you asked for a professional mod
that's the mod above me, not this one
sorry about that
NO KUDOS
cup
01:20:280 (1) - mind curving that a little bit more? i find this slider to be extremely odd for this difficulty; forces the players to make little clicks
now, let me be honest - the difficulty itself is fine
it flows good, it plays good and it looks good. now, that's merely subjective, and purely based on visuals. the technical aspect of the difficulty - being rhythm, in this case - is completely poor. your ideas and consistency isn't clear. you sometimes execute heavier rhythms for the sake of emphasising certain sounds, but when there's the exact same sound one measure latter, you decide to follow something completely different
this would normally be ""fine"" considering it's a cup, fi you were to do this consistently... which, isn't the case. let me list some examples below. before you start reading, let me tell you something real quick - some are more subjective than others, so you can perfectly disagree; but overall, the rhythm needs more attention:
00:05:727 (1) - vs 00:10:610 (1) - vs 00:15:403 (1,2) - these are the exact same sounds yet represented in a different way. that's great! except for the first one that has one less audible beat compared to the rest
00:11:818 (2,2) - the first one being a copy of 00:13:609 (2) - yet this second one actually holds 3 audible beats. the first one isn't supposed to be like that, so stick to the 1/1
00:32:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pay more attention to this section as a whole, you're prioritizing the wrong beats. try http://i.imgur.com/R24nxaU.jpg that instead
00:55:066 (2,3) - 00:57:471 (2,3,4) - make them the sameee
01:17:874 (1,2,3,4) - stick to vocals, don't break with consistency http://i.imgur.com/8LIkwaz.jpg
01:22:696 (1,2) - don't give (2) the same importance as (1)
01:25:451 - this one is more relevant!!!
salad
i strongly believe you could add some other dashes during the intro, it seems rather unexpected to suddenly have 00:19:604 (3,1) - this as a dash. try to include at least 2 or 3 more to make it more "predictable"!
00:54:765 (2,3) - would recommend lowering the distance of 3 slightly (just drag it twice to the left, x272). that'd help a lot, currently it seems really tricky for sopme reason
yeah, same for 01:02:852 (2,1) - 01:12:462 (1,1) - these
01:01:367 (1,2,3,4) - i didn't bother mentioning these on cup because they made sense, groups of 2! but the distance for a salad is rather low; you could try to create a more interesting build up, with something such as http://i.imgur.com/hyjf7i9.jpg that
platter
00:22:014 (5,1,2) - for some reason this is incredibly hard
00:34:344 (3) - would give more emphasis to this particular note, not sure why it feels so underemphasized
00:41:839 (1,2,3) - given the fact that these are rather calm, a dash feels underwhelming
00:53:863 (1,2) - don't be inconsistent with your rhythms!! 00:55:066 (3,4,5) - 00:47:250 (2,3,4) - 00:44:244 (1,2,3) -
00:59:543 (1,2,3) - this pattern as a whole feels much, much better compared to 00:34:344 (3) - . although i'd move both (2,3) to the left so they both require a dash! let's say 1 to 476, 2 to x12 and 3 to x332
rain
00:59:543 (4,1,2) - dude, this is very, very anime. actually 00:59:543 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole pattern seems very hard compared to the rest, with some awkward movements... at least to me
rest seems cool i guess
i'm not very good at modding rains... yet?
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great set overall; just fix the thingy on easy!!
that's the mod above me, not this one
sorry about that
NO KUDOS
cup
01:20:280 (1) - mind curving that a little bit more? i find this slider to be extremely odd for this difficulty; forces the players to make little clicks
now, let me be honest - the difficulty itself is fine
it flows good, it plays good and it looks good. now, that's merely subjective, and purely based on visuals. the technical aspect of the difficulty - being rhythm, in this case - is completely poor. your ideas and consistency isn't clear. you sometimes execute heavier rhythms for the sake of emphasising certain sounds, but when there's the exact same sound one measure latter, you decide to follow something completely different
this would normally be ""fine"" considering it's a cup, fi you were to do this consistently... which, isn't the case. let me list some examples below. before you start reading, let me tell you something real quick - some are more subjective than others, so you can perfectly disagree; but overall, the rhythm needs more attention:
00:05:727 (1) - vs 00:10:610 (1) - vs 00:15:403 (1,2) - these are the exact same sounds yet represented in a different way. that's great! except for the first one that has one less audible beat compared to the rest
00:11:818 (2,2) - the first one being a copy of 00:13:609 (2) - yet this second one actually holds 3 audible beats. the first one isn't supposed to be like that, so stick to the 1/1
00:32:234 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pay more attention to this section as a whole, you're prioritizing the wrong beats. try http://i.imgur.com/R24nxaU.jpg that instead
00:55:066 (2,3) - 00:57:471 (2,3,4) - make them the sameee
01:17:874 (1,2,3,4) - stick to vocals, don't break with consistency http://i.imgur.com/8LIkwaz.jpg
01:22:696 (1,2) - don't give (2) the same importance as (1)
01:25:451 - this one is more relevant!!!
salad
i strongly believe you could add some other dashes during the intro, it seems rather unexpected to suddenly have 00:19:604 (3,1) - this as a dash. try to include at least 2 or 3 more to make it more "predictable"!
00:54:765 (2,3) - would recommend lowering the distance of 3 slightly (just drag it twice to the left, x272). that'd help a lot, currently it seems really tricky for sopme reason
yeah, same for 01:02:852 (2,1) - 01:12:462 (1,1) - these
01:01:367 (1,2,3,4) - i didn't bother mentioning these on cup because they made sense, groups of 2! but the distance for a salad is rather low; you could try to create a more interesting build up, with something such as http://i.imgur.com/hyjf7i9.jpg that
platter
00:22:014 (5,1,2) - for some reason this is incredibly hard
00:34:344 (3) - would give more emphasis to this particular note, not sure why it feels so underemphasized
00:41:839 (1,2,3) - given the fact that these are rather calm, a dash feels underwhelming
00:53:863 (1,2) - don't be inconsistent with your rhythms!! 00:55:066 (3,4,5) - 00:47:250 (2,3,4) - 00:44:244 (1,2,3) -
00:59:543 (1,2,3) - this pattern as a whole feels much, much better compared to 00:34:344 (3) - . although i'd move both (2,3) to the left so they both require a dash! let's say 1 to 476, 2 to x12 and 3 to x332
rain
00:59:543 (4,1,2) - dude, this is very, very anime. actually 00:59:543 (4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole pattern seems very hard compared to the rest, with some awkward movements... at least to me
rest seems cool i guess
i'm not very good at modding rains... yet?
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great set overall; just fix the thingy on easy!!