Whiss wrote:
[Normal]
00:52:431 (5) - New combo here(?) Fixed
01:29:098 (4) - ^(?) ^
01:37:986 (6) - ^(?) ^
01:43:264 (7) - ^ ^
02:21:598 (1) - Remove new combo ^
02:22:431 (3) - New combo here ^
02:41:862 (4) - ^(?) Decided to keep it as it is
02:57:431 (X) - Note here It sounds nicer to me when it's like that, so no change
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Topic Starter
this was a really awesome map 
Hey, saw this in the overdrive queue, figure you want to get this ranked, so here I am to help.
Delete the unused osb file.
[Hard]
00:43:264 (1,1) - These kinda make the map feel lazy. And I don't really like how there are two, either map the area, or make one spinner last the length of both of them.
01:29:098 (7) - I don't like this slider
02:17:986 (1) - Randon 2x but wasn't hard to adapt to.
02:20:209 (7) - ^
02:31:320 (1) - FUCK NO, no one can see that coming, for that, you need a warning.
[Roley's]
Make the countdown normal or not there at all, it messes me up the way it is.
2 minutes without a break? That's way too taxing on the player.
Once again, random 2x, but not very bad here.
[Aqua29 is a Fairytale]
Please increase the lead-in to at least 1 and a half seconds.
A bunch of crap isn't snapped by just a little bit, just tell osu! to re snap all notes and it should be good.
There's a lot of kiai in here, maybe remove some?
That's it, fun maps, call me back when you're done and I'll re check and pubble it.
Delete the unused osb file.
[Hard]
00:43:264 (1,1) - These kinda make the map feel lazy. And I don't really like how there are two, either map the area, or make one spinner last the length of both of them.
01:29:098 (7) - I don't like this slider
02:17:986 (1) - Randon 2x but wasn't hard to adapt to.
02:20:209 (7) - ^
02:31:320 (1) - FUCK NO, no one can see that coming, for that, you need a warning.
[Roley's]
Make the countdown normal or not there at all, it messes me up the way it is.
2 minutes without a break? That's way too taxing on the player.
Once again, random 2x, but not very bad here.
[Aqua29 is a Fairytale]
Please increase the lead-in to at least 1 and a half seconds.
A bunch of crap isn't snapped by just a little bit, just tell osu! to re snap all notes and it should be good.
There's a lot of kiai in here, maybe remove some?
That's it, fun maps, call me back when you're done and I'll re check and pubble it.
Topic Starter
rust45 wrote:
Hey, saw this in the overdrive queue, figure you want to get this ranked, so here I am to help.
Delete the unused osb file.
[Hard]
00:43:264 (1,1) - These kinda make the map feel lazy. And I don't really like how there are two, either map the area, or make one spinner last the length of both of them. Fixed
01:29:098 (7) - I don't like this slider Hmm, I like this sliderIs it so bad that because of it this wouldn't be ranked? Nobody else hasn't said anything about it.
02:17:986 (1) - Randon 2x but wasn't hard to adapt to. Yeah, it's a bit random. but looks cool to me. Not gonna change that if you don't mind
02:20:209 (7) - ^ ^
02:31:320 (1) - FUCK NO, no one can see that coming, for that, you need a warning. Dunno how to make a warning sign so I redid it.
[Roley's]
Make the countdown normal or not there at all, it messes me up the way it is. Fixed
2 minutes without a break? That's way too taxing on the player. Added a break
Once again, random 2x, but not very bad here.
[Aqua29 is a Fairytale]
Please increase the lead-in to at least 1 and a half seconds. 2 sec lead-in
A bunch of crap isn't snapped by just a little bit, just tell osu! to re snap all notes and it should be good. Done
There's a lot of kiai in here, maybe remove some? Removed some kiai
That's it, fun maps, call me back when you're done and I'll re check and pubble it.
Missed a couple things in my original mod.
[Normal]
All of the timing sections that change the sample set are right on the beat they are meant to affect, this is wrong, please move all the sections that change the sample set and move them back 1/4.
[Hard]
01:31:320 - This timing section needs to be moved back 1/4.
[Roley's]
All of the times the sampleset or volume changes in this map, it's right on the note, which is not right as if a players hits that note just slightly early, it will give you the settings of the previous section. Please go through all of the sections change the volume or hitsounds (not if they they don't affect the hitsounds) and set them 1/4 back with the exception of these ones:
00:36:042 - This is on a slider end, so it's fine where it is.
01:31:320 - This can't go 1/4 back as there's a note there, so the next best thing is to move it 1/8 back.
01:46:875 - On a spinner, doesn't matter to change.
02:51:042, 02:51:181, and 02:51:320 are part of 1/4 steams, so instead they go back 1/8.
02:53:264, 02:53:403, and 02:53:542 are the same as the above.
