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ZiRoX's Cup
- 00:04:636 (1,1) - I would add more spacing for the flow here, because we actually have a big gap in the timeline so more spacing is needed. Something like 1.20x would be nice.
- 00:07:036 (1) - Maybe curve it a bit to the right ? to emphasize the wub wub sound.
- 00:26:236 (3) - It doesn't really fit the song, because we can clearly hear that the melody start 1/1 ticks after. I advise you to delete 00:26:836 (4) - so you can move 00:26:236 (3) - forward, then add a circle to fill the gap.
- Same thing for 00:22:036 (4) - but rearward.
- 01:01:536 (2,3) - 1/3 doublets like these are pretty tricky for a cup, they increase the density a lot because of the high BPM. I advise you to turn the second one 01:01:836 (3) - into a single circle since it's less intense. If you really want to keep the second doublet, then I advise you to bend both more.
- Same thing for other sections: 01:03:936 (2,3) - 01:06:336 (2,3) - 01:08:436 (2,3,4) - etc.
Salad
- 00:02:986 (4,1) - It's indeed a pretty strong beat but not enough to deserve a 1/2 dash. I advise you to make them walkable.
- 00:03:136 (1,2) - But you can put one here.
- 00:05:386 (2,1) - Same thing, a 1/1 dash here would be good to emphasize the really strong beat.
- 00:07:336 (2,3,4) - They are way too tricky for a salad, the main problem is the 1/2 dash at the end, after using 1/2 sliders with high spacing just before. Not to mention that you're using more spacing here than 00:05:836 (1,2,3) - while the song is less intense. I advise you to reduce the spacing scaling to ~1.50x for them, including (4).
- 00:08:686 (2,3) - You're using a 1/2 dash while we don't have any beat strong enough to deserve one, I would make it walkable like 00:09:586 (1,2) -
- 00:14:836 (5,1) - It's only my opinion but I really don't like this antiflow slider, I would prefer a vertical slider like 00:20:236 (1) - .
- 00:23:836 (1,2) - Same thing than 00:08:686 (2,3) - I don't think this one deserve to be a 1/2 dash since they are really hard at this BPM, so I would make them walkable.
- 00:24:586 (4,5,1) - Wrong emphasis, the dash should be between (5) and (1) because we can clearly hear the (1) is stronger + it's a new section.
- 00:34:336 (7,8,1) - Same thing, wrong emphasis.
- 00:36:286 (4,5) - Same thing than 00:23:836 (1,2) -
- 01:07:336 (2,3,4) - I would follow the flow normally because 1/3 antiflow for a salad are pretty edgy
ZiRoX's Platter
- I wouldn't recommend slider ticks 2 because of 2/3 sliders, they are pretty hard to read at this AR.
- 00:07:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I don't think it's a good idea to make a full stream here since we don't even have it on higher diff, I advise you to turn it into a slider.
- 00:09:886 (2,3) - Wrong emphasis, the dash should be on the white tick, and it doesn't deserve to by a hyper since the beat isn't strong enough (it's just a normal kick)
- Last kiai: Since it's the same than the first one I would at least mirror them to avoid total repetition.
I always loved your platters
Ascendance vs. Spec's Rain
- 00:08:236 (1,2) - SV is too high imo, I would bend them more for less potential shitmiss.
- 00:08:986 (4,1) - This one doesn't deserve a jump since we can't hear anything strong, while 00:08:836 (3,4) - deserve one because of the new section and stronger beat.
- 00:21:436 (1,2,3) - Wrong emphasis, the hyper should be between (2) and (3) since the strong beat is here.
- 00:22:486 (5,1) - You can add a dash here too, It would be fun. You did it for the previous section 00:26:686 (3,4) - so it's also for consistency.
- 00:31:486 (3,4) - ^
- 00:36:136 (2,3) - ^
- 00:49:936 (5,1) - I don't think this one deserve to be a dash since I can't hear anything strong enough to deserve one.
- 00:50:536 (2) - The actual slider can be easily overshot since the last jump is a hyperdash, I advise you to curve it to the right.
- 00:52:336 (3) - I advise you to move it to x:398 for spacing consistency: we had ~1.40x for 1/2 so it would be nice to have the same here.
- 01:17:836 (1,2,3,4) - It's easy to overshot them because of their inclination, I would bend it to the left to make it less shitmissable.
