23:44 Electoz: hi
23:44 Danimineiro: Hey there
23:44 Danimineiro: damn youre fast
23:44 Electoz: just noticed on spec lol
23:44 Danimineiro: well so about the modding
23:44 Danimineiro: what do i have to doß
23:44 Electoz: oh
23:44 Electoz: yeah just
23:44 Electoz: gimme your map first I guess
23:44 Electoz: and I'll mod it right here
23:45 Danimineiro: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/649774
23:45 Danimineiro: here u go
23:47 Electoz: song choice is not
23:47 Electoz: too bad
23:48 Electoz: for first map
23:48 Danimineiro: You are way better at my map than I am
23:48 Electoz: LOL
23:48 Danimineiro: thanks
23:48 Electoz: ok so
23:48 Electoz: what's your impression
23:48 Electoz: on your map
23:48 Electoz: rn
23:49 Danimineiro: It might be a bit too much of the same thing at some times
23:49 Danimineiro: and the distances between some points might be a little too much
23:49 Electoz: mind giving me examples?
23:50 Electoz: of what you think
23:50 Danimineiro: I mean lite repeating patterns
23:50 Danimineiro: like*
23:51 Electoz: mmm
23:51 Electoz: how do you do your combos?
23:52 Electoz: what's your criteria or whatever when you're putting combos
23:53 Danimineiro: Whenever a pattern repeats or a new one starts
23:54 Danimineiro: like after a huge gap or when the song changes or repeats a section
23:54 Electoz: problem right now is that
23:55 Electoz: you need to be sure that you can figure things out consistently
23:55 Electoz: like
23:55 Electoz: figuring out when the rhythm starts repeating
23:55 Electoz: or
23:55 Electoz: if the rhythm used is consistent with other places you did with the same rhythm
23:55 Electoz: for example 
23:55 Electoz: 00:15:999 (3) - supposed to have a new combo
23:55 Electoz: not 00:14:666 (1) - 
23:56 Electoz: because the rhythm repeats there, just like 00:10:666 (1) - 
23:57 Danimineiro: I see
23:58 Electoz: so, when you map something
23:58 Electoz: in order to make it easier
23:58 Electoz: you should separate them into sections
23:58 Electoz: and think of how should you map each section
23:58 Electoz: and check if you map those sections consistently (in case they're the same)
23:58 Electoz: by consistency
23:58 Electoz: there could be like, many things
23:58 Electoz: such as
23:58 Electoz: rhythm
23:59 Electoz: aesthetics
23:59 Electoz: angles/movements for more advanced concepts
23:59 Electoz: or whatever
23:59 Electoz: they don't need to be "exactly" the same, but they should be consistent to some extent
23:59 Electoz: figuring out the balance between consistency and variation, is the hard part
00:00 Electoz: making thing too consistent will make your map too repetitive
00:00 Electoz: if there's no consistency at all (aka too much variation)
00:00 Electoz: then nothing will reflects the song properly
00:00 Electoz: *reflect
00:01 Danimineiro: Noted that
00:01 Electoz: doing the same/similar things when the song is giving out the same rhythms = consistency
00:01 Electoz: for this song
00:01 Electoz: most of the rhythms usually restarts/starts on downbeat
00:01 Electoz: so you can take that as a cue
00:02 Electoz: so
00:02 Electoz: wait
00:03 Electoz: I forgot what I was gonna say
00:03 Electoz: zzzzzzz
00:03 Danimineiro: haha
00:03 Electoz: oh
00:03 Electoz: was gonna say that
00:03 Electoz: doing variation is fine
00:03 Electoz: as long as
00:03 Electoz: it doesn't give two interpretations
00:03 Electoz: of the song/pattern
00:03 Electoz: for example:
00:03 Electoz: 00:37:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:40:166 (1,2,3) - these
00:04 Electoz: are too different
00:04 Electoz: do you know the term
00:04 Electoz: "passive objects"?
00:04 Danimineiro: Not yet
00:04 Electoz: passive objects aka something that's not clickable
00:05 Electoz: mostly refers to slidertails/repeat arrows
