wmfchris wrote:

[Hell]
0:23:927 (1,2) spacing a bit larger than other 1/4 streams
0:25:629 (1,2,3,4) that kills taiko players well just ignore
0:37:119 (6) right 1 grid
0:47:012 (7,8,9) uneven spacing
0:50:310 (3,4,5,6,7) spacing of (3,4,5) different from (5,6,7)

[Earth]
0:14:778 (3,4) unsnapped
nice.

nice song, star~

Leorda wrote:

I put Tenshi Hinanawi and Iku Nagae because there is word heaven

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

Leorda wrote:

I put Tenshi Hinanawi and Iku Nagae because there is word heaven

That... is the weakest excuse to use a TH background. You should have a background full of gold coins because the word "worth" is in the lyrics too. And babies. And a giant heart. Actually, the heart wouldn't be too horrid, but an outside view of the Earth would probably be pretty cool. Finding one would be a cinch, and adjusting the SB would be easy. NO thanks

[SB]
There's a lot of transparancy on the top and bottom of all of your lyrics images. Please crop those if you can. Fixed

[Heaven]
00:17:119 (1) - Ouch, remove that whistle from the sliderslide. Lol, fixed
Kind of dull just sticking to the beat. :/ orz

[Cloud] All fixed
00:17:119 (1) - Maybe end on the red tick? This diff is suffering from just following the beat mainly like Heaven was, and it feels just kind of boring.
00:20:523 (1) - ^ on red tick
00:23:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Think you could make a more interesting pattern instead of squirming squares?

[Earth]All fixed
00:23:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe go for a more eye-pleasing shape instead of hard 90 degree angles?

[Hell]All fixed
00:25:629 (1,2,3,4) - Although you can't really see them unless you have a custom skin that makes hit bursts not huge, can you angle these in a more geometric formation (cross, X) instead of seemingly-random?
00:43:502 (3,4) - This rhythm felt kind of awkward, and it's the only time you use it too.
00:47:544 (11) - Move this to the right to reduce overlap?

Really didn't like the easier difficulties. They're way too bland.

• Decrease soft sample volume for 10% and normal sample for 20%? 100% Normal hit just made my ear bleeding T_T
  offset +5?

• I can't pass
  
  I just kidding >_>

• 00:29:885 (2,3,4) - Left 1 grid looks better
  00:38:395 (3) - add whistle according to 00:32:438 (1,2,3) part?
  01:02:438 (5) - clap?

• 00:31:587 (1) - why not remove new combo since you have pattern like these( 00:34:991 (4) 00:48:608 (4) 01:02:225 (5)

• 00:13:715 (1) - add finish at beginning of slider?
  00:17:119 (1) - ^
  00:20:523 (2) - ^
  00:25:629 (1) - finish at the end?
  00:33:927 (T) - add a note here? I think the 2-2 beat not fit the rhythm well...

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Decrease soft sample volume for 10% and normal sample for 20%? 100% Normal hit just made my ear bleeding T_T
  offset +5?

[Heaven]

• I can't pass
  
  I just kidding >_>

[Cloud]

• 00:29:885 (2,3,4) - Left 1 grid looks better Fixed
  00:38:395 (3) - add whistle according to 00:32:438 (1,2,3) part? Fixed
  01:02:438 (5) - clap? Fixed

[Earth]

• 00:31:587 (1) - why not remove new combo since you have pattern like these( 00:34:991 (4) 00:48:608 (4) 01:02:225 (5) Fixed

[Hell]

• 00:13:715 (1) - add finish at beginning of slider? Fixed
  00:17:119 (1) - ^ No
  00:20:523 (2) - ^ No
  00:25:629 (1) - finish at the end? No
  00:33:927 (T) - add a note here? I think the 2-2 beat not fit the rhythm well...Fixed

Nice & Sweet =w=

Star

ouranhshc wrote:

Title: HEAVEN IS A PLACE ON EARTH (German Election Mix)
Artist: JULIA
Source: Dance Dance Revolution STRIKE

http://zenius-i-vanisher.com/v5.2/views ... mfileid=72

Leorda wrote:

hi
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/20109
thank you

P.S Can you make a taiko guest diff for me >.< <--------------------------------Yes OK OWO
sorry~

wmfchris wrote:

;3

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi

General;
- Everything fine here

SB;
- Looks good

Skin;
- Maybe you could add a comboburst like this one ?? OMG, IT'S KAWAII!!!!