02:54:931 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream has timing sections like the above.
[Aqua29]
Some of the timing sections that affect the hitsounds are right on the note that they affect. Please fix this a remember to only change the timing sections that are changing the hitsounds. And don't do anything with the timing sections that are in the 1/8 repeating sliders, those are fine the way they are.
Alright, sorry for not noticing that before, please change and I'll re check and pubble.
And for the record, all of what I just said is objective, so it should all be changed before I come back.
[Normal]
All of the timing sections that change the sample set are right on the beat they are meant to affect, this is wrong, please move all the sections that change the sample set and move them back 1/4.
[Hard]
01:31:320 - This timing section needs to be moved back 1/4.
[Roley's]
All of the times the sampleset or volume changes in this map, it's right on the note, which is not right as if a players hits that note just slightly early, it will give you the settings of the previous section. Please go through all of the sections change the volume or hitsounds (not if they they don't affect the hitsounds) and set them 1/4 back with the exception of these ones:
00:36:042 - This is on a slider end, so it's fine where it is.
01:31:320 - This can't go 1/4 back as there's a note there, so the next best thing is to move it 1/8 back.
01:46:875 - On a spinner, doesn't matter to change.
02:51:042, 02:51:181, and 02:51:320 are part of 1/4 steams, so instead they go back 1/8.
02:53:264, 02:53:403, and 02:53:542 are the same as the above.
02:54:931 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream has timing sections like the above.
[Aqua29]
Some of the timing sections that affect the hitsounds are right on the note that they affect. Please fix this a remember to only change the timing sections that are changing the hitsounds. And don't do anything with the timing sections that are in the 1/8 repeating sliders, those are fine the way they are.
Alright, sorry for not noticing that before, please change and I'll re check and pubble.
And for the record, all of what I just said is objective, so it should all be changed before I come back.
Topic Starter
rust45 wrote:
Missed a couple things in my original mod.
[Normal]
All of the timing sections that change the sample set are right on the beat they are meant to affect, this is wrong, please move all the sections that change the sample set and move them back 1/4. Fixed
[Hard]
01:31:320 - This timing section needs to be moved back 1/4. Fixed
[Roley's] Fixed 'em all
All of the times the sampleset or volume changes in this map, it's right on the note, which is not right as if a players hits that note just slightly early, it will give you the settings of the previous section. Please go through all of the sections change the volume or hitsounds (not if they they don't affect the hitsounds) and set them 1/4 back with the exception of these ones:
00:36:042 - This is on a slider end, so it's fine where it is.
01:31:320 - This can't go 1/4 back as there's a note there, so the next best thing is to move it 1/8 back.
01:46:875 - On a spinner, doesn't matter to change.
02:51:042, 02:51:181, and 02:51:320 are part of 1/4 steams, so instead they go back 1/8.
02:53:264, 02:53:403, and 02:53:542 are the same as the above.
02:54:931 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream has timing sections like the above.
[Aqua29] Done and done
Some of the timing sections that affect the hitsounds are right on the note that they affect. Please fix this a remember to only change the timing sections that are changing the hitsounds. And don't do anything with the timing sections that are in the 1/8 repeating sliders, those are fine the way they are.
Alright, sorry for not noticing that before, please change and I'll re check and pubble.
And for the record, all of what I just said is objective, so it should all be changed before I come back.
Good job, I can't see anything wrong in my eyes anymore.
Here is your Proto-Bubble
Here is your Proto-Bubble
FANTASTIC map! Roley's and Aqua's are too hard for me though haha.
[General]
Consider lowering the volume to around the fourth tick from the left. The hitsounds were overpowering the song for me. XD
[Normal]
01:57:986 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't neccessarily find this fitting in this difficulty.
[Matma Rex's Normal+]
00:38:542 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Constant clapping is good enough, no need to create some sort of intense pattern with it XD
00:43:264 (4) - What's with this slider's look? XD
00:47:709 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above.
01:51:875 (3,4) - I slipped on the spacing here, hahaha.
[Hard]
01:54:098 (6) - Too much claps, I think. XD XD
02:17:986 (1) - I don't really agree with the double speed slider here... XD
02:20:209 (7) - ^
[Roley's Fairytale]
00:25:764 (1,2) - The finishes sound weird here XD
00:47:431 (6) - Don't find myself agreeing with the whistle here either. XD
00:48:542 (8) - ^
00:52:153 (8) - ^
01:01:320 (1) - Just claps are already good enough. Always a bad idea to put both clap and whistle on the same beat, in my opinion. XD
01:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too much whistles... okay, well, you kinda get my point, I think you might be overusing the normal whistle.
02:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah... this doesn't sound very good either to me.
02:31:320 (1) - And the double speed sliders from this point... yeah, I don't think this song needs it. XD
[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
00:30:209 (1) - Not sure what I think about this slider... XD
00:54:653 (1) - Any reason to why there is an extra timing section here?
