1. Normal (1.52 stars, 195 notes)

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

MY M4M XD

M4M

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

Insane:

1. 00:25:838 (1,2,3) - same rhythm as here 00:23:014 (1,2) - so why not do the same thing? to maintain consistencydunno why you made that a question and answered it yourself but ok
2. 00:28:661 (1,2) - ^k
3. 00:32:279 (5,6) - here you can not make a stack, because combo 6 "changes" the rhythm and vocalok
4. 00:32:632 (7) - here you could open a little more sliderok
5. 00:56:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add circles in red tick too, because they have soundok i'll try to implement that
6. 00:59:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - emphasize this stream a bit more k
7. 01:04:750 (9) - i think you should increase the spacing of this circle a little more, to maintain the consistencyo shiat my bad
8. 01:13:220 (9) - continue to the other blue tick maybe? because i can hear soundnu
9. 01:15:867 (8,9) - spacing fook ok
10. 01:38:632 (1) - open a little morealright
11. 01:42:161 (2,4) - Fix Stackok
12. 02:05:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same thing i said about red ticksok
13. 02:11:455 (1) - try to emphasize this a bit more ok
14. 02:12:867 (6) - ^not for this one cuz its softer than 02:11:455 (1) -
15. 02:19:926 (1,6) - ^ok
16. 03:02:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - red tick have sound k

Normal:

1. Good yuy

GL Boy

• i not can mod Insane, He has a very terrible rhythm, please do not try to mapping on the vocal
  In the end, I'll give you a couple of links, read them

• 00:28:044 (4,2) - avoid overlap
  00:41:455 - Can add note here
  00:43:220 - 00:43:926 - too^
  01:02:279 (1,2) - Very bad flow, for beginners
  01:03:691 (4,1) - avoid overlap
  01:09:338 (4,5) - bad flow
  01:10:750 (1,3) - overlap
  01:13:573 (1,2) - ^
  01:14:985 (4,1) - Do stack with slider end
  01:17:103 (3,4) - bad flow
  01:22:044 (1,3) - overlap
  01:44:279 (1,3) - ^

makisokk wrote:

Hello form my que
[General]

• i not can mod Insane, He has a very terrible rhythm, please do not try to mapping on the vocal
  In the end, I'll give you a couple of links, read them

[Normal]
Do you have a lame variety of sliders, please think about this yes i have lame variety of sliders, deal with it

• 00:28:044 (4,2) - avoid overlapk
  00:41:455 - Can add note hereI'm following vocals here
  00:43:220 - 00:43:926 - too^ ^
  01:02:279 (1,2) - Very bad flow, for beginnersk
  01:03:691 (4,1) - avoid overlapk
  01:09:338 (4,5) - bad flowk
  01:10:750 (1,3) - overlapk
  01:13:573 (1,2) - ^^
  01:14:985 (4,1) - Do stack with slider endok
  01:17:103 (3,4) - bad flowk
  01:22:044 (1,3) - overlapk
  01:44:279 (1,3) - ^switched to stack

Further I can not see the point, everything is repeated there
You need to fix the flow and change the rhythm in the following maps
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu!
t/441929

[Kurose Riku] wrote:

M4M,


[General]
check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) k

Insane diff too^ k

[Normal]
00:41:455 - Have a strong beat here,don't ignore. i followig vocal
maybe u can try this ↓
i followinng vocals
00:46:397 (2) - Change to circle, than add a slider at 00:46:750 - , like this↓^

00:48:691 (1) -I think spinner here is not a good choose,add something at 00:48:867 ~ 00:50:632 - ,then add spinner at 00:50:985 - ~ 00:53:808 - i don't really like it
01:41:808 - strong beat , don't ignoreadded at 01:41:985 - instead
01:46:044 (3) - star at 01:46:397 - , then add circle on 01:46:044 - like this↓ k


[Insane]
01:17:808 (6,7) - distance k
01:41:808 - have a beat here. but there;s no sound here? :O
01:47:103 - ^same ^ :O
01:53:808 (1) - Change to slider , like this↓

