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Foxy Grandpa

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-07T21:26:38+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
sry ur never gonna beat the 2009 map Damn,,,,

collab another or whatever
00:01:524 (4,5,1) - can u try making this less ugly tbh yea i fix
00:04:310 (1,2,1,2) - what is the purpose of DOING THIS THO fix
00:08:596 (4,1) - might be better to blanket this aight
00:10:203 (4) - vocal starts a bit earlier than this Ehhh, it sounds better on the blue tick because if I move it back to the red it feels rushed
00:12:453 (1) - uh yea ik I fixed it
00:14:810 (1,2,3,4) - emphasis is on 00:14:917 (2,4) - not 00:14:810 (1,3) - which is the way you have it rn It'd be weird for the players to have to move the cursor on the off beats for this so I just wanna keep it as is
00:16:524 (2,6) - stack these two? ye
00:20:596 (1,2,3,4) - ok no seriously stop these are so bad to play Changed to something sorta more flow-y
00:27:668 (8,9,1) - gives way too much emphasis on 00:27:881 (1) - than is needed especially for a slow section like this, either stack or nerf yup agree
00:29:167 (5,1) - y is this overlap different than 00:28:953 (4,6) - tho Emphasizing the downbeat
00:38:810 (4,5,6,7) - triple needs more emphasis, space it out more from the sliderend Yup agre
00:48:024 - ???????????????????????????????????? oops
i modded ctb for once im cool sure u r

thx fiery!!!!!!!!!!!

A r M i N wrote:
hey m4m!

add a quiet sliderslide hitsound cause the default one doesnt sound too good imo No need to

[Another]

00:04:739 (1,2) - CTRL G cause its kinda confusing Fixed in fierys mod
00:05:167 (3) - NC Why?
00:11:167 - 1/2 slider ,But I dont want a slider there
00:10:953 (5) - NC? Putting emphasis on 00:11:810 (1) -
00:15:024 (3) - NC since u do it later aswell (01:11:703 (1) - ) No need to
00:41:167 (2,3,1) - why the finish spamDo you not hear the hi-hats in the music?
00:43:953 (1) - nc why? Change in vocals
00:48:024 - circle Also fixed in fierys mod

[Insane]

add hs Yea i know
00:09:667 (2) - small stacking fail (disable "stacking" in "view" tab to avoid this) Lol
00:34:524 (7,8,1) - ^ ^
00:43:953 (1) - this blanket could look more neat mk
00:54:560 (4,5) - too far away for a 1/4 gap No its not

good luck
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741

thanks anyways I guess

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-07T23:35:10+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
sry ur never gonna beat the 2009 map

ascendance
00:00:453 (1) - why is this nced tho dk
00:03:881 (3) - and y is this not nced instead of 00:03:667 (1) - does ctb have some cancer nc system im not aware of or like dk
00:10:096 (5) - i kinda dislike how you just ignore the vocals here despite you following them the entire time prior, even if it is an awkward rhythm i think it'd just be better tbh idk i didnt want it to b a hold slider so i added some additional stuff i guess its ctb not a rhythm game haha lol
00:20:703 (8,9) - wouldn't it be better to have these 0.0x ds apart? or do i have autism They're on the same X coordinate so they fall in the same spot in the game regardless of their Y coordinate
00:37:953 (4,4) - wtf is this STACK fixed it for the AES
01:11:596 - if u don't change 00:10:096 (5) - then make this similar rhythm to it plz Kiai difference i gues lolz
01:18:881 - skipping clap here is Gay ggggggggg
i modded ctb for once im cool https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5692227 ????

thank

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Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2017-08-08T10:59:01+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
00:57:881 (1,2,3) - this plays so badly, just stack if you were gonna do this changed
01:11:917 - why not map the vocal here? idk but i feel it's better this way xd
01:14:060 (1) - plz don't start this on the blue tick it's so awkward doable and it has more pressure
01:18:881 (3) - nc like all the other patterns prior fixed

thanks

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-09T17:06:10+00:00

after a lot of rush, finishing gd next night

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Alisia

348 posts

Joined February 2017

Alisia 2017-08-10T00:07:12+00:00

Insane

SPOILER

00:48:453 Here is no need for kiai
01:18:989 Make this a NC
01:15:239 There is no need to divide kiai here

Good luck!

DeletedUser_10414170

DeletedUser_10414170 2017-08-10T00:52:29+00:00

Hello from my mod queue!
Love this song <3

SPOILER

Sorry for the short mod, just small spacing adjustments.

01:24:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The vocals here are loud as the song reaches its end, and a larger spacing might better fit that.

00:51:453 (5,6) - Has stronger spacing then 00:51:881 (1,2) - Having the vocals with a larger spacing might fit better.

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-10T04:21:45+00:00

sers zgk wrote:
Insane
SPOILER
00:48:453 Here is no need for kiai But its the start of a really strong section
01:18:989 Make this a NC But the nc is the white tick right after
01:15:239 There is no need to divide kiai hereBut there is a need since the chorus is going into the next section

Good luck!

