Since ByBy_ChAn said that she want me to handle her diffs, so I'll reply for her diff :3
Updated My diffs, ByBy's diff, Nya's Diff, OzzyOzRock's diff~~
hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
[ByBy's Easy]
- There's one DS problem... These two 01:10:345 (2,3) - Okay
- 00:02:671 (1) - Maybe you could make this look less like "distorted" slider wave (curve it more) Don't really think if it was a problem since it's still flowed correctly
- 00:10:679 I think you need to add a note here.... The sound is pretty big to ignore... It's also good as a lead up to the next part Sure added and did some repositioning to keep the flow :3
- 00:14:012 (2,1) - They are overlapped .-. maybe you could move (1) to the right a bit. moved
- 00:44:012 (2,1) - Maybe you could blanket (2)'s tail so you could place 00:46:345 (2) - at where (2)'s tail was while keep blanketing it. But if I do that it looks so crowded. I'll keep it like this for now.
- 00:53:345 (1) - I like it more like this tho http://puu.sh/iONO3/fbd5763cd4.jpg Will keep it like this since the flow looks fine.
- 00:54:678 (3) - This slider kinda ruin the flow imo... I mean from (2) to (3) is going to right while (3) is suddenly go left... Maybe you have to make (3) less "steep"... This is fine to be like this. The of flowing wasn't where the slider end is but where the slider's follow circle is. read this .
- 00:54:678 (3,1) - If you don't fix the mod above ^ I'm bothered by the fact these two almost overlapped >.< at least it's still not overlapped XD. But I'll consider about it.
- 01:26:678 (3) - Nazi mod. Is this really supposed to crook a bit? (not perfectly straight) http://puu.sh/iONZ9/f8a4674961.jpg Not really a problem to make it like this. No change.
- 01:04:012 (1) - Oh yeah, if I recall it correctly, spinner gap in Easy must be min 4 beats... I think this one is just 3 beats... Okay moved the spinner's end to 01:05:345 - for emphasis
- Nothing to mod actually, you used simple beats and pattern. But, I think you can blanket better xD xD
Thanks for really useful mod A Mystery >w<A Mystery wrote:
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GeneralNirvana
- What are all the timing points for? I can assure you they are not needed, and if there was anything that would change, it would be the offset, and not the bpm. The first objects sound very early compared to the voice in the song, while near the second timing point it starts sounding too late. I recommend only using 1 timing point (offset 0~2) of 180 bpm. But since my name is not Charles a lot of people won't believe me, so at least consider moving the last offset by ~ -12 ms, because it sounds terribly late. or ask someone you trust more about timing. IF you were to change the timing, the suggestions below are before any timing change. Hmmm... I've consider about it and I think you have a point here. I'll check the timing after I update because if I change the timing first, It'll be so hard to check your mod. I'm not really good too in timing . Maybe I'll call someone :3 (or use yours).
00:22:512 (12) - Move to the tail of the slider instead? The higher pitch guitar at this place and the larger spacing here 00:21:678 (7,8) - would let it make sense Moved. To keep the spacing consistency.
- Nice diff[ Thanks >w</*:m]
00:20:678 (4) - It feels more comfortable for this slider to be moved up, both moving towards the stream and coming from the previous slider Moved. with same reason as above
00:39:345 (5,6,7) - these stream objects sounds extremely late, I think you'll need a second timing point for this one, since it even sounds late with the offset I suggested I see that. I'll consider about it after I've change the timing.
00:41:845 - It is a little weird to ignore this sound, you should probably add a circle or make a slider of the previous circle It as It was just like 00:39:178 - . I follow the instrument. Maybe the hard diff didn't follow it. Maybe I'll change it.
00:44:678 (5) - Snare on the slider-head? I think that there is something in the song that qualifies for it. Same here 00:44:345 (3) - I just use normal sampleset instead using clap here because I think it's fit better to the song. But I've apply it for 00:44:012 (1,3) -
01:01:678 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I like the increasing distance but it could be increased a little because it's barely visible now. Something like this Nah... I've try it and looks nice. Increased :3
01:20:012 (1) - Move further away for the downbeat? Nope... They have a same effect with the other (even if they had an emphasis). So a distance increasing would look weird.
01:21:345 (1) - ^ ^^
Insane
00:07:510 (4) - Try a pattern like this. Right now there is a larger spacing between the 2 1/2 sliders than between that last 1/2 slider and the 1/1 slider that deserves the larger spacing. Not only that, the voice sings a note on the slider-end of 00:07:510 (4) - , making this offbeat slider unnecessary to use. I see you want to increase the spacing between the last 1/2 slider and 1/1 slider because of the emphasis and make 00:07:677 - as a click. okay accepted. but I'll use own pattern to make it consistent with 00:08:511 (3,4) - .
