thx modding

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [fbs's Normal+].osu
Lizbeth
Agrega Kenezz a las tags porque yo lo digo bakamoe >:

Ruc's Himari
00:02:631 (3,4,5,6,7) - confusing, how about if you do this: remove circles 4,5 and add a repeat to slider 3.... then add circle at 00:04:011
Would look like:

00:05:390 (5) - add a repeat and remove 1,2 of next combo?
00:50:907 (1,2,3) - I suggest separate this 3 sliders a bit more :3
00:54:356 (2,3,4,5) - same here~~ just a suggestion, is good as it is
Really nice diff<3

fbs's Normal+
mmm I really don't like adding + to name diffs, maybe you can use something a bit more creative like fbs's Style, fbs's flow, dunno @.@ maybe just Relaxing. But is just suggesting ~.~
the map is good

Mafia's Normal
All good, just tiny suggestion
01:26:425 - add circle here~

Insane
00:05:735 (1) - quita el new combo?
00:52:114 (1) - podrias ponerle otra forma a este slider? es algo confuso, crei que era rapido tambien >:

En la diff de Kenezz todo bien~

/me le lanza estrella a Astomoe
Andrea
Moe difficulty incoming~

Hope you like it ^_^

Don't forget to add my name into the tags on every difficulty.
Diasios
[Ruc's Himari]

  • • 00:53:665 (6,7,1,2,3) - Delete (6) and (7). Move (1), (2) and (3) 1/2 earlier.
H1ko
starr x)
Rucker

Gonzvlo wrote:

Ruc's Himari

  • 00:09:787 (1) - End this here: 00:09:356 (2) -
    *End in 00:10:90701:23:838 (4) - New Combo, Also this part doesn't not follow the music, try this
    *no

xxheroxx wrote:

Ruc's Himari

  • 00:53:665 (6,7,1,2,3) - Delete (6) and (7). Move (1), (2) and (3) 1/2 earlier.
    Fixed.
lol i forgot updata

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [Ruc's Himari].osu
Cyril Scarlet
;)
frost-b-spec

Lizbeth wrote:

fbs's Normal+
mmm I really don't like adding + to name diffs, maybe you can use something a bit more creative like fbs's Style, fbs's flow, dunno @.@ maybe just Relaxing. But is just suggesting ~.~
the map is good
no... but,leave it to Astom.
Lissette
6 diff >< bakamoe

Insane
00:52:160 (1) - yo opino que deberias hacer que este slider luzca diferente a los dos anteriores (cambiando la forma, la posicion, etc), para hacer mas legible el cambio de velocidad >.>
00:55:436 (1,2,1,2) - creo que en esta parte deberias llevarte mas de la voz (no puedo creer que este diciendo eso D:)

Ruc's Himari
00:03:537 (5) - move to 00:04:054 - to be consistence in what instrument you are following ^^
00:44:918 - add note? just suggesting, i actually thought this was a 1/2 jump xD
00:48:022 - same
01:26:300 (8) - new combo maybe? :P
nice diff~

fbs's Normal+
00:59:402 (3) - new combo

Mafia's Normal
00:50:091 (1) - delete note?

Kenezz's Easy
00:07:675 (2) - haz que termine medio beat mas tarde
<3

Me gustó mucho el skin Astomoe~ :D

Star
Topic Starter
Astom

Lissette wrote:

6 diff >< bakamoe

Insane
00:52:160 (1) - yo opino que deberias hacer que este slider luzca diferente a los dos anteriores (cambiando la forma, la posicion, etc), para hacer mas legible el cambio de velocidad >.> pq no me dejan ser ;o;
00:55:436 (1,2,1,2) - creo que en esta parte deberias llevarte mas de la voz (no puedo creer que este diciendo eso D:) no :<

Ruc's Himari
00:03:537 (5) - move to 00:04:054 - to be consistence in what instrument you are following ^^
00:44:918 - add note? just suggesting, i actually thought this was a 1/2 jump xD
00:48:022 - same
01:26:300 (8) - new combo maybe? :P
nice diff~

fbs's Normal+
00:59:402 (3) - new combo

Mafia's Normal
00:50:091 (1) - delete note? no ~

Kenezz's Easy
00:07:675 (2) - haz que termine medio beat mas tardeno~
<3

Me gustó mucho el skin Astomoe~ :D

Star
frost-b-spec
>Lissette
done~

and Hardish edit.

Download: AyaRuka - Oshichau Zo!! (TV Size) (Astom) [fbs's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Astom

frost-b-spec wrote:

>Lissette
done~

and Hardish edit.
rdy :>
Lizbeth
Irc modded and bubble~
Andrea
Yay it's bubbled :)
Alace
YAY it`s ranked
Topic Starter
Astom

Alace wrote:

YAY it`s ranked
<3 thx Alace

Also thx to all the people who .... wait.... MAKE THIS LONG OF RANK XD! seriously D:! 6 diff xD! /me cry

Well also 20th song ranked ;D
Alace
oh you got 20 songs
so fast XD
Andrea
Grats Astom!~
Lizbeth
gratz baka~
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