1. Best Friend (4.17 stars, 819 notes)

1. 00:31:600 (1,2) - 跟后面一样改成折返吧。
2. 01:02:772 (4) - 总觉得低bpm4叠在3尾巴上好玩且好看
3. 01:05:819 (1) - 01:09:569 (1) - 把最后一次折返用一个圈代替会好玩很多，或者说你折返三次是故意的？有点不合曲。
4. 01:06:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 蜜汁绕圈，flow有点无聊
5. 01:16:834 (1,2) - 往左移一点，6和1的间距太小了
6. 01:57:850 (8,9,10) - 这里间距不等是故意的还是怎么的，这种小变距略丑
7. 02:09:686 (1) - 这个转盘结束在02:11:444 - 会比较好，因为在02:11:444 - 这里鼓音已经明显出来了，随便加四个circle还是什么的应该不难
8. 02:28:319 (1,2,3,4) - 02:30:194 (1,2,3,4) - 跟第一段保持一致都nc吧
9. 02:39:569 (1,2) - 1/2能不能放大些，跟02:38:397 (3,4) - 看起来都没区别了，用缩圈特难读
10. 03:11:209 (1,2) - 没叠好
11. 03:48:474 (4,1) - 少转了九十度，或者说少了个三连
12. 03:53:631 (2) - nc
13. 第三段副歌怎么没1/6了？
14. 04:16:365 (6,7) - 这个叠起来没移动太难受了，弄个小三角或者直线多好
15. 04:47:537 (3,4,5) - 自己叠自己叠太多了，跟整个谱面整体结构和氛围相去甚远
16. 最后转盘越看越瞎，然后转盘尾你忘静音了

Ellyu wrote:

[那你他妈很棒哦]

1. 00:31:600 (1,2) - 跟后面一样改成折返吧。感觉不行
2. 01:02:772 (4) - 总觉得低bpm4叠在3尾巴上好玩且好看感觉不行
3. 01:05:819 (1) - 01:09:569 (1) - 把最后一次折返用一个圈代替会好玩很多，或者说你折返三次是故意的？有点不合曲。
4. 01:06:639 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 蜜汁绕圈，flow有点无聊
5. 01:16:834 (1,2) - 往左移一点，6和1的间距太小了我觉得可以
6. 01:57:850 (8,9,10) - 这里间距不等是故意的还是怎么的，这种小变距略丑
7. 02:09:686 (1) - 这个转盘结束在02:11:444 - 会比较好，因为在02:11:444 - 这里鼓音已经明显出来了，随便加四个circle还是什么的应该不难
8. 02:28:319 (1,2,3,4) - 02:30:194 (1,2,3,4) - 跟第一段保持一致都nc吧ok
9. 02:39:569 (1,2) - 1/2能不能放大些，跟02:38:397 (3,4) - 看起来都没区别了，用缩圈特难读ok
10. 03:11:209 (1,2) - 没叠好ok
11. 03:48:474 (4,1) - 少转了九十度，或者说少了个三连
12. 03:53:631 (2) - ncok
13. 第三段副歌怎么没1/6了？
14. 04:16:365 (6,7) - 这个叠起来没移动太难受了，弄个小三角或者直线多好
15. 04:47:537 (3,4,5) - 自己叠自己叠太多了，跟整个谱面整体结构和氛围相去甚远
16. 最后转盘越看越瞎，然后转盘尾你忘静音了

combo color没换，再加上暗绿色bg，这色调搭配看得我真难受。

Fushimi Rio wrote:

00:05:819 (2) - NC
00:12:850 (5) - 这听着像个五连 或者三连接note啥的
00:26:678 (2) - 其实我觉得ctrl+g舒服
00:59:256 (5) - NC
01:01:131 (5) - NC
01:14:022 (4) - 应该是二连吧
03:30:506 (4) - 最好不用滑条 容易按两下导致后面那个note早按
03:33:710 (5) - 这咋没上面那个梗了
04:11:678 (6,7) - 这么搞7其实挺强的 但是这里7没啥声音 我觉得6拉长到7这好点

Regraz wrote:

Cute song!