00:05 Electoz: so when you do a slider
00:05 Electoz: (what I'll write is very basic so there's a chance you might aware of this already)
00:05 Electoz: when the slider works, the head always stronger than the tails
00:05 Electoz: because the head is clickable, and the tail isn't
00:06 Electoz: so usually when we map sliders, we put the heads on stronger beats, and the tails on weaker ones
00:06 Electoz: you're still following, yes?
00:06 Danimineiro: yes
00:06 Danimineiro: Do you want me to respond more often?
00:07 Electoz: I guess?
00:07 Electoz: just to extent that I know you're still understanding
00:07 Electoz: and not afk lmao
00:07 Electoz: that happened to me sometimes
00:07 Electoz: when I talk shits and ppl went afk
00:07 Electoz: ok so
00:07 Danimineiro: I'll tell you when something comes up here
00:07 Electoz: alright
00:08 Electoz: let's sum it up like this
00:08 Electoz: clickable beats
00:08 Electoz: are stronger than nonclickable ones
00:08 Electoz: that's how it "should" be
00:08 Electoz: for this case
00:08 Electoz: 00:37:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:40:166 (1,2,3) - are the same rhythm
00:08 Electoz: so the way 00:37:666 (2,3,4,5) - 00:40:333 (2,3) - are mapped shouldn't be too differnt
00:08 Electoz: *different
00:09 Electoz: I don't really mind much if you interpret which beat is weaker/stronger or whatever
00:09 Electoz: but from those timestamps
00:09 Danimineiro: okay
00:09 Electoz: the rhythm aren't prioritized properly
00:09 Electoz: because, the rhythms are the same right?
00:09 Electoz: but the way you prioritized with your mapping
00:09 Electoz: is not
00:10 Electoz: not sure if I worded it too complicated zz
00:10 Danimineiro: Nono I understand
00:11 Electoz: this is probably
00:11 Electoz: the hardest part to map
00:11 Electoz: cuz the rhythm repeats like 999 times lol
00:13 Electoz: 01:20:666 (4) - 01:25:999 (4,5,6,7,8) - another very obvious example
00:13 Electoz: of consistency
00:13 Electoz: rhythm density is too different
00:13 Electoz: the one is mapped with a long ass slider while the another is mapped normally
00:14 Electoz: despite the song having the same rhythm
00:14 Danimineiro: Do you prefer the long ass slider or the normal mapping?
00:14 Electoz: it's totally up to you
00:15 Electoz: because
00:15 Electoz: my point is not [a] or [b] is better
00:15 Electoz: it's about having your own ideas, and do it consistently
00:15 Electoz: *them not it
00:17 Danimineiro: honestly I kinda like the slider more because I already used one like that earlier
00:17 Danimineiro: how do I make timespamps in the chat?
00:17 Electoz: just
00:17 Electoz: copy objects
00:17 Electoz: and paste
00:18 Danimineiro: Okay got it
00:19 Danimineiro: I meant this slider with earlier - 00:19:999 (4) -
00:19 Electoz: hm
00:19 Electoz: note that
00:19 Electoz: as you progres
00:19 Electoz: *progress
00:19 Electoz: in getting mods
00:20 Electoz: there are always some modders
00:20 Electoz: who don't like your interpretation of the song
00:20 Electoz: and suggest to change it
00:20 Electoz: so you might have to think how to handle those kinds of things
00:21 Electoz: 01:30:999 (2) - 01:36:333 (2) - actually
00:21 Electoz: we don't do that kind of thing anymore nowadays lol
00:21 Electoz: unless for gimmick sake
00:21 Electoz: repeat sliders with 2 or more arrows = too much passive beats
00:21 Electoz: aka beats that could've been clickalbe are wasted with repeat arrows
00:22 Electoz: *clickable
00:22 Electoz: it's also ruins the flow, in general
00:22 Electoz: like, to be more advanced
00:22 Electoz: multiple repeat arrows force you to move back and forth repeatedly
00:22 Electoz: which is like aaaa
00:22 Electoz: not the kind of movement you would see in generic gameplay
