1. Somber of Late Night (5,19 stars, 1560 notes)

SkyFlame wrote:

Hi~

Mod!

[Somber of Late Night]

1. 00:11:086 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like the spacing of these few notes plus similar patterns are too small, maybe space them out more They're like that on porpuse
   
2. 00:16:572 (1,2,3,4) - There should be a better structure for this, maybe have them in a specific shape, otherwise it seems kind of random to me It's the same pattern tho
   
3. 00:44:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - again for patterns like these i think that the spacing is way too small. (To the point where it almost/is overlapping and doesn't look well aesthetically.) This also applies later on, in sections like 03:36:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - so watch out for them No change done, I think it's okay, in game doesn't look bad
   
4. 01:00:457 (1,1,1,1,1) - OMG teach me how to make sliders like these xD
   
5. 01:53:429 (7,12) - why random change in SV compared to sliders like 01:48:457 (12) - Fixed
   
6. 02:04:400 (7,12) - same here^ (and check other parts of map) Fixed
   
7. 02:18:114 (7) - Not sure about this but it might be offscreen or at least close to it
   
8. 02:23:772 (8) - not overlapped by 02:22:743 (1) -
   
9. 02:56:000 (2,4,1) - notes are offscreen/are close to being offscreen, i noticed throughout the map that a lot of notes are close, just keep an eye out for them.
   
10. 03:57:372 (1,3,4,5) - I dont really agree with the overlaps on this part, maybe have them like you did with 03:56:343 (2,4,5,2) - where the circle is inside the slider
    
11. 05:47:086 (1,1,1) - I feel that parts like these or 01:29:257 (1,1,1) - you could add some of your slider art, so that it keeps the map more interesting and adds variety

Nope, the song doesn'0t really "ask" for sliders


[General]

1. I also noticed generally overall your combos get pretty high, so you probably should add more NC (but i'm noob modder/mapper so idk where would good >.<) They're consistent tho, I do that on porpuse to make changes between patterns according to the song
   
2. CS 4.3 seems a little bit too much, I'd say try using CS 4 or 4.2 I feel like 4.3 is still too big, but meh, Ill keep
   
3. Same goes for HP, I would stay with a whole number, like HP 6 because 6.2 is just so random to me Changed to 6.5
   
4. OD should not be this high either, maybe lower it down to 8 or 8.5 OD9 still too low imo :< but no change
   
5. What about the Kiai times? Idk if they're absolutely necessary for rank but i think parts like 03:56:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - should have some sort of kiai Yeah I added kiais
   
6. I feel that the last section 03:34:057 - and beyond, you should increase the spacing on some of the streams when appropriate, especially during the more intense parts of the song
   
7. This map kind of reminds me of maps like these --> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830322 You could probably get a lot more ideas from taking a look at this song

Great song! Good luck!

ty

Testplay

SORRY im using my laptop so i play like a 5-digit player right now xD (Also I had No Fail just in case but I didn't need it.)

huntress wrote:

i liked the song so i wanted to check out your map and maybe give a mod but like, i couldnt really do a proper mod. your aesthetics and patterns seems super on point to me, and your slider art is really really cool. dont think theres much i could complain about in terms of rythym except it being undermapped in some places, leading me to say... its really boring. like really really boring. the patterns are good but when its just really obvious that youre playing a copypasted section for an entire minute straight, its just not interesting. theres a ton of places where the rythym and patterns could be mixed up while still fitting your general theme and representing the song well. theres a lot more you could do with the kiais, the patterns you have are nice and the sliders look great but they still just feel super lacking.

it looks super organized and pretty, its just way too repetitive.

Josh123uaJ wrote:

Returning my end of m4m.

General:
Checked AiMod and saw that 04:06:286 (4) and 04:10:743 (5) have unsnapped slider ends.