[Best friend]
00:45:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Considering to adjusting this into a more apparent 2+2+2+2 or 2+2+4 patterns as per the vocals.
01:09:569 (1) - It is recommended to take this apart because 01:10:037 is strong enough for a slider head too!
01:30:428 (2) - Pretty overmapped. 03:00:428 (2) - Same
01:31:365 (5,1) - Considering an overlap like 01:32:772 (3,4) - .
01:43:787 (3,4) - Such a large spacing plays weird and abrupt amongst a series of spacings like 01:43:084 (5,1) -
01:49:881 (4,5,6,7) - Why suddenly four such sliders? It bursts the rhythm intensity without suitable reasons imo.
03:08:631 (1,2,3) - I would sincerely request to keep the spacings consistent across 03:08:631 (1,2,3) - and 03:09:569 (4,5,6,7) - .
03:30:506 (4) - This might cause potential readability issues for the current layout looks pretty like two circles.
03:31:131 (1,2) - These are not snapped. Also the stack of 03:31:014 (7,1) - prevents player from reading the reverse arrow clearly, which is definitely not allowed as per current ranking criteria.
03:40:037 (1) - 1/1 downbeats start to appear on this section so better map them out too.
03:50:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - Unnecessary and irrational difficulty spikes here. Strongly recommend to nerf them.
04:47:186 (2) - Not snapped. I'd like to recommend overlooking it just like 04:50:819 (1) - .
04:52:225 (4,5) - Place 4 in the middle? Better aesthetics. https://puu.sh/yFlLz/7b8aa785fb.png

Your current draining time is 4:59:532, which is not rankable. And you have already overdone the spinner extention. The actual draning time of this song is even shorter.

Regraz wrote:

Your current draining time is 4:59:532, which is not rankable. And you have already overdone the spinner extention. The actual draning time of this song is even shorter.

Regraz wrote:

最后bpm好像变了，需要加个红线

Regraz wrote:

Metadata?就这样吧，也没啥好写的
Hitsound略显单薄这mp3就美酒
AR稍微加个0.1 0.2吧ok
HP5，后面有一段节奏很稀疏，HR很容易死ok
00:19:217 (5,6,7) - 这三个突然间距变大，需要NCok
01:25:623 (2,3,4) - 折返滑条吧，都是圈圈有点overemphasize感觉没事
02:45:115 (5) - 跟下vocal? https://puu.sh/zcA5T/41ac3b7646.png 没看懂
02:55:623 (2,3) - 合并成滑条？合并不了啊大哥
03:02:576 (7,1,2) - 突然间距变这么大有点不好我觉得ok
03:17:576 (1,2,3) - ^
03:33:123 (4) - 看起来太像两个note了 换个摆放吧不会啊
03:33:748 (1) - 不行 箭头看不到哪来的箭头
03:56:248 (1) - 遮挡太严重我觉得ojbk
04:50:506 (4) - 这个滑条开头太弱了 04:49:686 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段的节奏还需要改一下还行吧我感觉
04:52:498 (4,1) - 这两个之间加点什么吧 就像前面那些，跟一下vocal。^
call me back

Regraz wrote:

MP3不行 现在最多spinner能延伸到 04:58:426 往后基本听不到了 必须要改MP3

02:53:113 (2,3,4) - overemphasized，折返滑条

03:00:066 (7,1,2) - 03:15:066 (1,2,3) - 间距变大太突兀，需要nerf

03:30:613 (4) - 看起来太像两个note了 需要变换一下间距

03:31:238 (1,2) - 似乎是1/8

03:53:738 (1) - 这种遮挡肯定不行

04:47:996 (4) - 这个滑条开头太弱了 需要改

Call me back when problems above are solved.

Metadata source?

UndeadCapulet wrote:

can you add some combo colours pretty please ok

03:56:775 - feels weird w/out the 1/6burst here imo I think it's OK. <3

Kibbleru wrote:

if it gets dq'd to fix tags.

00:20:916 - im not sure why this part is kiai'd

Naotoshi wrote:

elluy should be changed to ellyu in tags!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

- Frontier - wrote:

all japanese words in tags should have romanised words too