00:23 Danimineiro: I saw that when you played it
00:23 Danimineiro: the first time you didnt expect it
00:23 Electoz: yea
00:23 Electoz: when you do
00:23 Electoz: aesthetics
00:23 Electoz: 00:14:666 (1,2) - 
00:24 Electoz: 00:17:333 (6,8) - 
00:24 Electoz: try to
00:24 Electoz: avoid overlaps
00:24 Electoz: as much as possible
00:24 Electoz: unless you intended them
00:24 Electoz: *avoid unintentional overlaps
00:24 Electoz: osu std
00:24 Electoz: is not about how things play
00:24 Electoz: it's also about how things look
00:25 Electoz: probably you might know this already but I just spell it out anyways
00:25 Electoz: so in making aesthetics, you want to make sure that things look as appealing as possible
00:25 Electoz: and almost every mapper
00:25 Electoz: has different style of aesthetics
00:25 Electoz: I can tell you to do this and whatnot
00:25 Electoz: but that would be like
00:26 Electoz: forcing my style on you
00:26 Danimineiro: yeah
00:26 Electoz: I can only give out like
00:26 Electoz: general tips
00:26 Electoz: that 99% of mappers
00:26 Electoz: don't do
00:26 Electoz: like the overlap thingy
00:26 Electoz: also
00:26 Electoz: note that
00:26 Electoz: aesthetics
00:26 Electoz: characterize
00:26 Electoz: your mapping
00:26 Electoz: for example
00:27 Electoz: some mappers use different style of aesthetics
00:27 Electoz: according to the sections they're mapping
00:27 Electoz: some people even bother
00:27 Electoz: to fuck up their own aesthetics
00:27 Electoz: in order to use it to reflect the song
00:28 Electoz: making beautiful aesthetics
00:28 Electoz: is always ok
00:28 Electoz: but aesthetics that helps reflecting the song or characterizes your mapping
00:28 Electoz: is the best
00:28 Electoz: ^totally my opinion
00:29 Electoz: 00:41:666 (2,3) - 
00:29 Electoz: some people
00:29 Electoz: they do curve slider once
00:30 Electoz: and they copy paste it throughout the map
00:30 Electoz: so the slider shape becomes consistent
00:30 Electoz: telling that in case you're interested
00:30 Danimineiro: I thought about this one but I tried to make my sliders guide to the next object
00:31 Electoz: you can
00:31 Electoz: copy paste
00:31 Electoz: and then
00:31 Electoz: rotate?
00:31 Danimineiro: I know
00:32 Electoz: 00:55:666 (5) - so stand out lol
00:32 Electoz: because you don't have any slider longer than 1/1 at all in that section
00:32 Electoz: *1/2
00:33 Danimineiro: well the sound would had still played if I had used a smaller slider there
00:34 Electoz: up to you I guess
00:34 Electoz: I'll just
00:34 Electoz: mention things
00:34 Electoz: and if those things are intended
00:34 Electoz: then I'll assume that you know what you intend to do
00:35 Electoz: 01:17:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
00:35 Danimineiro: okay
00:35 Electoz: do you know
00:35 Electoz: ctrl+shift+f
00:35 Electoz: ?
00:36 Electoz: aka convert slider to stream
00:36 Danimineiro: I didn't try using it yet
00:36 Electoz: yeah try it out
00:36 Electoz: cuz rn it's like
00:37 Electoz: 01:17:999 (5,6,7,8) - looks more curvy than 01:17:333 (1,2,3,4) - 
00:37 Electoz: you can map a slider with a symmetric shape, and then convert it
00:37 Electoz: so that you can get a consistent curve of a stream
00:39 Electoz: mmm I think that should be it?
00:39 Electoz: like
00:39 Electoz: what I tried, is to pointing out stuff that's conceptual
00:39 Electoz: or generic stuff
00:39 Electoz: that 99% of ppl do
00:40 Electoz: when you get more mods, there will be more opinions on specific stuff
00:40 Electoz: on what to do and whatnot
00:40 Electoz: and then you'll have more mapping experience/knowledge to work on
00:40 Electoz: and that's when those conceptual stuff comes to play
00:40 Electoz: so yea should take note of those

