Insane

I find the Insane very additional in terms of beats that are not in the song

00:26:910 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't hear 1/4 beats in the music here
00:28:465 (3) - I don't hear a sound here
00:29:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the only 1/4 I hear over here is at 00:29:837 - 00:29:928 - 00:30:019
00:58:922 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ only 1/4 I hear is the triplet at 00:59:654 - 00:59:745 - 00:59:837
01:13:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ only 1/4 I hear is the triplet at 01:13:739 - 01:13:830 - 01:13:922
01:19:959 (1,2) - swap positions
01:38:617 (2,3,4) - I don't hear a triplet in the song here
01:39:166 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't hear 1/4 beats in the music here
01:41:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't hear 1/4 beats here in the music except at 01:43:007 - 01:43:099 - 01:43:190


gl

graved for long enough
reply to the 1 year old mod above lol

http://www.hook-net.jp/priministar/down.html
seems like your tittle needs "short ver. " added
better get metadata stuff confirmed

can you and karen decide where to end the last spinner cause you both snapped it differentl. also for me it sounds closer to that sound you wanted to follow if it ends on 01:46:872 - ?

00:16:117 - this part could use some soft whistles for guitars, would sound great

insane
00:05:690 (4,1) - think I would make sense to stack this since you have it just like the 1/1 before and you also stacked 00:04:410 (1,2) -. would also make 1 feel more "connected" with the vocal
00:10:446 (1) - why not start this on the blue tick already like the next one
00:17:580 (1,3) - autostacking on this makes 00:16:849 (3,1) - look weird cause it moves the slider http://i.imgur.com/M8IgFSF.jpg
also the jump on 00:18:129 (3,4) - seems very spaced when the music is so consistent, maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/iqWtJw6.jpg
00:23:434 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't really understand the 3 note grouping here, sounds more like groups of 2 or 4 would fit the guitars and drums better
00:36:422 - you follow vocals all the time before, so I think this should be mapped, only time you skip vocal completely in this part
01:31:117 (2,3,1) - should be adjusted for autostacking


hard
would try ar7.5 on this? seemed really nice to play together with your stacked patterns
00:02:946 (1) - can you rotate this a bit to make the overlapping at the end more similar? would look nice and also be a bit easier to read for this level of difficulty http://i.imgur.com/eZQ2r4q.jpg
00:10:446 (1,1) - yea seems nicer if they started 1/4 earlier
00:24:898 (1,1,3) - looks bad ingame with stacking http://i.imgur.com/cdtJjy5.jpg
00:41:544 (1) - ^ // 01:25:629 (3,1,2) - (this one is a bit harder to notice ingame though)
00:58:556 (2) - jump seems quite big and sudden since this part has no jumps at all, would just ctrlg
01:04:593 (2) - ^
01:15:202 (1,1) - removing nc from both of them would make sense with the song and your pattern and make the next one also stand out more

normal
00:06:422 (4,5) - seems a bit too dense for this part
also suddenly following piano when you follow vocals before will really throw newer players off, so maybe use http://i.imgur.com/9V36BuI.jpg or even http://i.imgur.com/pzRAHOI.jpg
00:08:800 - how about a rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/iBwVqM4.jpg here? think that makes more sense with what you did for the rest of this part
00:24:898 - finish here for both of your diffs
00:27:824 - ^

easy
pls no slidertick hitsounds :c
the way they are used your ticks give more hitsound feedback than head and tail which is really annoying to play, especially since your active rhythm follows guitars in many parts which aren't hitsounded at all
you could just remove them and it would be so much nicer
00:16:117 - part just is so weird feedback wise since the tails usually give much more feedback than heads due to your rhythm and the hitsounding
doing the thing suggested at the start of this mod would fix that
01:26:361 - missing nc
01:33:312 - clap?
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neonat wrote:

