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TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit)

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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Kin

Kin wrote:

be careful this mod came from toilet

[Easy]

  1. 00:15:832 (1,2,3) - I think the "S" flow doesn't really goes well there. A flow like this is "kinda hard" for a calm part. Since you need to left, down+right, left+up. eeeeh doesn't look like a problem to me
  2. 00:22:943 (1,2,3) - the slider 1 goes up/right to down/left. And the flow between 2 and 3 is up right which is kinda the same as the slider 1. I think it would be better to make the movement different, or a lil different from 1 to make a better transition between the slider 1 and the next pattern. here aswell kinda like it as-is
  3. 00:26:720 (1) - resnap spinner on white tick 1/1. intentional if you listen closely its supposed to end there
  4. 00:31:832 (3) - add a new combo to make a difference from those notes 00:30:054 (1,2) - ? It'll also mark the drum. prefer to follow the consistency
  5. your whole kiai time is following the vocal, but only this pattern 01:18:046 (1,2,3,4) - is following the drum. Maybe it'd be better to still follow the vocal for this pattern ? well yeah since this one is reaaaaaaally dominating
  6. 01:21:823 (1) - add whistle on the spinner, and add a green line with default soft whistle 5% ? done
[desperation]
I don't have my tablet to make a proper play for this diff, which mean, I can't really make a proper mod, even of I had it, I don't think I'll be able to pass it D:

  1. 00:54:498 (1,2,3,4,1) - the full clap 1/8 is really loud, add green line here 00:54:498 - 30~35% ; and one here 00:54:943 - 60~70% did lower it a bit
  2. 01:06:060 (3,5) - I don't really like the fact to completly overlap the begin of slider like this. fixed
  3. 01:21:823 (1) - add whistle on the spinner, and add a green line with default soft whistle 5% yep
that's all from me >_>
good luck !

neonat

neonat wrote:

General


Easy

00:12:276 (1,2) - not exactly parallel to each other, if it bothers you/supposed to be parallel

Desperation

00:19:720 (2) - this slider shouldn't be extended, it extends to the quietness of the song where there isn't music, end it at 00:19:832 where he breathes in the song imo the current fits better tho :O


Good Luck~
Thanks guys! 8-)
Arrival
1,418 posts
Joined June 2012
Arrival
[Desperation]

00:09:387 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:10:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:11:832 (6,7,8) - Overmapped
00:13:832 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:16:498 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:17:387 (6,7,1) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:17:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
From 00:18:943 to 00:26:498 - Overmapped
00:45:609 (4) - Overmapped
00:47:498 (4) - Overmapped
00:55:609 (1,1,1,2) - What the fucking fuck

Ok I won't continue for the kiai

_______________________________________________________________________________________


I made this to troll obviously, but I don't know if you should take it as a "joke" or not, because you're basically mapping on NOTHING and just continuing this kind of non enjoyable mapping decadence which took place in 2014.

I don't "insult" your mapping style, but this map is just pure and condensate crap.

I've seen way better coming from you, sadly.
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
@Arrival

It's quite enjoyable, maybe not for all, and at least Taiko mode.

I know how you feel of playing notes that don't sound in Taiko, but you shouldn't judge someone's map like "this is pure crap".
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu

Arrival wrote:

[Desperation]

00:09:387 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:10:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:11:832 (6,7,8) - Overmapped
00:13:832 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:16:498 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:17:387 (6,7,1) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:17:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
From 00:18:943 to 00:26:498 - Overmapped
00:45:609 (4) - Overmapped
00:47:498 (4) - Overmapped
00:55:609 (1,1,1,2) - What the fucking fuck

Ok I won't continue for the kiai

_______________________________________________________________________________________


I made this to troll obviously, but I don't know if you should take it as a "joke" or not, because you're basically mapping on NOTHING and just continuing this kind of non enjoyable mapping decadence which took place in 2014.

I don't "insult" your mapping style, but this map is just pure and condensate crap.

