1. 00:11:007 (4,5) - the missing note between those irritates me every play
2. 00:17:286 (2) - this is the only slider in this section which covers two distinct guitar notes. usually you only have them on clickables. so you might want to make this one into two circles and stack 3 on top of 4 instead like you did in occasions like 00:19:961 (2,3) -
3. 00:22:170 (4) - i'd delete this one. i can make out a weak drum on it, but i think deleting it would fit the map and it's emphasis better, brings out the guitar more. plays better for me as well
4. 00:27:984 (6) - just gonna say that this isn't an actual guitar note but rather the end of one, the note is getting muted here. so leaving it blank (if you don't care about the cymbal that is) or stacking it on 5 might be an idea to concider
5. 00:53:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - this one seems and plays weird. first there is the extended slider that isn't really conclusive to me. as in why is one here of all places, nothing really special happens here and it's in the middle of the second part of a section, so it comes without establishment and out of nowhere i feel (unlike here where it marks a transition and is thus fine 00:55:193 (1,2) - ). then 3,4 and 5 are odd because the sliders are on unusual sounds, or well, the first one isn't on any sound at all even. the sliders should start a 1/2 earlier so it captures both string instrument and guitar, whichever you prefere.
6. 00:55:891 (5,6) - would be cool to have those spaced away from 4 a bit to differentiate them being on snare drums rather than a bass as 4. depending on what kind of flow you want options range from simple ctrl g to putting them on the bottom half of the screen in the manner of http://puu.sh/wKBK0/953e4c79ca.jpg which would also add a note of explosiveness if that is desirable to you
7. 01:25:310 (2,3,4,5) - the gap is pretty offthrowing since it skips the exact same drums that make up the large jumps on 2,3,5. so i'd add a note on the white and place it aroud the middle of the triangle like http://puu.sh/wKBY1/a2aa5f739c.jpg to keep movement low and create a similar feeling of what you had with the gap
8. 01:33:333 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - just not sure what you're going for with this in general except for continuous circular movement
9. 01:37:868 (1,2) - why not just a long slider on 1, there isn't really anything on the downbeat
10. 01:38:914 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - these are also a bit of a guessing game while playing. aside of knowing the guitar notes being on 3/2 stacks the fill ins don't make much sense musically i feel. even if it ends up being the a single plus a triple x3, one can't really know that from the beginning and listening to drums won't exactly give it away, in fact it will mislead anyone who doesn't doesn't purely read on sight. http://puu.sh/wKCs4/3dbba4fc45.jpg this woul dcapture the major drums and would make for a better filler between guitars imo (not even moving notes on the playfield with that btw, just on the timeline and it works for me at least)
11. 01:56:937 (1,2) - how about making those into a straight slider on the same angle like http://puu.sh/wKCzH/6af82fc8ab.jpg in order to differentiate between drum and guitar notes. because atm the spacing and object choice in combination don't really match up with the song imo
12. 02:22:984 (2,3,4,5,6) - is a bit too spammy with fillers for the kind of part it is imo. an object choice like http://puu.sh/wKCFN/ac342fbeb3.jpg would make sense to me or with the second slider being notes maybe if you want to put more emphasis on the transition.
13. 03:05:658 (5,6,7,8) - very weird rhythm choice. there's emphasis on 6, which doesn't have a distinct sound to it, then a gap on a low bass drum, a reinstancing 7 which can work on it's own but then an emphasised note with 8 on again, nothing, which takes from 7's purpose int eh process. so yeah, i'd like to see a retake on that rhythm. similar issues with 03:07:635 (2,3,4,5) -
14. 03:20:193 (1,2) - would make a long slider out of it for the guitar's sake. would work nicely with the same slider but scaled up. but i guess it works if you just want to cut the movement, just wante to have mentioned it in case.
15. 03:41:356 (6,8) - (03:45:077 (3,5) - )these notes are not played by the same foreground drum the rest of the part seems to follow. not sure if those can be justified as fillers from how the part works otherwise.
16. 03:54:379 (3) - all instruments stop here, so this is blank. don't know if you want to bridge for a continuous flow in the transition. i just wouldn't myself
17. 04:12:577 (6,3) - don't know what the triples are for, they're certainly not in the song
18. 04:15:193 (1,2,1) - how about http://puu.sh/wKDqj/1bb0110299.jpg . it puts more accurate emphasis on the 3/4 drum and guitar as well as making a distinction from the following 04:16:123 (1,2,1,2) - , making them have a feeling of speeding up from the before instead of being equal, which is preferable imo
19. 04:24:030 (1,2,1,2) - might be good to reverse the spacing on these sets. having the first two be farther apart form each other than the second two. goes along with the guitar pitch and creates a sharper contrast for the following slider
20. 04:27:635 (1) - the spacing increase (and nc) comes too early here. should be on 04:27:751 (3) -
21. 04:29:844 (4,1) - what's the point of having a gap here? could just use another note on top of 4 like 2 is on top of 1. seems kind of random to have a gap there where the isntrument making up the pattern just continues over it
22. compulsory disclaimer; some of the points reoccur in second or third iterations of a part in the song or in the second half of the same one in a very similar or identical manner (nice consistency). so if anything is aplied ofc it affects those too

20:06 *Irreversible is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1279343 Daisuke Ishiwatari - Condemnation Wings [Requiem Aeternam]]
20:07 Jounzan: ye
20:07 Irreversible: 00:21:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - you used circles here as a contrast to the rest, right
20:07 Irreversible: ?