01:34:514 (8) - Um... I kinda get what you are trying to do here, but it just ended up sounding loud. o_o
01:51:875 (3) - ^
01:58:542 (8) - ^
02:31:597 (10) - Toooo much kiai time opening here. XD XD... I am actually not sure if you are allowed to abuse the kiai fountain THAT many times. XD
Also, I think this difficulty needs to turn on the epilepsy warning... you can do this by going to:
Song Setup > Storyboarding
It's under misc. toggles and check 'Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)'.
Overall, nice map... most of these are just suggestions. I think the most important bit is to decrease the volume a bit! I found it really, really difficult to play or listen to the map without decreasing the hitsound volume first, so you should really consider doing this. XD
Consider lowering the volume to around the fourth tick from the left. The hitsounds were overpowering the song for me. XD
[Normal]
01:57:986 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't neccessarily find this fitting in this difficulty.
[Matma Rex's Normal+]
00:38:542 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Constant clapping is good enough, no need to create some sort of intense pattern with it XD
00:43:264 (4) - What's with this slider's look? XD
00:47:709 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above.
01:51:875 (3,4) - I slipped on the spacing here, hahaha.
[Hard]
01:54:098 (6) - Too much claps, I think. XD XD
02:17:986 (1) - I don't really agree with the double speed slider here... XD
02:20:209 (7) - ^
[Roley's Fairytale]
00:25:764 (1,2) - The finishes sound weird here XD
00:47:431 (6) - Don't find myself agreeing with the whistle here either. XD
00:48:542 (8) - ^
00:52:153 (8) - ^
01:01:320 (1) - Just claps are already good enough. Always a bad idea to put both clap and whistle on the same beat, in my opinion. XD
01:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too much whistles... okay, well, you kinda get my point, I think you might be overusing the normal whistle.
02:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah... this doesn't sound very good either to me.
02:31:320 (1) - And the double speed sliders from this point... yeah, I don't think this song needs it. XD
[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
00:30:209 (1) - Not sure what I think about this slider... XD
00:54:653 (1) - Any reason to why there is an extra timing section here?
01:34:514 (8) - Um... I kinda get what you are trying to do here, but it just ended up sounding loud. o_o
01:51:875 (3) - ^
01:58:542 (8) - ^
02:31:597 (10) - Toooo much kiai time opening here. XD XD... I am actually not sure if you are allowed to abuse the kiai fountain THAT many times. XD
Also, I think this difficulty needs to turn on the epilepsy warning... you can do this by going to:
Song Setup > Storyboarding
It's under misc. toggles and check 'Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)'.
Overall, nice map... most of these are just suggestions. I think the most important bit is to decrease the volume a bit! I found it really, really difficult to play or listen to the map without decreasing the hitsound volume first, so you should really consider doing this. XD
Fixed.MaxwellDemon wrote:
[Matma Rex's Normal+]
00:38:542 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Constant clapping is good enough, no need to create some sort of intense pattern with it XD
00:43:264 (4) - What's with this slider's look? XD
00:47:709 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above.
01:51:875 (3,4) - I slipped on the spacing here, hahaha.
I reshaped the slider, but I'm not gonna make it any less
Download: Alexander Rybak - Fairytale (Mianki) [Matma Rex's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
Thanks a lotMaxwellDemon wrote:
[General]
Consider lowering the volume to around the fourth tick from the left. The hitsounds were overpowering the song for me. XD Did that
[Normal]
01:57:986 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't neccessarily find this fitting in this difficulty. Made 'em two constant sliders
[Matma Rex's Normal+] Matma fixed this
00:38:542 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Constant clapping is good enough, no need to create some sort of intense pattern with it XD
00:43:264 (4) - What's with this slider's look? XD
00:47:709 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above.
01:51:875 (3,4) - I slipped on the spacing here, hahaha.
[Hard]
01:54:098 (6) - Too much claps, I think. XD XD Fixed
02:17:986 (1) - I don't really agree with the double speed slider here... XD Yeah, I know they seem random and a bit sudden but you'll adapt to them quickly enough (imo) and I personally like them. So if they're not a problem that wouldn't get this map ranked, I'd like to keep them ^^
02:20:209 (7) - ^
[Roley's Fairytale]
00:25:764 (1,2) - The finishes sound weird here XD I thought that too when I first heard them
00:47:431 (6) - Don't find myself agreeing with the whistle here either. XD Changed it to claps
00:48:542 (8) - ^ Deleted
00:52:153 (8) - ^ Deleted
01:01:320 (1) - Just claps are already good enough. Always a bad idea to put both clap and whistle on the same beat, in my opinion. XD Fixed
01:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too much whistles... okay, well, you kinda get my point, I think you might be overusing the normal whistle.
02:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah... this doesn't sound very good either to me.
02:31:320 (1) - And the double speed sliders from this point... yeah, I don't think this song needs it. XD
[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
00:30:209 (1) - Not sure what I think about this slider... XD Looks nice to me
00:54:653 (1) - Any reason to why there is an extra timing section here?
01:34:514 (8) - Um... I kinda get what you are trying to do here, but it just ended up sounding loud. o_o Should sound okay now that I lowered the volume
01:51:875 (3) - ^ Added timing section here and lowered the volume a tick
01:58:542 (8) - ^ ^
02:31:597 (10) - Toooo much kiai time opening here. XD XD... I am actually not sure if you are allowed to abuse the kiai fountain THAT many times. XD Deleted half of them, this is okay?
Also, I think this difficulty needs to turn on the epilepsy warning... you can do this by going to: Did it but then the sign comes on top of the first beat and I put the lead-in on max, what should I do?
Song Setup > Storyboarding
It's under misc. toggles and check 'Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)'.
Overall, nice map... most of these are just suggestions. I think the most important bit is to decrease the volume a bit! I found it really, really difficult to play or listen to the map without decreasing the hitsound volume first, so you should really consider doing this. XD
[General]
Forgot about this, but delete the .osb file from the folder and reupload. XD XD
But I won't force you to make changes you don't want to, as none of those are technical errors. :3
Don't bother with it then, I'll hit the admin board about it. XD XD
02:31:597 (10) - And to remove all the fountains here. >_>;
Just read the guidelines again, preferably not to use kiai for the fountain at all.
Still star for now... will have to check with the admin board about the strobe warning.
Forgot about this, but delete the .osb file from the folder and reupload. XD XD
Getting used to something in order for it to be good is a bad thing, in my opinion. XDMianki wrote:
I thought that too when I first heard them
But I won't force you to make changes you don't want to, as none of those are technical errors. :3
Good question...Mianki wrote:
Did it but then the sign comes on top of the first beat and I put the lead-in on max, what should I do?
Don't bother with it then, I'll hit the admin board about it. XD XD
02:49:097 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I am afraid I have to ask that to be turned into one kiai section instead.Mianki wrote:
Deleted half of them, this is okay?
02:31:597 (10) - And to remove all the fountains here. >_>;
Just read the guidelines again, preferably not to use kiai for the fountain at all.
Now that just sounds sudden, it was really low then suddenly really loud. XDMianki wrote:
01:34:514 (8) - Should sound okay now that I lowered the volume
Still star for now... will have to check with the admin board about the strobe warning.
Topic Starter
MaxwellDemon wrote:
[General]
Forgot about this, but delete the .osb file from the folder and reupload. XD XD DoneGetting used to something in order for it to be good is a bad thing, in my opinion. XDMianki wrote:
I thought that too when I first heard them
But I won't force you to make changes you don't want to, as none of those are technical errors. :3 Allright, I'll keep themGood question...Mianki wrote:
Did it but then the sign comes on top of the first beat and I put the lead-in on max, what should I do?
Don't bother with it then, I'll hit the admin board about it. XD XD Fixed02:49:097 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I am afraid I have to ask that to be turned into one kiai section instead.Mianki wrote:
Deleted half of them, this is okay?
02:31:597 (10) - And to remove all the fountains here. >_>; One kiai section it is
Just read the guidelines again, preferably not to use kiai for the fountain at all. Never read these guidelines, and never willNow that just sounds sudden, it was really low then suddenly really loud. XD Normal slider, no rising sound or anythingMianki wrote:
01:34:514 (8) - Should sound okay now that I lowered the volume
Still star for now... will have to check with the admin board about the strobe warning.
Ignoring this map is just wrong. Bubble this already!
Bats give a shit about SP
Bats give a shit about SP
Since you asked for an Easy-specific mod~
[Easy]
This first section's new combos are kind of unintuitive. Try doing one every four beats, then have that long slider be it's own combo.
Some of your combos run a bit long for an easy as well.
00:30:209 (5) - New combo
00:39:653 (1) - New combo
01:31:320 (6) - New combo
01:31:875 (1) - Remove new combo
01:33:542 (4) - Shape this slider so it doesn't crumple in on itself. It doesn't look very good, and also mixing in that red tick slider right after it just felt kind of bad for this difficulty.
01:40:209 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for an easy. Honestly, it feels better if you map through the spinner.
01:43:264 (1,2,4) - Do you really need to do each hit? I've been trying to ignore a lot of the red tick stuff, but this is pushing the limits of an Easy, imo
01:53:542 (5) - New combo
01:56:598 (3,4) - Why?
01:57:986 (1,2) - Doesn't feel right at that point in the song at all. :/
02:02:431 (3) - New combo
The diff is okay - it just doesn't look very polished to me because of the slider formations.
