Hello, M4M.
Hope this helps~
General
Following keyboards is ok, but in my opinion you followed too much. Since this mod is Taiko, you can concentrate on the drums as well.
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00:07:625 (46,47) - This space is too much. May be you can add some notes which goes well with drums in 1/2. Or 1/4 too.
00:18:389 - Optional. The patterns look nice but there is a drum sound too so you can add a don here.
00:22:566 (128,129,130) - I don't recommend putting 1/3 notes unless it's in the song. And from i hear, there are no 1/3 sounds. So you need to change those to 1/4.
00:24:213 - ~ 00:30:330 - Between these two sections, either use slider because of the sustained keyboard sound or fill with some notes which are following drums. The space is too much in my opinion.
00:38:683 (224) - The keyboard sound is changing at this slider. May be removing it and as you did before, follow the keyboard to fill the gap.
00:40:683 (233,234,235,236,237) - Fill this section with 1/4 kats only because of the snare sounds.
00:44:918 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275) - At this section, the drum sounds are getting lower and lower. So i recommend make 00:44:918 (259,260) - this two and 00:45:389 (265) - this one to kat.
00:48:683 - The drum is getting harder compared to the previous part. You can make 3-plet or 5-plet patterns.
00:51:507 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - Considering drum sounds, they are 1/4, not 1/3.
00:53:977 (341) - kat because of the snare.
00:55:741 - May be it's on purpose but the preview point isn't snapped.
00:56:918 (365,366) - ctrl + g.
01:01:742 (389,390) - Mentioned it earlier at 00:07:625.
01:11:977 (445,446) - The keyboard sounds are the same so 01:12:094 (446) - you should change it to k. If you agree, you need to change the previous one - it's in the beginning i suppose - to keep consistency.
01:16:683 (471,472,473) - Mentioned in earlier at 00:22:566.
01:26:330 (499,500,501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508) - Maybe spicing up this pattern with kats will sound better because the red sounds are conflicted with the snare sounds in drums.
01:29:741 (538) - From here to 01:35:153 (584) - here you need to add some 1/4 notes. Following the keyboard is ok, but the drum is strong at this section.
You can combine both of them.
01:35:271 (585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Mentioned in earlier at 00:22:566.
01:46:272 (650) - Move this to 01:46:153 - here and 01:46:212 (649) - change this to a don to follow the keyboard.
01:47:272 (1) - This spinner feels wrong here. It should start 01:47:506 - here and before that you need to fill the gap between the time i said and 01:46:566 (653) - this with 1/3 notes because of the keyboard sounds.
01:47:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - k kkk k.
02:07:092 - add d.
02:40:330 (181,182,183) - kkk.
02:46:388 - 02:46:506 - these two places, add k.
02:48:976 - add k.
02:49:036 (242) - d.
03:23:152 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - The keyboard sounds are faster than the others yet, you mapped with more space. Try to adding some notes.
03:26:564 (66) - k.
03:33:682 - add k.
03:37:094 (149) - This note is supposed to be in 1/3, not 1/4.
Ok since you followed the keyboard mostly, i'll give the advices by looking the keyboards only.
03:46:682 (219) - d.
04:37:856 (582,583,584) - Mentioned in earlier.
05:27:619 - You can add a note here since there is a keyboard sound.
00:18:389 - Optional. The patterns look nice but there is a drum sound too so you can add a don here.
00:22:566 (128,129,130) - I don't recommend putting 1/3 notes unless it's in the song. And from i hear, there are no 1/3 sounds. So you need to change those to 1/4.
00:24:213 - ~ 00:30:330 - Between these two sections, either use slider because of the sustained keyboard sound or fill with some notes which are following drums. The space is too much in my opinion.
00:38:683 (224) - The keyboard sound is changing at this slider. May be removing it and as you did before, follow the keyboard to fill the gap.
00:40:683 (233,234,235,236,237) - Fill this section with 1/4 kats only because of the snare sounds.
00:44:918 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275) - At this section, the drum sounds are getting lower and lower. So i recommend make 00:44:918 (259,260) - this two and 00:45:389 (265) - this one to kat.
00:48:683 - The drum is getting harder compared to the previous part. You can make 3-plet or 5-plet patterns.
00:51:507 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - Considering drum sounds, they are 1/4, not 1/3.
00:53:977 (341) - kat because of the snare.
00:55:741 - May be it's on purpose but the preview point isn't snapped.
00:56:918 (365,366) - ctrl + g.
01:01:742 (389,390) - Mentioned it earlier at 00:07:625.
01:11:977 (445,446) - The keyboard sounds are the same so 01:12:094 (446) - you should change it to k. If you agree, you need to change the previous one - it's in the beginning i suppose - to keep consistency.
01:16:683 (471,472,473) - Mentioned in earlier at 00:22:566.
01:26:330 (499,500,501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508) - Maybe spicing up this pattern with kats will sound better because the red sounds are conflicted with the snare sounds in drums.
01:29:741 (538) - From here to 01:35:153 (584) - here you need to add some 1/4 notes. Following the keyboard is ok, but the drum is strong at this section.
You can combine both of them.
01:35:271 (585,586,587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Mentioned in earlier at 00:22:566.
01:46:272 (650) - Move this to 01:46:153 - here and 01:46:212 (649) - change this to a don to follow the keyboard.
01:47:272 (1) - This spinner feels wrong here. It should start 01:47:506 - here and before that you need to fill the gap between the time i said and 01:46:566 (653) - this with 1/3 notes because of the keyboard sounds.
01:47:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - k kkk k.
02:07:092 - add d.
02:40:330 (181,182,183) - kkk.
02:46:388 - 02:46:506 - these two places, add k.
02:48:976 - add k.
02:49:036 (242) - d.
03:23:152 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - The keyboard sounds are faster than the others yet, you mapped with more space. Try to adding some notes.
03:26:564 (66) - k.
03:33:682 - add k.
03:37:094 (149) - This note is supposed to be in 1/3, not 1/4.
Ok since you followed the keyboard mostly, i'll give the advices by looking the keyboards only.
03:46:682 (219) - d.
04:37:856 (582,583,584) - Mentioned in earlier.
05:27:619 - You can add a note here since there is a keyboard sound.
Hope this helps~