Hello
[General]
-Offset should be 1727 instead of 1739
[Kalibe's Easy]
-00:20:939 (1) - Move the last slider point to x=176, y=152 for better blanket
-00:25:739 (5) - Why not make the slider less curve to better the blanket (move the middle slider point to x=232, y=308)
-00:56:139 (3) - Maybe it is just some picky things but I feel weird when playing this slider. Since the direction of 00:52:939 (1) - is clockwise while 00:54:539 (2) - is anti-clockwise. I suppose you would make a clockwise direction slider in 00:56:139 (3) - to make a parallel pattern but it actually doesn't. It would be cool if you can adjust their flow to make them move consistently
-01:23:339 (4) - The blanket looks not good. Maybe move the middle slider point to x=403, y=184 to better the blanket
-01:31:339 (3,4) - You made a parallel structure in 01:28:139 (1,2) - but you didn't do the same thing in 01:31:339 (3,4) - . Why not make 01:32:939 (4) - parallel to 01:31:339 (3) - in order to increase the consistency?
-01:37:739 (5) - You might move the middle slider point to x=74, y=127 and move the last slider point to x=92, y=194 for better blanket. The current one looks not really good...
-01:41:139 (8) - Why not use another shape of slider to represent the sound here since 01:39:339 (7,8) - share the same shape and same combo but they didn't represent the same sound. Using another shape of slider here could give a better emphasis to the sharp drum sound
[Normal]
-00:20:927 (1) - Not blanketed well. I can't give a good solution to better the blanket but just a kind reminder http://puu.sh/x9EDi/12c428fd54.jpg
-00:27:339 (1,2,3) - Why the sound pattern is differed from other similar sound such as 00:20:939 (1,2,3) - ? It sounds a bit inconsistent so why not unify the sound pattern?
[ErMei's Hard]
-00:35:938 (6) - Unsnapped
-00:02:339 (2,3) - Why they are stacked? You did't do the same thing in 00:03:939 (6,7) - / 00:05:539 (2,3) - . It makes the flow pattern really inconsistent and uncomfortable. I suggest that you separate them to maintain good consistency and flow.
-00:03:339 (5) - Move the last slider point to x=192, y=265 for better blanket
-00:03:939 (6) - Is this supposed to be blanketed? If so, move the middle slider point to x=223, y=126 and move the last slider point to x=189, y=122 for better blanket
-00:04:939 (1) - Push the second slider point slightly righter could better the blanket
-00:08:139 (1) - Move the last slider point to x=116, y=303 to make a better blanket
-00:13:939 (7,8,9) - This pattern is a bit too hard to read because of the instrument sound pattern. I prefer using another pattern to make this rhythm more playable and readable. For example, https://puu.sh/x9FeA/7d53e8da95.jpg
-You did't stack 00:17:339 (10,1) - but you stacked in 00:20:539 (10,1) - . And it shows that the pattern is not really consistent. I suggest that you should unify the pattern (stack or not to stack) in order to increase the consistency.
-00:38:339 (4) - The "tick" is too small that it makes the slider shape a bit weird. Try to extend more the "tick" to make the slider look better. For example, http://puu.sh/x9Fth/a5efa0f411.jpg
-01:02:539 (3) - Add a new combo makes more sense
-01:11:939 (8,9) - Swapping their NC would give more musical sense imo
-01:13:539 (5,6) - It is not really necessary to emphasize all the sound in hard. Why not make a little break by using a 1/1 slider here to make a better focus on what are you trying to emphasize most. For example, http://puu.sh/x9FDh/6dc21c0bdf.jpg
-01:17:339 (7,8) - The sound pattern is a little bit weird imo since you skipped 01:17:539 which is a mappable vocal. Therefore, you might try to rearrange the sound pattern to give a better emphasis like http://puu.sh/x9FHq/36aba66a65.jpg
-01:20:539 (7,8) - Same as above, the sound pattern could be rearranged as http://puu.sh/x9FJA/bfdb7ce5ad.jpg . Now 01:21:539 - can be mapped since it has a stronger sound then 01:18:339 -
-01:23:539 There is a mappable vocal here. It would be cool if you map it. There is an example for sound pattern, http://puu.sh/x9FMr/10bc4fc9ee.jpg
-01:27:539 (8,9,10,1) - It is too challenging to read in Hard difficulty. Strongly suggest that you separate them to give a better readability. And there is not musical sense that you stacked them, it gives a weird expression of the song.