23:13 Danimineiro: Hey there, currently here msg when you have time.
23:36 Electoz: aa yes I'm here
23:36 Electoz: I read the thread yesterday and I think you already got some mods?
23:36 Electoz: what are their feedbacks so far
23:36 Electoz: just in general
23:37 Danimineiro: hm
23:37 Danimineiro: If I had to summarize
23:38 Danimineiro: Some say that the map is too repetetive for a first map, others say the opposite
23:38 Electoz: the opposite?
23:38 Danimineiro: Like that the map is good for a first timer
23:39 Danimineiro: But most things I've seen are small things
23:39 Electoz: what diff do you want me to go over first
23:39 Danimineiro: Or that the one part on the easy and normal diff is to repetetive
23:40 Danimineiro: I think easy is the one giving me most trouble
23:40 Danimineiro: so lets go with that
23:44 Electoz: okayish
23:44 Electoz: but like
23:44 Electoz: because your mapping in some parts
23:44 Electoz: involve stacking
23:45 Electoz: so some of the things don't look really appealing cuz DS is involved
23:45 Electoz: stuff like 01:54:333 (5,1) - 
23:45 Electoz: 00:13:666 (2,3,4) - this doesn't look too good either
23:46 Electoz: like, try to focus more on
23:46 Electoz: uh what do we call that
23:46 Electoz: visual presentation?
23:46 Electoz: of objects
23:46 Danimineiro: y I know what you mean
23:46 Electoz: try to see if anything is spaced too close or too far
23:46 Electoz: if anything's too ugly from spacing, you have to do something with it
23:46 Electoz: in this case
23:47 Electoz: would be best if you increase DS for the entire map
23:47 Electoz: or at least the parts you mapped with stacking
23:47 Electoz: stuff like 00:13:666 (2,3,4) - would look much better with 1.2 DS
23:47 Electoz: in lower diffs, because you need to space things close due to DS
23:48 Electoz: so it's more likely that objects will get cluttered over time
23:48 Electoz: though
23:48 Danimineiro: Imma write this down so I can try around a bit later to see what fits
23:48 Electoz: I'll just post the log in the thread later on then
23:49 Electoz: I'll edit the old post
23:49 Danimineiro: Yeah I mean I'm making notes
23:50 Electoz: ok so
23:50 Electoz: for the next thing
23:50 Electoz: this should be fine as long as it's not obvious, but it's something you should take care of it in mind while mapping
23:50 Electoz: 00:10:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
23:50 Electoz: this entire thing
23:51 Electoz: flows in uh
23:51 Electoz: what do we call this time
23:51 Electoz: counter-clockwise
23:51 Electoz: direction
23:51 Electoz: when you're mapping easy/normal
23:51 Electoz: try not to have the flow go in one direction for too long
23:51 Electoz: if your flow went in the same for over like
23:51 Electoz: 5 seconds?
23:52 Electoz: then you should do something about it
23:52 Electoz: cuz at that rate the gameplay would be too repetitive
23:52 Danimineiro: Hm okay
23:53 Electoz: 00:37:333 - actually I think this part is musically different than the part at 00:26:666 - ?
23:54 Danimineiro: It's hard to keep the star count low so I continued mapping the same thing
23:55 Electoz: no when you're mapping
23:55 Electoz: don't focus stars
23:55 Electoz: even nowadays
23:55 Electoz: there are ranked easy difficulties
23:55 Electoz: with normal icons on the listing page
23:55 Electoz: what you see right now is that
23:55 Electoz: they're
23:55 Electoz: musically different
23:55 Electoz: so they're supposed to be mapped in a different way
23:55 Electoz: that's the most important part
23:56 Electoz: mapping reflection > star rating
23:56 Danimineiro: Okay then I'll change that part
23:57 Electoz: and
23:57 Electoz: for this part
23:57 Electoz: 00:27:999 (1) - in general
23:57 Electoz: this is 00:29:333 (2,1) - stuff like
23:57 Electoz: you don't do
23:57 Electoz: unless the music calls for it
23:58 Electoz: is that you leave soooo many beat spacings
23:58 Electoz: like, you clicked 00:29:333 (2) - 
23:58 Electoz: and then you have to wait for a whole measure for 00:30:666 (1) - 
23:58 Electoz: and this repeats like
23:58 Electoz: 30 seconds or so?
23:58 Electoz: which is uhhh
23:58 Electoz: I assume someone must have mentioned this already
23:59 Danimineiro: Yep
23:59 Electoz: let's see
23:59 Electoz: do you know the term
23:59 Electoz: variation
23:59 Electoz: ?
23:59 Danimineiro: If you put it like that it sounds kinda mean >.<
23:59 Danimineiro: Yeah I do
00:00 Electoz:  so there are many ways to do
00:00 Electoz: with variation
00:00 Electoz: you have to experiment with it
00:01 Electoz: examples of variations would be
00:01 Electoz: hmm
00:01 Electoz: slider shapes
00:01 Electoz: angles used between objects
00:01 Electoz: flows
00:01 Electoz: rhythms
00:01 Electoz: lots of ways to go with it
00:01 Electoz: for example
00:01 Electoz: this
00:01 Electoz: 00:27:999 (1) - 
00:01 Electoz: is a 1/1 slider
00:01 Electoz: and this is liker
00:01 Electoz: *like
00:02 Electoz: repeating many times
00:02 Electoz: so you have to variate it, in order to make it not repetitive
00:02 Electoz: you could change the shapes later on
00:02 Electoz: or you could even
00:02 Electoz: change the rhythm from a 1/1 slider into 2 circles
00:02 Electoz: and this kind of stuff
00:02 Electoz: 00:29:333 (2) - 
00:02 Electoz: 00:31:999 (2) - 
00:02 Electoz: etc
00:03 Electoz: would be a lot better if you map those parts
00:03 Electoz: with 3/1 sliders
00:03 Electoz: what you have currently makes player wait for a full measure after clicking the circle
00:03 Electoz: which is really awkward
00:04 Electoz: ok I think that should cover that part
