TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki - Pipo Password · forum

niyuji

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

niyuji 2017-10-15T21:24:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017 m. gruodžio 30 d., šeštadienis at 01:20:24

Artist: TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki
Title: Pipo Password
Source: 宇宙パトロールルル子
Tags: tv size space uchuu patrol luluco ending Kujinn Suzuki Suzuki_1112 1112 Atsuro Lulu Lulu- My Angel Kanan 1112deng
BPM: 90
Filesize: 5372kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Atsuro's Hard (2,9 stars, 188 notes)
Collab Easy (1,06 stars, 54 notes)
Frontier (5,19 stars, 270 notes)
Kujinn's Standard (1,71 stars, 120 notes)
Suzuki's Insane (4,25 stars, 184 notes)

Download: TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki - Pipo Password
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Collab Easy - Lulu- & My Angel Kanan

Normal - Kujinn

Hard - Atsuro

Insane - Suzuki_1112

Frontier - Me

lyrics here

Last edited by niyuji 2017-12-29T23:33:50+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2017-10-17T14:07:14+00:00

Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ 00:21:702 - 00:41:202 - this part is sound really loud. I recommend the change S:C1 custom sounds here. because this part a low atmosphere and vocal is really quiet

■ Can you choice this mapset combo color? the normal combo color is weird :O

[Kujinn's Normal]

■ 00:36:035 (3,4,5,1,2) - The overlap slider patterns shape and after 00:36:702 (4,5,1) is flow a little awwkward. i think you can more improve pattern flow and shape if you change this patterns, you see this patterns suggestion.

SPOILER

■ 01:10:702 (3) - The 1/1 slider rhythm not suitable. because there is a drum rhythm between these sliders. so you should follow on drum this part rhythms. ■ amd 01:21:369 (1) same.

[Atsuro's Hard]

■ 00:35:035 (7) - switch NC this note and 00:40:369 (7) same
■ 01:10:369 (1) - remove NC this

[1112's Insane]

■ 00:20:202 (4,5,6) - This is patterns flow a little weird. why you make a back move slider this 00:20:702 (5) i think the slider flow a make sense really bad so It is recommended to make this a normal flow.
■ 01:12:035 (3) - Hmm.. really solid this slider flow. Can you make a curve slider this? i think the change this slider with curve is better

[Frontier]

■ 00:05:702 (1) - Can you try more improve slider art? it's a little make sense is not good x.x
■ 01:23:035 (7) - switch NC this note.

Good luck ~

gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

gary00737 2017-10-17T18:21:53+00:00

M4M from my Q
my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/645142

i think this map is good

about some problem with top diff

00:05:702 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/5DHDm7Y.png here i think not good
00:26:369 (3) - i think you can try this https://i.imgur.com/6ufVd60.png
00:30:535 - i think here can click
01:02:869 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too big spacing here
01:14:369 (1,2,1,2) - i think you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9338074

good luck

~~牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112~~

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-10-18T07:41:37+00:00

super quick m4m from my q
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/681010

easy
seems fine

normal
01:10:869 - why you skipped this big sound?

hard
01:13:369 (4,1) - bit ugly, you can blancket here.

insane
00:32:369 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - it's fine? lol
cuz hard diff is a harder rhythm than this whole the part o/

top
several objects are touching hp bar. you should avoid that.

clean set
gl!

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

niyuji 2017-10-18T17:24:16+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
■ 00:21:702 - 00:41:202 - this part is sound really loud. I recommend the change S:C1 custom sounds here. because this part a low atmosphere and vocal is really quiet actually it's not loud (maybe it's just your skin/settings)

■ Can you choice this mapset combo color? the normal combo color is weird :O will look forward into that

[Frontier]

■ 00:05:702 (1) - Can you try more improve slider art? it's a little make sense is not good x.x okay I will
■ 01:23:035 (7) - switch NC this note. unnecessary

gary00737 wrote:
i think this map is good
about some problem with top diff
00:05:702 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/5DHDm7Y.png here i think not good okay I'll fix this slider
00:26:369 (3) - i think you can try this https://i.imgur.com/6ufVd60.png no thanks, it's completely fine as it is right now, no need to overmap it
00:30:535 - i think here can click why when you have 00:30:369 (3) - slider here which concludes those two sounds
01:02:869 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too big spacing here it's on purpose to bring the emphasis of this drums before the kiai part
01:14:369 (1,2,1,2) - i think you can try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9338074 don't really like that idea, it breaks the current emphasis of the high vocal pitch

Asuka_- wrote:
super quick m4m from my q
top
several objects are touching hp bar. you should avoid that. it depends on which aspect ratio and what type of skin are you using. i don't think that there are objects that touch the bar, even if there are (as you said), it's not a big deal
clean set
gl!

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2017-10-18T18:55:14+00:00

this song is actually pretty nice

m4m from my q

[General]

seemsgoodman

[Easy]

00:00:369 (1,2) - i kinda wish that these slider ends were soft hitsounds since theres no real sound on the end of them and the normal hitsound seems a bit out of place imo
00:16:369 (1) - aesthetics, but maybe you could turn this into a wave slider that blankets the top of 00:15:035 (4) - ?
00:45:702 (3) - aesthetics, but maybe you could make the red tick here line up with the vocal switch that happens around 00:46:035 - ?
00:56:369 (3,4) - make these the same shape?
01:01:702 (3) - maybe angle this more aggresively since its such a big change in the music? maybe something like this
01:15:035 (1) - similar suggestion to 00:45:702 (3) - where you could make the red tick line up with the snare hit here 01:15:702 -
01:23:369 (1) - idk why, ik this spinner lines up to the end of the vocal but i think it plays better if you extend it to the white tick and also matches the top diff

[Normal]