-01:40:339 (7,8,9) - Same as before, it looks too hard to read. There is a suggested sound pattern, https://puu.sh/x9FRf/0fa91e7a84.jpg
-The map has a lot of problem of blanket that I can mention them all. Please be careful about them such as 00:24:139 (1) - / 00:37:939 (3,4) - / 00:47:539 (3,4) - . Remember to utilize the approach circle to blanket them well.
[Misure's Insane]
-00:01:539 - There is a really mappable sound here. It would be really cool if you map it
-00:05:739 (3) - Move the middle slider point to x=271, y=284 and move the last slider point to x=232 , y=276 for better blanket
-00:15:339 (3,4,5) - I cannot see any reason that 00:15:339 (3,4) - should be attached... Attaching them gives a really weird musical transition when I'm playing. You can simply place them closer just like what you did in 00:16:339 (2,3) - or just directly stack them.
-00:59:939 (4,5) - Personally opinion. Why not give them a new combo to emphasize the strong finish sound?
-01:01:339 (2) - I think clickable object would fit more here since both of the sound are really strong. Using 2 circle notes here could give a strong emphasis to the drum sound.
[Happy Ending]
-00:14:539 (1) - Why using reverse slider here? The sound should be similar with 00:17:739 (1,2,3) -
-01:09:727 (3) - Picky thing. I know it is the corner of the playfield but suddenly stacking it would be inconsistent since you didn't stack them in 01:02:927 (2,3) -
-01:41:727 (2) - Isn't it a bit off-screen?
Good luck!
[General]
-Offset should be 1727 instead of 1739
[Kalibe's Easy]
-00:20:939 (1) - Move the last slider point to x=176, y=152 for better blanket
-00:25:739 (5) - Why not make the slider less curve to better the blanket (move the middle slider point to x=232, y=308)
-00:56:139 (3) - Maybe it is just some picky things but I feel weird when playing this slider. Since the direction of 00:52:939 (1) - is clockwise while 00:54:539 (2) - is anti-clockwise. I suppose you would make a clockwise direction slider in 00:56:139 (3) - to make a parallel pattern but it actually doesn't. It would be cool if you can adjust their flow to make them move consistently
-01:23:339 (4) - The blanket looks not good. Maybe move the middle slider point to x=403, y=184 to better the blanket
-01:31:339 (3,4) - You made a parallel structure in 01:28:139 (1,2) - but you didn't do the same thing in 01:31:339 (3,4) - . Why not make 01:32:939 (4) - parallel to 01:31:339 (3) - in order to increase the consistency?
-01:37:739 (5) - You might move the middle slider point to x=74, y=127 and move the last slider point to x=92, y=194 for better blanket. The current one looks not really good...
-01:41:139 (8) - Why not use another shape of slider to represent the sound here since 01:39:339 (7,8) - share the same shape and same combo but they didn't represent the same sound. Using another shape of slider here could give a better emphasis to the sharp drum sound
[Normal]
-00:20:927 (1) - Not blanketed well. I can't give a good solution to better the blanket but just a kind reminder http://puu.sh/x9EDi/12c428fd54.jpg
-00:27:339 (1,2,3) - Why the sound pattern is differed from other similar sound such as 00:20:939 (1,2,3) - ? It sounds a bit inconsistent so why not unify the sound pattern?
[ErMei's Hard]
-00:35:938 (6) - Unsnapped
-00:02:339 (2,3) - Why they are stacked? You did't do the same thing in 00:03:939 (6,7) - / 00:05:539 (2,3) - . It makes the flow pattern really inconsistent and uncomfortable. I suggest that you separate them to maintain good consistency and flow.