I've seen way better coming from you, sadly.
It's time to get better speakers/headphones/ears.
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Arrival wrote:

[Desperation]

00:09:387 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:10:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:11:832 (6,7,8) - Overmapped
00:13:832 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:16:498 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:17:387 (6,7,1) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:17:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
From 00:18:943 to 00:26:498 - Overmapped
00:45:609 (4) - Overmapped
00:47:498 (4) - Overmapped
00:55:609 (1,1,1,2) - What the fucking fuck

Ok I won't continue for the kiai

_______________________________________________________________________________________


I made this to troll obviously, but I don't know if you should take it as a "joke" or not, because you're basically mapping on NOTHING and just continuing this kind of non enjoyable mapping decadence which took place in 2014.

I don't "insult" your mapping style, but this map is just pure and condensate crap.

I've seen way better coming from you, sadly.
Checked the mod and yeah, all those objects are snapped on beats in the music (Piano/drums etc...). Nothing else to add.
Arrival
1,418 posts
Joined June 2012
Arrival

Rakuen wrote:

@Arrival

It's quite enjoyable, maybe not for all, and at least Taiko mode.

I know how you feel of playing notes that don't sound in Taiko, but you shouldn't judge someone's map like "this is pure crap".
I didn't play it on taiko, wtf are you talking about ? ><

CXu wrote:

Arrival wrote:

[Desperation]

00:09:387 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:10:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:11:832 (6,7,8) - Overmapped
00:13:832 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:16:498 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:17:387 (6,7,1) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:17:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
From 00:18:943 to 00:26:498 - Overmapped
00:45:609 (4) - Overmapped
00:47:498 (4) - Overmapped
00:55:609 (1,1,1,2) - What the fucking fuck

Ok I won't continue for the kiai

_______________________________________________________________________________________


I made this to troll obviously, but I don't know if you should take it as a "joke" or not, because you're basically mapping on NOTHING and just continuing this kind of non enjoyable mapping decadence which took place in 2014.

I don't "insult" your mapping style, but this map is just pure and condensate crap.

I've seen way better coming from you, sadly.
It's time to get better speakers/headphones/ears.

xChippy wrote:

Arrival wrote:

[Desperation]

00:09:387 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:10:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:11:832 (6,7,8) - Overmapped
00:13:832 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:16:498 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
00:17:387 (6,7,1) - Overmapped + Wtf
00:17:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
From 00:18:943 to 00:26:498 - Overmapped
00:45:609 (4) - Overmapped
00:47:498 (4) - Overmapped
00:55:609 (1,1,1,2) - What the fucking fuck

Ok I won't continue for the kiai

_______________________________________________________________________________________


I made this to troll obviously, but I don't know if you should take it as a "joke" or not, because you're basically mapping on NOTHING and just continuing this kind of non enjoyable mapping decadence which took place in 2014.

I don't "insult" your mapping style, but this map is just pure and condensate crap.

I've seen way better coming from you, sadly.
Checked the mod and yeah, all those objects are snapped on beats in the music (Piano/drums etc...). Nothing else to add.
In what world does that : 00:10:832 (2) - is on piano/drum/vocal ????? Seriously put the 25% mode on and listen ! And it's the same for 90% of what I mentioned above.
Guys, seriously you must be trolling right ?
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
No, there really is. As I was saying, either get better headphones/speakers, or it's your ears. Also, if 90% of what you mentioned to be mapped on silence is actually mapped on silence, then you should do something about not mentioning the last 10%. But no really, it's not actually overmapped. You might not enjoy it because of the large spacing and the use of 1/4's, but that's your subjective opinion and has nothing to do with the map itself, as it's just what you personally don't like. Also, I'm just going to ask, but can you actually play the difficulty properly? I mean, considering the difficulty of the patterns and your rank, I'm just wonderng.
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
@Arrival I think the difficulty, overmapped or not, expresses the feeling of the song quite well.

Kin wrote:

be careful this mod came from toilet

[xxdeathx's Hard]