00:21:035 (4) - i would turn this into a single circle so there is a clear differentiation between where the kiai ends and the vocal part starts
01:04:369 (1,2) - nazi blanket
01:21:369 (1) - remove nc
01:25:369 (1) - soft hitsound slider end?

nice

[Hard]

00:35:035 (7) - nc
01:00:369 (5) - nc
01:10:369 (1) - remove nc
01:16:702 (6,7) - maybe make the angle of 7's slider blanket (6)'s?

nice aswell

[Insane]

00:09:535 (1,2) - make (2) the opposite angle of (1) for better visuals?
00:12:035 (4) - i feel like this slider end should be clickable since the music puts a lot more emphasis on the blue tick compared to the red tick, and you seem to follow this emphasis everywhere else in this section
00:16:869 (2,3) - i would ctrl + g this rhythm so you get more emphasis on the vocal switch whilst still making the drum beats clickable
00:38:869 (1,2) - this is easy to misread since it uses similar visual spacing to 00:36:202 (1,2) - i would suggest spacing it out more
00:52:702 (3) - i would move this higher so you can get a straight angle to (1), like this?
01:02:869 (1,2) - same as 00:09:535 (1,2) -
01:04:369 (1,3) - visual spacing can be improved here
01:09:702 (1,2) - shape and blanket can be improved
01:15:035 (1,3) - visual spacing again
01:20:369 (1,2) - same as 01:09:702 (1,2) -

idk if i agree with the build up being the hardest part of the song

[Frontier]

00:05:702 (1) - slider end interferes with the body of the slider in default skin
00:26:369 (3,1) - this could easily be misread because its the same spacing as 00:25:702 (1,2,3) -
00:27:369 (3) - i think you can extend this slider to the blue tick since the vocal supports it and theres nothing going off in the music
i think you overuse nc's too much in this section, 00:43:035 - for example this 00:44:202 (1) - nc can be removed since its part of the same phrase, same with 00:46:869 (1) - 00:49:535 (1) - etc etc

cool song! gl!

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Cheri 2017-10-18T22:23:22+00:00

From my queue -

Frontier

00:10:202 - there is no sound here for this note
00:11:369 (3) - this note would flow better at X: 63 Y:44 imo
00:14:369 (4) - this note is a strong note so I say bring it down some more for more spacing (maybe something else ya may have in mind)
01:03:535 - no sound for this note
01:06:535 (5) - imo this spacing on this note is way to high since there is nothing to really emphasis for this note (it be a different case if ya was following the vocals here 01:06:702 - )

Short mod so GL

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

niyuji 2017-10-19T11:43:20+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
this song is actually pretty nice

m4m from my q

[General]

seemsgoodman

[Frontier]

00:05:702 (1) - slider end interferes with the body of the slider in default skin changing this slider (will be updated soon)
00:26:369 (3,1) - this could easily be misread because its the same spacing as 00:25:702 (1,2,3) - altho it's the same spacing it also changes the pattern and my idea was based on stacks, don't really want to ruin it considering it in the whole map
00:27:369 (3) - i think you can extend this slider to the blue tick since the vocal supports it and theres nothing going off in the music there's no need to do that because the vocalist stops at 00:27:702 - where exact slider tail is. it's like taking previous parts like 00:22:369 (3) - 00:25:035 (3) - . i could map the blue tick to emphasize another instrument, however, my main goal is to bring out the vocal at the first place
i think you overuse nc's too much in this section, 00:43:035 - for example this 00:44:202 (1) - nc can be removed since its part of the same phrase, same with 00:46:869 (1) - 00:49:535 (1) - etc etc fixed. leaving 00:45:369 (1,2) - 00:47:702 (1,2) - for the vocal ehmphasis

cool song! gl!

Hailie wrote:
From my queue -

Frontier
00:10:202 - there is no sound here for this note there are drums playing super quietly, listen again
00:11:369 (3) - this note would flow better at X: 63 Y:44 imo moving this slider would break the structure - 00:11:369 (3,6) - blanket + 00:11:702 (4,5,6) - perfect triangle
00:14:369 (4) - this note is a strong note so I say bring it down some more for more spacing (maybe something else ya may have in mind) brought it down a little
01:03:535 - no sound for this note ^ as I said above
01:06:535 (5) - imo this spacing on this note is way to high since there is nothing to really emphasis for this note (it be a different case if ya was following the vocals here 01:06:702 - ) 01:06:369 (4) - stands for the vocal, 01:06:535 (5) - spacing for the vocal at the 01:06:702 - but this wasn't the main point. i wanted to make it further because of the synth instrument playing in the background which isn't as important as the vocal, however, it has some atmospheric feel in it especially when you listen at the slower speed you can tell that it transfers the sound from the center to the left a little creating that extensive surround illusion
Short mod so GL

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,086 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2017-10-19T12:05:26+00:00

m4m
my map

General

seems this map has some problem in Kujinn's Normal and 1112's Insane : after updating, the whole difficulty turn into blank. idk if you changed something but maybe you need to re-update your map to avoid this problem (remember to make a backup first)
combo colors are not set

Collab Easy

00:03:035 (2) - make it symmetry may looks better
00:32:369 (1,3) - try to avoid stack in easy diff

Kujinn's Normal

00:31:035 (1) - remove the whistle sound at the sliderbody
01:20:369 (1) - remove nc

Atsuro's Hard

sv feels like 80km/h on the street
01:10:369 (1) - remove nc
01:16:369 (5,6) - nazi blanket

1112's Insane

00:03:035 (1,1) - 你可以摆成类似这样：

00:53:952 (3) - snap歪了
00:55:202 (2,3) - 这里没必要那么大间距，可以nerf一下
00:57:869 (2,3) - ^
01:09:702 (1,2) - 求你blanket
01:20:368 (1,2) - ^
01:13:369 (4,1) - 这俩也overlap上呗
undermap pro