00:04 Electoz: are you still following
00:04 Danimineiro: yes
00:04 Danimineiro: Im here
00:04 Electoz: ok so
00:05 Electoz: answer this question striaght
00:05 Electoz: from your opinion
00:05 Danimineiro: okay
00:05 Electoz: 01:09:333 (1,2,3,4) - 01:14:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - are these parts musically the same
00:05 Electoz: to you
00:06 Danimineiro: No its gradually getting faster for me
00:06 Electoz: alright
00:07 Electoz: everything else should be fine if you fixed all those things
00:07 Electoz: DS, variation, etc whatever I mentioned
00:08 *Electoz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1387697 B100SCREEN; - Benevolent Imp [Normal]]
00:08 Electoz: 00:19:999 (1) - isn't this supposed to end on the downbeat
00:08 Electoz: 00:21:333 - 
00:08 Electoz: 00:26:666 (1) - as for this part you can use the same idea from what I mentioned in easy
00:09 Electoz: 01:14:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sliders are better
00:09 Electoz: forcing multiple clickable objects in a row is not
00:09 Electoz: really friendly
00:09 Electoz: towards players
00:10 Electoz: 01:33:666 (2,3,4,5,1) - the stack is wayy too many
00:10 Electoz: when you stack you stack like
00:10 Electoz: 1-2 objects on top at most
00:10 Electoz: not like this lul
00:10 Danimineiro: welp
00:11 Electoz: rhythm in kiai is okayish
00:11 Electoz: needs to improve more but I think you can get that through mods
00:12 Electoz: don't be afraid of
00:12 Electoz: experimenting stuff you don't know
00:12 Electoz: like I just looked at the top diff
00:12 Electoz: and everything's like distance snapped
00:12 Electoz: osu is about
00:13 Electoz: clicking circles while making things appealing
00:13 Electoz: in gameplay no one's gonna care if this object is different from others by 0.1 or 0.2
00:13 Electoz: all they care if those objects look appealing to them
00:14 Electoz: or if the object is spaced noticeable bigger than others
00:14 Electoz: for what you have currently, mapping everything in distance snap
00:14 Electoz: if that's the idea of what you want to do, then it's fine
00:14 Electoz: nothing wrong with having different ideas
00:14 Electoz: but that would be harder to make things look appealing with visuals so you need to be careful of that
00:15 Danimineiro: okay
00:15 Electoz: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194  
00:15 Electoz: you need that
00:16 Electoz: try experimenting with minor stuff like
00:16 Electoz: slider shapes
00:16 Electoz: spacings
00:16 Electoz: etc
00:16 Electoz: and once you got a hang of it
00:16 Electoz: try making them more conceptual to your mapping
00:17 Electoz: and that will make your map much much more interesting
00:17 Danimineiro: I see
00:17 Electoz: is there anything else you want me to go over/cover in particular
00:19 Danimineiro: I'd like you to go over hard if you want
00:20 Electoz: 00:19:333 (9,10,11) - are you following DS
00:20 Electoz: with these
00:21 Danimineiro: Y I think it's a bit to close
00:21 Electoz: one thing you need to be careful
00:21 Electoz: with DS
00:21 Electoz: is that it takes SV into account
00:22 Electoz: 00:19:666 (10,11) - this is actually 0.5
00:22 Electoz: but it shows up as 1.0
00:22 Electoz: because you got an SV change 00:19:999 - 
00:22 Electoz: if you copy and paste 2 circles 00:19:166 (8,9) - 
00:22 Electoz: into section where you have 0.5 SV
00:23 Electoz: like 00:19:999 - 
00:23 Electoz: you'll see the editor will recognize the spacing as 2.0
00:23 Electoz: instead of 1.0
00:23 Electoz: despite being visually the same
00:24 Danimineiro: Sorry Net went down
00:25 Danimineiro: But its back up now
00:26 Electoz: https://puu.sh/y9hgc/5d87466681.png
00:26 Danimineiro: brb 1 min
00:26 Electoz: ^so I don't have to retype over again
00:26 Electoz: ok
00:27 Danimineiro: im back
00:27 Electoz: mostly the rest is uh
00:27 Electoz: variation stuff
00:27 Electoz: which you have to figure out by yourself
00:28 Electoz: I mean, I can give you ideas
00:28 Electoz: but this kind of stuff go better if you experiment it by yourself
00:28 Electoz: oh
00:28 Electoz: also
00:28 Danimineiro: yeah
00:28 Electoz: 00:40:333 (6,7) - this kind of stuff
00:28 Electoz: is not rankable tho
00:29 Electoz: don't stack/overlap reverse arrow
00:29 Electoz: to the point where it's not noticeable
00:29 Electoz: otherwise players are fucked lol
00:29 Electoz: 00:41:333 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't work to well
00:29 Electoz: the pattern is understandable
00:29 Electoz: but it's too cluttered
00:30 Electoz: 00:49:666 (2,3,4) - same
00:30 Electoz: most of mappers
00:30 Electoz: just don't clutter objects
00:30 Electoz: together
00:30 Electoz: unless there's something special/unique from the song
00:30 Electoz: in your case, the song is repeating itself quite a number of times
00:31 Electoz: seeing objects being cluttered together is not that visually appealing, regardless of how much they reflected the song
00:31 Electoz: aaa
00:31 Electoz: anything else?
00:32 Danimineiro: Nothing in particular
00:32 Electoz: note that
00:32 Electoz: the nature of your song
00:32 Electoz: makes it difficult to map sometimes
00:32 Electoz: there are quite a number where things get repeated
00:32 Electoz: so you have to figure out how to map repeated stuff in a way that's not too boring
00:32 Electoz: ^known as variation
00:33 Electoz: which can be done by experimenting with elements like slider shapes, rhythms, angles, flows, etc
00:33 Electoz: and that's the most important thing, especially for this kind of song
00:33 Electoz: ok that should sum it up