20:07 Jounzan: yup
20:08 Irreversible: I just feel like sliders would kind of fit the sound more
20:08 Irreversible: but if it's the case,  iguess it will stay circles
20:08 Jounzan: yeah, also it is consistent for all the same places
20:08 Jounzan: i just want to have here
20:08 Jounzan: some kind
20:08 Jounzan: of stop momentum
20:08 Irreversible: yeah
20:08 Irreversible: also a good idea
20:08 Irreversible: 00:32:635 (1,1) - about this flow here, it somehow bothers me
20:09 Irreversible: maybe ctrl + g 00:32:635 (1) -  this one?
20:09 Irreversible: idk something shouldb e changed so the spacing always increases
20:09 Irreversible: imo
20:10 Jounzan: uuuh idk i prefer to give them same type of movement, like i divide it by two sections
20:10 Jounzan: first have less spacing
20:10 Jounzan: second more
20:10 Irreversible: ohh i see
20:10 Irreversible: okk
20:10 Irreversible: 00:43:100 (3) - nc?
20:11 Jounzan: it feels for me more like increasing in that way
20:11 Jounzan: ye sure
20:12 Irreversible: 01:09:147 (3) - same here
20:12 Jounzan: 01:23:333 (5) - stacked this one with the slider tho
20:12 Jounzan: ye ye
20:12 Irreversible: 01:21:123 (4) - not sure if you want nc here?
20:12 Irreversible: 01:23:100 (4) - but here
20:13 Jounzan: actually i'd remove it 01:22:170 (1) - here because it's kinda all the one section
20:13 Jounzan: in the music
20:13 Jounzan: but that would be cancerous
20:14 Irreversible: mhm
20:14 Irreversible: 01:23:682 (7) - i was thinking of NC here too because of readability, but im not sure
20:14 Irreversible: because i mean, it can be unreadable in this point
20:14 Jounzan: what if
20:15 Jounzan: i make custom stack
20:15 Jounzan: with 6
20:15 Jounzan: instead
20:15 Jounzan: like
20:15 Jounzan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8990770
20:15 Jounzan: this
20:15 Irreversible: i wouldn't change the pattern D:
20:15 Irreversible: nono
20:16 Jounzan: well actually i can add it, but it doesn't makes any difference to me personally
20:16 Jounzan: like i don't mind having it
20:17 Irreversible: idk tbh
20:17 Irreversible: don't add
20:18 Irreversible: 01:45:775 - swap nc with  01:46:356 (3) -
20:18 Jounzan: ye
20:19 Jounzan: applied same for 03:28:682 (1) - 
20:19 Jounzan: 05:11:007 (1) -  and this
20:20 Irreversible: 02:41:472 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - hm idk about you
20:20 Irreversible: but that seems like a really weird pattern in your setting
20:20 Irreversible: doens't play good at all imo, why the sudden stop is needed here?
20:20 Jounzan: i like the first part of it but can agree with 02:41:937 (1) -  yeah
20:21 Irreversible: i mean decrease ok, but the stack after
20:21 Irreversible: yeah i actually only mean 12
20:21 Jounzan: huuum
20:21 Jounzan: should i go
20:21 Jounzan: with like
20:21 Jounzan: slider?
20:22 Jounzan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8990811 or such
20:22 Irreversible: tbh i think circle will fit more
20:22 Irreversible: because at other instances you also use circle
20:22 Irreversible: but you're free how you wanna do it
20:22 Jounzan: so two circles but jump?
