Hello, sorry I was late for a day, since I was busy yesterday.
[General]
[Inner Oni]
[Oni]
[Futsuu]
[Kantan]
[General]
- I think you can use a lower volume at the beginning, 50% would be my recommendation. After that you can increase it back on 00:10:959 - this spot.
- For some reason, timing feels a bit off. It should be shifted about 8ms (to 968 instead of 960) with all the notes and points with it. I consistently hit the notes late, and I've checked that on the editor itself.
- 00:20:793 - The sound is actually on this spot, but you put it to a 1/3 snap. Shifting 00:20:848 (112) - this note to that spot would help synchronize the sounds with the notes of the map.
- 00:35:626 - On other spots, the 1/3 fits pretty well since there are sounds on them, but on this one I didn't hear something that is in 1/3, and because of that reason I think the flows breaks down. How about simply mapping it to 1/2 1/4 snappings like you did the rest of the map?
- 00:40:293 (270,271,272,273) - On these, I can hear 1/3 instead of 1/2 1/4. This kind of usage doesn't fit in my opinion, so 1/3 kddk would work way better on this.
- 01:34:959 (798,799,800,801,802) - Instead of these notes, I recommend 1/3 kdd, that part seems a bit overmapped. Nothing as far as I can hear references the 1/6 middle kddk pattern.
- 01:36:626 - I think you can put a 1/6 kkkkkkd here, since the piano notes are similiar to 00:48:626 - these ones, for example.
[Inner Oni]
- 01:52:293 - On Fatale Oni, the ending is harder. Consider making it same or easier since it breaks the spread.
- 00:20:793 - Same issue mentioned in Fatale Oni.
- 01:04:959 - I think this shouldn't be mapped like this, because of two reasons: 1) It breaks the spread way too much, 2) It doesn't follow any of the elements in music. Something like this (the selected area with a green rectangle) would follow the music better, and help you to keep the spread better as well.
- 01:07:626 - These patterns are too long to be there, it is overmapped and doesn't support the music as well. You can apply my suggestion above with a density increase like [(k) d (kddkddk) d (kkdkddk) d] etc. to emphasize the volume increase on keyboards.
- 01:13:293 (538,539,540,541,542) - This kkddk makes the stream harder than Fatale Oni, either change it to 1/3 or 01:13:376 (539,541) - delete these two notes. My recommendation will be the first one.
- 01:15:626 - This part includes monostreams a lot, which I don't think they fit, so, how about making these a bit more various? It will make the kiai part funnier :^)
- 01:18:959 - Since you are following the 1/3 part of the keyboard on 01:22:293 - this spot, I think from that spot to 01:19:626 - here you can change the snapping as 1/3.
[Oni]
- 00:11:126 - I think you should add something here. This part is way harder on Inner Oni and Fatale Oni, having a single note doesn't feel right for me.
- 00:23:959 - Instead of this, I think you can put something like k dk dk dk (1/3 snapped) to follow the keyboard better. Emphasizing 1/3 sounds with 1/4 patterns is not a good option to make a diff easier. This applies to general, so please check the occasions yourself since I won't point out them every time.
- 00:25:543 (128) - Shift this one to 00:25:626 - here and make it kat in order to follow something. It will follow the drums in this way.
- 01:10:293 - I think this stream is a bit long. You can cut it on the middle by deleting 01:12:737 (384,385) - these two notes.
- 01:22:126 (456) - In order to keep the breaks a bit more consistent, you can delete this note. It also doesn't have a kick sound like on 01:21:459 (450) - this one.
- 01:50:626 - You can change this one to kdddk or kkddk 1/4, since the keyboard is 1/4.
- 00:11:293 - You can add a triplet here due to spread issues. Recommendation: kkk 1/4 would be good.
- 00:15:626 - A bit hard for Muzukashii, don't you think? 1/3 snaps are uncommon for these kinds of players, so I think deleting 00:15:737 (47) - this and 00:16:071 (50) - this note would solve the problem.
- 00:42:404 (178) - You should delete this one as well because of the same reason as above.
- 00:47:626 - Well, same as above.
- 00:53:071 (233) - Yeah, same as above. The general issue on this diff is the 1/3 pattern usage, so I won't point out every one of them.
- 00:56:793 - You can add a don here due to the kick sound.
- 01:51:459 (483) - In order to make the 1/3 1/4 switch easier, I think you should delete this note as well.
[Futsuu]
- 00:33:626 (90) - Hmm, how about moving that note to 00:33:293 - here and making it kat? It will produce a different rhythm that you used before,
and it plays very good due to the drums. If you accept this, change other parts in order to maintain consistency. - 01:20:626 (232) - I think a 2/1 break works well here, due to achieve that you can remove this note.
- 01:45:959 - In order to keep the density same, you should add a note here.
[Kantan]
- 00:59:626 (91) - How about changing the notes to kats from that spot? It will create some variation, hitting dons again and again makes the map a bit boring in my opinion.
- 01:52:293 - You can add a kat here, since it's the outro of the song, I think it can be more intense.