hello #sd_oko
01:12:080 (170) - I'd suggest moving this to 01:12:174 - , because this verse is transitioning into a new part which is more focused on vocals, so introducing the ~new thing you do~ in the next section helps introduce your thoughts more clearly
02:26:330 - 02:29:330 - 02:32:330 - 02:35:330 - i'd consider deleting these because not only does it capture the calmness of this section a bit better, but it also highlights the really big sounds (and you'd have cool progression to the next half of it instead of just copy paste the other half of it)
03:11:143 - not really a fan of this, either you do the concept the whole way or you introduce a few breaks earlier? like having a transition between sections is cool and all but tension is rising within song while tension in your map is falling towards the end of it - i think this logic in your map would be better off reversed
04:07:205 - i think your own concept would demand a note here, at least one i think because the idea of 04:01:768 - this transition piece is pretty neat and i think it can be used on long held vocals a bit more like in the place i linked? just an idea though
04:15:455 - seems to look better to me at 0.87x instead of 0.9 but i cant really explain why so whatever
04:21:455 - the gradual sv change looks odd because there's just one note it seems to apply to so i think just moving the .9x to 04:21:455 - makes this look nicer
05:52:393 (1384,1385,1386,1387,1388,1389,1390,1391) - i think this is better as kkk kkkkD prepares you for the ending that is to come in a less harsh way than the ending so that the ending of it ends in a less surprising way
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