QuiescentRabbit wrote:
Hello from my mod queue!
Love this song <3
SPOILER
Sorry for the short mod, just small spacing adjustments.

01:24:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The vocals here are loud as the song reaches its end, and a larger spacing might better fit that.??? if the song is coming to an end I'd rather have the spacing be lower to show that the intensity is winding down.

00:51:453 (5,6) - Has stronger spacing then 00:51:881 (1,2) - Having the vocals with a larger spacing might fit better.But the vocals are weaker then 00:51:881 -

thanks i guess

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-08-14T14:08:10+00:00

aight finally have sum motivation and tiem to mod le map
General:

01:02:167 - kinda think this is a gud place to start le kiai annddd over here to end it 01:24:453 -
01:26:167 - kinnnddaaa get about the emphasizing part of putting this smol kiai buuutt is there any more reason to put this?

koya fin

00:20:167 (1) - NC here perhaps cos of that guitar
00:37:953 (4,1) - the way this overlaps with 00:37:096 (2) - doesnt really luk so gud maybe putting it here perhaps

yeeaaaa lkz ni koya magmap reeeeee

Rizennnnnn

00:19:953 (5,9) - Nazi NC mod incoming
00:35:167 (2,3,4) - you can space these a little bit more u kno cos I think it deserve to be emphasized more
00:43:953 (3,4,5) - ^
01:07:524 (2) - aaaaa atleassttt make this a little bit centered on the sliderbody of 01:07:953 (4) -
01:07:739 (3,4) - spacing here vs spacing 01:10:524 (6,1) - cosss the 4 and 1 are kinda the same strong vocal sounds yet the difference of the spacing here is kinda inconsistent imo
nice diff reeee couldnt find any other issues

Ascend rain

00:20:596 (7) - mayybee move this to x:251 y:288 to make the stream flow a bit better?
00:42:453 (4,5) - hmmm maybe something like this can emphasize the vocals abit better?

yea sorry if this is a short mod for ur diff but that just means that I couldnt find that much issues in the diff XD

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-08-14T14:53:04+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
aight finally have sum motivation and tiem to mod le map
General:

01:02:167 - kinda think this is a gud place to start le kiai annddd over here to end it 01:24:453 -
01:26:167 - kinnnddaaa get about the emphasizing part of putting this smol kiai buuutt is there any more reason to put this?

koya fin
00:20:167 (1) - NC here perhaps cos of that guitar will ruin the 2 measure nc though.
00:37:953 (4,1) - the way this overlaps with 00:37:096 (2) - doesnt really luk so gud maybe putting it here perhaps its fine, moving it on the left will make the flow bad.

yeeaaaa lkz ni koya magmap reeeeee

thanks

FiddleBlue

287 posts

Joined February 2016

FiddleBlue 2017-08-15T19:35:59+00:00

Hi from queue.
Cheesecake's Easy

00:29:596 (3) - Can you explain why some sliders have weird points like this? Seems really weird when you can use red points instead.
00:35:167 (2) - What's with the points here too? I mean if you want to adjust slider velocity you can just use green lines.
01:26:167 - Perhaps add a circle here since it's a strong sound and start the spinner 1 beat after.
01:26:167 (1) - Spinner would be better if it ends on 01:33:024 - with a blank hitsound as the sound seems to be held until there and the blank hitsound is because the music is gradually decreasing its volume.

skrub's Normal

00:03:453 - Adding a circle here would make the pattern better as 00:02:167 (4,5) - sounds similar to 00:00:453 (1,2,3) - , so players might expect 00:03:667 (6) - to be 1/2 gap instead of 1/1.
00:12:453 - Why put a break? I think it's better if it's mapped as it's a particularly intense section.
00:48:453 (1,2,3) - I think these with two circles instead of 1/2 slider would suit this part better as both sounds are loud. You use 1/2 gap later on, so I don't think it should be an issue.
00:55:310 (1,2,3) - ^
01:26:274 (1) - Spinner would be better if it ends with a blank hitsound as the music is fading out, in my opinion.

Sulfur's Advanced

Difficulty is fine, but I think spacing of 00:34:739 (1,2) - is spaced apart than the usual 1/2 spacing on this section. So players may think it's 1/1 gap instead of 1/2.
Also 01:26:274 (1) - would probably better if it ends with a blank hitsound since the song is fading out.

Finshie's Hard

00:18:024 (2) - A two circles instead would emphasize this better as the drum sounds here aren't similar to 00:18:453 (3,4) - . It's a lot stronger.
00:48:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think the spacing here could use a bit more as the difference between 00:47:381 (2,3,4) - isn't big. Same goes to the second one.
01:14:810 (4,6) - They don't perfectly overlap. You should use the coordinates for the slider end and the circle so that you can determine if they're perfectly overlapping or no.
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound on the spinner would emphasize the music more.