20:22 Irreversible: i don't like giving suggestion, because i feel like mappers like you know best what's good for the map
20:23 Irreversible: not necessarily jump, but definitely higher spacing
20:23 Jounzan: oookay
20:23 Jounzan: well i like
20:23 Jounzan: partly mapped
20:23 Jounzan: without understanding
20:23 Jounzan: what i do
20:23 Irreversible: XD
20:23 Jounzan: SO CAN'T AGREE WITH THIS SENTENCE
20:23 Irreversible: well i can gib sugestion
20:24 Jounzan: sure
20:24 Irreversible: but my map look like this
20:24 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/xp2tU/5c6232b457.jpg
20:24 Jounzan: still cool
20:24 Irreversible: and yours like this
20:24 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/xp2uo/59b9d59e67.jpg
20:24 Irreversible: xDDDD
20:24 Irreversible: wait, let's wait for this point
20:24 Irreversible: and fix it later
20:24 Irreversible: yeah i love your maps
20:24 Jounzan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8990831 because yolo
20:25 Irreversible: yeah that's kinda cool
20:25 Jounzan: i mean yours while saying cool
20:26 Jounzan: i hope we continue our last IRAN collab
20:26 Jounzan: on that tv size
20:27 Irreversible: oh
20:27 Irreversible: yeah
20:27 Irreversible: idk life is a bit ?_? right now
20:27 Jounzan: yea understanable
20:28 Jounzan: i wish november comes faster
20:28 Jounzan: because i'll get break
20:28 Jounzan: from work
20:28 Irreversible: 04:51:937 (1,1,1,1,1) - i really love how you mapped all those parts
20:28 Jounzan: for two weeks
20:28 Irreversible: ohh nice
20:28 Irreversible: any plans for then?
20:28 Jounzan: SLEEP
20:31 Irreversible: update pls :D
20:31 Irreversible: i'll testplay now maybe i find some more shizzles
20:31 Irreversible: i can't play it but sometimes i have some feels
20:31 Jounzan: ooookie
20:32 Jounzan: o forgot to mention
20:33 Jounzan: i rearranged ncs around 05:11:007 (1) - 
20:33 Jounzan: a bit
20:33 Jounzan: so now all these places
20:33 Jounzan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8990898
20:33 Irreversible: that's okay
20:33 Jounzan: are straight this 
20:33 Jounzan: in terms of ncs
20:34 Jounzan: and upated ye
20:34 Irreversible: how about spec kri
20:34 Jounzan: i do
20:34 Jounzan: like
20:34 Jounzan: HIDDEN
20:34 Jounzan: ARE U TRYING TO FARM PEPE
20:34 Irreversible: ok this
20:34 Irreversible: part is unplayable for me
20:35 Irreversible: so
20:35 Irreversible: don't mind me when i stp playing
20:35 Irreversible: HAHA
20:35 Jounzan: i'm a bit salty about this part tho
20:35 Jounzan: i find it to be the best part of this map
20:35 Jounzan: but people just can't play it properly
20:40 Irreversible: it's really fun to play
20:40 Jounzan: i really hope so
20:40 Jounzan: people like hating it or loving
20:40 Jounzan: there is no opinions in between
20:40 Jounzan: so far
20:40 Jounzan: lmao
20:41 Irreversible: 04:44:961 (4) - nc
20:41 Jounzan: ye
20:41 Jounzan: anything else?
20:41 Irreversible: yes
20:41 Irreversible: 04:54:728 (3,4) -
20:41 Irreversible: 04:55:658 (3,4) -
20:41 Irreversible: can you buff these?
20:41 Irreversible: they felt really underwhelming in compare to the rest
20:41 Irreversible: (other 2 kiai)
20:41 Jounzan: yeah
20:42 Irreversible: 03:34:728 (1,2,3) - this is inconsistent to  01:52:403 (1,2,3) -
20:42 Irreversible: i like the idea of having two different kind of patterns here
20:42 Irreversible: first one is with stack
20:42 Irreversible: second one without
20:42 Jounzan: i left 04:54:728 (3,4) - it as it was but buffed the second two
20:43 Jounzan: so what if i'll
20:44 Jounzan: 05:17:054 (1,2,3) - make this
20:44 Jounzan: like
20:44 Jounzan: 01:52:403 (1,2,3) - 
20:44 Jounzan: this
20:44 Jounzan: and left one on 3:34 as is
20:44 Irreversible: yeah sure
20:46 Jounzan: 05:17:403 (1,2) - also probably i should use red to red tick slider
20:46 Jounzan: instead
20:46 Jounzan: what do you think?
20:47 Jounzan: 03:35:077 (1) - same
20:47 Irreversible: i saw this atually more times
20:47 Irreversible: i thought it was intended
20:47 Jounzan: well it is
20:47 Jounzan: i just not quite sure it fits this moment
20:47 Jounzan: now
20:47 Irreversible: ahh
20:47 Irreversible: okay
20:47 Irreversible: yeah then change
20:47 Irreversible: and then rank tbh
20:47 Irreversible: i think we improved some things :D
20:48 Jounzan: we really did
20:48 Jounzan: <3 irre best modder
20:48 Irreversible: <3
20:51 Irreversible: tell me when updated
20:51 Jounzan: yeah i'll change one more thing
20:51 Jounzan: 01:53:100 (2,3,4,5) - make all the same spots
20:51 Jounzan: like this
20:51 Jounzan: in terms of rhythm