KanpanRin wrote:

All uninherited sections must be on the downbeat of the measure, not just put it on 00:00:000

1. 00:10:666 (1,2) if you're using straight sliders at least line things up.
2. 00:10:999 (2,4,2,5) all sorts of angles at once. stick to one or two to keep things neat.
3. 00:26:666 unnecessarily long combos around here. try not to have any combo longer than 4 measures.
4. 01:09:333 (1,2) overlaps should be avoided.
5. 01:44:999 (7,2) just saying these count as overlaps as well.

1. 00:13:333 (5) wouldn't hurt to start nc here.
2. 00:13:333 (5,6) seems like a blanket. however if the blanket isn't perfect it's better to avoid using shapes like these. You need grid snap to be off when doing this.
3. 00:26:666 exactly same rhythm as in Easy. maybe change this.
4. 01:17:333 (1) I would say this is a difficulty spike. maybe only introduce 1/2 beat rhythms in kiai.
5. 01:33:666 (2,3,4,5) fix the stack. 3 should be under 2.
6. 01:41:666 (2,3,4) streams might be a bit too much in a Normal. maybe have something like [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/9049533]this[/url].
7. 01:46:666 if you want to suddenly lower note density here, trun off kiai, or just put more notes in.

1. 00:26:666 too few notes. player at this level would be bored.

1. 00:31:999 too monotonous.
2. 00:37:499 (1) things not starting on a white tick is confusing in general, even at this diff. plus this song has pretty strong drum sounds.
3. 00:37:499 (1) also this may be considered a spaced stream on a small scale, which is only rankable in an Extra. I'd say don't use this on anything below Insane.
4. 01:19:499 (5,6,7) bcuz everything overlaps around here, these may blend in and may not be read as being a different rhythm.

I would avoid any overlaps on an Easy so either respace or change CS.
I'll give a mod as it is anyway.

00:10:666 (1,2) if you're using straight sliders at least line things up.

00:10:999 (2,4,2,5) all sorts of angles at once. stick to one or two to keep things neat.

00:26:666 unnecessarily long combos around here. try not to have any combo longer than 4 measures.

01:09:333 (1,2) overlaps should be avoided.