Kip's Insane

00:15:024 (4) - Call me picky, but I find it quite weird that this is emphasized by using 1/4 slider when another similar part, 00:13:096 (2,3,4) - , with weaker sounds get to be a triple.
00:19:310 (1,3,5) - Same as above.
00:58:310 (9) - I think it's better if you make the slider head to be a bit to the left so that it won't lead to confusion that the slider may be heading up instead of down.
01:01:096 (3) - Slider movement may be hard to read without a slider end circle on the player's skin. So, I think the movement should be clearer.
01:24:453 (1) - I think this part would emphasize better if it's been two circles instead. The circle on the white tick would emphasize the strong sound more with the 1/2 gap and the circle on the red tick would help the player if they didn't know it's a 3/4 gap, as 3/4 gap rarely happens on the map.
01:26:274 (1) - Spinner ending with a blank hitsound would be more suitable.

Zer0's Insane

00:21:667 (2) - I think you may accidentally put the whistle on the slider body and end.
00:22:096 (3,4,5) - Maybe you can make this like 00:26:381 (2,3,4) - where a circle is a blanket to the slider instead of overlapping.
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound here would be nice as the song is fading out, so by the spinner being no volume would reflect the song more.

Rizen's Insane

00:35:167 (2,3,4) - I think the rhythm would be better if these are moved 1/2 forward and move circle (5) to where the first slider head position is.
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound here would be nice as the song is fading out, so by the spinner being no volume would reflect the song more.

Insane

00:48:453 - Why don’t you raise the sv here? I think it suits it as this part is more intense than before especially something like 00:48:453 (1,2) - as the sounds are very strong there.
00:54:239 (3,4) - The spacing here is similar to 00:53:596 (1,2) - , but they are different in beat divisor. Players may think both are 1/2 spacing as the first one is 1/2. I think it's better if 00:54:560 (4) - is deleted as the sound there is faint, and hard to recognize in gameplay.
01:24:453 (1) - Would be better if this is two circles instead to emphasize the strong sound on the slider head. Doing something like this made it look as if it's similar to 01:24:774 (2) - .
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound here would be nice as the song is fading out, so by the spinner being no volume would reflect the song more.

Foxaiga's Insane

00:16:524 (2,3,4) - Perhaps make this the same as 00:15:024 (3,4,1) - as they both sound similar.
00:20:810 (3,4,1) - Just a suggestion, but maybe make the placements to be like this: https://i.gyazo.com/d897dfc7499d8cb0f03 ... 71183c.png. I just think it looks nice and has an additional loop flow like last time except smaller.
00:37:310 (5) - I think stacking this with the circle before would be suitable as this circle doesn't have a vocal, unlike the rest.
01:07:310 (3,5) - Perhaps blanket this
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound here would be nice as the song is fading out, so by the spinner being no volume would reflect the song more.

Good luck!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-08-15T21:16:29+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
Hi from queue.

Finshie's Hard
00:18:024 (2) - A two circles instead would emphasize this better as the drum sounds here aren't similar to 00:18:453 (3,4) - . It's a lot stronger. im more following the 1-2 sound that the guitar makes thats why i made it similar to the other 2 slider.
00:48:453 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think the spacing here could use a bit more as the difference between 00:47:381 (2,3,4) - isn't big. Same goes to the second one. Its fine as it is. spacing between the two are noticable and i dont think i need to make it bigger.
01:14:810 (4,6) - They don't perfectly overlap. You should use the coordinates for the slider end and the circle so that you can determine if they're perfectly overlapping or no. its off by 1pixel to y-axis but sure lol.
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound on the spinner would emphasize the music more. its fine. it has fading sound so why completly ignore it.

Good luck!

Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2017-08-15T22:41:15+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
Cheesecake's Easy
00:29:596 (3) - Can you explain why some sliders have weird points like this? Seems really weird when you can use red points instead. its my style
00:35:167 (2) - What's with the points here too? I mean if you want to adjust slider velocity you can just use green lines. This isn't changing sv though
01:26:167 - Perhaps add a circle here since it's a strong sound and start the spinner 1 beat after. For an Easy its better to just treat a spinner as a clickable object, even though it isn't, but shh
01:26:167 (1) - Spinner would be better if it ends on 01:33:024 - with a blank hitsound as the sound seems to be held until there and the blank hitsound is because the music is gradually decreasing its volume. ok

yoo foxy can u extend the spinner 4 me pls

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-16T06:56:15+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
Hi from queue.
Insane
00:48:453 - Why don’t you raise the sv here? I think it suits it as this part is more intense than before especially something like 00:48:453 (1,2) - as the sounds are very strong there. I mean it already raises the intensity enough as is and plus I want the only sv increase to be in the chorus
00:54:239 (3,4) - The spacing here is similar to 00:53:596 (1,2) - , but they are different in beat divisor. Players may think both are 1/2 spacing as the first one is 1/2. I think it's better if 00:54:560 (4) - is deleted as the sound there is faint, and hard to recognize in gameplay. mehhhh, I decreased the spacing but im leaving the note, it's a very distinct drum sound and deleting it would feel weird What no the 3/4
01:24:453 (1) - Would be better if this is two circles instead to emphasize the strong sound on the slider head. Doing something like this made it look as if it's similar to 01:24:774 (2) - .
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound here would be nice as the song is fading out, so by the spinner being no volume would reflect the song more. Ill get to it eventually
Foxaiga's Insane
00:16:524 (2,3,4) - Perhaps make this the same as 00:15:024 (3,4,1) - as they both sound similar. Would just play bad
00:20:810 (3,4,1) - Just a suggestion, but maybe make the placements to be like this: https://i.gyazo.com/d897dfc7499d8cb0f03 ... 71183c.png. I just think it looks nice and has an additional loop flow like last time except smaller.~~Alright yea i like that~~ onnnn second thought i dont really like the way it plays, i want the player to kind of just come to a stop
00:37:310 (5) - I think stacking this with the circle before would be suitable as this circle doesn't have a vocal, unlike the rest. wat
01:07:310 (3,5) - Perhaps blanket this
01:26:274 (1) - A blank hitsound here would be nice as the song is fading out, so by the spinner being no volume would reflect the song more.stated above
Good luck!

