from my queue~
[Easy]
[Easy]
- 00:16:943 (1) - curve other way so it flows better into 00:17:523 (2) - kinda like at 00:19:262 (1,2) -
- 00:19:842 (2,3) - since new players tend to follow sliderbodies all the way through, suggest this: http://puu.sh/nClt9/ad7834aa6b.jpg
- 00:58:683 (1) - move slightly left so the gaps between 00:57:378 (3,4,1) - are all the same. will help improve visuals http://puu.sh/nClKa/91b6e7b417.jpg
- 01:01:001 (1) - same idea here, curve this slider less
- 01:14:335 (1,2) - better blanket
- 01:36:074 (1) - delete note, since 3 beats isn't enough time after spinner for easy diff and the strong beat starts at 01:36:364 (2) -
- 02:42:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't introduce a bunch of 1/2 rhythms in an easy diff, especially since the exact same part at 00:49:407 (1,2,3) - uses no 1/2 rhythms
- 01:29:117 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm so beat at 01:29:407 - is clickable
- 00:18:538 (2) - try this instead. matches vocal better http://puu.sh/nCmYK/3b0158f032.jpg
- 01:41:291 (4,1) - ctrl+g rhythm
- 02:56:074 (5,6,7) - pretty weird that you didn't use a single triplet rhythm until 02:56:074 (5,6,7) - . it's almost like you realized you didn't have any triplets for a hard and decided to cram as many as possible into the end. For consistency, I'd either remove these these triplets, or add some more in places like 00:53:465 (5) - 01:00:856 - 01:01:146 - etc...
- 00:53:465 (4) - remove a repeat and add a note at 00:53:755 -
- 01:22:885 (5) - buzz-y sound doesn't start until red tick, so recommend something like this http://puu.sh/nCo8w/f40eab2ff3.jpg
- 00:53:393 (2) - i would delete this note so stream starts when the vocal ends
- 00:57:378 (1,2) - ctrl+g
- 01:31:581 (1,2) - prefer if this was 1/1 slider instead for consistency
- 01:37:813 (5,1) - blanket instead of stack?
- 01:48:683 (4,5) - break into two notes so guitar sound at 01:49:842 - is clickable?
- Just as a general comment, some of your stacks felt inconsistent/a little strange to play. For example, 00:06:219 (5,1) - is stacked but 00:10:711 (4,1) - has movement. 00:15:639 (1) - emphasized vocal, but the stack at 00:17:958 (3,1) - places too much emphasis on drums. 01:22:306 (2,3) - represents two different sounds and should be unstacked, etc...