Frontier

00:05:702 (1) - you can move the end of this slider out a bit to avoid the tiny overlap
00:10:202 (3,4,1) - ctrl+g can improve the flow (like at 01:03:369 (2,3,4,1) - )
feels a little too jumpy

have fun :3

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Lulu- 2017-10-19T12:49:57+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
[Easy]

00:00:369 (1,2) - i kinda wish that these slider ends were soft hitsounds since theres no real sound on the end of them and the normal hitsound seems a bit out of place imo did something
00:16:369 (1) - aesthetics, but maybe you could turn this into a wave slider that blankets the top of 00:15:035 (4) - ? cool
01:15:035 (1) - similar suggestion to 00:45:702 (3) - where you could make the red tick line up with the snare hit here 01:15:702 - ya
01:23:369 (1) - idk why, ik this spinner lines up to the end of the vocal but i think it plays better if you extend it to the white tick and also matches the top diff done

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Collab Easy
00:03:035 (2) - make it symmetry may looks better fixed

thank

Otosaka-Yu

1,117 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-10-19T15:04:41+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello From my queue.

[1112's Insane]

■ 00:20:202 (4,5,6) - This is patterns flow a little weird. why you make a back move slider this 00:20:702 (5) i think the slider flow a make sense really bad so It is recommended to make this a normal flow. I think there should be no problem
■ 01:12:035 (3) - Hmm.. really solid this slider flow. Can you make a curve slider this? i think the change this slider with curve is better
Sorry, this is my personal style lol

Good luck ~

thx~

gary00737 wrote:
~~牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112 牛逼1112~~

係新一代Skystar嘅gary

Asuka_- wrote:
insane
00:32:369 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - it's fine? lol
cuz hard diff is a harder rhythm than this whole the part o/
ok i remap this
clean set
gl!

ありがとう~

Log Off Now wrote:
[Insane]

00:09:535 (1,2) - make (2) the opposite angle of (1) for better visuals? is ok
00:12:035 (4) - i feel like this slider end should be clickable since the music puts a lot more emphasis on the blue tick compared to the red tick, and you seem to follow this emphasis everywhere else in this section fixed
00:16:869 (2,3) - i would ctrl + g this rhythm so you get more emphasis on the vocal switch whilst still making the drum beats clickable is ok
00:38:869 (1,2) - this is easy to misread since it uses similar visual spacing to 00:36:202 (1,2) - i would suggest spacing it out more remap this part
00:52:702 (3) - i would move this higher so you can get a straight angle to (1), like this? I'll not move higher, but I'll make the spacing bigger
01:02:869 (1,2) - same as 00:09:535 (1,2) - is ok
01:04:369 (1,3) - visual spacing can be improved here fixed
01:09:702 (1,2) - shape and blanket can be improved Sorry, this is my personal style lol
01:15:035 (1,3) - visual spacing again fixed
01:20:369 (1,2) - same as 01:09:702 (1,2) - Sorry, this is my personal style lol

idk if i agree with the build up being the hardest part of the song

cool song! gl!

thx~

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
1112's Insane
00:03:035 (1,1) - 你可以摆成类似这样：之前做的太急了，反正就是随便糊出来的图，改了
00:53:952 (3) - snap歪了哪啊我看不见（
00:55:202 (2,3) - 这里没必要那么大间距，可以nerf一下好好，nerf了owo
00:57:869 (2,3) - ^ 我觉得海星
01:09:702 (1,2) - 求你blanket 就是逼死强迫症！！1！！！！11！！
01:20:368 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:13:369 (4,1) - 这俩也overlap上呗
undermap pro 对就是要 un derma p 不爽不要玩！111!!!!

have fun :3

你就当我疯了吧，~~这回摸已经显得我精神有点不正常了!!1!11!!1!!!~~
谢摸！

update thx o/

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Title:Pipo Password
TitleUnicode:Pipo Password
Artist:TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki
ArtistUnicode:TeddyLoid feat. ボンジュール鈴木
Creator:niyuji
Version:1112's Insane
Source:宇宙パトロールルル子
Tags:tv size space uchuu patrol luluco ending Kujinn Suzuki Suzuki_1112 1112 Atsuro Lulu Lulu- My Angel Kanan
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Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2017-10-20T21:53:45+00:00

Added the ncs i forgot (everyone pointed out those lol) and improved a blanket

update

osu file format v14

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Version:Atsuro's Hard
Source:宇宙パトロールルル子
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nextplay

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Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-10-21T12:19:03+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
this song is actually pretty nice

m4m from my q

[General]

seemsgoodman

[Easy]

00:45:702 (3) - aesthetics, but maybe you could make the red tick here line up with the vocal switch that happens around 00:46:035 - ? fixed
00:56:369 (3,4) - make these the same shape? actually they are
01:01:702 (3) - maybe angle this more aggresively since its such a big change in the music? maybe something should be okay for now? and even the angle would fit with the music here imo because the angle here goes down here the vocal stops toolike this

cool song! gl!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
m4m
my map

General
seems this map has some problem in Kujinn's Normal and 1112's Insane : after updating, the whole difficulty turn into blank. idk if you changed something but maybe you need to re-update your map to avoid this problem (remember to make a backup first)
combo colors are not set

Collab Easy
00:32:369 (1,3) - try to avoid stack in easy diff should be okay because the stack is not visible in-game

have fun :3

Has Lulu's and my updated version

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64258
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11035,21702,32368,43035,53702,64369,75035
DistanceSpacing: 2.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Pipo Password
TitleUnicode:Pipo Password
Artist:TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki
ArtistUnicode:TeddyLoid feat. ボンジュール鈴木
Creator:niyuji
Version:Collab Easy
Source:宇宙パトロールルル子
Tags:tv size space uchuu patrol luluco ending Kujinn Suzuki Suzuki_1112 1112 Atsuro Lulu Lulu- My Angel Kanan
BeatmapID:1442563
BeatmapSetID:682185

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"pipobg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-10-21T16:50:21+00:00

No Reply means applied ~

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello From my queue.