Somber Of Late Night:
01:47:685 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - These two short stream patterns look too close to each other. Same with 02:01:315 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)
01:54:457 (1) - You should angle this slider 45 degrees up (like what you did at 02:16:400 (1)). No, this slider 01:54:457 (1) - forms part of this pattern 01:54:457 (1,2,3,4) - so If I rotate it, it would lost its connection with that pattern and looks messy
02:17:257 (1) - You can move this to the left so 02:16:572 (2,3,1) can look more symmetrical.
02:33:543 (9) - Rotate this a little bit counter-clockwise so that flow improves a little.
02:35:430 (1) - Move this to the left to improve flow a little bit.
02:42:457 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You don't need to increase spacing in the second pattern. 02:45:200 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) is fine since the background sound starts to pick up in volume and becomes noticeable enough. There's a sound that starts increasing its volume from 02:42:457 - so I start increasing spacing there
02:50:515 (2,4,1,3) - You can make them aligned. The last note seems out of place in the line. Also you can align the beginning of the next slider with the line.
03:05:257 (2) - Place new NC here instead of the last slider and remove clap just like what you did at 03:02:515 (1).
03:55:315 (7,8,9) - You can arrange this so they form a perfect triangle.
04:04:572 (2,4,1,3) - You can make them also aligned. Only the first note this time seems out of place in the line.
04:11:086 (6) - You can place a new NC here since you already placed NCs at the big white ticks in this kiai section (and the last kiai section). Then remove NC at 04:11:772 (3) and place it at 04:12:457 (1) instead so that combos are consistent with the last kiai section.
04:18:457 (4,5,6) - I can't see a reason why you made this higher spaced than usual (you probably have a reason but I can't see it)
04:41:257 (12) - This slider is a little bit too curved imo. Maybe move the slider point upright a little.

I really enjoyed this map despite its repetitiveness (I have a preference for longer maps so its drain time is a plus :^) ). Have a couple of stars from me. GL reaching ranked.

Thanks !!!

1. 01:22:400 (1) - would consider endthing this 1/1 earler and adding a circle on the current end, 01:24:800 - thsi sound and 01:26:172 (1,2) - are kinda connected inteh music and since you made the last part stand out It'd be nice to have the first part represented too
2. 01:26:515 (2) - feels a bit odd to start the c:5 custom here and not at 01:26:172 (1) - with how these and the next combo are paired
3. 01:38:857 (1) - thoughts about adding a not at this and moving the spinner 1/2 later? That last vocal clickable just feels more inline with the rest of the section to me
4. 01:49:829 (1,3,4,5) - even the visual ds a bit out here, kinda inconsisntent with the rest
5. 02:01:657 (7,2) - stack tthese streams would be nice helps visuals too since 02:03:200 (7) - is noticable closer then the rest since they're almost touching
6. 02:05:171 (14,2) - border overlapping looks a bit ugly would move 2 a bit more to the left
7. 02:06:286 (1,2,3) - similar placement like 02:09:029 (1,2,3) - would be good here, makes it flow alot smoother with 2-3 movement
8. 02:23:086 (2) - try placing this at a bit lower at like 96/34 ish makes it visually more appealing and a bit smoother transistion from 02:22:572 (8,1,2) -
   
9. 02:33:715 (1) - felt a bit underemhpasiszed here with how important this one is because its the first time those other 3 sliders gets added, would really see something to make this stand out more prob not easy but like a change to cw flow for example
   
10. 02:45:543 (7) - shouldn't this be a just a circle following the prev concepts?
11. 02:38:515 (2,1) - overlapping in the middle of the slider instead of touching the tial would make this visually a bit better
12. 02:55:657 (1,3,5,2) - aligntment of (2) feels kinda off here compared to the similar, why not use the same x/y increase like 02:55:657 (1,5) - for (3,2)
13. 03:00:285 (1) - bit more to the right for alignment of 02:58:743 (2,4,6,1) -
14. 03:06:629 (1,2) - visual overlap could be beter here imo like a double even spaced blanket like
    
    could also stack with tail of 03:05:943 (4) - since its so close to it
15. 03:36:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing looks a bit disorginasized here compared to the rest, similar to these pairings looks better 03:39:886 (3,4) -
16. 03:42:629 (3) - only clap without a ds increase in the section makes it kinda inconsistent
17. 03:53:772 (4,5,6,8) - adding the increased spacing from the prev jumps is enought here for this part no need to add a readablility change right at the end aswell, maybe place this, maybe place 03:54:286 (8,9,10,11,1) - more to the top so visually its still connected and it makes 03:55:657 (9) - feel less out of place too
    
18. 04:06:286 (4,5,6) - even visual spacing around the tail of 4 would be nice here, makes it feel more connected
19. 04:23:600 (2,3) - indiviually control + g would be nice makes the playable distance between 12 and 34 more similar and all the same direction looking sliders feels better with 04:22:915 (7,8,9) - imo
20. 04:42:286 (7) - 275/163 for a bit better angle and visualle more connected pattern
21. 04:53:943 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 04:55:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - were some awkward entry angles here would consider rotating the streams a bit or placing the circles more inline with the stream direction like you did at 04:51:200 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - for example
22. 05:36:800 (3) - just a circle would be better here I think since it reduces readablility and makes it less intense which is what you seem to be building down to, currently 05:35:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - is a lot easier than this combo tho so building down more at this one seems fitting too
23. 01:26:172 (1,2,1,2) - vs 05:44:000 (1,2,1,2) - can maybe increase the spacing at 1:26 too with the pitch as a bit of a throwback for these last notes

Wishkey wrote:

Yooow!

