btw everything is just suggestion~
ying's easy:
01:48:758 (3) - maybe end at 01:49:163 and add a note at 01:48:758 -
general: i think it is too long for an easy..about 220 seconds..people will get boring when play. maybe shorter it?
joon's hard:
00:23:014 (2) - move 1 grid left and 2 grids up..in order to make it more smooth~
00:30:514 (2) - this slider better overlap its ending with 00:29:704 (1) - this slider's ending~
00:35:177 - add a note?
00:44:704 (1) - spacing(maybe dont need but i think keep the same spacing better~)
00:49:366 (2) - this point i think try this~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32646in order to make the slider in the white tick..slider in red tick may sounds strange...
00:51:596 (3) - ah..a little boring with this..try something fantastic?lol~
00:57:271 (1) - better overlap the beginning of these two slider~
00:58:893 (1) - ^
01:11:866 (1) - i highly suggest you keep the pattern at the preious point.. here is my suggestion:
move 4 and 5 two tick ahead and delete 6, then move 01:13:893 (1) - this to 6's place(the long white tick) and make an additional reverse arrow.somthing like
this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32646, and
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32650if you dont want..at least overlap the two pink slider~
01:20:379 (3) - try to make 3 towards 4 and 4 towards 5..it will be more beautiful~like
this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265201:44:298 (1) - try to overlap these slider perfectly~
01:48:352 (2) - ^
01:51:393 - add a note here?
02:09:433 (2) - overlap the slider~
02:18:352 (1) - add note here?
02:31:325 (1) - overlap the slider~
02:34:569 (1) - ^
03:10:447 (2) - spacing..and make things straight~
03:18:960 - add note?
03:25:650 (3) - will be better if you move thing a little bit downwards~
03:34:366 - add note here?
03:54:839 (3) - maybe it touch the HPbar...move it down a little?
03:40:906 - 04:10:358 - really like this part..great~~
kana:
02:05:379 - add a beat here? i think it is a bad pause..
02:57:271 (5) - e.. i think you dont need the tick in the middle of the slider..it is straight~lol~
03:49:467 (1) - make it like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/32657 will be more pretty~
Just a suggestion..I think OA9 will be ok if you want to change~since it is really boring for ctb cause only can use hid to play which will be a little boring....lol~
another thing.. do you still accept new diff? I want to make a ctb diff.. really like the song~~