[Easy]
This first section's new combos are kind of unintuitive. Try doing one every four beats, then have that long slider be it's own combo.
Some of your combos run a bit long for an easy as well.
00:30:209 (5) - New combo
00:39:653 (1) - New combo
01:31:320 (6) - New combo
01:31:875 (1) - Remove new combo
01:33:542 (4) - Shape this slider so it doesn't crumple in on itself. It doesn't look very good, and also mixing in that red tick slider right after it just felt kind of bad for this difficulty.
01:40:209 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for an easy. Honestly, it feels better if you map through the spinner.
01:43:264 (1,2,4) - Do you really need to do each hit? I've been trying to ignore a lot of the red tick stuff, but this is pushing the limits of an Easy, imo
01:53:542 (5) - New combo
01:56:598 (3,4) - Why?
01:57:986 (1,2) - Doesn't feel right at that point in the song at all. :/
02:02:431 (3) - New combo
The diff is okay - it just doesn't look very polished to me because of the slider formations.
uuuuuuuuuh.... yes.....
Topic Starter
Hi,
[easy]
01:31:875 (2) - i wouldnt stack this one imo
01:54:098 (1) - no new combo?
[matma rex's normal]
no kiai?
[roley's fairytale]
00:25:764 - dont like all the finishes here, doesnt sound good or go to the song imo
[aqua92 is a fairytale]
00:09:097 (1,1,1,1) - why not all one combo?
00:55:209 (b) - why do you have kiai during the break?
02:09:653 (b) - ^
02:31:598 (k) - maybe start this kiai at 02:31:320?
end kiai at the last note?
nice map
[easy]
01:31:875 (2) - i wouldnt stack this one imo
01:54:098 (1) - no new combo?
[matma rex's normal]
no kiai?
[roley's fairytale]
00:25:764 - dont like all the finishes here, doesnt sound good or go to the song imo
[aqua92 is a fairytale]
00:09:097 (1,1,1,1) - why not all one combo?
00:55:209 (b) - why do you have kiai during the break?
02:09:653 (b) - ^
02:31:598 (k) - maybe start this kiai at 02:31:320?
end kiai at the last note?
nice map
Topic Starter
roflninja wrote:
Hi,
[easy]
01:31:875 (2) - i wouldnt stack this one imo Fixed
01:54:098 (1) - no new combo? Fixed
[matma rex's normal]
no kiai? Fixed
[roley's fairytale]
00:25:764 - dont like all the finishes here, doesnt sound good or go to the song imo Changed hitsounds
[aqua92 is a fairytale]
00:09:097 (1,1,1,1) - why not all one combo? Fixed
00:55:209 (b) - why do you have kiai during the break? Fixed
02:09:653 (b) - ^ Fixed
02:31:598 (k) - maybe start this kiai at 02:31:320? I think the kiai was intended to start when the slider starts, so no change
end kiai at the last note? Fixed
nice map
This poor map...
[Easy]
Nothing really wrong here anymore - I'd just nitpick at sliders, hehe.
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:22:709 (1) - Remove new combo
00:40:209 (1,2,3) - I'm not so sure about stacks like these in normal. I'll just mention this one since they're all over the map, hehe.
01:31:320 (1) - Really too soon after a spinner... though I guess with the level of difficulty in general of the map, it fits. Eh, I'll just mention and move on, hehe.
01:34:375 (1) - This is really short for a spinner on a Normal. And the notes right after it... it's really pushing beyond the normal barrier here.
01:47:709 (1) - Ugh... so many of them... Please cut a couple of the quick notes after the spinners. The recovery time on spinners is pretty bad for newer people.
[Hard]
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ?
00:41:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh, what is this following in the music? Meh, you use this a lot too. Doesn't sound very good to me.
The ending was kind of anti climactic.
[Roley's Fairytale]
00:08:820 (1,2) - These two notes kept confusing the hell out of me. They're following absolutely nothing in the music. Please get rid of 'em.
00:43:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where in the music is this?
So many streams in such a laid-back song. orz
02:16:875 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you just get that last hit in there to at least go with the violin?
02:31:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is clustered really bad, especially with such a low OD. Spread 'em out or something. Or you could make it go with the music. which would be much better.
02:46:598 (1) - It gets 2000, but man does it not fit at all when it's that short. Make it last the duration of the "CURRRRRRSED!" or something.
Then general layout is really linear too with lots of straight lines going up/down and left/right. Not very good as eye candy.
I just... really couldn't get into this difficulty compared to the song.
[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
Argh, those flashes... do you really need to have them in? They're incredibly annoying and hurt my eyes.
Make lead-in time maybe 1.5 seconds?
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ?
That intro just plays really bad. The 1/8 sliders sound horrible.
Just horribly overmapped too.
I don't know what to say besides that I couldn't really find any part of this map that was enjoyable and felt like it was showing off the song at all.
Still needs a lot of work if you plan on keeping some of your guest difficulties.
Edit: Looks much better as a set now. Star~
[Easy]
Nothing really wrong here anymore - I'd just nitpick at sliders, hehe.
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:22:709 (1) - Remove new combo
00:40:209 (1,2,3) - I'm not so sure about stacks like these in normal. I'll just mention this one since they're all over the map, hehe.
01:31:320 (1) - Really too soon after a spinner... though I guess with the level of difficulty in general of the map, it fits. Eh, I'll just mention and move on, hehe.
01:34:375 (1) - This is really short for a spinner on a Normal. And the notes right after it... it's really pushing beyond the normal barrier here.
01:47:709 (1) - Ugh... so many of them... Please cut a couple of the quick notes after the spinners. The recovery time on spinners is pretty bad for newer people.
[Hard]
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ?
00:41:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh, what is this following in the music? Meh, you use this a lot too. Doesn't sound very good to me.
The ending was kind of anti climactic.
[Roley's Fairytale]
00:08:820 (1,2) - These two notes kept confusing the hell out of me. They're following absolutely nothing in the music. Please get rid of 'em.
00:43:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where in the music is this?
So many streams in such a laid-back song. orz
02:16:875 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you just get that last hit in there to at least go with the violin?
02:31:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is clustered really bad, especially with such a low OD. Spread 'em out or something. Or you could make it go with the music. which would be much better.
02:46:598 (1) - It gets 2000, but man does it not fit at all when it's that short. Make it last the duration of the "CURRRRRRSED!" or something.
Then general layout is really linear too with lots of straight lines going up/down and left/right. Not very good as eye candy.
I just... really couldn't get into this difficulty compared to the song.
[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
Argh, those flashes... do you really need to have them in? They're incredibly annoying and hurt my eyes.
Make lead-in time maybe 1.5 seconds?
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ?
That intro just plays really bad. The 1/8 sliders sound horrible.
Just horribly overmapped too.
I don't know what to say besides that I couldn't really find any part of this map that was enjoyable and felt like it was showing off the song at all.
Still needs a lot of work if you plan on keeping some of your guest difficulties.
Edit: Looks much better as a set now. Star~
Topic Starter
Garven wrote:
This poor map...
[Easy]
Nothing really wrong here anymore - I'd just nitpick at sliders, hehe.
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:22:709 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
00:40:209 (1,2,3) - I'm not so sure about stacks like these in normal. I'll just mention this one since they're all over the map, hehe. Won't change them
01:31:320 (1) - Really too soon after a spinner... though I guess with the level of difficulty in general of the map, it fits. Eh, I'll just mention and move on, hehe. Deleted the circle and lenghtened the spinner over it
01:34:375 (1) - This is really short for a spinner on a Normal. And the notes right after it... it's really pushing beyond the normal barrier here. Lenghtened the spinner
01:47:709 (1) - Ugh... so many of them... Please cut a couple of the quick notes after the spinners. The recovery time on spinners is pretty bad for newer people. Fixed
[Hard]
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ? Fixed
00:41:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh, what is this following in the music? Meh, you use this a lot too. Doesn't sound very good to me. Don't intend to change this, follows the lyrics
The ending was kind of anti climactic. Good enough to me
[Roley's Fairytale] Guess I'll delete these two diffs, kinda tired to 'em >.<
00:08:820 (1,2) - These two notes kept confusing the hell out of me. They're following absolutely nothing in the music. Please get rid of 'em.
00:43:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where in the music is this?
So many streams in such a laid-back song. orz
02:16:875 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you just get that last hit in there to at least go with the violin?
02:31:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is clustered really bad, especially with such a low OD. Spread 'em out or something. Or you could make it go with the music. which would be much better.
02:46:598 (1) - It gets 2000, but man does it not fit at all when it's that short. Make it last the duration of the "CURRRRRRSED!" or something.
Then general layout is really linear too with lots of straight lines going up/down and left/right. Not very good as eye candy.
I just... really couldn't get into this difficulty compared to the song.
[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
Argh, those flashes... do you really need to have them in? They're incredibly annoying and hurt my eyes.
Make lead-in time maybe 1.5 seconds?
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ?
That intro just plays really bad. The 1/8 sliders sound horrible.
Just horribly overmapped too.
I don't know what to say besides that I couldn't really find any part of this map that was enjoyable and felt like it was showing off the song at all.
Still needs a lot of work if you plan on keeping some of your guest difficulties.
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - such things are too hard for normal, imho. Maybe use 1/4 repeat slider?
00:51:875 (4) - add clap?
00:52:153 (5) - add clap at the start?
01:03:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh, it's hard. Replace at least two streams with sliders?
02:00:764 (4) - replace finish to whistle at the end?
[Hard]
00:24:931 (3) - delete finish?
00:25:209 (4) - add finish?
00:25:348 (5) - delete circle? (it feels random here)
00:34:098 (2) - add finish?
00:37:986 (4) - add clap at the start?
00:41:736 (3) - delete circle? (it makes this combo similar to 01:51:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) or 02:04:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6), which, imho, fits better).
01:26:875 (2) - add whistle at the start and at the end?
02:08:403 (6) - delete circle? [it makes this combo similar to 01:57:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)]
02:49:098-02:57:709 - maybe delete these short breaks?
also delete Roley and Aqua92 from tags..
star
00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - such things are too hard for normal, imho. Maybe use 1/4 repeat slider?
00:51:875 (4) - add clap?
00:52:153 (5) - add clap at the start?
01:03:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh, it's hard. Replace at least two streams with sliders?
02:00:764 (4) - replace finish to whistle at the end?
[Hard]
00:24:931 (3) - delete finish?
00:25:209 (4) - add finish?
00:25:348 (5) - delete circle? (it feels random here)
00:34:098 (2) - add finish?
00:37:986 (4) - add clap at the start?
00:41:736 (3) - delete circle? (it makes this combo similar to 01:51:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) or 02:04:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6), which, imho, fits better).
01:26:875 (2) - add whistle at the start and at the end?
02:08:403 (6) - delete circle? [it makes this combo similar to 01:57:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)]
02:49:098-02:57:709 - maybe delete these short breaks?
also delete Roley and Aqua92 from tags..
star
Surprise~
Wow I remember playing this in MP shortly after you uploaded it. Can't believe it isn't ranked yet
Remove 'Roley' and 'Aqua92' from the tags in all difficulties.
Remove the .osb file, 'white.png' and 'alexander.jpeg' from the song folder.
Hard
01:51:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move this stack further away from the previous object. Because of the stack leniecy it starys at a different position in play mode. You can see this by testing the map.
02:03:264 (1) - Bit of a ninja spinner that kinda kills the flow and doesn't suit the map. Place something else here.
Normal
I strongly recommend removing all 1/4 stacks/streams. You can compare it with 1/2 beats at 216 bpm wich is without a doubt too fast for a normal difficulty.
01:15:764 (7) - New combo
02:09:098 - End kiai time here
Easy
02:09:098 - Place a beat here to end the song.
Fix this and I'll bubble it!
Wow I remember playing this in MP shortly after you uploaded it. Can't believe it isn't ranked yet
Remove 'Roley' and 'Aqua92' from the tags in all difficulties.
Remove the .osb file, 'white.png' and 'alexander.jpeg' from the song folder.
Hard
01:51:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move this stack further away from the previous object. Because of the stack leniecy it starys at a different position in play mode. You can see this by testing the map.
02:03:264 (1) - Bit of a ninja spinner that kinda kills the flow and doesn't suit the map. Place something else here.
Normal
I strongly recommend removing all 1/4 stacks/streams. You can compare it with 1/2 beats at 216 bpm wich is without a doubt too fast for a normal difficulty.
01:15:764 (7) - New combo
02:09:098 - End kiai time here
Easy
02:09:098 - Place a beat here to end the song.
Fix this and I'll bubble it!
Topic Starter
Oh shi, mods >.<. Never came to my email so I noticed 'em just now.
gyt wrote:
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - such things are too hard for normal, imho. Maybe use 1/4 repeat slider? Fixed
00:51:875 (4) - add clap? Fixed
00:52:153 (5) - add clap at the start? Fixed
01:03:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh, it's hard. Replace at least two streams with sliders?
02:00:764 (4) - replace finish to whistle at the end? Fixed
[Hard]
00:24:931 (3) - delete finish? Fixed
00:25:209 (4) - add finish? Fixed
00:25:348 (5) - delete circle? (it feels random here) Fixed
00:34:098 (2) - add finish? Nah
00:37:986 (4) - add clap at the start? Fixed
00:41:736 (3) - delete circle? (it makes this combo similar to 01:51:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) or 02:04:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6), which, imho, fits better). Fixed
01:26:875 (2) - add whistle at the start and at the end? Fixed
02:08:403 (6) - delete circle? [it makes this combo similar to 01:57:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)] Fixed
02:49:098-02:57:709 - maybe delete these short breaks? Fixed
also delete Roley and Aqua92 from tags.. Fixed
star
Lesjuh wrote:
Surprise~
Wow I remember playing this in MP shortly after you uploaded it. Can't believe it isn't ranked yet
Remove 'Roley' and 'Aqua92' from the tags in all difficulties. Fixed
Remove the .osb file, 'white.png' and 'alexander.jpeg' from the song folder. Fixed
Hard
01:51:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move this stack further away from the previous object. Because of the stack leniecy it starys at a different position in play mode. You can see this by testing the map. Fixed
02:03:264 (1) - Bit of a ninja spinner that kinda kills the flow and doesn't suit the map. Place something else here. Fixed
Normal
I strongly recommend removing all 1/4 stacks/streams. You can compare it with 1/2 beats at 216 bpm wich is without a doubt too fast for a normal difficulty. Fixed
01:15:764 (7) - New combo Fixed
02:09:098 - End kiai time here Fixed
Easy
02:09:098 - Place a beat here to end the song. Fixed
Fix this and I'll bubble it!
starThis still isn't ranked?