Thanks!

And yea i gotchu cheesekake

Last edited by Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-16T22:57:24+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2017-08-16T11:09:23+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
Foxaiga's Insane
01:07:310 (3,5) - Perhaps blanket this no thanks

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-17T04:54:12+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
aight finally have sum motivation and tiem to mod le map
General:

01:02:167 - kinda think this is a gud place to start le kiai annddd over here to end it 01:24:453 - ??? there already is the kiai there
01:26:167 - kinnnddaaa get about the emphasizing part of putting this smol kiai buuutt is there any more reason to put this? there isn't any more reason to put it there but i like it so

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-08-18T01:23:14+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
skrub's Normal
00:03:453 - Adding a circle here would make the pattern better as 00:02:167 (4,5) - sounds similar to 00:00:453 (1,2,3) - , so players might expect 00:03:667 (6) - to be 1/2 gap instead of 1/1. i just moved 00:01:739 (3) - to 00:01:953 - so both express the vocal
00:12:453 - Why put a break? I think it's better if it's mapped as it's a particularly intense section. i think it has a very nice effect, and would feel fairly monotonous if a player would play there
00:48:453 (1,2,3) - I think these with two circles instead of 1/2 slider would suit this part better as both sounds are loud. You use 1/2 gap later on, so I don't think it should be an issue. no, that creates too much pressure for a normal player imo, and i don't think it really fits for a normal diff,
sulfur's diff already has 2 circles so i want to make it different, and i think it fits very well
00:55:310 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above
01:26:274 (1) - Spinner would be better if it ends with a blank hitsound as the music is fading out, in my opinion. i don't hear any hitsound?????? and it's already at 5 percent so if you can hear it it's barely audible

ty, already talked about updating diff with foxy

wonjae

762 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-08-19T20:29:01+00:00

Elite Mapper's Rain

00:03:667 (5,6,1) - There is a piano sound at (1) that i think you can emphasize more by adding a bit of movement or something. I would move it to the right a bit to something like x=350

00:13:524 (3,1) - although i know that you are probably encouraged to tap dash here, you can still walk to catch this slider which is a problem to me as i think this guitar sound should be slider you have to dash to. try to move (1) to x=399

00:58:310 (8) - to me, i think that this singer is emphasizing this vocal much more previous combos so i think you should add a hyper somehow. The vocals are also similar to this slider at 00:51:453 (9) so i think adding a hyper here is fine.

yea thats it.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-20T09:26:02+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
Elite Mapper's Rain
00:03:667 (5,6,1) - There is a piano sound at (1) that i think you can emphasize more by adding a bit of movement or something. I would move it to the right a bit to something like x=350 that pattern looks weird so I did something different

00:13:524 (3,1) - although i know that you are probably encouraged to tap dash here, you can still walk to catch this slider which is a problem to me as i think this guitar sound should be slider you have to dash to. try to move (1) to x=399 hai desu

00:58:310 (8) - to me, i think that this singer is emphasizing this vocal much more previous combos so i think you should add a hyper somehow. The vocals are also similar to this slider at 00:51:453 (9) so i think adding a hyper here is fine. no hyper but i made a cute dash

yea thats it.

Thanks!

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PoNo

504 posts

Joined July 2014

PoNo 2017-08-20T10:45:27+00:00

yo,

Cheesecake's Easy

00:05:596 (3) - Try to keep balanced shapes, thats look better imo, https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/7DnQDUM.png
Same for the whole shapes that not balanced in the map

00:26:167 (3) - I think put that slider on the red tick remove the reverse and add another 1/1 slider on the next white tick is better cause changing the rhythm like that is kinda meh tbh https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/frvYT9H.png
00:33:024 (3) - Same

skurb's Normal

00:03:881 (1,3) - When you make that kind of pattern, try to keep the both slider in the same round, like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/PDwV2GT.jpg else thats looks a bit messy and not controled

00:12:024 (4) - also same problem for the balancing shapes on the easy diff, try to equalize your shapes ; -;

00:24:453 (1) - Also point the next object with the slider, looks better

00:30:239 (5) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/LEbhAeT.png rhythm looks better like that

Sulfur's Advanced

00:40:310 (2) - Gap looks a bit tiny for a 1/1, maybe thats just me

00:47:167 (2) - Same

That diff looks fine to me

Finshie's Hard

00:07:739 (2) - Thats looks strange, rhythm seems to end this slider on the 1/8, you might check the timing of the map, or maybe thats just a 1/8 idk

