Glass wrote:

[Trained]
00:40:658 (3,4,5) - Move this part to the bottom of the map (?) (2) is kinda overlapping (4). Didn't do exactly that, but I moved it n.n
00:55:491 (2) - Stack this on top of 3 (?) Done
01:42:158 (2) - ^ Done, too
01:44:824 (2) - Remove this note and make (1) a repeat slider (?) I like it as it is n.n

[Indestructible]
04:00:158 (T) - Add a note (?) Sure!
04:03:991 (T) - ^ Done
04:04:658 (T) - ^ No, it's like a pause, the guitar does some kind of pause, that's why I left it like that
04:04:824 (T) - ^ Left it the same for the same reason as before n.n
you could've also added more notes to set a stable rhythm in the beginning of the song but I overlooked it because you probably wanted to start the map with just some easy patter. Exactly xD

Charles445 wrote:

Newbie
Holy slider velocity batman. Slow it down.

Indestructible
00:41:825 Map this break
01:13:491 End Kiai here
02:10:824 ^^
03:11:991 ^^

Everything was fixed!

Nothing much to say - it's all functional.Thanks

Samah wrote:

Edit: Looks good, starred.

IceBeam wrote:

Disable letterboxes during breaks. Fixed, though I don't actually know what this changes xD

[Newbie]
I found some moments where spacing is wrong,you should use DS properly. Sure, I'll do my best
00:23:158 - You better add a note here. Ok!
00:26:991 (1,2) - This pattern is hard to read for newbie,I suggest you to move (1)-st note back to white tick.You're right
00:41:491 (5) - Add finish.Sounds good!
01:02:824 - Huh? 0.5x in Easy? No way,please remove it. Right, it fits better in the other diffs
01:29:574 (1) - Start if from next red tick. Done
02:00:158 - Well same about 0.5x,moreover there's no reason in song to make hold slider/slodwon section. Fixed!

[Trained]
00:39:657 (1) - Why it's so close to (5)? Increase distance a bit,moving few grids right.It's well spaced, in fact
00:41:491 (5) - Change to finish. Sure thing!
01:18:824 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing makes no sense,you should reverse both(reverse selection for 4,5) or make them all straight.Solved it in another way
02:16:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Same here
03:17:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Saaame
03:38:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh come on xD
Don't use copypaste on each chorus next time,please. it's not that I'm lazy, it's to keep it consistent over a certain pattern. But, whatever xD I won't do it next time.

[iwonttypeitcorrect] <------ xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Much better,I like this one.
00:51:491 (1,1,1) - Dat's pure combo spam,please remove new combos. I actually didn't mean to do that xD Thanks for noticing
01:29:325 (1) - Finish this spinner at 01:32:158 or red tick? Chose red tick~~
02:26:658 (1) - ^ at 02:29:324. White tick now xD

Jako87 wrote:

[Trained]
00:57:491 remove note, add note to 00:57:324 and 00:57:658 (follows lyrics better)
OR
00:57:491 remove note, make slider longer that it ends at 00:57:324 and add note to 00:57:658 I considered wither way would be confusing due to a rhythm pattern I had been following

01:00:324 make this slider 1/2 beat longer (so it ends 01:00:658)
Do the same to the sliders at 01:38:991, 01:41:658, 01:46:991 Sure!

01:29:658 spinner could start 1/2 beat earlier. Ending is in good potision. Sounds good n.n

01:51:491 maybe remove (5) and (6) and make slider starting at (5). There is empty spot with lyrics but no notes. I did a mini-stream starting at 1:51:491 and ending at 1:51:991

01:43:491 make slider 1/2 beat longer and move (7) 1/2 beat forward. I like it better as it is :/ Sorry

Lanttu wrote:

It's funny, I usually don't enjoy music from this genre at all, but this song is really catchy. ouo Yeah, that's right! xD

You should use more finish hitsounds, they fit songs like this~ Also, most of this is just minor suggerstions again, feel free to ignore some if you disagree. X) I'll see what I can do :O - and about the hitsounds, I'll wait for more comments about that n.n

[Indestrfkjdkugugugu]
00:24:825 (3) - Little bit of a nazi here, and I know the spacing is right according to the distance snap, but maybe move this one grid down so that it doesn't touch the other circle? X3 Ok!
00:25:492 (3) - For the same reason, one grid left? Ok, too!
02:06:325 (4,5) - It's fine also like that, but I think it would be cool if you reversed these notes~ Woototo (?) nah, I like it how it is n.n
03:06:159 (1) - Remove new combo? Sure!
03:10:908 (1) - You sure this is at the right place on the blue tick? Move it to the next red one? Yeah, it sounds better
03:28:992 (4,5) - Again, like before, maybe reverse these two? B-but I like it how it is ;_;
04:00:825 (4) - Hmmm, this ending part feels like copy&pasta from the beginning, so same one grid movements here? :3 It is copy&paste xD Sure, I'll fix it

[Trained]
01:02:157 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed!
01:25:491 (3) - New combo here, then remove the two next new combos and add one to 01:26:824 (4) kk
02:22:825 (3) - Same combo thing here as above yush!
02:47:824 (1) - Delete new combo and add it to the next note Adding this side notes is boring xD ok!
03:24:158 (3) - And once again.. XD
03:45:991 (1) - And again.... Lol