Technical stuff:
- Add +6 offset would be nice sounds like its a bit too early atm like mapped to the prestatic instead of the full beat (try comparing the claps for info) I thought it was okay, most of the runs from testplayers got 99%, added +4 tho
-00:11:086 (1) - check volume lvl red/green Those were unused points, deleted instead
-Add some combo colours would be cool oops, I thought I added them 0wo
-soft-hitnormal2.wav is unused

Diff

1. 01:22:400 (1) - would consider endthing this 1/1 earler and adding a circle on the current end, 01:24:800 - thsi sound and 01:26:172 (1,2) - are kinda connected inteh music and since you made the last part stand out It'd be nice to have the first part represented too
2. 01:26:515 (2) - feels a bit odd to start the c:5 custom here and not at 01:26:172 (1) - with how these and the next combo are paired
3. 01:38:857 (1) - thoughts about adding a not at this and moving the spinner 1/2 later? That last vocal clickable just feels more inline with the rest of the section to me
4. 01:49:829 (1,3,4,5) - even the visual ds a bit out here, kinda inconsisntent with the rest
5. 02:01:657 (7,2) - stack tthese streams would be nice helps visuals too since 02:03:200 (7) - is noticable closer then the rest since they're almost touching
6. 02:05:171 (14,2) - border overlapping looks a bit ugly would move 2 a bit more to the left
7. 02:06:286 (1,2,3) - similar placement like 02:09:029 (1,2,3) - would be good here, makes it flow alot smoother with 2-3 movement I think its fine owo
8. 02:23:086 (2) - try placing this at a bit lower at like 96/34 ish makes it visually more appealing and a bit smoother transistion from 02:22:572 (8,1,2) -
   
9. 02:33:715 (1) - felt a bit underemhpasiszed here with how important this one is because its the first time those other 3 sliders gets added, would really see something to make this stand out more prob not easy but like a change to cw flow for example
   
10. 02:45:543 (7) - shouldn't this be a just a circle following the prev concepts?
11. 02:38:515 (2,1) - overlapping in the middle of the slider instead of touching the tial would make this visually a bit better
12. 02:55:657 (1,3,5,2) - aligntment of (2) feels kinda off here compared to the similar, why not use the same x/y increase like 02:55:657 (1,5) - for (3,2)
13. 03:00:285 (1) - bit more to the right for alignment of 02:58:743 (2,4,6,1) -
14. 03:06:629 (1,2) - visual overlap could be beter here imo like a double even spaced blanket like
    
    could also stack with tail of 03:05:943 (4) - since its so close to it
15. 03:36:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing looks a bit disorginasized here compared to the rest, similar to these pairings looks better 03:39:886 (3,4) -
16. 03:42:629 (3) - only clap without a ds increase in the section makes it kinda inconsistent
17. 03:53:772 (4,5,6,8) - adding the increased spacing from the prev jumps is enought here for this part no need to add a readablility change right at the end aswell, maybe place this, maybe place 03:54:286 (8,9,10,11,1) - more to the top so visually its still connected and it makes 03:55:657 (9) - feel less out of place too
    
18. 04:06:286 (4,5,6) - even visual spacing around the tail of 4 would be nice here, makes it feel more connected
19. 04:23:600 (2,3) - indiviually control + g would be nice makes the playable distance between 12 and 34 more similar and all the same direction looking sliders feels better with 04:22:915 (7,8,9) - imo only ctrl+g'd the 2, I think its better now, but I don't want it to be the same as 04:22:919 (7,8,9) - because these r different sounds
20. 04:42:286 (7) - 275/163 for a bit better angle and visualle more connected pattern
21. 04:53:943 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 04:55:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - were some awkward entry angles here would consider rotating the streams a bit or placing the circles more inline with the stream direction like you did at 04:51:200 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - for example
22. 05:36:800 (3) - just a circle would be better here I think since it reduces readablility and makes it less intense which is what you seem to be building down to, currently 05:35:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - is a lot easier than this combo tho so building down more at this one seems fitting too
23. 01:26:172 (1,2,1,2) - vs 05:44:000 (1,2,1,2) - can maybe increase the spacing at 1:26 too with the pitch as a bit of a throwback for these last notes should be better now

No reply = fixed (almost everything) THAKNKS

Map fits the song pretty good in its repetiveniss, gl mate!