01:03:881 (1) - Align your slider with the last follow point

01:11:489 (3,4) - Same with the 1/8 thing

Cool diff too

Forest's Hyper

00:02:810 (4) - eeehhh, place correctly that slider, this is not centred with 00:02:167 (1,2) -

00:13:203 (3,4) - Why this is not aligned to the straight slider >. <

01:12:453 (1,2) - Isn't that a bit too much ? maybe could be better with a slider

Try to fix your aligns with straight slider, otherwise this is fine

Kip's Insane

00:03:667 (3) - Why there is no triple, thats break a bit the spread with the last diff tbh

Love your 1/2 sliders on that diff

Zero's Insane

00:13:096 (3) - whyyy skipping the triple

00:13:524 (4) - And also why this end up on a super strong beat, rhythm choice isn't the best imo

00:18:453 (4,5,6,7) - A bit too close from each other, that looks weird

00:46:310 (6) - Looks better stacked

Rizen's Insane

ok_hand

Insane

00:03:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - thats looks a bit off to the song imo, you should just do a simple jump following the vocals

00:09:774 (1) - Try to make a perfect circle with both sliders https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/0n4k4K5.png

00:37:738 (6,7) - a bit weird linear flow try to place somewere like x50 y210

Foxaiga's Another

I don't know how to mod that, the first seconds of the map looks a bit messy, be carefull with that, also the difficulty of the map isn't following the spread imo,
sooo maybe just ask for a serious check on this difficulty to know if thats good or not

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-08-20T15:18:19+00:00

PoNo wrote:
yo,

Finshie's Hard
00:07:739 (2) - Thats looks strange, rhythm seems to end this slider on the 1/8, you might check the timing of the map, or maybe thats just a 1/8 idk its definitely on red tick (1/8 is yellow tick) im not sure what ur saying.

01:03:881 (1) - Align your slider with the last follow point its fine.

01:11:489 (3,4) - Same with the 1/8 thing thats a 1/4

Cool diff too

thanks

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-08-20T23:44:24+00:00

PoNo wrote:
yo,

skurb's Normal
00:03:881 (1,3) - When you make that kind of pattern, try to keep the both slider in the same round, like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/PDwV2GT.jpg else thats looks a bit messy and not controled ok

00:12:024 (4) - also same problem for the balancing shapes on the easy diff, try to equalize your shapes ; -; it looks okay to me

00:24:453 (1) - Also point the next object with the slider, looks better sure

00:30:239 (5) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/LEbhAeT.png rhythm looks better like thati'm mapping the main beats, the end of 5 just does not fit because it's a fairly weak sound

ty

ANIME

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-21T01:52:25+00:00

thanks for the mod but no changes, i think those slider positions are fine

Linck5

65 posts

Joined June 2017

Linck5 2017-08-21T04:39:51+00:00

Normal

00:12:667 - I think it doesn't make much sense to put a break here since the song is so short and this part is cool

00:48:453 (1,2,3) - I think this is better as separate circles

Advanced

01:01:524 (4) - This one is hard to predict

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-08-21T19:01:03+00:00

for anyone else wanting to mod my diff in the future:

no, I will not change the break because it has a nice effect, while none of the other diffs have the break, i prefer to keep it

the 1/2 guitars that everyone keeps mentioning to place as circles would add too much pressure to a normal player imo, and the diffs perfectly progress from that part. cheesecake's does circles, mine does 1/2 sliders, and sulfur's does 2 circles. this is perfectly a good progression of rhythm, so the 1/2 will not go away

ty for modding though

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-08-23T04:12:08+00:00

asdf

skrub

break haha jk
00:02:810 (5,6) - this comes up with a ds error in aimod so yeahj
00:12:024 (4) - ok all sliders looked good up until this one, at least try to make it more even or change it to something simpler
00:47:381 (4) - maybe have a slider that goes from the white tick before to here to follow the vocals a little better (right now it just seems a little awkward)
01:22:739 (4,5,6) - These all have a weird overlap, specifically 4 and 6, so i think you should separate them a little bit more so it isnt weird

sulfur

00:12:881 (2,3) - and 00:15:881 (1,2) - are mapped in completely different ways even though they are pretty much the same thing, you should alter one to have a little more consistency
00:39:239 (2,3) - aimod ds error

finshie

00:15:453 (6,1) - This stack along with the one after 00:16:310 (2,3) - are really confusing because both of them are stacks, yet both have different time intervals. Since you are more consistent with having 1/2 stacks, i suggest you change the former so its a little less confusing
01:01:096 (2,3,4,5) - There is definitely an unmapped sound in between these, do maybe you could have a stream that leads into (5) to cover that whole part
01:08:596 (4,5,6,1) - same here (or maybe a repeat slider) and others that i didnt note