Emiru's Hi-Speed Overdose
- 00:03:136 (4,1) - Tu pourrais mettre un HDash ici pour souligner le gros beat, il faut marquer une différence avec les autres.
- 00:12:961 (7,1) - HDash ici aussi ? ça le mérite clairement.
- 00:15:586 (1) - Je pense que ce slider devrait commencer sur le tic blanc juste avant y'a pas vraiment de sons ici. Je te conseille aussi de nerf un peu les gauches droites de la fin mais c'est optionnel.
- 00:22:336 (1,2) - Pourquoi pas en faire un stream pointu ? ça pourrait coller avec les triplets
- 00:27:286 (2,1) - ça mérite clairement un HDash, j'ai même une petite suggestion pour régler ce problème en plus ça colle plutôt bien:
- 00:28:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - c'est de la bonne bb
- 00:34:036 (1,2) - L'hyper devrait être entre le (7) et le (1)
- 00:34:486 (4,1) - J'aurais placé un hyperdash ici vu le gros beat.
- 00:37:936 (5,1) - Pareil, surtout que t'en a mit un pour 00:28:336 (2,1) -
- 00:53:536 (1,1) - Si tu mets un HDash ici alors il faut en faire de même pour 00:50:836 (2,1) - car c'est la même chose mais en miroir.
- 00:57:736 (1,2,3) - Ctrl H ? comme ça tu déplaces l'hyper vers le prochain triplet qui est bien plus intense.
- 01:00:286 (1) - Ce slider devrait commencer sur le prochain tic blanc vu que le "HOW" de la musique se trouve ici, de plus il devrait finir sur un 1/3 avant 01:00:736 (1) - .
- 01:00:936 (3,1) - Vu que c'est le début du kiai j'aurais mit un Hyper ici. Si t'es d'accord avec moi oublie pas de fix 01:02:136 (4,1) - aussi.
- 01:04:536 (5,1) - Si tu mets un Hyper ici alors il en faut un pour 01:03:136 (1,1) - pour la consistance.
- 01:05:536 (4,1) - Ici aussi j'aurais aimé voir un hyper, le beat est super fort en plus.
- 01:06:936 (4,1) - ^
- 01:09:386 (1,1) - ^
- 01:10:586 (2,1) - ^
- 01:15:136 (2,3) - Je te conseille plutôt de répéter (2) comme ça tu peux placer un dash juste après:
- 01:20:136 (5,1) - ici aussi tu dois mettre un hyper car il y en a un pour 01:22:336 (1,1) - . Aussi la transition entre (4) et (5) est bizarre: je pense que tu devrait mettre plus de spacing entre les 2 pour améliorer le flow.
- 01:24:736 (1,1) - ^
- 01:27:136 (6,7,8) - Ce triplet mérite plus de volume que les autres vu qu'il est plus intense.
- 01:29:236 - Y'a moyen de remplir ce trou ici, mais c'est optionnel.
Elle est trop bien ta diff ♥ j'ai bien pu mod car c'est du Français
You've got me shaking!
I hope it will be helpful, the set is nice. Good luck.- 00:07:336 (2,3,4,5) - I would reduce the spacing since they are too intense atm: we don't have really strong beat but you can still keep Hypers.
- 00:09:736 (2,3) - If you put a HDash here then you should put one at 00:12:286 (3,4) - too since they are the same.
- 00:57:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Try to reduce the spacing scaling please, it's pretty shitmissable. Something like -0.30x for all of them would be great.
- 01:05:236 (3,4) - This one deserve to be a HDash because of the strong beat, you did it for 01:00:586 (5,1) -
- 01:08:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one is really shitmissable because of the high spacing. I advise you to move 01:08:436 (2,4,6) - to x:240 for the reading, don't forget to fix 01:08:736 (4,5) - if you're agree.
- 01:14:836 (3,4) - ^
- 01:17:836 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing than 01:08:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -, I advise you to reduce the spacing scaling.
- 01:25:036 (1,2,3,4) - I would keep using HDash here
- 01:26:836 (3,4,5) - This one is really shitmissable, reduce it to 1.64x please.
- 01:28:336 (3,4) - I would keep using HDash here too.
- 01:29:236 - Like Emiru's diff you could fill this gap, but it's really optionnal.
- 01:40:936 (5,6) - Ctrl H ? I don't think a antiflow would be a good idea with this spacing.