Shogud wrote:

hoyl fuck im so jealous of your slider art

[Somber Of Late Night]

Aimod, couple of objects arent snapped
00:18:632 (3,4) - whys this one bigger than these 2 00:20:004 (3,4,3,4) - ? id think the latter ones would have bigger spacing since its the same volume of the notes but the strings add extra intensity compare the sound on 00:17:604 (4) - with 00:18:975 (4) - that's why that one is bigger
02:33:890 (2,3) - ctrl g these for better flow? imo it flows better as how it is rn
02:50:176 - i dont agree with your rhythm choice in the kiai times, youve basically halved the note density even though the drums are still the same volume, and because of it this section is a lot easier than the section before it, which is a problem for what is supposed to be the hardest parts of the map. if theres a way you could incorporate the drums into this section to increase the density that would be a lot better Kiai time is not supposed to be the hardest part of the map, its supposed to stand out from the rest but stand out more =/= harder. In this case, I think that the kiai part reaaally stands out from the rest because of what you say, because it's easier, because is quite different from the rest, so I will keep this
03:36:976 (2) - 03:39:719 (2) - 03:42:461 (2) - 03:45:204 (2) - clap sounds that are just as loud as the notes after yet are spaced lower?


nitpicky stuff:

this is probably the most nitpicky thing ive ever said in a mod by why is "Of" capitalized in the diff name its kinda throwin me off, follow standard naming grammar conventions plz lmaO sorry OWO

01:00:461 (1) - http://puu.sh/yrvzu/354a982557.jpg blanket xd
01:22:404 (1,4) - on purposely not stacked? Oops
03:07:661 (3,4) - visual spacing on this is a lot tighter than what youve been using up til now, open it up a bit?
04:17:947 - 04:39:890 visual spacing in this section randomly changes between bars, while theyre consistent within their own groups maybe it might be better to keep a standard spacing? Its on porpuse depending on how I hear the music, for me, this part is like my fav. part, so I want it to stand a little bit more than the rest in its own way, because this is the only section in the song that sounds like this, it's like more quiet but at the same time its like so intense (for me) so the spacing changes on how I see that. here for example 04:31:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - isnt clear why I used more spacing in here?
05:22:576 (13,2) - blanket xd


but ya your concepts and visuals are all spot on, the consistency throughout is really nice
GL! Thanks owo

kwk wrote:

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00:17:261 (3,4) - make the ds same as 00:18:632 (3,4) - , so it follows the same spacing as the next 3 bars, dunno why this is a continuation of 00:15:204 (1,2,3,4) - when the music is grouped into 4s Actually, 00:16:576 (1,2,3,4) - flow is different. anyways, changed the spacnig a little

01:00:461 - be cool if the red anchors lined up with the beat like this one did 01:03:204 - for the sliders in this section I agree with this but not gonna change, the sliders follow a different sound which is that voice on the bg

02:01:319 (3) - personally i would like to see these represented differently compared to the rest of the streams cause of the piano and its a rare break from the repetiveness and would be cool if it was highlighted in some way maybe u can try structuring it slightly differently like http://puu.sh/yxeIe/fc5c0dd97c.png idk The spacing on the streams changes according to the piano, not really noticeable I know and nothing stans out more but I want to keep it like that as drums sounds the same
02:21:033 (8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems rather different to your usual patterning for some reason, slider direction not following stream direction?

02:26:004 (3,8,13) - you start triangle patterning here, why not continue it onwards over here eg http://puu.sh/yxeQn/99582bda10.png

02:30:462 (6,7) - moving 7 behind 6 seems to be more in line with your patterning so far something like this http://puu.sh/yxeSm/3b175618d4.png though on second thought it seems like your switching between the two freely...hmmmmm maybe its better idea to stick to the patterning like 01:52:061 (6,7) - throughout. so maybe change 02:00:290 (6,7,8) - to something like http://puu.sh/yxf3o/b691893bd2.png and moving 7 behind 02:08:519 (6,7) - etc imo this doesn't affect playability or emphasize, because spacing is consistent, in this case I will change the one at 02:30:461 (6,7) - because yes, 7 feels kinda out of place, but not gonna change others, as this for example 02:00:290 (6,7,8) - this one has different sounds samples than the rest so it has different flow and spacing

