Hello JuliKaze
M4M! My map >https://osu.ppy.sh/s/619531
Setup: The gap between Expert and Hard is big. You can add tag "j-pop" maybe.
1-9 / S+1-8 Expert00:09:863 (9863|3,10015|3) - you might want to shift this jack to the left hand since the previous similar pattern 00:06:227 (6227|3,6378|3) - has jack on the right hand too and it would make it look more balanced
00:14:333 (14333|1) - move to 4 since these 00:14:219 (14219|3,14333|1) - have the same pitch
00:17:363 - you can use double note here since here is a guitar yet
00:42:628 (42628|0) - you can make it LN
01:06:833 (66833|1,66833|0,66946|3,66946|2,67060|1,67060|0,67174|2,67174|3) - [14]>[23]>[14]>[23] would be more appropriately for emphasizing that these notes differ from previous 01:06:378 (66378|0,66378|1,66454|2,66454|3,66530|0,66530|1,66605|2,66605|3,66681|0,66681|1,66757|3,66757|2)
Hard00:01:833 - jacks would be more appropriately here than on guitar 00:03:651 - , drums sound more stronger
00:18:424 (18424|2,18651|2) - it'd be better if you avoid random jacks, it looks out of place, you have no such jacks in this kiai anymore (except this 00:22:969 (22969|2,23424|2) - but it's reasonable by PR)
00:23:651 (23651|3,23651|0,24105|0,24105|3,24560|0,24560|3) - these sounds make more impact than 00:25:469 , you might want make them triples too
00:54:105 (54105|2,54333|0) - you can swap these to emphasize that it differs from 00:53:310 (53310|2,53424|1,53537|0)
01:23:651 (83651|3,83651|0,84105|0,84105|2) - triples?
01:16:378 - ^
copy SVs to this diff too pls -w-
Normal00:01:833 - wow it feels so empty, you can place LNs here 00:01:946 - (ends 00:02:287 ) and here 00:02:401 - (ends 00:03:348 )
00:06:833 (6833|3) - you can move this to 3 to avoid this anchor 00:06:378 (6378|3,6833|3,7287|3)
00:10:469 (10469|0) - to 2^
00:16:946 - make it 2 1 3 4 for variety
00:26:378 (26378|1,26833|1) - 00:28:196 (28196|1,28651|1) - 00:30:924 (30924|3,31378|3) - 00:33:651 (33651|0,34105|0) - looks unlogical, some of these has 1/1 jack, some has no jack
00:39:560 (39560|3) - you can move it to 1 for making transition more smoother (avoiding 00:39:560 (39560|3,40015|3,40242|3) )
00:47:060 - you can place a note here for variety
01:08:651 (68651|3,69105|3,69560|3,70015|3,70469|2,70469|3,70924|2) - I think it's avoidable
Easy00:02:628 - you can place LN here to avoid emptyness (end 00:03:348 )
00:10:469 (10469|3,10924|3,12287|3,12742|3,14105|2,14560|2,15469|3,15924|3) - you might want to shift some of them to left hand for balance