Ok I'm here again, let's go over it again.
[Salad]
00:28:849 (1) - Pretty strong for a non-dash, decrease it to like x:400 for consistency with other similar notes.
Looking a lot better now.
[Platter]
00:26:101 (3) - Maybe just make it a normal dash to this one, this one doesn't sound that strong to me compared to the other notes you have HDashes on. Ctrl+< and move it to x:224, maybe?
00:40:758 (1) - Same with this one, try Ctrl+< and x:144.
Again, this is looking a lot better.
[Overdose]
00:12:361 (1) - Honestly not really a fan of this kickslider, just a simple 1/1 slider would be better.
00:15:452 (2,3,4) - There's no strong sound on the head of 3 or 4 here, the strong sound is on the end of 3. Adjust the HDashes accoridngly please.
00:17:399 (3) - Again, there's a strong sound on the end of this, and no strong sound on 00:17:743 (4) - , so please change this pattern to have the HDash to where the end of 3 is right now.
00:19:117 (7,8,1) - Having a HDash to 7 here would be nice too for the clap on it.
00:23:239 (6) - Sound on this one isn't very strong, I'd say to get rid of the HDash to it.
00:25:529 (2) - ^.
00:27:361 (2) - This one too, not very strong, get rid of the HDash to it.
00:29:192 (2) - Whilst a HDash from this makes sense, a HDash to this feels very strange to me, change this pattern so there's only a HDash from 2 to 3.
00:31:025 (2) - Once again, this note isn't very strong, not much reason to have a HDash to it.
00:32:857 (4,5) - Strong sound is on 5 not 4, so try changing this around so the HDash is to 5, maybe move 4 to x:320.
00:33:659 (2) - This slider feels very difficult to reach right now with the current patterning, maybe reduce the distance to it by moving it to x:96.
00:36:521 (2) - You don't have a HDash to similar sounds, so it sounds pretty strange to have a HDash to this one, just make it a normal movement with a HDash afterwards.
00:36:865 (5) - This is too uncomfortable considering there's no change in the music to indicate this kind of movement, try x:72 instead.
00:37:895 (4) - Curve on this feels really weak right now, which can cause some overdashing if players dash early for the HDash, try x:452.
00:40:185 (2) - Not really strong enough to have a HDash to it, please change it so there's only a HDash from it.
00:43:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd say keep it to a HDash every 2 sliders here until the drums start kicking in after this section, so try some curves with HDashes inbetween using these sliders instead.
Alright, done.
[Salad]
00:28:849 (1) - Pretty strong for a non-dash, decrease it to like x:400 for consistency with other similar notes.
Looking a lot better now.
[Platter]
00:26:101 (3) - Maybe just make it a normal dash to this one, this one doesn't sound that strong to me compared to the other notes you have HDashes on. Ctrl+< and move it to x:224, maybe?
00:40:758 (1) - Same with this one, try Ctrl+< and x:144.
Again, this is looking a lot better.
[Overdose]
00:12:361 (1) - Honestly not really a fan of this kickslider, just a simple 1/1 slider would be better.
00:15:452 (2,3,4) - There's no strong sound on the head of 3 or 4 here, the strong sound is on the end of 3. Adjust the HDashes accoridngly please.
00:17:399 (3) - Again, there's a strong sound on the end of this, and no strong sound on 00:17:743 (4) - , so please change this pattern to have the HDash to where the end of 3 is right now.
00:19:117 (7,8,1) - Having a HDash to 7 here would be nice too for the clap on it.
00:23:239 (6) - Sound on this one isn't very strong, I'd say to get rid of the HDash to it.
00:25:529 (2) - ^.
00:27:361 (2) - This one too, not very strong, get rid of the HDash to it.
00:29:192 (2) - Whilst a HDash from this makes sense, a HDash to this feels very strange to me, change this pattern so there's only a HDash from 2 to 3.
00:31:025 (2) - Once again, this note isn't very strong, not much reason to have a HDash to it.
00:32:857 (4,5) - Strong sound is on 5 not 4, so try changing this around so the HDash is to 5, maybe move 4 to x:320.
00:33:659 (2) - This slider feels very difficult to reach right now with the current patterning, maybe reduce the distance to it by moving it to x:96.
00:36:521 (2) - You don't have a HDash to similar sounds, so it sounds pretty strange to have a HDash to this one, just make it a normal movement with a HDash afterwards.
00:36:865 (5) - This is too uncomfortable considering there's no change in the music to indicate this kind of movement, try x:72 instead.
00:37:895 (4) - Curve on this feels really weak right now, which can cause some overdashing if players dash early for the HDash, try x:452.
00:40:185 (2) - Not really strong enough to have a HDash to it, please change it so there's only a HDash from it.
00:43:506 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd say keep it to a HDash every 2 sliders here until the drums start kicking in after this section, so try some curves with HDashes inbetween using these sliders instead.
Alright, done.