02:34:061 (3,4) - doesnt this jump seem a bit big, its bigger than this one 02:36:804 (3,4) - and its also a jump in opposite direction fixed

02:41:604 (7) - why not continue the slider patterning from here 02:40:576 (12,6) -eg http://puu.sh/yxffH/1e8e998a5c.png di also suggest you to change to a repeat 02:41:604 (7) - so its not as empty going towards the next part same here 04:53:261 (7) - 04:58:747 (7) - changed the 02:40:576 (12,6) - as you suggested, but not agree on the repeat (idk what you mean for repeat, reverse slider maybe? if thats it, then no)

03:35:947 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacing seems a bit off jumps between 0.2-0.3 shit happens when rotating a stream

03:35:776 (3,4) - can u spread these out a bit more to like 2.1x tho i honestly dont get spacing in this section, im assuming stuff is spaced further if there is a beat on it and closer if there isnt, judging from 03:34:061 (1,2,3) - but then why is this basically equal spacing 03:35:433 (1,2,3) - when theres nothing on 2 and a beat on 3? and then we have this 03:36:804 (1,2,3) - and i dont understand anymore I use more spacing when there's a clap like in 03:34:404 (3) - 03:35:776 (3) - 03:37:147 (3) - and so..

03:50:176 (8) - i would ctrl+g this, just cause the established patterning is cooler and why break from it

04:09:719 (1,3,5) - why not overlap these, you did so in the first kiai because 04:09:719 (1,3,5) - is different than 03:03:890 (1,3,5,2,4,5) -

04:12:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - id reconsider the patterning here since it seems a lot worse than the first kiai imo.. I like it and feels like it reflects the music pretty well :<

04:18:119 (2,3) - why not jump here when u do so 04:19:490 (2,3) - Sounds different considering the bg sound

04:25:833 (7) - ctrl+g cause patterning i'll stop mentioning it here

04:53:261 (7,1) - jump seems a bit small? though i guess its intentional, not sure if i agree with it since the rhythm gap is misleading imo

holy this song is repetitive

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-Unlimit- wrote:

here is my modding :3

Somber Of Late Night

03:01:147 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - put NC when sv change.
03:12:119 (1,2,3,4,5) - this too

there is more parts that no NC though sv change. find yourself and plz fix it
new NC's on sV changes are needed when the change of velocity is too much, or unintuitive, in this case, this map doesn't need those NC because you can play them intuitively, without any "surprise" on SV. the spacing between the slider and the circle also helps so... no changes were made

there isn't any weird parts in my eye =w=
just fix some NCs

seselis1 wrote:

o/ from my q
[Somber of Late Night]
00:16:576 (1,2,3,4) - when you use such pattern 3 is unemphasized as it should be spaced not closer but further I think it's good because the next emphasize goes on 4 and the 3 plays different from the previous patterns so I think its okay, should not be that emphasized because the note on there doesnt really stand out
00:23:090 (3) - with default skin this touches hp bar and this is unrankable
01:37:661 (2,3) - blanket better
01:45:376 (8) - NC?
01:48:119 (8) - ^ etc Nope, I'd rather not add NC on these because these forms part of the same ... pattern, like theyre connected and they dont need the NC that would separate them from the others
01:47:604 (3,4,5,6,7) - ; 01:48:119 (8,9,10,11,12) - comparing to streams before, these streams have smaller spacing, you should overlap them with same amount in order to be consistent I don't really get how this is an issue, like.. the spacing it's the same or a little bit less than the others because of the less spacing but visually looks okay, not even.. noticeable while playing so.. no changes here yet, if someone else points it out I will change I guess
01:49:490 (7) - this is spaced further I agree but 01:49:661 (8) - this one is spaced even more further, which shouldn't be bc this is not so strong sound The sound on it isnt that strong but the context, the rest of the instruments in the song makes it goes more intense so thats why it has more spacing even tho, isnt that big, the spacing is similar in general in the same patterns, visual spacing doesnt really changes
02:22:233 (6,7,8) - this one's good
02:25:147 (7) - not necessary but ctrl+g works a better flow
02:38:690 - undermapped
02:51:548 (1) - you could actually place such "uh" or whatever sounds even a little bit up to give more emphasis I think I will change every "uh" into a kickslider in this section. that would be great in this map, thanks amigo, nice one

I feel like it's a bit wub so I'm not an expert in these srr Don't worry you gave me a really good idea, thanks for modding
GL

Hobbes2 wrote:

hello!

