всё ок, первый редлайн +5 мс
Thank you <3333Mapper wrote:
i extended the mp3 to 5 minutes by adding some fade thing at the end. just make a long spinner at the end if you want to. or a slider, depends on you
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Painketsu wrote:
Hi! from m4m hi~
[Legend]
- 00:04:599 (3) - rotate this up a bit for aesthetics? i think now its good
- 00:06:347 (2) - move this up to blanket 00:06:095 (1) or make it into a triple, I think it would play
better than the 1/2 wait without cursor movement hmm, i change place for a prev bit, and now there is no stopping movement- 00:09:634 (1) - new combo fix
- 00:27:333 (1,2,3) - this doesn't flow all that well good i think
- 01:04:627 (5,6) - I think this would look much cooler by manually stacking them below -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6966200 fix
- 01:05:651 (5,6) - same here ^
- 01:12:288 (2,3,4) - increase spacing a bit for better flow fix
- 01:13:299 (2,3,4) - move up a bit for better flow too fix
- 01:20:884 (5,6,7) - not sure if intended but this is not a perfect blanket ingame https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6966225 yea, fix
- 01:59:793 (1) - I think aesthetics can be improved here improved
- 02:12:764 (6,7,8) - same as before, manual stacking here looks much better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6966252 hmm, okay, fix
- 02:17:851 (4) - move up a bit for better flow a little fix for flow
- 03:03:505 (6,7,8) - move a bit to the right its good i think
- 03:32:829 (6) - this feels really weird to play after all the triples a 1/2 slider would fit much better imo its good for rhytm and stop cursor movement here
- 03:39:320 (2,3) - these 2 slider arts could get some love for better aesthetics a little fixed. i like this style (:
- 04:20:983 (4,5,6) - 04:22:002 (4,5,6) - 04:23:021 (4,5,6) - 04:24:040 (4) - 04:24:550 (2) - I would change rhythm and placing so the triple ends on the white tick, plays better and gives better emphasis to the sliders and place the clap on the first note of the triple http://puu.sh/t9XoV/d0c945e6bb.jpg
^ although you have been starting triples on a white tick the whole map so feel free to ignore this if you disagree. yea, no fixed (: its fine- 04:28:113 (3,4) - increase spacing so it's not a flow slowdown after 04:27:732 (2) fix
- 04:39:280 (4,5,6) - move a bit to the left for better flow fix
And that's all I found, it was hard since it's a pretty solid map and really cool, good luck with it! \:D/ \:D/ thank youuu
GenDoNL wrote:
Really nice map! \o\
Decided to drop a star as well, since I really feel this deserves ranking. thank you!
[Legend]GL with rank! thank you for mod!
- I feel like the combo colors are way too similar to the background. I'm not sure if this is gonna be an issue, but I've seen maps get DQ'd because of it! hum... another dragonforce maps have almost identical colors and ranked. okay, i'll remove 2 and add 1 gray color.
- OD Should be raised to somewhere around 9, 8 is way too low for such a map! its map with a bad timing and frequent changed of bpm, i think its so stronk + ~240bpm. 8.5 for now
- 00:06:979 (5,1) - You had counter clockwise flow before, and suddenly you reverse this flow in quite an awkward way. I get that there is a sudden change in music, but I would like you to look at this again to make sure that this is as intended. yea, i wanted it (:
- 00:10:646 (3,4) - Have to make some really awkward turning motion to hit the slider (4), could do something like this instead http://gendo.s-ul.eu/QRWz0Yca.png ? fix
- 00:12:416 (2,3,4,5) - Put 00:12:416 (2,3,4) - somewhere around x:406 and y:66 (or even further to the right) and stack 00:11:784 (6,5), would look better! fix
- 00:14:565 (2,3,4,5,6) - Really awkward flow, the movement you have to make from 2-3 to 3-4 feels really unnatural. Consider switching 00:14:944 (4,5,6) and 00:14:818 (3) around. ya! its better (: fix
- 00:22:656 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Weird flow, could fix a lot by just switching 00:22:909 (4) - 00:23:035 (5,6,7). fix
- 00:26:069 (7,8) - Any reason to suddenly decrease the spacing right here? none (: fix
- 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I like this, nice! (Reallyy hard to aim though, but it's fine) :3
- 00:42:504 (1,2) - Should increase DS, almost feels like a 1/4 gap right now! (for example, 00:44:527 (1,2) - This was way further and IS a 1/4 gap!) i agree, fix
- 01:04:115 (2,3,5,6) - Increase spacing between (2,3) - (5,6)! It's different compared to all other sections. (01:05:139 (2,3,4,5,6) , for example!) fix that moment again, orzz
- 01:19:747 (3,4,5,6,1) - Not a fan of this inconsistent spacing, feels awkward! good i think
- 01:31:630 (2,3) - Feel like this spacing is a bit too small. okay, fix
- 01:38:331 (1,6) - Would look better if you could overlap these parts of the stream! hum, i'll think about it..
