at your req:
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And if you stick to vocalbased (which is my personal pref) maybe also do that more in the kiais as well.
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Also really disagree with how you have huge jumps like 00:32:946 (3,4) - that aren't really used in a consistent manner, or will sometimes not emphasize anything at all like 00:43:812 (1,2) - .
01:04:599 (1,2) - and similar points is some of the least dense rhythming in the entire difficulty but it's during the kiai section, which is really weird to me. Think you should try something like this for a more fitting rhythm density.
Really don't understand why you switch from vocals to drums at 02:08:851 (1,2) - only to just follow vocals again right after. May as well just follow vocals here as well.
Best of luck with this difficulty.
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Egao
- 00:14:048 (1,2) - Swap NC to fit better with the drums and give a more obvious visual pairing between 00:13:576 (1,2,3,4,1) - and 00:14:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?
- 02:23:891 (5,1) - idk if you'd like this or not but figured i'd suggest anyway, maybe for spots like this try to implement this sort of spacing? i think it'd be nice o:
- 03:01:056 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - again no idea if you'll like this or not, but i think reworking this rhythm to have 3 doubles in a row along the lines of this would make for a nice conclusive feeling
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Insane
I don't rly like how you switch between downbeat NC'ing and vocalbased NC'ing through the first and second verses. You do it in a consistent way, but I still think it'd be better to either do completely downbeatbased (so swapping 00:34:363 (7,1) - , etc.) or completely vocalbased (so swapping 00:30:584 (1,2) - ).And if you stick to vocalbased (which is my personal pref) maybe also do that more in the kiais as well.
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thzzz's Hard
Really disagree with how you use lots of 1/6 rhythming in the verses but none at all in the kiais.Also really disagree with how you have huge jumps like 00:32:946 (3,4) - that aren't really used in a consistent manner, or will sometimes not emphasize anything at all like 00:43:812 (1,2) - .
01:04:599 (1,2) - and similar points is some of the least dense rhythming in the entire difficulty but it's during the kiai section, which is really weird to me. Think you should try something like this for a more fitting rhythm density.
Really don't understand why you switch from vocals to drums at 02:08:851 (1,2) - only to just follow vocals again right after. May as well just follow vocals here as well.
Best of luck with this difficulty.
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Normal
hi i like your maps---