I love keeno, one of my favorite dnb artists! Keeno is god


https://soundcloud.com/willkeeno/insomn ... ous-mind-1

Capitalize the the first letter in every word in the title, this is keeno's official soundcloud so the title should be correct there. was like this but some guy complained about the grammar mistakes and the capitalization of the "of or an" and I thought this wasnt really a problem lol

Overall this map is quite consistent in what it does, the song is very repetitive and while I think you might be able to do a better job with variation, the map itself is pretty okay regardless. At least it does follow the music pretty well :p

Pretty slider art! OWO

01:54:633 (2) - would fit a lot better if this ends on the red tick especially considering the clap there. Applies wherever relevant, such as 02:05:604 (2) - etc I have to disagree, I really like how it plays with that drum, as I used a lot of 1/2 sliders for other sounds, I feel like this, being 1/4 fits better for that sound

An example of where you could have done some variation, the bass picks up quite heavily in intensity on this section 02:06:290 - and the intensity of the map could have been increased (spacing, overall difficulty, etc) to match. Like, it's really noticeable here how powerful the bass gets 02:11:776, you could have utilized this intensity for your map as well.

02:33:376 (8,1) - you could rearrange this so there isn't this messy overlap here f
02:47:947 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i didnt this played that well considering the angle you make when entering 02:48:461 (8,9,10) - this burst and the movement you have to make through it. did ctrl+g on the last stream with the one in the middle so I guess it would play better now tho I didnt really had any problem with it before and no one else complained :thinking:
02:50:176 (1) - this shape is kinda ugly, you could make it a bit more symmetrical. I like how it is, changed a little bit tho
03:07:147 (2,3) - these dont really need to touch, considering the speed of these sliders you can DS it at about 1.0 or so so at least the cursor is following the speed of the slider through the movement f
03:37:319 (4,5,6) - some of these triplets and bursts look messed up, fix the DS on this, 03:37:833 (8,9,10,11,1) - same with this one
03:38:690 (4,5,6,7,8) - this one too f
04:11:776 (3,4,1) - as before, these sliders are quite fast and having them DS's so low is incredibly underwhelming when playing. spaced more

overall the map is not bad at all, but I don't think it's ready for my nomination just yet. The kiai's feel a bit underwhelming as it stands and I think you could add some variation in the nonkiais. I'll keep track of the thread (since I really like the song) and maybe I could come back if there are some notable improvements as you get more mods. Good luck!

Hailie wrote:

Hello! NM from my queue - I lost my much longer mod before so ya don't have to do M4M (look like I gotta do my mods in notepad for now on...)

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  all of what is here is pretty minor (only because what happen above...)

1. 00:18:975 (4) - feel this should had little lower spacing right here since it no different than the notes after it like here 00:20:347 (4) - and to have a bit of consistency there is change actually, listen to the piano note on here 00:17:604 (4) - and then to this one 00:18:975 (4) -
2. 01:00:461 (1) - nice slider shape here but maybe bring up a little of the very start of the curve on this slider to make it look a bit better here (pretty minor adjustments) tried that but looks worse s:
3. 01:47:090 (1,2,3) - just feel the spacing around here seems a bit high here when there nothing to really emphasis and it is no different than the start here 01:44:347 (1,2,3) - which just looks inconsistent - basically adjust the spacing Fixed
4. 02:55:661 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think it would be cool if you give this more spacing (and kind of the same for 02:58:404 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ,etc) to give the kiai more emphasis in general since its just a bit underwhelming compare to the nonkiai in a way and this would help it out a bit Added more spacing and adjusted the flow
5. 03:38:519 (3) - bring this down a bit too give it slightly more spacing and give it some emphasis a bit like the previous time (minor)
6. 03:53:604 (3) - spacing is kind of high here and you should probably reduce it since this note doesn't really need to be emphasis with this much spacing
7. nitpicking) 04:05:261 (5) - would looks cleaner if ya move this under the slider end of 04:04:233 (1) - I don't really get this one but I did some rearrangement so it looks better I guess

Ahhh so many points I made in my mod lost but I must move unto other request since I am a bit frustrated sorry

Neat map and GL Thanks for modding

realy0_ wrote:

Hello, Christmas mod

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General
the personnal complain about this is that the rhythm pattern choice is just too consistant even if it's a repetitive song (ex at 01:44:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ) , i would like to see 2 another rhythms patterns so it less boring to play I won't change the rhythm choice because thats the theme of the map, I don't really want to add kicksliders on these, or.. reverses or triplets with kicksliders, because I don't really feel like they fit the song, changed some patterns of the beginning tho