forest

~~Why isn't the video on this difficulty?~~ fixed by foxy i think lo
00:48:453 (1,2) - I feel like there should be progression of this part throughout the diffs, but the two lower diffs do the exact same thing. maybe make this different in a way to show the progression in difficulty.
01:14:810 (4,5,6,7) - The flow here is kind of weird and it looks kinda ugly, so i think you should consider changing the slider/stream in some way
01:24:453 (1) - Nothing really calls for this slider shape, so perhaps make it blanket 2 or something (i feel like that shape would be good if there was a change in music at the corner but there isnt asdf)

insane

00:20:596 (1,2,3,4,1) - what is this sTREAM
00:40:524 (1,2) - tbh this overlap is kinda ugly lol, maybe blanket the tail of 1 with 2 or smth just change it lmao
00:54:239 (3,4,5) - ?///??? haha woah what is this stream jump (i think you should either have it lead out of 3 or stack it on 3)
01:02:810 (2,3,4) - why is there motion on this triplet which is an average piece of the song but no motion on 01:03:667 (7,8,1) - which has prominent vocals?
01:05:381 (9,10,1) - ^
01:15:453 (2) - ctrl g?
01:18:881 (6,7,8,9,1) - same

too lazy to do any others zzzz

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-08-23T13:53:56+00:00

Ultima Fox wrote:
asdf

finshie
00:15:453 (6,1) - This stack along with the one after 00:16:310 (2,3) - are really confusing because both of them are stacks, yet both have different time intervals. Since you are more consistent with having 1/2 stacks, i suggest you change the former so its a little less confusing both of them are stacks but the other stack arent perfectly stacked and it looks obvious. i made the 1/1 stacks abit different to differentiate it to 1/2 stacks. its the same thing i did on 00:12:024 (4,1) -
01:01:096 (2,3,4,5) - There is definitely an unmapped sound in between these, do maybe you could have a stream that leads into (5) to cover that whole part I think the way i undermapped this is fine plus i kinda dont like a slider+stream patterns on low diffs.
01:08:596 (4,5,6,1) - same here (or maybe a repeat slider) and others that i didnt note all these are for undermapping purposes since im not a fan of streams or long 1/4s on low diffs but ill consider these things i got more feedback about it.

thanks!

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-08-23T23:05:09+00:00

fixed all from ultima's mod

thank you!

anime

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Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-24T04:22:26+00:00

Ultima Fox wrote:
asdf

insane
00:20:596 (1,2,3,4,1) - what is this sTREAM wot u mean
00:40:524 (1,2) - tbh this overlap is kinda ugly lol, maybe blanket the tail of 1 with 2 or smth just change it lmao The objects right after have the same sort of pattern so I wanna keep as is
00:54:239 (3,4,5) - ?///??? haha woah what is this stream jump (i think you should either have it lead out of 3 or stack it on 3) Fix
01:02:810 (2,3,4) - why is there motion on this triplet which is an average piece of the song but no motion on 01:03:667 (7,8,1) - which has prominent vocals? Ye fixed
01:05:381 (9,10,1) - ^ The intensity from the initial chorus start dies down here, and stacking signifies the change in intensity so I'm gonna keep as is
01:15:453 (2) - ctrl g? I'd rather have the vertical flow
01:18:881 (6,7,8,9,1) - same same intensity point

too lazy to do any others zzzz

Thanks dad

Fixed all from PoNo's mod and about the foxaiga diff, ~~I'm gonna remap my part so yea~~

Finished remapping my part w

Thanks!

Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2017-08-24T19:56:30+00:00

PoNo wrote:
Cheesecake's Easy
00:05:596 (3) - Try to keep balanced shapes, thats look better imo, https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/7DnQDUM.png
Same for the whole shapes that not balanced in the map I prefer to keep the red anchor on the slider tick, in most cases

00:26:167 (3) - I think put that slider on the red tick remove the reverse and add another 1/1 slider on the next white tick is better cause changing the rhythm like that is kinda meh tbh https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/frvYT9H.png For an Easy I find it's fine to change rhythm like this, it's not like it's an Extra where the gameplay is intense enough that that level of consistency is required so as to not confuse the player. Additionally, I'd rather keep the clickable red ticks to a minimum, having 00:25:524 (2) - as a circle pains me but it's kinda necessary
00:33:024 (3) - Same

thanks

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2017-08-26T16:22:30+00:00

University is killing me. I hope it's not too late for it.

Gero's Insane

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Foxy Grandpa 2017-08-26T17:31:57+00:00

Holy fuck it happened

God bless the set is complete

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-08-27T00:21:43+00:00

anime

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-27T07:40:46+00:00

Ultima Fox wrote:
forest
~~Why isn't the video on this difficulty?~~ fixed by foxy i think lo
00:48:453 (1,2) - I feel like there should be progression of this part throughout the diffs, but the two lower diffs do the exact same thing. maybe make this different in a way to show the progression in difficulty. mapping the vocals would be awkward and prefer to not increase sr
01:14:810 (4,5,6,7) - The flow here is kind of weird and it looks kinda ugly, so i think you should consider changing the slider/stream in some way ok
01:24:453 (1) - Nothing really calls for this slider shape, so perhaps make it blanket 2 or something (i feel like that shape would be good if there was a change in music at the corner but there isnt asdf) ok

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-08-27T11:10:07+00:00

its happening yey

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-08-27T17:20:34+00:00

[General]
- Lower volume until kiais please, 40% is too loud, try 20%. (for diffs that do this)
- Your combo 2 looks ugly can you not make it so dark and your combo 5 is dangerously dark, could blend too much into bg dim please raise the luminosity.
- Your finishes in the calm section before the build-up objectively SUCK and don't fit the song at all so please remove them and replace with a softer whistle thing if you really must have something on downbeats cuz atm I feel like not even looking at the slow parts because there's calm music then CRASFHGJAKSJDAWEI(GAWKOedlst and I don't like it.

