Chromoxx wrote:
took a quick look
Geno:
00:18:300 - 00:22:618 - the contrast in patterns used here for emphasis is a bit too strong since it's very similar overall... changing the entire rythm this drastically is a bit over the top imo
00:27:214 - 00:31:532 - same
-- ddk usage in the kiai is too repetitive, i'd suggest changing some patterns for better variety and emphasis on different vocals etc.
ok both are changed
Jonawaga wrote:
ok now I can revive my old post, no kd
spread is beautiful now, awesome job
remember to only apply what seems good to you
[general][Genocide Oni]
- I'm pretty sure that "pop" is an unnecessary tag because it will be added as the genre
- fixed bugged SV everywhere in the map description everywhere
call me back =w=
- 00:17:465 (37,38) - consider ctrl+g here for the vocal's pitch (00:26:379 (69,70) - here too) i would rather stand with my old d k k d for better emphasis
- 00:19:275 - consider adding a 1/4 triplet here for the vocal (00:28:189 - here too) same ^
- 00:48:105 - consider adding a 1/4 doublet here to make the gap easier, and it flows better by showing the progression 00:47:827 (146,147) - here better because it's not just rising pitches
- 00:57:019 - include a hit here for the vocal?
- 01:00:780 - consider adding a 1/4 triplet if you want owo yes, its nice to hear more 1/4 triplets, but for me i just want to single tapping for the ending, and no forced triplets, but it really does cool for me thanks for suggestion
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thanks for mod both of you guys !