01:02:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - When I played this it felt really tacky and clunky, how about you only stack 01:02:814 (2) - on 01:02:948 (3) - as they should be moved away from 01:02:412 (1) - in order to preserve the flow you had before that, as it goes you also stack 01:03:350 (4) - on 01:03:484 (5) - as you ofc move them away from 01:02:948 (3) - , I would assume you tried to gimmick the song pattern, but frankly it didn't work out as planned.
01:07:234 (4,5,6,7,8) - < Here you did it right
02:02:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - < Here as well, only the first one is weird
01:00:805 (4,5) - I see you marked this, probably because of the 01:01:207 (5) - , I think this is too much activity at the end of the playfield, try and resolve it as it plays and looks bad - just a little something I can offer
and then
sure it has some overlaps, but it feels adequate
Oh look, you did it here 02:54:243 (2,3,4,5) -
03:09:310 (2) - I don't think this is necessary, it's kinda confusing too when played with HD, since there isn't much 1/8 in this diff