Hello!
From my modding queue. / As request.
Annotation
General
Victor's Easy
Normal
Hard
Lost
Really solid set, just need to fix some minor issues and it would be perfect!
Good luck, and have fun!
From my modding queue. / As request.
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- Why "dvd blu-ray" in tags? Is this a limited song for blu-ray dvd purchasers or something?
- 00:45:420 (1) - Maybe cancel this NC? As you have put NCs on every two long white lines, so in Easy it should be better to keep such consistency.
- 01:21:513 (1) - How about make this spinner start at 01:21:748 - ? Would (at a certain extent) represent better the bell sound.
- Clean and solid work!
- 00:13:310 (3) - Maybe change this into a 3/2 slider (like 00:15:185 (3) - ) for a better consistency (they are all silence parts followed by a short vocal sound)?
- 01:01:357 (6,7,8) - Personally I think rhythm here is a little bit weird. The combination of vocal and drum beats from 01:01:357 - to 01:02:060 - can be divided as two part: 01:01:357 - 01:01:591 - / 01:01:826 - 01:02:060 - (both with two vocal sounds + 1 note + 1 triple), so in order to represent this better, I suggest you to map this part "symmetrically" (that means you can either remove 01:01:591 (7) - , or change this whole pattern into two 1/2 sliders).
- 01:04:873 (6,7) - As your main idea for kiai part is to follow the vocal, so it would be better if you change the rhythm arrangement to: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/oeQEEae.png
- Interesting rhythm choices, but I think they works!
- 00:16:591 (4,5) - Really subjective but I think instead of using a triple which is easier to hard players but failed to represent correctly the music, I'd prefer to put a 1/6 reverse slider here to represent the music better and also not raise the difficulty of this part.
- 00:43:545 (2) - Maybe move the NC on 00:43:310 (1) - to here? As you put them on every long white line at this part.
- Well organized, properly emphasized!
- 01:06:045 (1,2) - Subjective, but make them parallel would make this pattern looks much more better.
- Great consistency!
Really solid set, just need to fix some minor issues and it would be perfect!
Good luck, and have fun!