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01:00:461 (1,1) - take care of the blanket ? not a problem, both sliders doesn't seem to overlap or blanket because of how long they are
01:11:433 (1) - placing this at y318 seems to overlap better the precedent slider ok this may work, yes, fixed
04:21:719 (9,10,11,12,13) - it's just me or this seems not parallal to 04:21:204 (4,5,6,7,8) - fixed

v.v almost too perfect for me

Gaia wrote:

hihi

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00:44:004 (1,2,3,4) - for this section, instead of having (1,2,3) spaced all the same, why not have (2) have higher spacing for the higher pitch and decrease spacing of (3)? It works quite nicely imo ok I think I get your point
01:11:433 (1,1) - these 2 are much more disconnected than the other ones, why not ctrl+g 01:16:919 (1) - and then place it something like http://puu.sh/yR7PT/e67ea0a16d.jpg the following slider will still flow nicely.
01:36:119 (1,2) - might wanna change the sliderends to default soft since the tick is still quite audible. also, consider overlapping (1,2) since they're 1/2 beats apart and yet spaced the same as (2,3) which is 1/1 apart
02:23:261 (3) - why did u suddenly want to use a kickslider for this one lol // 02:32:690 (1,2) - a kickslider for this one would be nice since it sounds different These have kicksliders because there's a piano note on 02:23:261 (3) - same as 02:01:319 (3) - and, for that other sound, I think making it streamable fits better as the sound its the same as the stream, so its like extended
02:33:376 (8,9) - 02:44:347 (7,8) - D:3 then D:2?
02:51:547 (1) - even with slider leniency this is pretty hard to play, i'd suggest avoiding these 1/4 patterns. The music doesn't really have anything on the blue tick anyways, so a circle is best imo There's that small voice sound on it, with high pitch, in which I always use kicksliders and I think that a single circle is like.. idk, more boring imo, It was a circle yeah, I changed later, I will change the direction of the slider to make it play better tho
03:10:404 (3,4) - 03:11:433 (5,1) - confusing spacing
03:46:404 (1) - 03:47:261 (7,8) - pretty rough imo changed to kicksliders (and other parts like this)
04:42:290 (7,1) - 04:48:119 (1) - basically 1/4 spacing

No reply=fixed

didn't repeat the same things twice since they often did occur more than once, if u agree then apply them to the other places too x) did

i have no idea how u managed to map almost 6 mins of this song but gfu and gl lol Thanks owo

Scaltinof wrote:

hi~

01:46:061 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - all of these circles are consistent and it is good. but all have the same pattern and it feel monotony.i think you can stack to the circle on the previous kick slider to emphasize those sound.i recommend to stack this part 01:51:547 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - if you stack these circle.you don't mind using a method that is not a stack, but I think that it will be fun to incorporate some kind of accent Changing these doesn't really affect the gameplay, emphasize is done by spacing so no changes here

04:39:890 - 05:23:776 - The same can be said for this part as well

03:08:690 (5) - NC?
03:11:433 (5) - same

03:00:633 - put a circle? snare is ringing There's a snare yes but I always skipped it in these parts because I want emphasize on that other drum sound with the extended slider

03:00:976 (6,1) - too big distance
03:47:261 (8,8,8) - i think that NC will be an accent
03:55:661 (9) - you should put NC for players because slider velocity change to fast. NC is no needed here because it plays well, I just changed its velocity a little bit for better flow
04:17:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you can put more space between each circles Not agree, I feel like this pattern fits the song just perfect

Good Luck!!!

megafanx3 wrote:

I promised I would mod this, here I go

Somber of Late Night

- OD9 feels quite strange, it can be seen at the beggining. When I played it I got plenty of 100s and a pretty bad accuracy, consider changing it please (Also, the map is 5,17 stars for having a high OD)

-Although if you keep the OD, then replace some circles at the start ( 00:11:090 to 00:21:718 ), too much density for a calm part

- 00:39:890 (1,2,3) - This copypaste is broken how is it broken? it is not

- 02:11:261 (6,7,8) - These aren't parallel sliders (Nor this one 02:11:776 (1) )

- 02:29:604 (12) - This high curve slider doesn't fit with a strong sound comparing the other curve sliders

- 02:51:547 (1) - Broken flow It's the same as everything lol

- 02:57:033 (1) - Same LUL

- 03:05:261 (1) - And same, forgive me please I don't really know how you get to the conclusion that the flow is broken if it is literally the same

- 03:34:061 to 03:44:690 - I will complain this part because it's to dense, you could replace those quintuples with kicksliders instead I don't really like how kicksliders plays on this section and almost all the map, I used them for specific emphasize and adding them on this section or changing the streams to kickslider will ruin the map, all 1/4 beats are important/equal so I think that the best way to reflect that is with streams

- 03:46:919 (4,5,6,7,8) - This stack seems normal but actually, it's bad stacked well yeah it doesnt affect playability and its almost impossible to notice this how tf did you..

