from le Q
[Aspire]
hm hp 5 kinna low idk
00:15:869 (1) - lower volume pls
00:26:004 - why not map this blue tick here? i kinda here a sound here probably make 4 a 1/4 slider?
00:28:193 (3,4,5,6) - dunno there's just something aint right about the spacing that confuses me not like the others like this
00:32:247 (4,5) - spacing here is quite underspaced even tho sound intenses
01:13:437 (3,4,5) - these touches le hp bar maybe try loweting the stream part first then lower these
01:25:923 - imo the slider should start here cus i could hear the bass that it should emphasize. switch the circle and the slider perhaps? like what i did
here01:28:031 (1) - tbh this slider doesnt really emphasizes anything on the music yes ik it's the vocals but there's literally no sound that supports the background and imo it just seems overmapping like it doesn't really fit in and the sound that you've been following on this part is the bass so the repeat here just makes the section swiftly changed which is nescessary. i'd just delet it pls and the next section is calm anyway so putting this repeat is just absurd imo or your last resort could be is make (5) a long slider well it's your choice either way but pls remove that repeat
01:38:410 - i feel like you could map this part feels kinda empty even tho there's a vocal that's supporting it
01:47:329 (4) - i cant hear any sound that this is trying to emphasize or follow at all i think you should hear this sound 01:46:031 (3) - yes it has the same vocal sound so make 3 a 1/2 slider instead and ur choice if u want to map the red tick tho
02:01:599 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy sht this is nicee i got goosebumps dunno why
02:15:220 - okay will throw out my sugGeSsTiOns for this part . personal preference but the repeat just doesnt seem to emphasize the drums that are playing in the music and doesn't fit at all. it also kinda messes with the pace of the map and the flow of it since it's kiai and you're expecting hard parts but in this part it's just repeat sliders and it just makes playing inconvenient somehow. ik you could do more than that ! imma just leave
this here maybe u could get ideas
02:16:923 (6) - maybe try NCing this? i kinda hear a different sound it looks better anyway
02:24:950 - a slider+circle would fit better here imo the repeat just breaks the consistence use of sliders here tbh
02:44:004 (2,3) - quite uncomfy imo a 1/4 slider would do it
02:45:869 (1) - i do feel like you could extend this to the blue tick to be consistent with 02:44:572 (1) - they both have the same sound anyway
03:35:166 (5) - again the repeat, you didn't really use any of it in this section. A slider+circle would fit better imo dont forget about 03:35:410 - this btw i could hear a sound
03:36:139 (3,5) - they all have different sounds so better if NC'd and u relatively used 1-2 ncs here anyway so i guess it would be fine
04:08:410 (2) - this touches le hp bar unrankBle
ohwow good work here man high quality mapping right here i can smell an elite aspire mapper soon mmMmmm
holy sht i spent 2 hours modding this wtff this better have positive comments i gave effort to this i could finally slep
best of luck here mate~