Okay let's do this.
[tatsumeme]
01:05:635 - You skipped a kick sound here.
01:09:985 - Don't know what did you follow exactly, but it won't fit drums or guitar together so I suggest changing those to 3-plets, 5-plets or more like you did starting from 01:19:585 - here.
01:33:310 - Why skipped this sound? It is very prominent here. I suggest adding kat.
01:47:185 - Soft hitsounds sound weird to me, but it's personal preference since you are following guitar there.
02:18:085 - At this bit, soft hitsounds don't fit imo.
02:21:985 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I recommend kkddkkddkkddkkddk or something like that here, it will follow guitar better than this one.
02:25:285 - Soft hitsounds problem again.
03:27:985 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - While I was playing this, I wasn't comfortable about this doublets. Maybe you can edit by following drums there?? You followed the guitar before, so you can do the same to here by changing it to mono finishers.
03:37:585 (270,271,272,273) - Why splitted stream? The drums are continous there as before.
04:29:185 - I believe normal hitsounds work better on these finishers.
05:16:585 - Personal preference, but i think a slider can work here due to the guitar sound.
05:23:185 (164,165) - No doublets here? I'm surprised
05:48:985 - I believe the 1/3 guitar sounds are starting from here. 05:48:735 (57,58,59) - These should be 1/4 due to the guitar sounds.
06:12:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What about normal hitsounds? It fits better imo.
06:14:785 - Maybe I was unaccurate but I tested it a couple of times. After this spot until 1/3 section (a.k.a 06:50:785 - here) the notes are coming late. I suggest moving these section's offset about -10 milliseconds.
Good luck on the ranking way!
[tatsumeme]
01:05:635 - You skipped a kick sound here.
01:09:985 - Don't know what did you follow exactly, but it won't fit drums or guitar together so I suggest changing those to 3-plets, 5-plets or more like you did starting from 01:19:585 - here.
01:33:310 - Why skipped this sound? It is very prominent here. I suggest adding kat.
01:47:185 - Soft hitsounds sound weird to me, but it's personal preference since you are following guitar there.
02:18:085 - At this bit, soft hitsounds don't fit imo.
02:21:985 (45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I recommend kkddkkddkkddkkddk or something like that here, it will follow guitar better than this one.
02:25:285 - Soft hitsounds problem again.
03:27:985 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - While I was playing this, I wasn't comfortable about this doublets. Maybe you can edit by following drums there?? You followed the guitar before, so you can do the same to here by changing it to mono finishers.
03:37:585 (270,271,272,273) - Why splitted stream? The drums are continous there as before.
04:29:185 - I believe normal hitsounds work better on these finishers.
05:16:585 - Personal preference, but i think a slider can work here due to the guitar sound.
05:23:185 (164,165) - No doublets here? I'm surprised
05:48:985 - I believe the 1/3 guitar sounds are starting from here. 05:48:735 (57,58,59) - These should be 1/4 due to the guitar sounds.
06:12:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What about normal hitsounds? It fits better imo.
06:14:785 - Maybe I was unaccurate but I tested it a couple of times. After this spot until 1/3 section (a.k.a 06:50:785 - here) the notes are coming late. I suggest moving these section's offset about -10 milliseconds.
Good luck on the ranking way!