00:09:178 (1,2,3) - I also don't really like these offbeat sliders, it doesn't really represent something better than sliders that start on the white ticks, except for the first one which represents the voice . Ya. I think that the first one that was have a reason to start the slider XD. Accepted because of unreasonable clicks
00:12:178 (2) - Pretty much the same thing as 00:07:510 (4) - okay fixed here too :3
00:18:179 (6,7) - This very small distance is pretty weird, why not stack it on 00:17:512 (2) - for example agreed but moved wit another direction. I'll keep the consistency using 2 circles for that triangle notes.
00:34:512 (1) - It feels wrong to me to ignore the vocals here, but if you think that's fine, that's alright. Same thing at the similar spots ya... I prefer folowing the big effect instrument.
00:42:095 (2) - Not sure if it was your intention to have it slightly curved but 1 pixel down and right for a straight custom stack I've try to enable auto stacking view and I notice that your point was right. But rather than moving the 2 I've make some pattern change to make it visible.
00:44:012 (1) - More distance for the downbeat, and the slightly increasing volume of the drum pattern in the background? Moved
00:45:678 (2) - Same thing about the vocals. Your are pretty much mapping straight through it. I prefer following much instrument in Kiai
00:49:012 (4,1,2) - This pattern is cool, but doesn't fit here, since it's going over a downbeat. (idk if I'm making sense to you, basically there is no pattern in the song that repeats 2 times so this pattern would represent it). It's better to emphasize the downbeat with a little extra distance, but then the triangle pattern would be gone. Hmmm.... okay
00:55:012 (3,4) - Consistent spacing? Or extra distance for the stream. But the current pattern is a little weird. Also, this is supposed to be a light insane to fill up the gap (right?). This stream is harder than the one used in the Nirvana diff, so that's also a little weird Nope. I have a big spacing between (4) and streams before. But after someone mod it, I noticed that if I gice a big spacing between them, It will more harder to be an Insane diff. But I'll consider making Nirvana diff harder in the stream since you have a point here.
01:00:012 (1) - Make this slider the same shape as 01:00:345 (2) - ? The anti-flow would fit for the downbeat and it would look better, or at least I think it does yea... I think it's better >w< applied
01:01:678 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern is also arguably harder than the pattern used in the Nirvana diff. But you could at least make and increasing spacing to represent the volume increase of the drum pattern in the song (like you did in Nirvana) I'll make it easier but not make a increasing spacing because it'll be really hard to read for this diff.
01:07:678 (4) - Same shape as 01:07:345 (3) - ? It would look cool Cool >w<
01:17:345 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why not the same hitsounds as in Nirvana? The whistles are not in the song, but I can definitely hear snares, but those aren't hitsounded The truth is Nirvana on this part was remapped XD the old one has the same hitsound like this. I've change the hitsound for Nirvana diff but I forgot to apply it in another diffs lol.
01:27:678 (4) - Uhm move a little up or down. Idk but the staight pattern here is a little weird. It's not straight. The slider curved a bit :3. Even if it was straight, I'll keep it like this since the distance was still same.
Hard00:31:178 (3,1) - I know hard players aren't completely newbie, but this is quite confusing (it feels less natural than 00:33:845 (3,4) - ). You could make some kind of Triangle shape for example to solve it Hmmm... agreed :3
- You are using x1.1 SV in the kiai parts, making the SV larger than in the insane diff. I highly recommend you to remap the kiais with a x1.0 SV to avoid spead issues. Didn't notice it lol. Remapped.
00:33:178 (1,2,3) - I know it's because of the stack, but try to make the spacing consistent or a larger distance for the snare don't really get it. They have consistent spacing at all.
00:34:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Why is spacing here larger than the next measures? Consider making it the same idk why i did that lol. Fixed.
00:42:678 (1) - You made an anti-jump in the other diffs, so why not do the same here? Or at least use a circle/1/2 slider because an extended slider does not really fit yup.... I'll make an antijump here.
00:54:345 (1) - Remove NC and place it on the next circle? haha I've been unfocus XD. fixed
01:05:845 (2,3) - Why the offbeat slidersApplied after remap
01:17:345 (1) - Same about the hitsounds as the insane yea
ByBy's Easy00:10:679 (1) - Move this to the downbeat, and add a circle after it? This slider feel veeery weird at this spot, because both the slider return as the slider end represent weaker ticks of the song. Even better would be this. The "offbeat" slider (it isn't offbeat, but the head falls on one of the weaker beats) makes it a little weird as the slider-end falls on the downbeat I prefer to add a circle (like nanodesu's mod) and keep the slider following the vocal. Kinda fixed
- I like the slider art
00:14:012 (2,1) - This overlap looks pretty bad, I suggest moving the sliders a little moved
00:29:345 (1,2) - this could look a little better by adding a second white anchor Nope. It's still readable at all. (And when we play it people won't see the dots but the slider XD)
01:28:012 - Same as the normal The spinner started right at thhe last high beat in the song was really usual for Easy/Normal diff because it won't confuse the new player with a note followed by spinner. Maybe some mapset use it because there's a point where they can put a spinner after the notes but not for this one. (That was my suggestion :3)
Good luck with the mapset! Have a star yay >w< I didn't see your star :3
Updated My diffs, ByBy's diff, Nya's Diff, OzzyOzRock's diff~~
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