hello, m4m
[jonthanlfj]
01:24:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i understand what you want to do with the movement here, though it's a lot less straining than the rest of your other patterns that intend to do that, a player could simply find the sweet spot and not move their cursor very much, i suggest trying to change the pattern there because it creates a somewhat inconsistent intensity for that part
01:30:328 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - how come you do 1234 ncing then switch to 123 ncing, seems a bit inconsistent
01:32:027 (3,1) - the sudden increase in spacing here is kinda unfitting and a bit awkward considering the song's intensity is the same
01:50:328 (3,4,5,1) - this is so much harsher than 01:44:291 (3,4,5,1) - even tho they are the same pattern, probably suggest lowering distance on 1
02:08:253 (2,1) - the random anti jump here doesn't necessarily create pressure and it kind of just feels a bit random considering how you've arranged circles
02:43:819 (6,7) - leaving this stacked is kinda ehhh because the drums are getting more intense, maybe try and space 6,7 out to try and create more emphasis, kinda like what you did here 03:03:442 (6,7) -
02:46:555 (6,7,8) - oof, this is extremely harsh, it's about as harsh as some of the similar arrangements in the kiai, i suggest reducing this
03:11:461 (1,2,3) - how come you leave these triples stacked but the rest of the triples spaced out, it's very :thinking:
04:28:819 (3,4,5) - transition here results in really awkward cursor movement, i understand your need for patterning but this is really meh
04:33:725 (4,5,6,7,1) - i know the drums are weaker than usual here but i think the spacing doesn't need to be that low, a slight increase would work
04:50:894 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - spicy
[jonathanlfj]
05:16:366 (3,4,5,6) - seems kinda random and i don't hear the strong drums in this so i think the high spacing here is quite unwarrented
05:26:083 (2,3,4,5) - why do you space these out differently it just looks quite weird
06:31:649 (1,2,3) - this really surprised me with how much the spacing is
good stuff as usual! good luck