Sinnoh wrote:

Advanced
Hitsounds apply to lower diffs too
00:27:339 (1) - to 00:31:323 (5) - There are basically no hitsounds here
00:33:549 (2) - to 00:37:885 (5) - ^
Hitsounds need some work on the lower diffs, I'd really suggest just copying the top diff's samples since there's a lot of general things.
In general, it's really bland/repetitive, it's just the same clap with almost no variation. Use the whistle to highlight melody more, use the snare more, else it feels out of place if it's used briefly on small sections.

00:43:041 (1) - Might be better to use circle instead since there's not much sound on tail - But It also not, or more bad idea to put blank at 00:43:158 - here bcuz anyway it has sound. I think slidertale is the best way to fill up here.
00:43:275 (2) - Not sure what this is following, use a 1.5/1 slider instead.
00:49:485 (4,5) - 5 should have a different shape, sound is very different to previous ones
00:53:118 (1) - This pattern is identical to the previous, but song much more intense. It would be much better to remap these so they are vertical instead. Changing slider direction = differentiation - Agree but actually both melody is same. fixed myself
00:54:524 (5) - Should not have a clap
01:04:602 (3,4) - Rhythm is not following melody or drums, no strong sound on 4 compared to sounds around it. https://puu.sh/yYRSL/4e96666cbc.png follows everything better. - Nah it's following organ sounds.
01:26:165 (7,8) - 01:28:040 (7,8) - These are exactly the same intensity as other parts of the pattern. Just use 1/1 circles instead to show contrast from other really intense sounds. - 1st has up-down tone and 2nd has down-up tone but it's same melody so it's fine imo.
01:37:296 (1) - Questionable rhythm again, prioritising the high pitch drum over main melody is pretty strange. Main synth is on the downbeat, this examp follows it better. https://puu.sh/yYS0y/fa9e13eb7d.png - I hope u can understand that sound is start at 01:37:296 - here and finish at 01:37:648 - here and this 1/1 slider and every beats in 2nd kiai is following that sound what i dont know how to explain. synth? imo.
01:46:085 (5,6,1) - Hitsounds are gone, no feedback is given

Novice
00:11:871 (1) - 00:46:791 (1) - 00:53:118 (1) - 01:02:259 (1) - etc. Slider tails are landing on nothing and leave unmapped sounds at the same time, not sure how it got qualified with this rhythm. Use this instead. https://puu.sh/yYSlk/5221fa770b.png
01:08:821 (3,4) - Use copy paste on these else it looks ugly - fixed blanket so it'll be pretty now imo


Fix hitsounds on your diffs, and redo the parts on novice I mentioned + others that are the same.
Also, I'm not able to come online for a while so don't ask me unless you can wait a couple months.

Pachiru wrote:

Why no Kawashiro awesome top diff?

Pachiru wrote:

Why no Kawashiro awesome top diff?

- Frontier - wrote:

shouldn't [ -scarlet- ] have underscores between [ and -?
hope you fix this so the map will be popped

Cris- wrote:

Where's "Unlock-" in the tags? (is your old nick and you have a ranked map with this) :thinking:

[ White Music ] wrote:

Cris- wrote:

Where's "Unlock-" in the tags? (is your old nick and you have a ranked map with this) :thinking:

dq

Kawashiro wrote:

lmao it isn't necessary

HE4VEN ~Tengoku e Youkoso~

Kawashiro wrote:

Ouch, That's obviously my mistake ;-;

So how should I do?? owo

Left wrote:

너무 아마추어스러운 실수자너;;

Kawashiro wrote:

Congratz Kawashiro!!!!!!!!!! XDDD







thanks noffy, kurai

Nevo wrote:

:3c

Azer wrote:

This map is very mistimed, would need a -18 Online Offset to fix it.