01:44:999 (7,2) just saying these count as overlaps as well.

00:13:333 (5) wouldn't hurt to start nc here.

00:13:333 (5,6) seems like a blanket. however if the blanket isn't perfect it's better to avoid using shapes like these. You need grid snap to be off when doing this.

00:26:666 exactly same rhythm as in Easy. maybe change this.

01:17:333 (1) I would say this is a difficulty spike. maybe only introduce 1/2 beat rhythms in kiai.

01:33:666 (2,3,4,5) fix the stack. 3 should be under 2.

01:41:666 (2,3,4) streams might be a bit too much in a Normal. maybe have something like [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/9049533]this[/url].

01:46:666 if you want to suddenly lower note density here, trun off kiai, or just put more notes in.
- done

Hard

Not sure how to mod this. pretty much a patchwork I'd say.
I don't see clear logic behind different rhythm choices and patterns.

Well uh

00:26:666 too few notes. player at this level would be bored.

- done


Hyper

00:31:999 too monotonous.

- done

00:37:499 (1) things not starting on a white tick is confusing in general, even at this diff. plus this song has pretty strong drum sounds.

- I don't think it's that hard. yet if someone else thiks it's a problem I'll change it.

00:37:499 (1) also this may be considered a spaced stream on a small scale, which is only rankable in an Extra. I'd say don't use this on anything below Insane.

- I might change this in the future

01:19:499 (5,6,7) bcuz everything overlaps around here, these may blend in and may not be read as being a different rhythm.

- done

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

00:27:999 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - put "soft-hitclap" on the end of every sliders

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

01:14:666 (1,2,3,4) - it looks really odd ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9402241

Uta wrote:

- Stacks is not appropriate on easy diff

Uta wrote:

- 00:26:666 - here to 00:58:666 (2) - here is a cluster f*ck, It's really repititve and BORING. make some variety on that part

Uta wrote:

- 01:11:999 (3,4) - Easy Diff SHOULD have the same Spacing throughout the entire map.

Uta wrote:

- 01:11:999 (3,4) - also the cursor movement at easy SHOULD ALWAYS Clockwise or Counter-Clockwise. back and forward movement is not recommended (except reverse slider ofcourse)

Uta wrote:

- 00:26:666 - 00:58:666 (2) - Same as the Easy diff too repititive

Uta wrote:

- 00:14:666 (4,5) - always use clockwise or counter-clockwiseflow on Normal diff

Uta wrote:

- 01:35:000 (3,4,5) - don't stack objects more than two, it will looks like a triple stack in hard where you should stream. same thing throughout the whole map

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

00:26:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think you should remap this moment and stack all the circles

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

00:40:333 (1,2) - it looks better ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9402256

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

00:41:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9402263

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

01:09:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - set the volume 5% on the end of every slider

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

01:46:666 (1,4) - stack

EncoreW wrote:

your mapping style looks like 2009

EncoreW wrote:

combo color are too close

EncoreW wrote:

clap hitsounds is nice

EncoreW wrote:

00:18:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't use finish hitsound

EncoreW wrote:

00:19:999 (6) - what about use this pattern? https://puu.sh/yspGt/406a669317.png

EncoreW wrote:

00:47:833 (7) - 01:45:333 (7) - 01:55:999 (7) - 01:57:333 (1) - 01:59:999 (1,4) - this slider's end should be silenced

EncoreW wrote:

01:09:333 (1) - this combo is too long, and i think you should add clap hitsound in every slider's slidertick

EncoreW wrote:

01:37:666 (2,3) - stack

EncoreW wrote:

02:11:999 (1) - use a slider to instead this spinner

EncoreW wrote:

i think i can't mod a 2009 style mapset very well sorry...but 2018 soon now

EncoreW wrote:

cs5 is too tiny, what about cs4.5?

EncoreW wrote:

00:27:999 (7) - nc

EncoreW wrote:

00:38:832 (6) - 00:41:499 (6) - nc

EncoreW wrote:

00:39:999 - 00:42:666 - 00:50:666 - add a circle here

EncoreW wrote:

00:45:333 - 00:53:333 - what about this? i think a slider's end can't appear in clap https://puu.sh/ysq0k/f9cbfd4acf.png

EncoreW wrote:

00:58:166 - obviously, here is a 3 note stream and 2 circle pattern https://puu.sh/ysq3f/d12471610b.png

EncoreW wrote:

01:19:499 (5) - here is a 3 note stream too