  1. 00:04:721 (5,1) - swap NC ? even thought it's logic with the big white tick here : 00:04:943 - . It'll be more logic with the new sentence from the vocal here : 00:04:721 - . done
  2. 00:17:609 (1) - 00:21:165 (1) - 00:24:720 (1) - 00:47:832 - 00:50:054 - 00:50:943 - 00:51:832 - 00:52:720 - 00:53:609 - whistle is missing. added for first few. everything after 00:50:054 has whistle on the tick before
  3. 00:21:720 - A single whistle here feels weird, if you want to keep it, I think it'll sounds better if you add whistle here 00:21:498 - 00:22:054 - .done
  4. 00:25:276 (3) - ^ ; add whistle here : 00:25:054 - 00:25:609 - . done
  5. if you wanted to follow the vocal, the 1/1 break here feels kinda weird here 00:49:165 - ; when there's a vocal here : 00:49:165 - . o.o you linked the same timestamp
  6. 00:54:498 (5) - 1/8 full clap is really loud. add a green line 30% here 00:54:498 - ; and then 60% here 00:54:943 - ? done
  7. 01:02:393 (2,3) - I know what's your intention, but I think it's a way too much hidden. changed this part
  8. 01:21:823 (1) - add whistle on the spinner, and add a green line with default soft whistle 5% ? done
that's all from me >_>
good luck !

neonat wrote:

General

xxdeathx's Hard AudioLeadIn: 0
The Rest AudioLeadIn: 500

Should have 500 for xxdeathx's as well done

xxdeathx's Hard

00:04:943 (1,2,3) - the gradual decrease in spacing, I think it doesn't make the pattern look nicer imo don't understand what this means
00:12:276 (2,3) - blanket can be better looks fine to me
00:21:720 (3,4,5) - even out the spacing here, I feel there is too much constant variations in spacing, it gives more difficulty in gauging what exactly it is in the music it's all 1/2 between each object and isn't hard to read imo
00:33:165 (1) - drum whistle at the start of the slider? i guess
01:03:838 (1,2,3) - they should all overlap, keep things more constant within each pattern, have it follow together, this is the more variant one out of all the ones in the kiai time idk changed this pattern after previous mod
01:16:935 (3) - whistle at the end of the slider, it feels empty, like something was left out in the sound already have whistle at start


Good Luck~
thanks guys!
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ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
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Arrival
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Joined June 2012
Arrival

CXu wrote:

No, there really is. As I was saying, either get better headphones/speakers, or it's your ears. Also, if 90% of what you mentioned to be mapped on silence is actually mapped on silence, then you should do something about not mentioning the last 10%. But no really, it's not actually overmapped. You might not enjoy it because of the large spacing and the use of 1/4's, but that's your subjective opinion and has nothing to do with the map itself, as it's just what you personally don't like. Also, I'm just going to ask, but can you actually play the difficulty properly? I mean, considering the difficulty of the patterns and your rank, I'm just wonderng.
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I can find more people, but you must have some hell of headphones to hear something there. The only piano hit is the one fading away which is hit at 00:10:720 (1) - which is played just before. And this is pretty much the same for everything I pointed up earlier. Oh and when I said 90% I just was too lazy to check, but in fact it's probably 100%.
I don't care the way it is mapped, although I find it stupid, but this overmapping trend is getting ridiculous. We are playing a rhythm game right ?
Yeah and considering the fact that I mod since 2 years isn't fair enough ? Damn your arrogance.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Myxo
Dude, listen to it at 25%. There are sounds at all of the points you mentioned. It's definitely not overmapped. I never heard about the people you asked for confirmation, but I don't think they are professional mappers / modders who could judge this issue, no offense.
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
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CXu
I'm not good at describing sound, but here goes.

Arrival wrote:

[Desperation]

00:09:387 (2,3,4) - Overmapped - (2,3) has drums. Yes, (4) has no drums, but there's a piano note here (it's hard to tell, since the piano kinda blends into the background). Anyhow, even if this were silent, it helps with the flow and general feel of playing (basically makes it easier to grasp the rhythm, and playing the map overall)
00:10:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped - For (2) Say hello to drum. Same sound as 00:11:054 - as well as 00:09:054 - and 00:09:276 - . It's pretty low on the latter two. For (3,4), there's a very clear piano going here.
00:11:832 (6,7,8) - Overmapped - Are you really saying you can't hear anything here? The (6) and (7) has a diffent pitch, if it's hard to hear the (7).
00:13:832 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped + Wtf - (4,5) should be clear enough (drums). For (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), there's a string instrument playing.
00:16:498 (2,3,4) - Overmapped - Similar case as previous triples.
00:17:387 (6,7,1) - Overmapped + Wtf - Similar case as previous triples. Also it's not any wtf about this. (1) has higher emphasis, and is given that by the slight jump. It's not particularily harder to play either.
00:17:832 (2,3,4) - Overmapped - Same as before.
From 00:18:943 to 00:26:498 - Overmapped - 00:19:387 (1) - No, 00:19:720 (2) - Breath in, 00:20:054 (3) - Se, 00:20:276 (4) - Ka, 00:20:720 (5) - i-de, 00:21:054 (6) - drums, 00:21:165 (1,2) - Drums. 00:21:720 (3) - Same drums as 00:21:498 (2) - . 00:21:832 (4,5,6,7) - Strings.
00:45:609 (4) - Overmapped - Head is silent, but is much easier rhythmically to hit than at 00:45:720 - and 00:45:832 -
00:47:498 (4) - Overmapped - Doesn't even have a silent head.
00:55:609 (1,1,1,2) - What the fucking fuck - It's called 1/8. They're there. Try listening.