[General]

[Kujinn's Normal]

■ 00:36:035 (3,4,5,1,2) - The overlap slider patterns shape and after 00:36:702 (4,5,1) is flow a little awwkward. i think you can more improve pattern flow and shape if you change this patterns, you see this patterns suggestion.
SPOILER
■ 01:10:702 (3) - The 1/1 slider rhythm not suitable. because there is a drum rhythm between these sliders. so you should follow on drum this part rhythms. ■ amd 01:21:369 (1) same. That drum is on a blue tick ..........

Good luck ~

Asuka_- wrote:
super quick m4m from my q
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/681010
normal
01:10:869 - why you skipped this big sound?

gl!

Log Off Now wrote:
this song is actually pretty nice

[Normal]

00:21:035 (4) - i would turn this into a single circle so there is a clear differentiation between where the kiai ends and the vocal part starts
01:04:369 (1,2) - nazi blanket
01:21:369 (1) - remove nc
01:25:369 (1) - soft hitsound slider end?

nice

cool song! gl!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Kujinn's Normal
00:31:035 (1) - remove the whistle sound at the sliderbody
01:20:369 (1) - remove nc

There's an Update bug on my diff, I dunno whether its just for me but deleting diff and re-uploading may fix it.

panda

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64258
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11035,21702,32368,43035,53702,64369,75035
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Pipo Password
TitleUnicode:Pipo Password
Artist:TeddyLoid feat. Bonjour Suzuki
ArtistUnicode:TeddyLoid feat. ボンジュール鈴木
Creator:niyuji
Version:Kujinn's Normal
Source:宇宙パトロールルル子
Tags:tv size space uchuu patrol luluco ending Kujinn Suzuki Suzuki_1112 1112 Atsuro Lulu Lulu- My Angel Kanan
BeatmapID:1442573
BeatmapSetID:682185

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2017-10-22T12:32:00+00:00

from q

[collab easy]

hi dads
00:16:369 (1,2) - would prefer to follow implied slider flow here, would make this way comfier for beginners
00:32:369 (1,3) - might be a bit confusing especially since 1 hasnt fully faded out? i think you should unstack just in case
01:09:702 (1,3) - new players might think to hit 3 first since that's where 1 points directly towards - make 2 more apparent
01:13:702 - circle might fit here, the 2/1 gap feels like an intensity killer for the kiai

[kujinn's normal]

00:24:369 - circle here since downbeat is still kinda important and also because 3/2 gaps are awkward
00:31:035 (1) - this nc might have been an accident (just like me haHAA) but either way i think you should remove nc to follow that nc per measure thing - you didnt do the nc on the "ooh" at 00:41:702 (2) - so i dont see why you should do it here
00:46:369 (2,3) - im not sure new players know how to read 3/4 properly
00:59:702 (2,3) - blanket pls
01:10:869 (3) - p sure vocal starts on the red tick before it
01:12:369 (1,2) - only 3/4 stack in the map ever, new players might not expect this to be 3/4. maybe space out?

[atsuro's hard]

solid
sv feels kinda fast for a hard, maybe it's just me
00:21:702 - having a break here seems unnecessary, especially when this is just tv size anyway
01:22:369 (6,7) - people won't expect a 1.5x jump when the entire map is dsed, move these closer or sth

[1112's insane]

00:21:702 - breaks in tv size are zzzzzz
00:44:202 (1,2) - looks like 1/4 or sth since this is spaced lower than that 3/4 gap earlier so they dont look similar in rhythm, 00:49:035 (2,1,2) - is more appropriate
00:47:202 (2,3) - the above makes this look like 3/4 instead of 1/4 too
01:03:869 (3,4,1) - make them equidistant maybe. would look nicer
01:21:702 (1,2,3) - same here. (1,3) looks cramped

[frontier]

00:13:369 (5,6,1) etc - compared to the other jumps in this section these are so sharp, consider widening the angle a bit on the sharp jumps in this section so it's consistently wide
00:31:035 (2,3) // 00:41:535 (1) - maybe make these sliders look a bit more special, the aah/ooh sound on them is unique
00:48:035 (2,1) - space out more, right now this has the same spacing as 00:47:702 (1,2) - which is way weaker
01:08:202 (1,5) - all the sliders in the kiai follow implied slider slow except for these, reposition so these don't get accidental emphasis through flow

good luck!

Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2017-10-25T02:52:39+00:00

newton- wrote:
from q

[atsuro's hard]
solid
sv feels kinda fast for a hard, maybe it's just me imo it's really fitting for when the song drops after being slow most of the time
00:21:702 - having a break here seems unnecessary, especially when this is just tv size anyway I like these kind of intro breaks myself, and it's really short anyways
01:22:369 (6,7) - people won't expect a 1.5x jump when the entire map is dsed, move these closer or sth I got similar 1/1 jumps on other parts, and since it's 1/1 it's perfectly readable.