[Tags]
"eurovision" and "2009" are unneeded in the tags as they are in the source.
[Matma's Normal]
00:22:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo doesn't really make sense, it goes from instruments to vocals without changing combos, this can be very confusing and it doesn't feel right.
Much better than I remember it to be. I would shoot a star if I could so I'll shoot a pink one. And if you tell me when you're done looking at my post, I may just put on one of these:
[Tags]
"eurovision" and "2009" are unneeded in the tags as they are in the source.
[Matma's Normal]
00:22:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo doesn't really make sense, it goes from instruments to vocals without changing combos, this can be very confusing and it doesn't feel right.
Much better than I remember it to be. I would shoot a star if I could so I'll shoot a pink one. And if you tell me when you're done looking at my post, I may just put on one of these:
Topic Starter
rust45 wrote:
This still isn't ranked?
[Tags]
"eurovision" and "2009" are unneeded in the tags as they are in the source. Fixed
[Matma's Normal]
00:22:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo doesn't really make sense, it goes from instruments to vocals without changing combos, this can be very confusing and it doesn't feel right. Fixed. Also I fixed the distance snapping.
Much better than I remember it to be. I would shoot a star if I could so I'll shoot a pink one. And if you tell me when you're done looking at my post, I may just put on one of these:
Well then, I think this deserves a long awaited bubble.
Was going to check this if a MAT didn't bubble soon
I remember this from agesss ago
I remember this from agesss ago
Use this BG. It will make the black bars disappear and the thumbnail will be prettier.
Also,
Matma's Normal:
00:54:236 - Make this break start on 00:54:653 - by dragging the beginning? That would look cooler!
01:11:875 - Maybe remove this break.
01:34:375 (1) - Could you replace this spinner with something else? >_> It doesn't fit much at all.
Do Easy and Normal have to end so early? Kinda sucky.
Also,
Matma's Normal:
00:54:236 - Make this break start on 00:54:653 - by dragging the beginning? That would look cooler!
01:11:875 - Maybe remove this break.
01:34:375 (1) - Could you replace this spinner with something else? >_> It doesn't fit much at all.
Do Easy and Normal have to end so early? Kinda sucky.
Topic Starter
Larto wrote:
Use this BG. It will make the black bars disappear and the thumbnail will be prettier. FixedSPOILER[attachment=0:4f925]3644034706_32437fedc0_o.jpg[/attachment:4f925]
Also,
Matma's Normal:
00:54:236 - Make this break start on 00:54:653 - by dragging the beginning? That would look cooler! Fixed
01:11:875 - Maybe remove this break. Fixed
01:34:375 (1) - Could you replace this spinner with something else? >_> It doesn't fit much at all. Fixed
Do Easy and Normal have to end so early? Kinda sucky. Yeah, it sucks. I send a msg to Matma few days ago, to ask if he wanted to have a last look on his diff. He replied that he's not active and haven't felt "the osu spark" for awhile. And I don't really have the energy right now to map both diffs 'till the end. Also, it wouldn't be so much of Matmas diff if I mapped half of that
Okay. Good luck to finally get this ranked!
Yeah <33Larto wrote:
Okay. Good luck to finally get this ranked!
i love this song
~star~
Wow, this map is almost as old as my own map D:
Here you go, a star from me.
Very nice map <3
Here you go, a star from me.
Very nice map <3
Wow another ooooooold map.
I was about to rank it but why there are some spinners that have no new combo? editor bug hmmm? >_>
I was about to rank it but why there are some spinners that have no new combo? editor bug hmmm? >_>
Topic Starter
Fixeddeepsea wrote:
Wow another ooooooold map.
I was about to rank it but why there are some spinners that have no new combo? editor bug hmmm? >_>
So here we go a 2009 map. (After some spinner new combo fix due to editor bug and its really small things so just rank.)
Goodness, I never thought this would ever get ranked.
Thanks a bunch, deepsea.
Thanks a bunch, deepsea.
o/
Great, now I have a map to play when I get home.
this is so easy to DT+FL, yet I screw up all the time :|
And you've had plenty of time to practice up until this point too. tsk tsk
I'll do that. You have my word.
:D-/-<
:D-/-<
damn about time xD grats once again