00:00:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this section is pretty weird in terms of rythm, and the stacking doesnt really help with reading it correctly. might have to change it so it plays better
00:10:659 (2) - there is no sound here, you should remove this circle.
00:29:030 (1,2,3,4) - i dont really like these almost straight non-equal distance patterns throughout the map. i think the stacking also plays a part in how it looks kinda bad, but its also the non-equal distance between them. really just looks bad in my opinion, dont see a reason why you would do this. doesnt really add anything to the map. its basically like you are putting them on purpose either horizontally or vertically and in the center, but just move them a little bit so they wont be really perfect.
also generally you do this with some other square ish patterns in the map where you just chnage by just a little of them like on purpose so they are not perfect, i can see thats ur style but try relooking some of them. not only squares too, but like random really tiny DS changes in some parts while in others you dont. for example : 04:43:565 (2,3,4). this is just one example, there are others that are really just such little diffrences that just keeping DS between them the same would just make the map generally cleaner.
00:41:937 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - feels like too much back and forth motion imo, becomes too jittery feeling towards the end of the pattern
02:24:147 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is way to hard to hit because of the flow of it. being really hard it doesnt really fit into this part of the song too well.
overlaps or barely overlaps that sholuld probably fix:
02:13:681 (3,4,5,6)
02:31:007 (1,2,3)
02:51:123 (2), 02:51:472 (1)
01:25:310 (2,3), 01:25:891 (1)
01:48:216 (6), 01:48:798 (2)
01:34:263 (3), 01:34:496 (5)
04:19:263 (1,2,3)
there are probably a couple that i either missed or that i thought you probably dont think they matter and dont really need change
00:10:659 (2) - there is no sound here, you should remove this circle.
00:29:030 (1,2,3,4) - i dont really like these almost straight non-equal distance patterns throughout the map. i think the stacking also plays a part in how it looks kinda bad, but its also the non-equal distance between them. really just looks bad in my opinion, dont see a reason why you would do this. doesnt really add anything to the map. its basically like you are putting them on purpose either horizontally or vertically and in the center, but just move them a little bit so they wont be really perfect.
also generally you do this with some other square ish patterns in the map where you just chnage by just a little of them like on purpose so they are not perfect, i can see thats ur style but try relooking some of them. not only squares too, but like random really tiny DS changes in some parts while in others you dont. for example : 04:43:565 (2,3,4). this is just one example, there are others that are really just such little diffrences that just keeping DS between them the same would just make the map generally cleaner.
00:41:937 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - feels like too much back and forth motion imo, becomes too jittery feeling towards the end of the pattern
02:24:147 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this pattern is way to hard to hit because of the flow of it. being really hard it doesnt really fit into this part of the song too well.
overlaps or barely overlaps that sholuld probably fix:
02:13:681 (3,4,5,6)
02:31:007 (1,2,3)
02:51:123 (2), 02:51:472 (1)
01:25:310 (2,3), 01:25:891 (1)
01:48:216 (6), 01:48:798 (2)
01:34:263 (3), 01:34:496 (5)
04:19:263 (1,2,3)
there are probably a couple that i either missed or that i thought you probably dont think they matter and dont really need change