- 01:46:714 (2) - Put at x:226 y:77 to align it better! true (:
- 01:59:793 (1) - Not really a fan of this slider, it feel so random, nothing like you've done before! already fix
- 02:01:573 (5,6,7,1) - Don't like this sudden increase in DS. Could place 02:01:573 (5,6,7) at x:343 and y:168 for a better angle and more consistent spacing here. fix, but a little differently
- 02:17:851 (4) - If you put this at x:96, y:310 you would get rid of the overlap with 02:17:088 (1) and it would flow better! already fixed (:
- 02:57:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Reaaallyyy difficult to aim at this bpm, might want to have them flow more towards each other. idk, i think its good triples with good flow ;;
- 03:20:765 (5,6,7,1) - Really big spacing out of nowhere. fixed spacing a little
- 03:32:702 (5,6) - I was really caught by surprise while playing that these were suddenly stacked, I'd suggest to unstack them! already fixed
- 04:11:429 (2) - Really not a fan of this slider. no more ideas D:
- 04:12:066 (1) - Overlap with 04:11:429 (2) feels a bit messy. ^
- 04:37:123 (3,4,5,6) - Switch these around for better flow. fix
- 04:51:336 (7,8) - Awkward to aim, since you need to take a really sharp angle to hit the stream correctly! fix
- 04:56:032 (1) - Should lower the volume of this spinner even further in my opinion. There is no sound at the end of this spinner, and the hitsound is still pretty loud! i'm deleted first volume switching section
im noob, no way xdPonoyoshi wrote:
Finally a good map for this song ! gogogo rank !
PoNo wrote:
Well, just want to NM this
00:16:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is off-rhythm, could be better if you made 2 1/2 and a triple Agree, fix
00:19:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here fix too
00:20:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And here too
And 00:21:012 (1,2,3,4) - it's a triple before a 1/2 jump ! fix
00:29:862 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Could be better if you emphase the fade of the drum roll, sounds pretty low at the start, emphase this with spacing change I think idk, i think its no need here
00:33:655 (2,3) - Why no triple D: okay, triple now
01:02:069 (2) - Sack this on 01:01:685 (6) - looks a nicer aesthetic done
01:07:186 (3,6) - Pretty messy overlap, looks better if you move 6 closer to the 3, or just stack it on fix
01:10:000 (9) - You can emphasis more the vocal with kicksliders/DS changes etc change ds for end of stream
01:17:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Kick slider pattern right there can be soooo cool please, try it at least ! done
01:34:664 (7) - you can put a reverse pattern here instead of a slider imo, thats following more the song no need i think, its good for stream
01:59:507 (13) - Maybe you can found a solution for emphasis the vocal, actualy this part is good but I think that can be much better ! without fix now, idk how i can make fix this moment better
02:13:273 (2,3,4) - Why you stopped the cool triple pattern like 02:12:255 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - its no need here (:
02:31:586 (2) - also this change apply on this position 02:31:713 (2) - instead of the white tick ! idk for what, its good now o.o
02:48:302 (2) - change the SV a bit ton emphasis the shred done
02:49:569 (1) - NC this yes
This pattern is really cool imo, just 02:50:202 (2) - looks not really controled, you should place it closer to the 4 to fix the aesthetics !02:50:455 (4) - also this place it somewhere like x 348 y 298, then rotate a little bit 02:50:328 (3) - on the left fix, but without rotate kast slider, only change placement a bit to left
03:11:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - please fix that shape, looks very weird with the reverse fix
03:24:575 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - that shape looks a bit weird too without fix, for now
03:41:367 (3) - what the heck the end of this slider lol D: fix
And I think thats all for me, if you get some mods and maybe fix some aesthetics issues, I can help for pushing this to rank, ask me when you feel ready (after ~10mods) okay, ill try back to the game and find mods for my map.
Thank you for mod <3
kk2112 wrote:
One thing... It's DragonForce, not Dragonforce fix, thanks (: