you're a good guy, hope the mapset goes well c:
thanks alot toy I will try my best to get this in the ranked section sooner or later!Toy wrote:
you're a good guy, hope the mapset goes well c:
WhytFng wrote:
Lama Poluna (too lazy to write timestamps anymore)\02:36:520 - where's the kick here? what happened?? NANI???? I think you missed an SV point here, or something weird happened, since this slider should end on a blue tick according to the rest of this section. +
02:40:793 (1,2) - The strong curve here is a bit awkward both in entrance and exit, perhaps something like this would be a little better
02:45:677 (3,4) - 02:50:910 (1,2) - I'm not going to mention awkward flow since these are visually oriented patterns, but keep flow in mind all the time™
02:50:038 (5,6) - unintroduced gimmick like this should be introduced earlier in your section if you intend to use them, so either stack this, make all three even, or find a way to do this more often and earlier +
02:52:000 (2) - NC any time you use a new SV that is noticably different from the previous group of objects+
02:52:000 (2,3,4,5) - here, the rhythm you favor is much different than 02:40:793 (1,2,1,2) -, not sure if intentional o r not since it could be justified either way. Please explain what you're highlighting in either of these sections, I guess, or at least think about it, to ensure good cohesion 👍 they are different
02:53:003 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - sv nightmare fuel confirmed
lolFser wrote:
kaifin and ameth ruined it
please try to preserve playability if you want to push songs like this into the ranked/qual section
the music may sound like a mess but that does not mean the map needs to look like one too
alrighty thenvanucik wrote:
requested by neilperry
FoxyGrandPa
01:03:817 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i can't understand why you changed the rhythm w\o any reason what do you mean without any reason, are we even listening to th same song?
This is clearly a buildup into the next section
the sound in 00:44:980 - , 00:45:503 - , 00:46:026 - is not different than 01:04:340 - , 01:04:863 - , 01:05:386 - , but u changed rhythm, why did you decide to change it at the end? i might not bother you, but this unexpected change adds a inconsistency in ur partFoxyGrandpa wrote:
alrighty thenvanucik wrote:
requested by neilperry
FoxyGrandPa
01:03:817 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i can't understand why you changed the rhythm w\o any reason what do you mean without any reason, are we even listening to th same song?
This is clearly a buildup into the next section
FoxyGrandpa wrote:
This is clearly a buildup into the next section
EijiKuinbii wrote:
Kaifin03:23:875 (2,3) - hard to read and?
03:34:253 (1,2,1,2) - 03:35:648 (1,2,1,2) - ^Vacuous wrote:
short (and pretty bad) mod
03:32:596 (1) - maybe make it a kickslider to emphasize the sound on it more? no it gives more emphasis to make both clickable and emphasizes the dividedness of the 3 sets of 2 notes
03:37:654 (1) - I don't get why this is an nc for consistency + readability, without it the spacing could get confusing
that's basically it. Good luck ranking
I posted an update to fix these a while ago but yea[A L P H A] wrote:
foxygrandpa
- 00:52:828 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - i played this and i didnt read these very well, it made me think it was only 2. if possible change them plz
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