SPOILER

[attachment=1:50c45]comboburst.png[/attachment:50c45]

But as far as I see, you had some trouble because the BG "is not related to the song" so, only use it if you think it would be good

Heaven;
- 00:17:119 >> Remove whistle from start and end, then add finish to start and end OK
- 00:22:225 >> Remove new combo ?? No
- 00:23:927 >> Add finish ?? No
- 00:25:629 >> ^ No

Cloud;
- Change diff name to Clouds ?? No
- 00:17:119 >> Make it like this ?? OK

SPOILER

[attachment=0:50c45]um.png[/attachment:50c45]

Earth;
- Good

Hell;
- 00:20:310 >> One grid left NO

Keystone;
- Sounds good

* Star ~

mekadon wrote:

[Heaven]
Fine enough for me though.
00:35:842 (1) - IMO try changing this slider's shape; looks orz YES

[Cloud]
00:17:119 (1) - 1 grid up YES

[Earth]
00:35:629 (7) - 1 grid down so that it'll look nicer YES
01:04:778 (2) - Move 3rd slider point 1 grid right YES

[Hell]
00:14:566 (5) - 1 grid down NO
00:23:076 (3) - Move it to (290,360) for a better triangle. Yeah, sorry if I use coordinates =[ YES
00:25:629 (1) - Why must it be a single repeat slider? D: Try splitting them for some extra enjoyment NO
00:45:523 (5,6) - Flip them horizontally NO

[Keystone]
I FCed it, so there shouldn't be any other problems though.

gogogo~~~

lovhin456 wrote:

* Hitcircle should be in a gray scale

orioncomet wrote:

Try offset 90 and don't forgot to resnap all notes and green lines, and normal hitsound are too loud
and short song is short

nothing really poke me ~_~ just those streams ('cuz I can't play) and need some mods from taiko modder

Leorda wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

* Hitcircle should be in a gray scale

why?

lovhin456 wrote:

Because a hitcircle with colors in it looks kind of bad with the colors in the game, but that's not the case for your map because it doesn't really look bad. It was just a suggestion (:

jericho2442 wrote:

remove nightcore from the tags, you know as well as i do this has nothing to do with nightcore

Heaven
resnap all your notes OK

00:32:430 (5,1) - put the new combo on the (5) insted, creates a better flow OK


Cloud
00:30:302 (3) - clap here i say OK
00:31:579 (6) - then remove this clap OK

Earth
00:14:558 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the spacing in this stream is not consistant, ignore DS and make sure every note here has the same spacing OK

Hell

add your kiai to this diff too OK

00:41:260 (4,5) - is this difference in spacing done on purpose or a mistake? if its a mistake just check through your map and fix all the things like this Fixed

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meh this is pretty much ready, just check those things out

arien666 wrote:

[Keystone]
SV is 1.8 but would you change into 1.4 if possible :3? OK
inb4, Resnap due to 8 unsnapped notes
01:02:111 (309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316) - Umm... imo, it's little hard to read at once ;_; I think the pro player can do this
01:03:707 (321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) - ^ I think the pro player can do this

Actually, this problem doesn't seem like major issue but
As difficult mattering about this Taiko, why don't you check these patterns 1 more time :3?
Anyway, good song :3

Update in 11 December, 2010 : Jericho's and crybabymanaru's Mod

NatsumeRin wrote:

....fuck yeah late.

osuplayer111 wrote:

I tried to redownload this map many times but I still get only one difficulty.

Full submit again, then contact me for check this.

I'll rank if I don't find any problem.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks great, can't find anything of wrong.

Ranked~

Colin Hou wrote:

congrats, Leoangle

lovhin456 wrote:

Congrats !! :3

dNextGen wrote:

lol lagunya aneh gan ._.

Leorda wrote:

dNextGen wrote:

lol lagunya aneh gan ._.

diem lo

Arusha Shuna wrote:

also congratz

Sallad4ever wrote:

selamat gan :3

dNextGen wrote:

^
what about me ._?

wmfchris wrote:

congrats and... ooops SV 1.4 and 1/6 disappeared
>_<