Card N'FoRcE wrote:

E niente stella finché non sistemi per bene.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Here you go!

eee wrote:

hi
you told me to mod your easy, so here it goes
and eee don't mod too good
[Easy]
first, set your beatsnap divisor at the top right in edit to 1/4
you didn't seem to follow mtmcl's comment, in the timing tab, in red, it says"resnap all note," click that, also, the same place "recalculate slider lengths," that should make it easier to map
also, turn distance snap on and move the notes so they are spaced, although it doesn't really

00:24:567 - there should be a break here, since the map is easy, either put a break, or lower the HP drain rate
00:30:046 - ^ same here
00:34:96 (3,4) - places like here need to be resnapped, I don't think you followed mtmcl's comments, but here, you need to move (3) to 1/4 forward to the red tick, and (4) forward to the white tick, an easier approach would be just to resnap the notes and recalculate slider lengths like mtmcl said.
00:35:86 (1) - move the whole spinner back to begin at the white tick
00:38:27 (1) - move this whole thing back to the red tick two spaces back from where it is
00:41:35 (2) - stretch this 1/4 longer, that way the reverse wont be on a blue tick
00:43:22 (3,4) - too close to 2
00:46:15 (7) - new combo
00:51:20 (6) - ^same here
00:59:83 (5) - move back two spaces to the red tick
01:00:00 (1) - ^ this too, also, remove the new combo
01:02:24 (2) - New Combo here
01:04:69 (1) - remove new combo
01:08:05 (3) - new combo
01:09:76 (1) - uhh, remove new combo here
01:11:13 (2) - add new combo here
01:13:62 (8) - New combo
01:14:97 (10) - move this forward to red tick, stretch forward by 1/4 and add a reverse
01:17:65 (1) - remove new combo and add it here 01:19:02 (2) -
01:21:42 (7) - add new combo here too
01:32:72 (1) - stretch forward 1/4 so it reverses on red tick
01:38:189 - maybe add a break here?
01:41:28 (9) - shorten this back 1/4 so it ends on red tick
01:42:65 (1) - remove new combo here, and add it here 01:46:07 (2) -
02:24:76 (9) - Add New Combo, remove it here 02:27:49 (1) -
02:31:61 (1) - shorten this back 1/4 so it ends on blue tick, and 02:33:06 (2) - move this back 1/4 too
02:35:37 (3) - New Combo
02:36:14 (4) - move 1/4 back to white tick
02:36:84 (5) - same here
02:37:61 (6,7) - move this back two 1/4 ticks back so that (6) is on the previous white tick
02:40:85 (8) - move back to white tick, new combo, and shorten back 1/4 so it ends on red tick
02:41:63 (9) - move back to white tick and shorten back 1/4 so it ends on red tick
02:42:30 (10) - ^ same here
02:43:00 (1) - move 1/4 forward so it begins on red tick, stretch 1/4 forward so it ends on next red tick
02:57:41 (4,5,1,2) - move these back to the white tick
03:00:38 (3) - move this back to the red tick
03:02:86 (4,5,6) - move these back to white tick
03:05:16 (7,8,9) - space (8)

most of the problems I had were because of the unsnapped notes, just do as I said earlier, resnap all notes to 1/4 (set to 1/4 and click resnap all notes, should be easy),
I also had problems with the combo numbers, since it is easy, it should have low combo numbers

I don't really know how to help any more than this, I'ma need some real mods to check this out, +1 priority

Kyocciola wrote:

Primo consiglio: trova la canzone in qualità migliore.

Usando lo Beat Snap Divisor a 1/4

Easy
Abbassa lo slider tick rate a 1
00:24:22 (1) - non mi piace e nemmeno il break dopo, inutili.
00:29:70 (1) - ^
00:41:51 (2) - non va bene, pessima
00:44:77 (3,4) - ? che mi rappresentano?
00:47:33 (3) - se la allunghi fino alla barra bianca prima del "00:48:53 (4)" può anche andare bene

00:51:27 (1) - ...questo beat va bene, da quì in poi fai cosi come segue che forse è meglio:
00:51:61 (2) - slider che finisce due segni bianchi + in là
00:52:64 (3) - slider che finisce tre segni bianchi + in là
00:54:01 (4) - slider che finisce quattro segni bianchi + in là