Thank

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Lulu- 2017-10-26T16:09:31+00:00

newton- wrote:
from q

[collab easy]
hi dads :eyes:
00:16:369 (1,2) - would prefer to follow implied slider flow here, would make this way comfier for beginners shouldn't be a problem at this bpm imo
01:09:702 (1,3) - new players might think to hit 3 first since that's where 1 points directly towards - make 2 more apparent fixed
01:13:702 - circle might fit here, the 2/1 gap feels like an intensity killer for the kiai added reverse arrow to 3
good luck!

kanan: no change

uwu

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

niyuji 2017-10-26T19:12:39+00:00

newton- wrote:
from q
[frontier]
00:13:369 (5,6,1) etc - compared to the other jumps in this section these are so sharp, consider widening the angle a bit on the sharp jumps in this section so it's consistently wide the idea behind this was to emphasize the peak of the vocal and a very strong downbeat. also because of it being a sharp jump it adds some spice to the map and makes it more interesting to play
00:31:035 (2,3) // 00:41:535 (1) - maybe make these sliders look a bit more special, the aah/ooh sound on them is unique changed 00:31:035 (2,3) -
00:48:035 (2,1) - space out more, right now this has the same spacing as 00:47:702 (1,2) - which is way weaker ok
01:08:202 (1,5) - all the sliders in the kiai follow implied slider slow except for these, reposition so these don't get accidental emphasis through flow ok
good luck! thank you

Yusomi

553 posts

Joined March 2014

Yusomi 2017-10-29T15:45:52+00:00

hii nm from my queue c: nice song !

frontier

00:03:035 (1) - if you stack the 2nd red anchor on top of the first it will look more beautiful

00:05:702 (1) - i know aesthetic mods are lame, but i think this could be made more pretty, especially the curve between the red anchors
00:26:869 (1) - i think this should be spaced more as it's too similar to how you are spacing the 1/4 gaps between these 00:26:035 (2,3) -
00:47:702 (1,2) - why such a decrease in spacing here?
01:10:035 (3,4,5,6,1) - flows a little awkward here maybe something like this would be better -

1112's insane

00:37:535 (4,1,2) - i am in love with this pattern
00:51:702 (2) - maybe space it a little more to match 00:50:869 (4,1) - ?
this map is too perfect for noob like me to discuss

couldn't find much to talk about here, good luck !

Nyukai

2,415 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2017-10-30T13:56:52+00:00

~Frontier~

00:09:535 (1) - I'm pretty sure this can flow way more better if you add Ctrl+G here.
00:26:702 - Are you sure you are not missing something important here? Feels a bit weird finishing it so early and with only a slider.
01:23:035 (7) - NC according to the current consistency through the whole map?

~1112's Insane~

00:53:035 (1) - This NC seems a bit unnecessary for me.
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Considering the last diff didn't even bother doing the same (plus it sounds a bit overmapped), you might want to just add little jumps here with circles.

~Atsuro's Hard~

00:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Any reason not to bother adding some NC, at least on the first sliders? This seems really long even with slow patterns.

Lowest diffs are totally fine for me, great map :3

Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2017-11-02T06:55:36+00:00

Nyukai wrote:
~Atsuro's Hard~

00:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Any reason not to bother adding some NC, at least on the first sliders? This seems really long even with slow patterns. No reason, just forgot

Thank

updoot

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Peter

786 posts

Joined June 2016

Peter 2017-11-04T15:18:50+00:00

Easy

01:01:035 (2) - could be placed lower http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9469106

Normal

Looks Fine

Hard

00:13:369 (8) - i feel like you could place this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9469162
00:35:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - it just looks bad http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9469184 would be better if you place like that

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2017-11-05T20:32:25+00:00

Hi.

[Easy]
00:19:035 (3) - CTRL+G to add some vartiety to the flow ? 00:16:369 (1) - this is going from the bottom to up too so having some diversity could feel better.
00:21:035 (4,1) - Not sure if it is intentionnal, you may want to keep spacing consistent in an Easy diff. It's not like if having such low spacing variation brought a real impact gameplay-wise, so just remove it to make sure beginners don't get confused by that.
00:27:035 (1) - That reverse does not sound right to me. You weren't really following vocals before so the slider shouldn't end on red tick.
00:32:369 (1) - Why isn't it just 3/2 long like next sliders ?
01:01:702 - Add break maybe
01:15:035 - Rhythm is inconsistent with 01:04:369 - which bothers me a bit. You should change the first one because the second one sounds better since it doesn't ignore the downbeat.
01:23:369 (1) - That spinner may be too short, not sure about it tho.

[Normal]
OD is too near from Easy. It does 2,5 -> 3 -> 6 which makes a huge gap.
00:00:369 - This difficulty is the only one that doesn't have the intro mapped within the mapset. Even the easy does. I suggest you to map it. If you really don't want to, I would suggest to remove that spinner 00:05:702 (1) - because it feels really random since it's not covering anything particular.
00:29:702 (1) - You may want to remove that circle since you ignore the downbeat here 00:24:369 -, for consistency.
00:35:035 (1,3) - This is unrankable according to ranking criteria. Same applies for 00:41:702 (2,1) -

(For a normal difficulty) If stacks are used, Stack Leniency must be set high enough for 1/1 hit objects to stack. Directly overlapping hit objects cause reading problems for new players.

00:38:035 (2) - Reverse it instead of using that gap, or add a circle. The gap feels weird since you mapped 00:34:702 (5,1) - 00:37:369 (5,1) - that don't have vocals too.
01:00:369 (3) - I think adding a repeat is okay since the bpm are low, you even used 1/4 gaps sometimes. You will have to change the pattern but it would let you map everything the song provides.
01:18:869 (2,1) - You may want to avoid that overlap.
01:20:369 (1,2) - This will cause readability issues. It is not clear that you follow drums instead of vocals because of the previous patterns are following vocals so chances are that the player hit the slider on red tick instead of blue tick. Please fix that.

[Hard]
I don't really get why Hard diff has higher SV than Insane and even top diff in some parts.
00:08:369 (4,5) - Stack them instead ? In fact the spacing seems high for that SV lol
00:10:035 (7) - Doing this is not worth for a 3*. We almost can't hear the 1/6th, which is unexpected, and this reverse does nothing but trick the player imo. You should really change it. Same applies here 01:03:369 (4) -
If you are not convinced, just ask 6 digits to play your diff and see how they play these patterns.
00:21:369 (9,1) - This really lacks of emphasis, maybe use 3 circles as a finish instead of 1 slider + 1 circle. Same goes for 01:22:702 (7,1) -
01:14:369 (7) - Remove hitsounds on end.