[Newbie]
00:22:824 (1) - Move two grids down.
00:26:825 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to next note.
00:54:825 (5) - New combo and remove it from the next note.
01:41:491 (5) - ^
01:52:824 (6) - Maybe new combo here

Applied all those changes xD

Fight69 wrote:

Hello there o/ Hi :3

[General]

I suggest you to delete kiai time, don't fit very well with the music :/ I don't feel the same :/ I'll wait till someone else says so

Also, try to use more patterns in your diffs There are quiet some patterns already xD

[Trained]

00:40:658 (3,4,5) - Do something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42402 Looking good
01:52:324 - Add a circle here with a New combo (don't forget to fix the new spacing !) Oks
01:52:491 (1) - No new combo Yup
03:26:825 (1,2,3,4) - Not a good idea, use a spinner instead ? Ok! Sounds good!

[Newbie]

Buh, this diff is a bit boring, probably because there is not enough pattern and because everything sounds like a metronome :< It's easy after all. If I didn't make like this, it might have been difficult to read for a new player. At least that's what I think, but if many people says this same thing, I'll change it.

00:41:491 (5) - Delete the clap Oh, sure!
01:06:491 (1) - Spacing Fix'd

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

Hmm... this might be just my new headphones. But maybe you could use an mp3 with a quality a bit better? I know that it meets the ranking criteria, but having higher qualities wouldn't hurt. Again, ill repeat that this may be because of my new headphones. I used the video audio, though I did some work on it. If not, it wouldn't fit the video.

Makes me real sad seeing that all the 3 difficulties have different break timers Aww.. Someone told me to map a break, then another person comes and tells me to keep it unmapped... Meh...

Indestructible:

Consider adding a circle in the following timers:
00:24:158 - 00:27:991 - 00:28:825 - 00:32:658 - 00:37:325 - 00:38:158 - 00:33:491 - Etc, the way you mapped them is quite inconsistent :T Er... I applied some of these, but I don't think it was that inconsistent... Was it D:?

Those are 100% pure suggestions, the one you currently have is alright and acceptable.


01:02:825 (1) - Mind moving this a bit more away? Done
03:49:325 (1) - Finish the spinner at 03:51:824 - Done

Training:

00:23:825 - Seriously consider adding a circle here. Sure
00:34:491 - And here Ok.
00:39:158 - And here Ok.

Newbie:

Im sorry but i gotta say this. I think that this diff is awful, lets just say that i didn't feel the music in the map. But meh, it is just a personal opinion, you don't really have to do anything about it. Then I'd have to ask for some help... I don't have any other idea -.- Maybe I'll take some days to think how to solve it...

Sorry, song may be good, but the map quality... is not up to my expectatives... >_>
Mainly because the patterns are kinda meh. And besides of what i said in the newbie difficulty...

Ok, sorry... I'm still trying my best, you know... It's hard to hear these kind of things, but I guess they are necessary...

James2250 wrote:

Newbie:
I don't follow the flow of the map the entire time but its not bad
Would be nice if it was slightly easier but ok~

Ok, gonna do a full re-check on this diff

01:02:824 (4,1) - don't overlap these Ok!
01:29:824 (1) - extend to next white tick Done~~
02:18:657 (6,7) - two objects on one tick, fix this Hadn't seen this owo Thanks for noticing xD
02:26:824 (10) - try not to let combos go up to 10 on an Easy

Trained:
01:29:824 (1) - extend to next white tick Done


Indestructible:
01:25:991 (3,1) - space out more Ok, I did something that looks kinda cool but I'm not too sure if it's ok xD
01:29:658 (1) - extend to next white tick Ok
03:00:825 (5,6,1) - keep spacing equal

Pretty nice maps even if not a big fan of the song Hehe thanks n.n
Have a star~

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By mod request:

Trained
01:10:824 (4) - 1 grid to the right

Indestructible
00:25:992 (6) - align with (4,5)
01:08:991 (4,5) - 1 grid to the right
04:02:657 (6) - same as 00:25:992


K, all fix'd

another star!

James2250 wrote:

Newbie:
I don't follow the flow of the map the entire time but its not bad
Would be nice if it was slightly easier but ok~

Deif wrote:

I've check every difficulty and everything is fine to me ^^ Only a tiny thing:

[Newbie]
- 1.52.158 (4): 1 grid left (don't give me kudosu for this xDD) Ohhh right, gonna fix that :O

James2250 wrote:

Newbie:
I don't follow the flow of the map the entire time but its not bad
Would be nice if it was slightly easier but ok~

I agree with James here, it's kind of difficult to follow the flow for Normal players (I only have 500 plays on Osu! Standard and I got many 100s and 50s) I'm still checking it since that mod xD trying to figure out what to do x.x

Muy buen trabajo. Espero que te la rankeen pronto =) Star~

Sliders change speed without warning
Generally, any slider that is a different bpm from sliders surrounding it, with no musical basis to do so.

To resolve this:
Make the bpm change part of a consistent, repeated pattern.
Alternately, remove the bpm change.