01:00:09 (6) - sposta a "01:00:00"
01:02:57 (2) - sposta a "01:02:40" (tacchetta rossa)
01:05:05 (6) - che è sta roba? o_o" vedi di cambiarla, non va PER NULLA a tempo.
01:13:62 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:53 (1) - ^
01:36:47 (5) - allunga fino alla barretta bianca prima di "01:37:50 (6)"
01:40:67 (1) - porta ad una tacchetta prima (su quella bianca, per intenderci...)
01:41:87 (3) - porta ad una barretta dopo (su quella bianca, again...)
01:41:87 (3) - stranamente sembra giusta ma puoi fare di meglio in questo punto
02:10:37 (2) - "che è sta roba 2 la vendetta"
02:24:75 (1) - allunga fino alla tacca bianca prima della slider dopo
02:26:12 (2) - ^
02:27:49 (3) - accorcia di 4 tacche e viene 1 po' + decente
02:31:60 (1) - accorcia fino alla tacca bianca subito prima
02:33:06 (2) - porta indietro alla tacca bianca subito prima
02:37:51 (4) - ^
02:38:02 (5) - "che è sta roba 3 - chi non muore si rivede"
02:40:85 (1,2,3) - eh? o.o
02:43:76 (2) - "che è sta roba 4 - l'incubo colpisce ancora" (questa me la sogno di notte mi sa)
02:54:89 (3) - lasciala partire da dove parte, ma devi accorciare la slide fino alla tacca bianca prima e poi allunga di due reverse
03:00:20 (3) - "che è sta roba 5"
03:02:76 (4,5,6) - fa che finiscano TUTTE alla barra rossa...
03:07:39 (1) - boh?



Mafiamaster's Difficulty
Using the Grid 3
00:15:67 (1) - 1 square to left
01:03:78 (6,7,8,9,10) - 1 square to left
01:40:42 (1,2,3) - i think that u here want to a curve, so my suggestion is to move "01:40:59 (2)" 1 square up and 2 to the right



Sorry, for now i'll not star this.

Kyocciola wrote:

Usando la Grid 3
Easy
00:43:22 (2,3) - 3 quadretti in su
00:56:58 (5) - fallo iniziare sul segno bianco subito dopo e accorcialo di 2/4
00:57:26 (6) - ^
00:57:95 (7) - ^
01:08:39 (1) - allunga fino a 01:10:11
01:11:13 (6) - falla finire a 01:12:16
01:14:39 (1,2) - sposta di due quadretti a sinistra
01:14:64 (2) - sposta sul segno rosso subito dopo
01:15:33 (4) - sposta sul segno rosso subito dopo e allunga fino a 01:17:64
01:19:35 (3) - falla finire al segno bianco prima
01:22:09 (6) - falla finire al segno bianco dopo
01:24:14 (7,8) - 1 a sinitra e due giù
01:24:83 (9,10) - 1 a sinistra
01:36:47 (9) - falla finire a 01:37:84, poi inizia una nuova slider a 01:38:18 e falla finire a 01:39:55
01:39:55 (7, 8, 1) - 1 quadretto a sinistra
01:43:66 (2) - falla finire a 01:44:69
02:25:95 (4) - rendi l'ultimo pezzo perfettamente verticale e quindi poi sposta tutto 02:24:41 (1,2,3,4) - a destra di un quadretto
02:24:41 (1,2,3,4) - 1 a sinistra
02:53:35 (4) - rendi l'ultimo pezzo perfettamente verticale e quindi poi sposta tutto 02:51:81 (1,2,3,4) - di uno a destra
02:54:55 (5,6) - 1 in su
02:54:89 (6) - 1 a destra
02:59:34 (3) - - aggiungi una nota quì
03:00:20 (5) - rendi dritto l'ultimo pezzo di slider...
03:00:20 (6) - allunga fino a 03:01:05

CheeseWarlock wrote:

*drops a train on the bubble*

I like the hitcircle, but the top and the right get cut off a bit by the boundary of the image. Could you fix it? Also, add a hitcircleoverlay (steal one from a skin if you want).

BPM: 175.20
Offset: 2,310

[Lele94's EaZy]
00:24:22 (1,1,1,2,1,2,3) - Yaaaaawn. I know it's an Easy map, but this is boring.
00:46:14 (5,6,7) - The end of 5 and ALL of 6 and 7 should be one white tick later.
01:21:41 (4,5) - The spacing here is messy.
01:25:34 (1) - This slider sounds really bad. Fix it however you want, but don't make it repeat on a blue tick.
01:43:66 (2) - Make this a whole beat longer.
01:48:97 (4) - Make this 1/2 beat longer.
01:51:37 (1) - Remove one repeat from this.
02:49:07 (5) - Make this a whole beat longer or shorter.
03:08:07 (1) - This should only have two repeats.