[Cheesecake's Easy]
- 00:22:739 (1) - 00:26:167 (3) - finish why tho doesn't fit the calmness at all

- 00:22:739 (1,1) - Also what is this NCing following?
- 01:12:453 (1) - Nice bezier? o.O
- 01:26:167 (1) - Spinner lasts for nearly 7 seconds, that's pretty long, consider just ending the song on 01:26:167 - or using a slider instead?

[skrubby Normal]
- 00:12:453 - Really think this should be clickable because it's right before the break and leaving it not clickable just kills all emphasis it would otherwise have.
- 00:22:739 - zzz finish 00:26:167 (3) -
- 00:34:739 - Why not clickable? You can do a rhythm like this?
- 00:41:167 (1) - please remove finishes like this they're so loud and I don't think they fit on the reverse and end, also you can again make this end clickable
- 00:46:739 - zzzzzzzzzzzzzz
- 01:03:881 (1) - remove NC cuz 01:05:596 (4) - exists basically swap pls
- 01:14:810 (2,4) - proximity is too close imo looks out of place with how spaced everything else was 4 also deserves an nc which would be fixed if you applied the above thing

[Sulfur's Advanced]
- 00:00:239 - lower density parts like this can benefit more from less NC density so combos don't reach only 2 objects
- 00:21:024 - same ^ cuz 00:24:453 (1,1) - is lol and would be consistent with the only time you did 00:36:453 (3) -
- 01:01:524 (4) - Having this as a reverse + circle might be easier to comprehend instead of leaving the last note unclickable because you hold for so long the player might lose rhythm over it.

[Finshie's Hard]
- 00:22:739 (1) - 00:26:167 (1) - stop with the finishes jfc
- 00:37:096 (2,4,1) - please don't overlap stuff like this so ambiguously in Hard diffs cuz they can be hard to read, especially if just done once like this 01:22:310 (2,3,4,1) - this is okay because the triple leaves a long enough gap to read the next slider properly
- 00:41:381 (4,1) - ill nuke this set
- 00:46:739 (1) - STOP FINISHES ok this is going in general

[Forest's Hyper]
- 00:13:739 (6,1) - I really don't think 1 deserves so much emphasis.. it has more than 00:11:810 (4,5) - which is much stronger
- 00:43:953 (4,5) - I think swapping this rhythm with thisplays more intuitively and actually hits all of the vocals.
- 01:01:096 (2,3,4,5) - A 4 note stream here plays somewhat uncomfortably (yes it's 4 notes essentially because the player will start with their weaker finger assuming they don't alternate), try this or this? Slider-end streams are pretty meh most of the time anyways..
- 01:12:024 (5,6,1,2) - Not a fan of how 1,2's placement mimicks 5,6 despite the clear measure change.
- 01:14:810 (4,5,6,7) - Same deal here but switching to drums and merging vocals seems like the better option here, try thisalso 01:15:346 - is overmapped and unnecessary,
- 01:26:167 - Really think this should be clickable lol you don't have to click anymore from 01:25:739 - essentially since spinners don't require a click to start and that loses all the emphasis that the final note has.

[Kip's Insane]
- I like how the beginning of this diff is less dense and less spaced than Forest's Hyper.
- 00:43:953 (2,3) - Uhm, skips vocals but 00:44:488 (4,5) - maps them? Try this rhythm, feels better imo to capture everything.
- 00:58:310 (9) - Too close to burai imo, make this more obvious please? 01:01:096 (3) -
- 00:59:167 (1,3) - Having two variable length repeats so close where the second ignores 00:59:917 - this fairly strong vocal is sub-optimal imo, would make this instead.
- 01:09:881 (4) - Why skip 01:10:096 - if you're following vocals?
- 01:20:810 (6) - Based on your hitsounding this could be a triple. 01:22:310 (5,6) -

[Zer0's Insane]
- 00:21:667 (2) - Sliderwhistle intentional?
- 00:48:453 (1,2) - These consistently get like no emphasis

can you do something to make these stand out more?
- 01:15:453 (6,7) - Could also make this a stream considering your hitsounds.

[Rizen's Insane]
- 00:35:810 (4) - Kinda sounds a bit different than the other two 00:35:167 (2,3) - maybe try two circles? 00:44:596 (5) -
- 00:39:131 - Arguably unneeded note here, can't hear much in the song for it
- 00:42:346 (3) - Probably removing this would be nice to put more emphasis on 4 which is stronger, atm emphasis blends between both and 4 loses emphasis as a result.