[Insane]
00:00:369 (1,1) - You should overlap them like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9480315 so it's consistent with 00:03:035 (1,1) -
00:14:202 (2) - Spacing seems a bit low here, it doesn't provide a good lead-in for that pattern 00:14:369 (3,4,1) -, maybe increase it a bit ?
00:20:702 (5) - The antiflow forces the player to hold the slider instead of playing it smoothly which makes the pattern lack of movement. Just change its direction and we're good.
00:55:202 (2) - This 1/8 slider seems a bit exagerated and overmapped, a circle would do perfectly and avoid weird gameplays. Same for 00:57:869 (2) -
01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Lacks of hitsounding. This sounds annoying because everything has normal sampleset, even yellow ticks.
01:20:368 (1) - Could look better, work on the waves.

[Frontier]
00:11:035 (1,2) - The back'n'forth flow here feels like 00:10:535 (2,3,4) - too much which ruins the emphasis. It needs some variation.
00:21:535 (6) - Any reason to such low spacing ? It's really weird if you compare it to 00:19:369 (2,3) - , 00:20:702 (2,3) - etc.
00:25:702 (1,2,3,1) - This can cause readability issues. Stacking 00:26:035 (2,1) - these objects implies that (1) is on red tick because 00:25:702 (1,3) - these objects are stacked in the same way but have 1/1 spacing.
00:33:035 (1,2,3,4) - Imo the pattern is not right because you map these notes as group of 3. You may want to use 90° rotation instead of 120°.
00:39:702 (2,3,1) - This is minor but they don't have the same spacing, visually.
01:05:035 (4,5,1) - I'm a bit concerned about how they flow. The angle seems really unforgiving.
01:10:369 (4,5,6) - Spacing may be too high here, those circles feel emphasized for nothing. Same applies for 01:21:035 (4,5,6) -

Good luck !

Otosaka-Yu

1,117 posts

Joined August 2013

Otosaka-Yu 2017-11-06T14:29:10+00:00

sry too late as too busy
@newton-: all fixed~ thx!
@Nyukai: 01:00:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think is ok lol it's not hard to this bpm
@Yusomi: all fixed~ thanks for your support!
@6th: fixed some~ thx!

insane

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204,294,57369,2,0,P|194:241|204:213,1,72.5,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,224,57619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,224,57702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
97,308,57869,2,0,L|52:302,1,36.25,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,205,58035,2,0,B|58:208|58:208|72:217|72:217|133:222,1,108.75,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,220,58369,2,0,P|96:162|130:75,1,145,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,41,58869,38,0,L|227:12,3,18.125,0|0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,30,59035,6,0,P|199:99|196:130,1,72.5,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,351,59369,2,0,P|312:303|312:252,1,72.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,32,59702,2,0,P|280:85|254:106,1,72.5,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,350,60036,2,0,P|217:309|251:274,1,72.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,60369,38,0,P|344:149|320:149,1,36.25,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,244,60535,2,0,P|168:235|192:235,1,36.25
380,242,60702,2,0,P|348:223|331:206,1,36.25,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,141,60868,2,0,P|163:160|180:177,1,36.25
308,316,61035,2,0,P|299:280|299:256,1,36.25,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,68,61201,2,0,P|213:104|213:127,1,36.25
205,316,61368,2,0,P|224:284|241:267,1,36.25,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,67,61535,2,0,P|287:99|270:116,1,36.25
256,192,61702,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,188,62869,38,0,L|121:355,1,145,6|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,249,63369,2,0,L|20:89,1,145,8|8,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
135,37,63869,2,0,P|150:100|124:164,1,72.5,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
21,104,64203,1,8,3:0:0:0:
144,188,64369,22,0,B|215:181|215:181|251:202|251:202|357:190,1,188.499991371155,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,127,64869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,22,65035,2,0,P|280:69|305:137,1,94.2499956855776,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,220,65369,2,0,L|372:111,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,278,65702,6,0,P|346:232|456:263,2,188.499991371155,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,324,66535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,140,66702,2,0,P|173:203|174:249,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,93,67035,38,0,B|122:87|122:87|177:109|177:109|281:95,2,188.499991371155,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,197,67869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,197,68035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,309,68202,6,0,P|200:223|131:120,1,188.499991371155,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,197,68702,2,0,L|76:307,1,94.2499956855776,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,298,69035,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,119,69369,2,0,L|271:137,1,94.2499956855776,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,13,69702,38,0,B|248:117|132:92|212:220,2,188.499991371155,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,65,70535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
11,161,70702,2,0,L|121:176,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,250,71035,6,0,B|200:204|200:204|355:191,2,188.499991371155,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,325,71869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,384,72035,2,0,L|245:274,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,115,72369,38,0,P|254:191|353:183,1,188.499991371155,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,118,72869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,13,73035,2,0,L|302:140,1,94.2499956855776,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,192,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,264,73535,6,0,B|287:258|287:258|326:282|326:282|433:272,1,188.499991371155,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,201,74035,2,0,P|459:162|445:103,1,94.2499956855776,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,29,74369,2,0,P|418:81|526:49,1,188.499991371155,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,196,75035,38,0,B|297:203|297:203|261:182|261:182|186:188,1,188.499991371155,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,257,75535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,355,75702,2,0,P|227:309|216:263,1,94.2499956855776,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,164,76035,2,0,L|141:257,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,106,76368,6,0,P|177:150|85:138,2,188.499991371155,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,60,77201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,244,77368,2,0,P|340:197|337:151,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,291,77702,38,0,B|390:297|390:297|335:275|335:275|275:283,2,188.499991371155,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,187,78535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,187,78701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,75,78868,6,0,P|312:161|350:244,1,188.499991371155,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,187,79368,2,0,L|436:92,1,94.2499956855776,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,86,79701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,265,80035,2,0,L|213:251,1,94.2499956855776,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,367,80368,38,0,B|263:267|379:292|315:193,2,188.499991371155,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,319,81201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
501,223,81368,2,0,L|407:210,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,134,81702,6,0,B|312:180|312:180|180:191,2,188.499991371155,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,59,82535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,0,82702,2,0,L|269:94,1,94.2499956855776,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,269,83035,37,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83202,12,0,87035,0:0:0:0:

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DeletedUser_2179411 2017-11-08T07:37:36+00:00

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

General :

* No error o/

Collab Easy :

00:13:035 (2,3) - Fix the blanket .. just fix the slider curve ..
00:21:035 (4,1) - DS between these two notes .. should be 1.0x .. and you have to fix the others after that ..
00:27:035 (1,2) - Blanket those two sliders .. to be more beautiful ..
00:32:369 (1) - Ctrl + > .. and then move it to x:149 , y:27 .. this will be more easier to play ..
00:56:369 (3,4) - How about if you change these two sliders into a slider with one reverse and circle on the next white line .. like this https://i.imgur.com/dLweOxf.png .. i made a pattern similar to your idea https://i.imgur.com/aD6DWz8.png .. what do you think ?
01:14:369 (4) - Before this circle .. there is a gap .. which i found it not necessary to make it .. so start a slider from here 01:13:702 - and end it to the next white line ..

Kujinn's Normal :

00:13:035 (4) - Rotate this slider (-15) or maybe (-25) .. to give a nice pattern .. i feel like it looks a bit odd ..
00:39:035 - Add note here to follow the vocal
01:04:369 (1,2) - Fix blanket here ..

I love this diff <3

Atsuro's Hard :

00:09:535 - I think you should do something like this https://i.imgur.com/CMg8iEJ.png .. the reason why i change it because here 00:10:119 - i can't here anything , i can't find any reason to put that slider reverse .. and by doing that it will give you more impact to the drum ..
00:38:035 (2,3) - Make slider 2 end here 00:38:535 - and move slider 3 so it can start from the next red line which is here 00:38:702 - No need to change anything to the slider 3 .. it sounds way better like that ..
00:41:535 (1,2) - It's better to remove those two .. and make it like this https://i.imgur.com/okwOj0Q.png .. to follow the vocal like that ..
01:02:869 - same as 00:09:535 - here https://i.imgur.com/sn1C5b7.png ..

The rest of the beatmap looks good to me

Thant's all ..
Good luck :D

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Lulu- 2017-11-09T08:43:34+00:00

sorry i've been busy

6th wrote:
Hi.

[Easy]
00:19:035 (3) - CTRL+G to add some vartiety to the flow ? 00:16:369 (1) - this is going from the bottom to up too so having some diversity could feel better. i don't think that it would change much, it flows into the next part nicely the way it is
01:15:035 - Rhythm is inconsistent with 01:04:369 - which bothers me a bit. You should change the first one because the second one sounds better since it doesn't ignore the downbeat. keeping it for now, but i'll keep that in mind in case people will complain later
01:23:369 (1) - That spinner may be too short, not sure about it tho. length is fine at this bpm

Rose Melody wrote:
Collab Easy :

00:13:035 (2,3) - Fix the blanket .. just fix the slider curve .. fixed
01:14:369 (4) - Before this circle .. there is a gap .. which i found it not necessary to make it .. so start a slider from here 01:13:702 - and end it to the next white line .. wait what i fixed that long ago, did niyuji not update it? lol

thanks for the mods

Arphimigon

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Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2017-11-09T11:28:34+00:00

Lab Aesthetics Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats
[1112's Insane]
Object at 00:10:869 - should be placed at: [485, 101] currently at: [491, 104] to blanket slider body at time 00:10:535 -
Object at 00:34:869 - should be placed at: [259, 87] currently at: [252, 85] to blanket slider body at time 00:35:035 -
Object at 00:55:869 - should be placed at: [287, 109] currently at: [288, 110] to move in line with slider at time 00:56:202 -
Object at 01:04:869 - should be placed at: [370, 126] currently at: [371, 127] to move in line with slider at time 01:05:369 -
[Atsuro's Hard]
Object at 00:51:535 - should be placed at: [165, 254] currently at: [168, 258] to blanket slider body at time 00:51:702 -
Object at 01:06:702 - should be placed at: [431, 62] currently at: [434, 64] to blanket slider body at time 01:06:369 -
Object at 01:06:869 - should be placed at: [431, 62] currently at: [434, 64] to blanket slider body at time 01:06:369 -
Object at 01:10:702 - should be placed at: [58, 58] currently at: [59, 53] to blanket slider body at time 01:10:369 -
Object at 01:10:869 - should be placed at: [58, 58] currently at: [59, 53] to blanket slider body at time 01:10:369 -
Object at 01:13:369 - should be placed at: [507, 64] currently at: [504, 65] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:035 -
Object at 01:13:535 - should be placed at: [507, 64] currently at: [504, 65] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:035 -
[Collab Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Frontier]
Object at 00:11:702 - should be placed at: [216, 281] currently at: [216, 286] to blanket slider body at time 00:12:202 -
Object at 00:16:869 - should be placed at: [395, 249] currently at: [396, 248] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:035 -
Object at 00:43:702 - should be placed at: [274, 310] currently at: [277, 313] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:202 -
Object at 00:46:369 - should be placed at: [100, 123] currently at: [103, 121] to blanket slider body at time 00:46:869 -
Object at 00:47:702 - should be placed at: [248, 143] currently at: [249, 144] to move in line with slider at time 00:48:035 -
Object at 00:49:035 - should be placed at: [397, 164] currently at: [395, 167] to blanket slider body at time 00:49:535 -
Object at 00:51:702 - should be placed at: [459, 107] currently at: [462, 113] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:202 -
Object at 00:52:702 - should be placed at: [459, 107] currently at: [462, 113] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:202 -
Object at 00:56:035 - should be placed at: [350, 87] currently at: [351, 88] to move in line with slider at time 00:56:369 -
Object at 00:57:702 - should be placed at: [165, 330] currently at: [166, 331] to move in line with slider at time 00:57:369 -
Object at 01:00:536 - should be placed at: [159, 188] currently at: [160, 189] to move in line with slider at time 01:00:036 -
Object at 01:05:035 - should be placed at: [291, 190] currently at: [295, 191] to blanket slider body at time 01:05:535 -
Object at 01:13:035 - should be placed at: [332, 162] currently at: [329, 162] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:535 -
Object at 01:15:369 - should be placed at: [88, 214] currently at: [87, 217] to blanket slider body at time 01:15:702 -
[Kujinn's Normal]
Object at 01:00:369 - should be placed at: [115, 334] currently at: [112, 335] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:702 -
Object at 01:09:369 - should be placed at: [62, 239] currently at: [63, 242] to blanket slider body at time 01:08:702 -
Object at 01:16:035 - should be placed at: [380, 102] currently at: [381, 106] to blanket slider body at time 01:15:035 -
Stacked objects won't work correctly often, so take those with salt.