- 03:52:404 (4,5,6,7,8) - The slider is unstacked too

- 04:10:233 (3) - Offscreen haha It is not

- 04:53:604 (1) - Bad flow

- 05:45:376 (1,2) - Why is this one more separated than the last one? Listen carefully to this note 05:44:347 (2) - and then this one 05:45:719 (2) -

What a nice map boii, even when it feels repetitive, it's enjoyable and relaxing.

One of my new stamina training maps, good luck ^^

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01:45:890 - Red tick has a sound that shouldn't be skipped imo. My suggestion would be to extend 01:48:461 (12) - into a 1/2 slider so you don't leave out the red tick. It would also better emphasize the sound at 01:48:461 - with an extended slider. Applies to many other instances like 01:48:633 - 01:51:376 - 01:56:861 - and so on. Not agree, there's like no sound.. I mean, nothing really loud or noticeable.

01:46:919 - Kinda similar to above, but not really. Sound on red tick should be map to avoid the awkward 3/4 rhythm gap. I would map a circle there. Applies to other instances like 01:52:404 - 01:57:890 - etc. The 3/4 doesn't really play awkwardly, no one has ever had problem with this, and it's like the gimmick of the map, for me, I like how it is placed, adding a circle on red tick after them or extending the slider would kinda kill my idea of the map

02:50:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - cool pattern, & u used it throughout the kiai. nicee

02:51:547 (1) - tbh should just be a circle. Yeah there's a drum instead of clap there, but it would just play the same during gameplay. Player's won't be able to feel the difference when playing. Should just make into circle to make the pattern look clearn IMO. Not gonna change it because the kickslider reflects that "voice" sound, just like the rest of the map, I like how it plays with the kickslider, sounds kinda cool and as you said, it doesn't really affect gameplay

03:08:176 (1) - delete NC? considering that you didn't break up the combo here 03:09:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - added NC 03:10:919 (1) - here instead

04:17:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - can you make your visual spacing more consistent? Right now, compare visual spacing with 04:21:204 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 04:23:947 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 04:26:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 04:29:261 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 04:31:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - and so forth. The first pattern is different because song changes, previously in the map I never make 04:17:947 (1,2,3) - clickable, and in the section after the break, I make these clickable, but not as kicksliders, now, this part 04:17:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is like the same but with kicksliders, and then from here 04:20:690 (1) - all patterns have equal visual spacing, it's just the first one that is different according to the spacing and rhythm used in this section 03:34:061 - 03:45:033 - althought it doesn't plays bad nor its hard to read, it is my favourite pattern of the map and I think it reflects the song just perfect

04:15:719 (2) - could make this better. use Grid snapping to make the nodes symmetrical, then scale to make the slider perfect: https://puu.sh/z358I/5689ee7d60.jpg

04:36:119 (1,6) - ^ space it so they aren't touching.

05:36:719 (2) - 1/4 slider on a blue tick & ends on a white tick is really weird. Change to 2 circles instead.

05:37:833 (2) - SV drop is too drastic imo, people are gonna misread that as a 1/4 since it looks so similar to 05:37:147 (4) - changed SV to 0.30, never saw someone breaking up here but changes anyways
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hope this helps. GL

Chocobo wrote:

Hi from my modding queue.
Very hard to mod indeed, as u have done so well XD;
Here are some small advice:
* 00:22:061 - consider changing slider velocity in this section? since it is a very long section and might be kind of boring when playing; yeah may be a kind of boring but I think that making sliders a bit faster wouldn't really help that, spacing does reflect the song pretty well
* 01:37:147 - hit-sound to custom 1; Don't really know if keep it or to change because in other mod, other guy said to change it to default so idk
* 04:34:061 (7) - ctrl+G to make a better flow;
* 04:53:261 (7) - ^;
Hope it be approved, have my star plz
thanks owo