Insane

I find the Insane very additional in terms of beats that are not in the song

00:26:910 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't hear 1/4 beats in the music here I tried remixed some rhythm in this part. otherwise it feels quite empty to me
00:58:922 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ only 1/4 I hear is the triplet at 00:59:654 - 00:59:745 - 00:59:837 same above, intend to create intensity to fit song's structure
01:13:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ only 1/4 I hear is the triplet at 01:13:739 - 01:13:830 - 01:13:922 same here
01:19:959 (1,2) - swap positions flow is planned to change twice in each section here, so current placement is better imo
01:38:617 (2,3,4) - I don't hear a triplet in the song here same as first reply
01:39:166 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't hear 1/4 beats in the music here same yeah
01:41:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't hear 1/4 beats here in the music except at 01:43:007 - 01:43:099 - 01:43:190 still same reason, in order to giving an appropriate intensity

gl

Lasse wrote:

graved for long enough
reply to the 1 year old mod above lol

http://www.hook-net.jp/priministar/down.html
seems like your tittle needs "short ver. " added
better get metadata stuff confirmed Hmmm they used「虹色の季節へ」short ver. , not「虹色の季節へ short ver.」. I think short ver. is not necessary

can you and karen decide where to end the last spinner cause you both snapped it differentl. also for me it sounds closer to that sound you wanted to follow if it ends on 01:46:872 - ? I prefer current setting. will wait for Karen's opinion

00:16:117 - this part could use some soft whistles for guitars, would sound great soft whistle doesn't really fit drum samples imo. added in Karen's diff.

insane
00:17:580 (1,3) - autostacking on this makes 00:16:849 (3,1) - look weird cause it moves the slider http://i.imgur.com/M8IgFSF.jpg
also the jump on 00:18:129 (3,4) - seems very spaced when the music is so consistent, maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/iqWtJw6.jpg moved 4 to 1's end.
00:23:434 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't really understand the 3 note grouping here, sounds more like groups of 2 or 4 would fit the guitars and drums better rearranged nc here

hard
00:58:556 (2) - jump seems quite big and sudden since this part has no jumps at all, would just ctrlg
01:04:593 (2) - ^ fixed wrong nc and changed rhythm a bit. I think spacing will be fine now.
01:15:202 (1,1) - removing nc from both of them would make sense with the song and your pattern and make the next one also stand out more removed first slider's nc. followpoint between 01:15:202 (3,1) - looks bad so I kept the nc on 01:15:568 (1) -

normal
00:08:800 - how about a rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/iBwVqM4.jpg here? think that makes more sense with what you did for the rest of this part
changed rhythm in another way

easy
all fixed

nice
feel free to poke me for bubble/qualify

Thanks for modding!

hello free bubbles inc

[Karen's Easy]
- 01:33:312 (1) - Remove NC?

[Karen's Normal]
- 00:41:544 (1) - Is this NC necessary?
- 01:15:568 (3) - The Easy diff has these two clickable so why not in the Normal too? In fact the Easy actually has better rhythm for this part imo lol. Maybe try something similar to this?

[Insane]
- 00:24:989 (1) - Spinner seems kinda.. random? I would understand if it appeared at 00:27:824 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - but it's putting a lot of focus on the guitar and then not done again so I'm not sure what to think about this. orz
- 01:17:580 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is pretty different from 01:29:288 (1,2,1,2,3) - like you suddenly following drums instead of vocals? Could you explain this x.x

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Mir wrote:

hello free bubbles inc

[Insane]
- 00:24:989 (1) - Spinner seems kinda.. random? I would understand if it appeared at 00:27:824 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - but it's putting a lot of focus on the guitar and then not done again so I'm not sure what to think about this. orz spinner is intended to show the raising tone of 00:24:898 (3,1) - . this usage was common during late 2013 and 2014 maps as far as I see.
- 01:17:580 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is pretty different from 01:29:288 (1,2,1,2,3) - like you suddenly following drums instead of vocals? Could you explain this x.x
generally speaking the rhythm of vocal and drums are quite similar except positions like 01:29:837 - and 01:30:019 - . since these are all upbeats in both of the tracks, clicking at each position are acceptable. in this case, 01:14:654 (1) - this part is following vocal and 01:27:641 (1) - is following drums. Using consistent rhythm with near parts of the map could make it simpler and easier to read.

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Others were fixed.

Metadata seems to be fine so there's need for me to contact PinkHeart in-game.

Seems the set looks good to go now. Bubbled!