01:55:750 - have a beat here
01:56:279 - ^
02:54:161 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uglylike me.
02:55:573 -have a beat herenu
02:56:103 - 02:56:279 - ^ ^
03:17:808 (1) - Not recommended to use spinner here. I don't want leaderboard to be cl;uttered with the same score so yee



sry my capabilities are limited , hope it will be helpful.
GL : )

jack1817 wrote:

From my Queue,

[General]
➱Change the timing offset to 11425. It is better, really.k
➱Break time doesn’t fit in insane compared to normal.remapping insane

[Normal]
➱Check Ai-mod.k
➱This map needs a lot of polishing.k
➱For the two kiais, try to think of better ways to place the objects like in clear patterns but not so random as I look at it now. i swear they are not ranndom

➱00:18:514 (2,3,4) - Slider angles and positions like these seem random, doing something like 180 degree turn or geometric shapes should certainly beautify not only this part, but also other parts as well.they were not random, i just placed them terribly
➱00:37:220 (2,3) - Another type of slider angle issues is this one. Since it is a reverse slider, so it ends up at the same position anyway. Therefore, I prefer doing some geometric patterns like 180 degree turn of the previous slider or reflection symmetry.ok
➱00:44:632 (1) - Overlap this to the slider end of 00:42:514 (4) - Right now, it doesn’t seem to have a clear purpose for the cursor to move slightly upwards to represent the music.k
➱00:45:338 (1,2) - Third type of slider angle issues is this one. It is better to have the slider guiding the cursor to move to the next object with its angle more smoothly especially in easy/normal difficulty. You should change both the angles of the two slider, or change that of the second slider. After that, the afterwards objects should re-distance snap.ok
➱01:39:338 (2) - For this slider, you can turn its angle slightly to the right so it looks better for (1) going to (2).ok
➱01:48:867 (1,2) - Third type of slider angle issues.k
➱01:51:690 (4,1) - Same issue as 00:44:632 (1)k
➱01:54:514 (1,2) - Third type of slider angle issues.k
➱02:33:337 (4,1) - Fix spacing.but there's nothing wrong?
➱02:45:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The highly overlapped sliders don’t look appealing. I suggest minimizing bad overlaps at any time. i tried lol
➱02:55:220 (4) - Make this to a reverse slider just as 02:54:514 (3) - but no vocal on 02:55:572 - to end the slider

Praise➱ 03:07:926 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Now this is what I’m talking about designing the map with reasons. Very good! yay

That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset
Ask me if you have questions anytime when I'm online!

CPLs wrote:

putting placeholder here, unexpected stuff had keeping me busy ok here it is

ok

I think I don't need to point out much general stuff since other modder said it already (aimod)

- I think bpm should be halved there is a cymbal(?) hit every 1 beat so i put it as 170 bpm. (and also easier to map)
- better put some curvy sliders, not only at last kiai ok
- since your bg is dark, how about using darker/blackish combo colors? cause if it blends in it would be hard to see
- hitsound where (since it's wip, I can mind this)will do after mapset is finished lel
- the ending is kinda awkward tbh, the vocal is still going up to 03:41:103. maybe you want to extend every diff up until here no i'm too lazy

[normal]
same as insane (object placement, not much of an issue here compared to insane though) ok
00:48:691 (1) can be made some notes until break, the instrumentals are still going strongi mapped the vocals and there was no vocal there so i used spinner
01:57:867 (1) same same

01:07:220 (5,6) make this a repeat slider, to be consistent with previous pattern like 01:04:397 (5) and 01:05:808 (3)
basically everything that sounds like that^ can be made a repeat slider, but w/e i know but i don't want it to be too boring. If you see closely the pattern restarts every 2 NC's so i think it's fine

02:55:220 (4) overlap with 2, put somewhere facing right maybe i made it face left imo

fix overlaps too like insane

ok done.