Arrival wrote:

Yeah and considering the fact that I mod since 2 years isn't fair enough ? Damn your arrogance.
Yeah I have absolutely no clue about you or your experience in anything. You know, that's why I asked. It's not arrogance. Since you said you didn't enjoy the map, I was just pointing out that it might be the case. Also, how long you've been modding doesn't really mean anything. Similar to playing, you can play osu! for 5 years and still be godawful at the game.

Anyhow, don't take it too personal. I'm only trying to say that the map isn't overmapped by the definition of overmapping you're using :P
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xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy
I don't even use headphones and I can hear it...
First of all there is a slight pitch change, and second there is a drum like sound (Perhaps something like a closed cymbal idk which is hit really lightly). But there is INDEED a sound. I've got enough opinions backing this up.
Arrival
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Arrival
Oh wow CXu you took it literally... Alright.
So the people I asked aren't qualified std players, yeah right, but they all have ears, no ?
There is juste a HUGE contrast between the music and ALL the notes placed in the silent parts.
And if you think putting a circle is ok when the piano is FADING OUT, then I can't do anything for you. I won't pollute more, but know that 2 years ago, this wouldn't be ranked, even in dreams, because of overmapping.
Glad I don't play std anymore.
CXu
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CXu

Arrival wrote:

Oh wow CXu you took it literally... Alright. - Yes, because you were wrong. Nothing bad about that.
So the people I asked aren't qualified std players, yeah right, but they all have ears, no ? - So do we.
There is juste a HUGE contrast between the music and ALL the notes placed in the silent parts. - What silent parts again?
And if you think putting a circle is ok when the piano is FADING OUT, then I can't do anything for you. I won't pollute more, but know that 2 years ago, this wouldn't be ranked, even in dreams, because of overmapping. - 2 years ago, you mean in 2012? Nah, it'd probably get ranked.
Glad I don't play std anymore. - Good for you.
LexiaLovesU
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Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU
@Arrival It is definitely there it may be faint but that doesn't mean there is nothing there also if you are just gonna insult the mapper than I highly suggest you take it somewhere else and not start a flame war inside of the map's topic there is no need for this. many people have already told you that they hear it and that it isn't going to get change don't put your personal opinions over the mapper's that is true arrogance and it proves that you aren't a professional modder.

Please stop this discussion over this opinions have been already stated no need to continue this please get back to the map
Arrival
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Arrival
When did I insult him ? "I don't like your map, so I don't like you ?", no sorry I'm not like that. ><
When I say "silent", I say "not loud" or "with low volume". The contrast between the sound of the part and the way it is map is just HUGE o.o
That was my last post here, PM me if you want to keep arguing.
xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy
Insult? here you go: http://puu.sh/dH0GT/054786b512.png

Arrival wrote:

When I say "silent", I say "not loud" or "with low volume". The contrast between the sound of the part and the way it is map is just HUGE o.o
Than DONT even use silent in the first place.

Have a good day 8-)
Okay ending this now, back to the map.
Kin
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Joined August 2010
Kin
please, back to the map pls.

Kin wrote:

[xxdeathx's Hard]

  1. if you wanted to follow the vocal, the 1/1 break here feels kinda weird here 00:48:943 - ; when there's a vocal here : 00:49:165 -

sry, fixed wrong copy/paste >_>
Iceskulls
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Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
Hi , modding here

Bold=Highly suggested
Blue=Questionable
Red=Somehow unrankable

[General]
  • Everything is fine as it is :)
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:165 (1,2) - Minor inconsistent in spacing
  2. 00:48:276 (3) - How about move this to 00:48:720 - and then change to 1/1 slider, I guess it gives beginners some reaction time and also make the rhythm that follow vocal here a bit more smooth because the beat here 00:48:283 - isn't sound that strong imo I would try to put a note on strong beat for Easy
    Nice Easy , there still a few flow that I think it can be a bit easier but that fine
[Rakuen]
  1. 00:49:609 (1) - You can move tail a bit right so it will flow with (2) better
    Good Normal , Everything looks fine to me
[xxdeathx]
  1. 00:14:054 (1) - Whistle at tail?
  2. 00:22:943 (1) - How about curve this a bit more so the tail will curve to (2) head make the flow a bit more smooth
  3. 00:26:054 - Why not add a note here ?
  4. 00:36:498 (6,7) - imo it isn't a good overlap here (6) head cover most of (7) body and (6) tail also a bit too close to (7) head
  5. 00:49:170 - How about add a note here? I guess it will make the rhythm sound a bit more smooth and consistent with the instrument
  6. 00:50:720 (5,6) - Why not make the spacing here a bit same as 00:49:832 (2,3) - ? also these too 00:51:609 (2,3) - ,00:52:498 (5,6) - ,
  7. 01:00:282 (1,2) - Why not spacing these like this 00:57:615 (4,5) - ?
  8. 01:04:171 (2) - I guess if you place this at x88 y248 the flow will somehow a bit better
    Good Hard , the polarity is great here
[alacat]
  1. 01:02:949 (4) - I think it better to end the slider here 01:03:171 - and let the stream do the work here 01:03:282 - to 01:03:726 -
  2. 01:04:838 (5) - I think it better to start the slider here 01:04:949 - if you intend to follow the vocal here just like what you did here 01:03:838 (1,2,3) -
  3. 01:08:504 - Why not add a note here? I can hear a beat there so it might be fine to add there
    Great Insane
[Desperation]
  1. 00:21:720 (3) - I guess if you place this at x248 y180 it will make the spacing a bit consistent with the previous 1/4 spacing
    Crazy fun diff <3
Here a star

Good luck :)
Iceskulls
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Iceskulls
Whoops duplicate post
xxdeathx
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Joined July 2013
xxdeathx

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi , modding here

[xxdeathx]
  1. 00:14:054 (1) - Whistle at tail? done
  2. 00:22:943 (1) - How about curve this a bit more so the tail will curve to (2) head make the flow a bit more smooth done
  3. 00:26:054 - Why not add a note here ? not much to follow
  4. 00:36:498 (6,7) - imo it isn't a good overlap here (6) head cover most of (7) body and (6) tail also a bit too close to (7) head changed
  5. 00:49:170 - How about add a note here? I guess it will make the rhythm sound a bit more smooth and consistent with the instrument following vocals
  6. 00:50:720 (5,6) - Why not make the spacing here a bit same as 00:49:832 (2,3) - ? also these too 00:51:609 (2,3) - ,00:52:498 (5,6) - , it's fine as is
  7. 01:00:282 (1,2) - Why not spacing these like this 00:57:615 (4,5) - ? done
  8. 01:04:171 (2) - I guess if you place this at x88 y248 the flow will somehow a bit better moved some but not that far
    Good Hard , the polarity is great here thanks, i worked on that a lot!
Good luck :)
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 500
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:xChippy
Version:xxdeathx's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul Rakuen xxdeathx alacat opening Studio Pierrot
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,812 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
woops um i did that stuff with timing as we talked about earlier, but i gave it to the other two mapsets of the song and not yours lol. see this post for everything. also be sure to use the correct rhythm for 00:54:666 (1) - since it's a lot clearer now
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
this is awesome <3

go go!
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Updated with a new mp3, pls reDL!
@CelsiusLK Fixed all except the last one in easy, kinda like the way it plays atm :3
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

Kin wrote:

be careful this mod came from toilet

[Rakuen's Normal]

  1. 00:01:388 - 00:06:721 - For a really calm part like this one, 1,4 spacing is kinda high. the 1/1 with 1,4 spacing look far for a normal diff. Fixed
  2. 00:15:165 (2) - I think it would be better if you change this slider with a shape going top instead of right, the transition between those note 00:14:054 (1,2) - and also those note 00:15:165 (2,1) - will be better. I know it's intentional but atm the transition between those note 00:15:165 (2,1) - is really weird to me. There's too much right and left flow on the same pattern. Don't really see too much difference
  3. 00:47:832 (1,1) - nazi : if you wanted to perfectly stack, it's not. 2nazi4me
  4. 00:54:943 (1) - I personaly feel weird to hold a slider on a blank. Instead of slider, I think a simple note here is better 00:54:943 - .Shape is fine imo
that's all from me >_>
good luck !
Thanks for mods!

neonat wrote:

General

xxdeathx's Hard AudioLeadIn: 0
The Rest AudioLeadIn: 500

Should have 500 for xxdeathx's as well

Rakuen's Normal

00:10:943 (2,3) - I understand the vocal part might really suit the stacks, hence you did so, but I don't think you should stack here in the music It's fine, more friendly in reading patterns
00:32:720 (2) - drum whistle instead at the slider end? Added Finish instead

Good Luck~
Thanks for mods!

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi , modding here

Bold=Highly suggested
Blue=Questionable
Red=Somehow unrankable

[General]
  • Everything is fine as it is :)
[Rakuen]
  1. 00:49:609 (1) - You can move tail a bit right so it will flow with (2) better Fixed
    Good Normal , Everything looks fine to me
Here a star

Good luck :)
Thanks for mods!

My diff update: http://puu.sh/enpWP/6bb8a959e0.osu (edit2: lowered stars)
Kin
2,622 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin
I'll mod the Desperation later since I'm now able to play it :

miss x1 i hat u :(
HabiHolic
5,410 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Your Reqeust~~~

[Easy]

  1. 00:24:888 (2) - oh this is good. but i think this change 1/1 slider batter imo
  2. 00:32:000 - Finish
  3. 00:40:888 (1) - Delete Finish and add whistle?
  4. 01:13:555 - whistle?
[Rakuen's Normal]

  1. 00:25:333 - delete whistle
  2. 00:26:666 (1,2) - suggust
    SPOILER
  3. 00:47:333 (2,1) - smaill missing blanket
  4. 00:54:222 (3) - suggust
    SPOILER
[xxdeathx's Hard]

  1. Hi Baka
  2. 00:32:000 (1,2,3,4) - why not add hitsound? add please
  3. 01:15:555 (4) - suggust
    SPOILER
  4. 01:21:777 - Green line check please
[alacat's Insane]

  1. i think AR slow imo..maybe AR 8.5 batter
  2. 00:19:111 (5) - Ctrl+G is flow batter
[Desperation]

  1. Nice >w<
call me back
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

HabiHolic wrote:

Your Reqeust~~~

[Easy]

  1. 00:24:888 (2) - oh this is good. but i think this change 1/1 slider batter imo Made a repeat :3
  2. 00:32:000 - Finish No cymbal sound tho :O I think the normal sample set is enough
  3. 00:40:888 (1) - Delete Finish and add whistle? Cymbal in music o3o
  4. 01:13:555 - whistle? maybe cuz other also dont have, it no have bass in the music
[Desperation]

  1. Nice >w<
    :)
call me back
Ty Habi :3
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
IRC log
19:52 ByBy_ChAn: hey
19:52 xChippy: sup
19:53 ByBy_ChAn: would you like an IRC before bubble ?
19:53 xChippy: uuh?
19:53 ByBy_ChAn: yes or no
19:53 ByBy_ChAn: ?
19:53 xChippy: Are you requesting a mod?
19:53 xChippy: or
19:53 xChippy: Am I getting one lol
19:54 ByBy_ChAn: IRC mod
19:54 xChippy: which map?
19:54 xChippy: Unravel ?
19:54 ByBy_ChAn: yes cuz I said before bubble
19:54 xChippy: well I got more starred map so yeah
19:55 xChippy: hmm sure why not
19:55 ByBy_ChAn: ok
19:55 ByBy_ChAn: lemme DL
19:55 ByBy_ChAn: I really like the song :3
19:55 xChippy: :3
19:56 ByBy_ChAn: only your diffs right ?
19:56 xChippy: yeah
19:56 ByBy_ChAn: oki
19:58 ByBy_ChAn: sorry my osu! crashed
19:59 ByBy_ChAn: ok let's see the BG size
20:00 ByBy_ChAn: BG size : 1366x768 ok >w<b
20:00 xChippy: :3
20:01 ByBy_ChAn: easy
20:07 ByBy_ChAn: 00:05:778 (2,3)- The pattern looks a little weird . Why you not try a 90 degrees pattern : https://puu.sh/gaWX6/47e31a70a3.jpg ? It will looks more better
20:08 xChippy: It's just personal preference, I don't like using sharp angled sliders
20:08 xChippy: Mostly for the sake of flow
20:08 ByBy_ChAn: okay
20:09 ByBy_ChAn: 00:23:111 (1)- Check space
20:09 ByBy_ChAn: 00:24:888 (2)- ^
20:10 xChippy: fixed
20:10 ByBy_ChAn: :)
20:14 ByBy_ChAn: 00:30:222 (1)- Can you improve the slider shape ? To me looks weird :/ here's the pic if you have not an idea how to improve it ;) : https://puu.sh/gaXIe/4aed16ca94.jpg
20:15 xChippy:  ok
20:16 ByBy_ChAn: 00:45:555 (4)- Instead putting a 1/2 slider , why you not add a circle on white tick ? It will sounds more better
20:17 xChippy: which white tick
20:17 xChippy: 00:45:777 - ?
20:17 ByBy_ChAn: yes
20:18 xChippy: It's because of the 2/1 interval, which will have a high chance of beginner hitting 100
20:18 ByBy_ChAn: ahh ok
20:19 ByBy_ChAn: 01:07:345 (5)- Remove clap cuz here the clap sounds weird :/ and the clap was added on previous note (4)
20:20 xChippy: There is a clap in the music tho ;w;
20:20 ByBy_ChAn: but for me sounds weird imo
20:22 xChippy: Sorry but I want to hitsound accordingly the music, its my HS style
20:23 xChippy: Sorry but I want to hitsound accordingly the music, its my HS style
20:23 ByBy_ChAn: you replied ? my osu! crashed for 3rd time ;w;
20:23 xChippy: Sorry but I want to hitsound accordingly the music, its my HS style
20:23 xChippy: Yeah noticed ;w;
20:23 ByBy_ChAn: okay
20:24 ByBy_ChAn: 01:09:333 (3)- Add clap at slider's tail ? I'm not sure :/
20:25 ByBy_ChAn: and remove whistle ? there ?
20:25 xChippy: Its the drum bass here so nope ><, the drummer plays weird yeah o3o
20:26 ByBy_ChAn: ok
20:26 ByBy_ChAn: blame my brother who don't let me to listen the music >///<
20:26 xChippy: lol o3o
20:27 ByBy_ChAn: desperation
20:29 ByBy_ChAn: 00:02:889- why you not add here a note ? here I heard the vocals or snap 00:02:444 (3)- from 1/2 to 1/8 you choice
20:29 ByBy_ChAn: *your
20:30 xChippy: Here is where the singer takes the breath so imo its weird to add a note tho :O
20:30 xChippy: a slider would make sense but there is no room for it ><
20:31 ByBy_ChAn: okay
20:34 ByBy_ChAn: 01:12:555 (6)- This object is not stacked good with 01:12:000 (4)- . Move it to 291|167
20:34 xChippy: Intentional o3o look 01:12:333 (5,6) - 
20:36 ByBy_ChAn: replied ?
20:36 xChippy: Intentional o3o look 01:12:333 (5,6) - 
20:36 xChippy: yeah
20:36 xChippy: crash again lol
20:37 ByBy_ChAn: yes
20:37 xChippy: actually those 01:12:000 (4,7) - 
20:37 xChippy: Hard to show it as a whole picture but
20:37 xChippy: It's an overlaying second triangle
20:37 ByBy_ChAn: hmm okay
20:40 ByBy_ChAn: 01:18:444 (2)- maybe you can stack it more better placing it to 244|208
20:40 xChippy: ok
20:41 ByBy_ChAn: good diff O3Ob
20:41 xChippy: lol thanks~
20:42 ByBy_ChAn: np
20:42 ByBy_ChAn: send me the log to me pls

Good luck ~ o/
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
fixed everything, Thanks :3

Then, removed some notes for diff spread :3

http://puu.sh/gbQUd/de5098c386.zip
pishifat
osu! Paragon
3,812 posts
Joined August 2013
pishifat
p/3646019
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Oh phew thanks pishi! 8-)
fixed
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

HabiHolic wrote:

Your Reqeust~~~

[Rakuen's Normal]

  1. 00:25:333 - delete whistle Added some whistles on other notes, to keep same
  2. 00:26:666 (1,2) - suggust Changed to rhythm follow vocal
    SPOILER
  3. 00:47:333 (2,1) - smaill missing blanket Fixed
  4. 00:54:222 (3) - suggust Keep this for the shape :3
    SPOILER
call me back
Thanks for the mods!