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niyuji

529 posts

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Topic Starter

niyuji 2017-11-09T17:58:04+00:00

Yusomi wrote:
hii nm from my queue c: nice song !
frontier
00:03:035 (1) - if you stack the 2nd red anchor on top of the first it will look more beautiful unclear path
00:05:702 (1) - i know aesthetic mods are lame, but i think this could be made more pretty, especially the curve between the red anchors changed
00:26:869 (1) - i think this should be spaced more as it's too similar to how you are spacing the 1/4 gaps between these 00:26:035 (2,3) - moved
00:47:702 (1,2) - why such a decrease in spacing here? fixed
01:10:035 (3,4,5,6,1) - flows a little awkward here maybe something like this would be better - ... ok
couldn't find much to talk about here, good luck !

Nyukai wrote:
~Frontier~
00:09:535 (1) - I'm pretty sure this can flow way more better if you add Ctrl+G here. yeah
00:26:702 - Are you sure you are not missing something important here? Feels a bit weird finishing it so early and with only a slider. expanded 00:26:369 (3) -
01:23:035 (7) - NC according to the current consistency through the whole map? sure
Lowest diffs are totally fine for me, great map :3

6th wrote:
Hi.
[Frontier]
00:11:035 (1,2) - The back'n'forth flow here feels like 00:10:535 (2,3,4) - too much which ruins the emphasis. It needs some variation. changed
00:21:535 (6) - Any reason to such low spacing ? It's really weird if you compare it to 00:19:369 (2,3) - , 00:20:702 (2,3) - etc. oh yeah right. increased
00:25:702 (1,2,3,1) - This can cause readability issues. Stacking 00:26:035 (2,1) - these objects implies that (1) is on red tick because 00:25:702 (1,3) - these objects are stacked in the same way but have 1/1 spacing. fixed stack. now with expanded 00:26:369 (3) - it should work well
00:33:035 (1,2,3,4) - Imo the pattern is not right because you map these notes as group of 3. You may want to use 90° rotation instead of 120°. this pattern according to the map fits well because if you look wider, you'll see that i implicate triangles all over the place so to keep it consistent i'll leave it how it is. also it looks good because later 00:34:369 (1) - stack works out perfectly
00:39:702 (2,3,1) - This is minor but they don't have the same spacing, visually. well yeah but i think it's good as far as surrounding sliders remain stacked
01:05:035 (4,5,1) - I'm a bit concerned about how they flow. The angle seems really unforgiving. it's no different considering whole kiai - it has a lot of sharp angles
01:10:369 (4,5,6) - Spacing may be too high here, those circles feel emphasized for nothing. Same applies for 01:21:035 (4,5,6) - fixed
Good luck !

Arphimigon wrote:
Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats
[Frontier]
Object at 00:11:702 - should be placed at: [216, 281] currently at: [216, 286] to blanket slider body at time 00:12:202 - it makes blanket too large (^^)
Object at 00:16:869 - should be placed at: [395, 249] currently at: [396, 248] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:035 -
Object at 00:43:702 - should be placed at: [274, 310] currently at: [277, 313] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:202 - these are lined up well
Object at 00:46:369 - should be placed at: [100, 123] currently at: [103, 121] to blanket slider body at time 00:46:869 - ^
Object at 00:47:702 - should be placed at: [248, 143] currently at: [249, 144] to move in line with slider at time 00:48:035 - changed these two
Object at 00:49:035 - should be placed at: [397, 164] currently at: [395, 167] to blanket slider body at time 00:49:535 - ^^
Object at 00:51:702 - should be placed at: [459, 107] currently at: [462, 113] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:202 - ^^
Object at 00:52:702 - should be placed at: [459, 107] currently at: [462, 113] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:202 - ^^
Object at 00:56:035 - should be placed at: [350, 87] currently at: [351, 88] to move in line with slider at time 00:56:369 - it lines up well
Object at 00:57:702 - should be placed at: [165, 330] currently at: [166, 331] to move in line with slider at time 00:57:369 -
Object at 01:00:536 - should be placed at: [159, 188] currently at: [160, 189] to move in line with slider at time 01:00:036 -
Object at 01:05:035 - should be placed at: [291, 190] currently at: [295, 191] to blanket slider body at time 01:05:535 - ^^
Object at 01:13:035 - should be placed at: [332, 162] currently at: [329, 162] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:535 - ^^
Object at 01:15:369 - should be placed at: [88, 214] currently at: [87, 217] to blanket slider body at time 01:15:702 - ^^ - also it helped a little because after moving to x88 it fixed the blanket
no comment - fixed

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