-00:03:339 (5) - Move the last slider point to x=192, y=265 for better blanket
-00:03:939 (6) - Is this supposed to be blanketed? If so, move the middle slider point to x=223, y=126 and move the last slider point to x=189, y=122 for better blanket
-00:04:939 (1) - Push the second slider point slightly righter could better the blanket
-00:08:139 (1) - Move the last slider point to x=116, y=303 to make a better blanket
-00:13:939 (7,8,9) - This pattern is a bit too hard to read because of the instrument sound pattern. I prefer using another pattern to make this rhythm more playable and readable. For example, https://puu.sh/x9FeA/7d53e8da95.jpg
-You did't stack 00:17:339 (10,1) - but you stacked in 00:20:539 (10,1) - . And it shows that the pattern is not really consistent. I suggest that you should unify the pattern (stack or not to stack) in order to increase the consistency.
-00:38:339 (4) - The "tick" is too small that it makes the slider shape a bit weird. Try to extend more the "tick" to make the slider look better. For example, http://puu.sh/x9Fth/a5efa0f411.jpg
-01:02:539 (3) - Add a new combo makes more sense
-01:11:939 (8,9) - Swapping their NC would give more musical sense imo
-01:13:539 (5,6) - It is not really necessary to emphasize all the sound in hard. Why not make a little break by using a 1/1 slider here to make a better focus on what are you trying to emphasize most. For example, http://puu.sh/x9FDh/6dc21c0bdf.jpg
-01:17:339 (7,8) - The sound pattern is a little bit weird imo since you skipped 01:17:539 which is a mappable vocal. Therefore, you might try to rearrange the sound pattern to give a better emphasis like http://puu.sh/x9FHq/36aba66a65.jpg
-01:20:539 (7,8) - Same as above, the sound pattern could be rearranged as http://puu.sh/x9FJA/bfdb7ce5ad.jpg . Now 01:21:539 - can be mapped since it has a stronger sound then 01:18:339 -
-01:23:539 There is a mappable vocal here. It would be cool if you map it. There is an example for sound pattern, http://puu.sh/x9FMr/10bc4fc9ee.jpg
-01:27:539 (8,9,10,1) - It is too challenging to read in Hard difficulty. Strongly suggest that you separate them to give a better readability. And there is not musical sense that you stacked them, it gives a weird expression of the song.
-01:40:339 (7,8,9) - Same as before, it looks too hard to read. There is a suggested sound pattern, https://puu.sh/x9FRf/0fa91e7a84.jpg
-The map has a lot of problem of blanket that I can mention them all. Please be careful about them such as 00:24:139 (1) - / 00:37:939 (3,4) - / 00:47:539 (3,4) - . Remember to utilize the approach circle to blanket them well.
[Misure's Insane]
-00:01:539 - There is a really mappable sound here. It would be really cool if you map it
-00:05:739 (3) - Move the middle slider point to x=271, y=284 and move the last slider point to x=232 , y=276 for better blanket
-00:15:339 (3,4,5) - I cannot see any reason that 00:15:339 (3,4) - should be attached... Attaching them gives a really weird musical transition when I'm playing. You can simply place them closer just like what you did in 00:16:339 (2,3) - or just directly stack them.
-00:59:939 (4,5) - Personally opinion. Why not give them a new combo to emphasize the strong finish sound?
-01:01:339 (2) - I think clickable object would fit more here since both of the sound are really strong. Using 2 circle notes here could give a strong emphasis to the drum sound.
[Happy Ending]
-00:14:539 (1) - Why using reverse slider here? The sound should be similar with 00:17:739 (1,2,3) -
-01:09:727 (3) - Picky thing. I know it is the corner of the playfield but suddenly stacking it would be inconsistent since you didn't stack them in 01:02:927 (2,3) -
-01:41:727 (2) - Isn't it a bit off-screen?
Good luck!