Update: http://puu.sh/gdjf2/f0fb0056a6.osu
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Thanks Habi, why only me baka? D;

Fix all except 01:15:555 (4) - because it flows better from previous object as straight slider

also changed snap on 00:54:666 (5,6) -

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Tokyo Ghoul.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 55777
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
Creator:xChippy
Version:xxdeathx's Hard
Source:東京喰種トーキョーグール
Tags:Tokyo Ghoul Rakuen xxdeathx alacat opening Studio Pierrot
BeatmapID:536191
BeatmapSetID:219107

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:7.6
SliderMultiplier:1.36
SliderTickRate:1

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HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
so pro~~~~~~~

xChippy
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xChippy
Wheeee Thanks a lot Habi~~! 8-)
koreapenguin
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koreapenguin
oshietoyo shieteyo~

General
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Easy
  1. 00:51:555 (3) - seem still better change to 1/1 slider or rhythm, so how about this? http://puu.sh/geNEJ/7e9478de8c.jpg it works better
Rakuen's Normal
  1. 00:06:000 (4,5) - i don't want recommend stack them at this diff, it's might be hard for beginners. so you should make enough time for think it's 1/2 or 1/1 gap. like this http://puu.sh/geO3X/18d14fb4e9.jpg it's more readable
alacat's Insane
  1. 00:54:666 (8) - i think you should decrease two repeats, 00:55:000 - 1/4. 1/6 until here 00:54:888 - so it's should be lhttp://puu.sh/gePLU/5e554e178e.jpg like this refer to Desperation diff or xxdesu's Hard diff
Desperation
  1. 00:28:444 (1) - OMG, you must fix this, snap to 1/4
  2. 00:55:777 (1) - i'm not sure about this, i think this slider end is should be snap here 00:55:888 - ahhhhhhhh idk. i know you followed vocal but there is has some sounds
  3. 01:02:000 (7) - there isn't 1/8, 1/4 is right check this i can't any 1/8 sounds on there, i can hear sounds 01:02:000 - 01:02:111 - only them
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xChippy
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xChippy
all fixed for me~ waiting for the GDers now~
meii18
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meii18
Hey I missed something :
Desperation
01:18:222(1,2,3,4)- Why you not ctrl+g (2)- and (4)- like here : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2829309 ? The pattern will looks fine and cuz the current pattern without any ctrl+g looks boring to a expert player =/
alacat
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alacat
changed one 1/6 repeat slider and 1/4 slider at here. thank you ~

http://puu.sh/geYZN/caacc78952.zip
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
Nothing for my diff? D;
xChippy
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xChippy
@ByBy
Imo its the contrary the ctrl+g will make it boring cuz of the circular flow that will occur cuz of the ctrl+g

Also fixed that stack in Rakuen's diff. Everything is now updated
koreapenguin
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OKiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii IIIkeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Qualified ~

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xChippy
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xChippy
Thanks a lot penguin-chan~~!!! 8-)
also LOOOOL dat dog-penguin :!:
Xiaolin
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Xiaolin
gratz 8D
xxdeathx
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xxdeathx
yay
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
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Satellite
great map <3
Bearizm
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Bearizm
Great map! Really!

but just a couple of things in extra.

01:02:111 (8,1) - is this rankable? a circle covering the end of a slider? I thought this is unrankable lol... I'm not sure, maybe it's unrankable if it's covering a repeat slider's end? idk.. I'm asking a legitimate question here c:

and why is 00:54:666 (1,2) - snapped as 1/6s? I think I heard 5 of 1/4 drum sounds o.O in ? <-- actually nvm, i listened to it at 25% and it's correct lol... wow
xChippy
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xChippy
Covering a repeat is unrankable, otherwise it's fine o3o
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