Thanks Mir!

easy and normal have inconsistent kiai settings, would make more sense if they were the same considering they are both mapped by the same person

also 00:04:410 (1,2) - on easy seems to break ds a bit too much making it ambiguous to read, you can just take 00:01:483 (1,2,1) - and move them a bit to get like 1.1x-1.0x here

should be fine then, I can qualify when bubble is 24h+

Fixed and updated.

qualified!

Thank you Lasse :3

很棒棒哦

IamKwaN wrote:

aww

should be something like this:
Unicode Title: 虹色の季節へ short ver. (no space between 節 and へ)
Romanised Title: Nijiiro no Kisetsu e short ver.

IamKwaN wrote:

This is not correct, actually the official uses PriministAr -プライミニスター- much more than PriministAr alone.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AnbTbvCv0HE
http://www.hook-net.jp/priministar/spec.html
http://puu.sh/s9ju5/0b06caca74.png
http://www.entergram.co.jp/priministar/

As the official also uses PriministAr, current source is not wrong.

And romanised artist must be Haruka Shimotsuki
http://www.shimotsukin.com/

Lama Poluna wrote:

Title is explained in reply to Lasse's mod.
As kwan said, source is ok.
Both Haruka Shimotsuki and Shimotsuki Haruka are widely used, not only in osu!.

PinkHeart wrote:

Lama Poluna wrote:

Title is explained in reply to Lasse's mod.
As kwan said, source is ok.
Both Haruka Shimotsuki and Shimotsuki Haruka are widely used, not only in osu!.

Who cares how someone was doing should be done correctly. So Lasse was wrong.

Lama Poluna wrote:

Who cares how someone was doing should be done correctly. So Lasse was wrong.

Okay
プライミニスター主題歌「虹色の季節へ」 short ver.
So if short ver. must be added to title, then it should be「虹色の季節へ」 short ver. , not 虹色の季節へ short ver. . 「」is used as "" here, and you mean I should add "" into map's title?
And just in official website, title of the song is also mentioned in spec as 虹色の季節へ.
I sincerely suggest you to read previous posts and offered links carefully before slapdash questioning.

And even if you don't care what was did here, you should at least read what others replied to you. I don't think you had ever read my reply to him which already showed these reasons that took my time to post again here.

PinkHeart wrote:

Lama Poluna wrote:

Who cares how someone was doing should be done correctly. So Lasse was wrong.

Okay
プライミニスター主題歌「虹色の季節へ」 short ver.
So if short ver. must be added to title, then it should be「虹色の季節へ」 short ver. , not 虹色の季節へ short ver. . 「」is used as "" here, and you mean I should add "" into map's title?
And just in official website, title of the song is also mentioned in spec as 虹色の季節へ.
I sincerely suggest you to read previous posts and offered links carefully before slapdash questioning.

And even if you don't care what was did here, you should at least read what others replied to you. I don't think you had ever read my reply to him which already showed these reasons that took my time to post again here.

Im dont say use "" on title. Nobody writes in 「」short ver . I have many examples :

1) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/619365 https://puu.sh/wWpJp/82c861a997.png
2) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/452412 http://www.game-ost.com/static/covers_s ... 753864.jpg
and I can continue

This song has a full version and therefore it would be more correct to specify that this version is short. Romanised title is not correct. Must be Nijiiro no Kisetsu e.

Lama Poluna wrote:

Im dont say use "" on title. Nobody writes in 「」short ver . I have many examples :

1) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/619365 https://puu.sh/wWpJp/82c861a997.png
2) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/452412 http://www.game-ost.com/static/covers_s ... 753864.jpg
and I can continue

This song has a full version and therefore it would be more correct to specify that this version is short. Romanised title is not correct. Must be Nijiiro no Kisetsu e.

Ranked maps are not argument of other maps. Also there's no need to specify short and full version now since "short ver." "full ver." were abandoned several years ago. You can't make out "short ver." in Romanised title if it doesn't exist in its original title.
I agree capital K is acceptable. If it's necessary I can fix that.

quick dq to fix the romanised title

Changed to Nijiiro no Kisetsu e. Updated.

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看到BG好亲切，15年窝还试过图;w;
恭喜rank
不知道以后还能不能试图，现在比15年菜多了（run

点的edit怎么变成新的了……