[Insane]
- 00:01:953 (5,1) - Tilted not aligned properly.
- 00:22:953 (2,3,4) - Tilted 45 degree sliders.00:27:881 (1,2,3,4) - Tilted.
- 00:31:310 (1,3) - What's with the rotation

- 01:25:739 (1) - zzz not clickable end

[Foxaiga's Another]
- 00:00:453 - SV is way too high for the song, it's really soft here but sliders are just woosh woosh away
- 00:13:953 (1) - More random 45 degree :unamused:
- 00:14:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - This snare emphasis though, it sounds like it should be like thisinstead. If you can find out a way to make it playable it would be pretty sick. Blue tick disconnects :weary: 00:14:596 (3,1) - slider probably
- 00:19:310 (1,2,3) - Too similar DS to 00:18:453 (1,2,3,4) - to be readable as a triple, either nerf the triple or increase DS of 00:18:453 (1,2,3,4) -
- 00:21:024 - Still think SV is too high here
- 00:25:953 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I love anime.
- 00:35:810 (5) - same as rizen

Asaiga why did you map this more intense than The Anonymous?

[ ]
Good luck!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-08-27T18:05:38+00:00

Mir wrote:
[General]
- Lower volume until kiais please, 40% is too loud, try 20%. (for diffs that do this)
- Your combo 2 looks ugly can you not make it so dark and your combo 5 is dangerously dark, could blend too much into bg dim please raise the luminosity.
- Your finishes in the calm section before the build-up objectively SUCK and don't fit the song at all so please remove them and replace with a softer whistle thing if you really must have something on downbeats cuz atm I feel like not even looking at the slow parts because there's calm music then CRASFHGJAKSJDAWEI(GAWKOedlst and I don't like it.

[Finshie's Hard]
- 00:22:739 (1) - 00:26:167 (1) - stop with the finishes jfc
- 00:37:096 (2,4,1) - please don't overlap stuff like this so ambiguously in Hard diffs cuz they can be hard to read, especially if just done once like this 01:22:310 (2,3,4,1) - this is okay because the triple leaves a long enough gap to read the next slider properly
- 00:41:381 (4,1) - ill nuke this set
- 00:46:739 (1) - STOP FINISHES ok this is going in general

Good luck!

Fixed everything and blame Foxy for changing my hitsounds :angery:
thanks

update

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Source:鋼の錬金術師 FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST
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Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-27T18:13:21+00:00

fixed all, thanks for the mod

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:again
TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:FoxyGrandpa
Version:Forest's Hyper
Source:鋼の錬金術師 FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST
Tags:full metal alchemist brotherhood osuskrub ascendance finshie kkipalt asaiga cheesecake rizen aqpw sulfur su1fu7 zero zer0- 0 underforest gero TV size opening
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Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2017-08-27T18:31:22+00:00

Mir wrote:
[Cheesecake's Easy]
- 00:22:739 (1) - 00:26:167 (3) - finish why tho doesn't fit the calmness at all I just copied hitsounds but I'll remove it
- 00:22:739 (1,1) - Also what is this NCing following? Because I can't place anything for a measure after the end of a spinner, consider the start of the first combo being at 00:21:024 - , and the "next" NC two measures later is 00:24:453 (1) -
- 01:12:453 (1) - Nice bezier? o.O hell yea
- 01:26:167 (1) - Spinner lasts for nearly 7 seconds, that's pretty long, consider just ending the song on 01:26:167 - or using a slider instead? teehee I extented it in the last mod, I'll just put a circle

thanks

defiance

503 posts

Joined July 2015

defiance 2017-08-27T21:20:16+00:00

fixed all except for the hitsounds which you can blame foxy for

Sulfur

278 posts

Joined December 2014

Sulfur 2017-08-28T11:34:46+00:00

FiddleBlue wrote:
Difficulty is fine, but I think spacing of 00:34:739 (1,2) - is spaced apart than the usual 1/2 spacing on this section. So players may think it's 1/1 gap instead of 1/2. Fixed
Also 01:26:274 (1) - would probably better if it ends with a blank hitsound since the song is fading out I leave hitsounding things up to Foxy I guess

PoNo wrote:
00:40:310 (2) - Gap looks a bit tiny for a 1/1, maybe thats just me

00:47:167 (2) - Same

That diff looks fine to me

Fixed both

Ultima Fox wrote:
00:12:881 (2,3) - and 00:15:881 (1,2) - are mapped in completely different ways even though they are pretty much the same thing, you should alter one to have a little more consistency
00:39:239 (2,3) - aimod ds error
Fixed both

Mir wrote:
- 00:00:239 - lower density parts like this can benefit more from less NC density so combos don't reach only 2 objects
- 00:21:024 - same ^ cuz 00:24:453 (1,1) - is lol and would be consistent with the only time you did 00:36:453 (3) -
- Having this as a reverse + circle might be easier to comprehend instead of leaving the last note unclickable because you hold for so long the player might lose rhythm over it.
Fixed all

Thanks everyone c:

update

osu file format v14

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Version:Sulfur's Advanced
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