[Mafiamaster's Difficulty]
00:02:83 (2) - This slider should end a white tick earlier.
00:05:57 (2) - This one too.
01:51:37 (11) - I know it sort of goes with the vocals, but this sounds awful. Make it end on a white tick.
01:58:83 (1) - This note makes the next ones feel out of place. There are a lot of ways you could fix this, but I don't like it the way it is now.
02:27:33 (5) - This should be 1/2 a beat shorter.
03:08:60 (1) - This should be 1/4 later.

Larto wrote:

Easy:
- Your notes aren't snapped to ticks :O

- I think the beginning is really boooring. Sorry, but could you make it more interesting? Or just remove the first 4 notes?

00:45:79 (4) - New Combo
00:56:75 (5) - New Combo
01:13:19 (7) - New Combo
01:14:39 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:21:41 (4) - New Combo
01:24:14 (4) - New Combo
01:25:34 (1) - Remove new combo, AND this slider sounds really weird imho. Make it 1/4 shorter or longer?
01:35:10 (5) - New Combo
01:43:32 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:46:07 (11) - New Combo
01:47:96 (7) - Remove New Combo
02:57:29 (7) - New Combo
02:58:65 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:02:76 (7) - New Combo
03:04:15 (1) - Remove New Combo

lol :p

Mafiamaster:
00:08:65 (1) - remove new combo
(Here the boring part isn't that bad, it's STILL boring, but since there is something mapped before that part, it should be fine)
03:08:51 (1) - Spinner is a bit short, don't you think?

kingcobra52 wrote:

Only issue I see is that there's a different bpm/offset on both difficulties. Make both the same with whichever timing you prefer (Don't forget to resnap and recheck notes afterwards).

Starred.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Easy:
01:48:98 (10) - shorten this to the red tick

Actually now that I look at it, most of the beats aren't snapped properly on the timeline.

Mafiamaster's Difficulty:
Resnap all notes here as well.

lele94 wrote:

RemmyX25 wrote:

Easy:
01:48:98 (10) - shorten this to the red tick

Actually now that I look at it, most of the beats aren't snapped properly on the timeline.

Mafiamaster's Difficulty:
Resnap all notes here as well.

Done!!

Zerostarry wrote:

Pop.

Easy:
00:24:22 (1) - Remove clap. A finish would do.
00:29:70 (1) - ^
00:35:01 (1,2) -^
00:40:66 (1) - ^
00:43:22 (2,3) - ^
02:02:85 ~ 02:12:08 - Remove claps.

Larto wrote:

There are two things that I want you to do.

1. Remove the storyboard elements that are there for no real reason at all.
2. Add Alace's difficulty and his hitsounds, then fully resubmit.

Still star.

Larto wrote:

There are two things that I want you to do.

1. Remove the storyboard elements that are there for no real reason at all.
2. Add Alace's difficulty and his hitsounds, then fully resubmit.

Still star.

Pasonia wrote:

Mafiamaster's
00:47:34 (3,4,5) - Spacing for 3-4 is not same as from 4-5. A slight, minute difference.
01:08:40 (3,4,5) - The same, also a slight minute difference.
01:13:37 (2,3,4) - ^
01:51:38 (11) - This is too long. Shorten by 1/4.
02:35:39 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem, again very minute.
03:08:52 (1) - Make it 1/4 longer.

Alazy
03:08:09 (1) - This spinner is too long. It should be ending roughly where the one in Mafiamaster's is ending; specifically, it should be ending at 03:09:12.

Bubble popped. Please read my signature if you wish to ask me for a follow-up; I'm already lagging on my own maps. Thanks for understanding.

Pasonia wrote:

Pfft, what a pain. More problems found.

Mafiamaster's
02:36:93 (4) - I am sure this circle originally was not off-sync with 2. But now, since it is, I suggest you move 4 behind 2 directly.
02:39:15() - Because of the high drain rate, you will need a break here.

I won't pop the bubble because these are relatively minor mistake so it's not worth my time to rebubble and crap, and I have kept Mark informed on this matter. Just correct that, and you will get your rank.