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Plaudible

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2017-07-02T01:40:37+00:00

quick irc check/discussion over extra

18:38 IceKalt: hey~
18:38 Plaudible: hey :) what's up?
18:38 IceKalt: are you busy atm?
18:38 Plaudible: not really
18:39 IceKalt: you have time for a irc / or testplay if you dont feel like irc?
18:39 Plaudible: sure ^^
18:39 IceKalt: oh noice ^^
18:40 IceKalt: but beware - you are like the first one who is modding this map^^
18:40 *IceKalt is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1343172 fhana - little secret magic [Extra]]
18:41 IceKalt: than extra
18:41 IceKalt: and yea - need to think of a better name for the top diff
18:44 Plaudible: hmm
18:44 Plaudible: this is pretty nice
18:45 IceKalt: thanks^^
18:45 Plaudible:  i like that you're consistent with concepts throughout, just have a few things i wanna nitpick though
18:46 Plaudible: the intro and ending to this song have like constant drum rolls
18:46 Plaudible: it'd be cool if you could introduce those 1/4 rhythms somehow more
18:46 Plaudible: it feels awkward playing 1/1 sliders when all i hear is 1/4 drums in the bg along with the piano
18:46 Plaudible: in an extra you could probably incorporate more of those rhythms into this
18:47 IceKalt: uhm
18:47 IceKalt: which drums do you mean :D
18:47 Plaudible: starting at 00:00:352 (1) - 
18:47 Plaudible: going until 00:07:717 (1) - 
18:48 Plaudible: also you make a lot of strong sounds not clicakble
18:48 Plaudible: clickable*
18:48 Plaudible: take the white tick on 00:09:559 (7) - or 00:13:069 (2) - for example
18:48 Plaudible: even when following vocals you want to be sure you don't override some of these important sounds
18:48 IceKalt: 00:07:103 -
18:48 Plaudible: and yeah there too XD
18:48 IceKalt: well
18:49 IceKalt: when i have really strong vocals -
18:49 IceKalt: i want to really emphazise them
18:49 IceKalt: and if there is a beat
18:49 Plaudible: exactly
18:49 Plaudible: building on that though
18:49 Plaudible: when you add more rhythms into it
18:49 Plaudible: you arent taking away from it
18:49 Plaudible: if anything, by making it harder to play
18:49 Plaudible: you add to the vocals there
18:49 Plaudible: just a long slider to follow through doesn't really match the intensity of the vocals yknow?
18:50 IceKalt: i guess you are looking at 00:12:609 (1,2) -
18:50 IceKalt: for example
18:50 Plaudible: yea or 00:15:058 (7,8) - 
18:50 Plaudible: oh also
18:50 Plaudible: be sure to check aimod you have a lot of snapping issues
18:51 IceKalt: OH
18:51 IceKalt: what the
18:51 Plaudible: might be since you did sv changes or timing changes
18:51 IceKalt: when i checked last time there was nothing
18:51 IceKalt: probably
18:52 Plaudible: and if you are following vocals strongly, make sure you do consistently, since you're missing out on some points like 00:22:099 (6) - 
18:53 IceKalt: well - i did this there because a even strogner vocal was following after that~
18:53 Plaudible: i think spacing emphasis would be more appropriate then if you want to focus on strength in vocals :)
18:53 Plaudible: or flow
18:54 Plaudible: something like http://puu.sh/wzmsO/ba41945933.jpg perhaps
18:55 IceKalt: i like you solution there
18:55 IceKalt: well + consistency because of 00:24:548 (8) -
18:55 Plaudible: ^^
18:55 IceKalt: thats like the same part
18:55 Plaudible: oh another thing
18:55 Plaudible: 00:32:048 (1) - 
18:55 Plaudible: 00:36:946 (1) - 
18:55 Plaudible: these dont really exist in the music
18:56 Plaudible: even though you're following the drums here, since there's so little to map to i think you really need to do both vocals and drums
18:56 IceKalt: i wanted an offbeat there to emphasise the upcoming intensity
18:57 Plaudible: mm even then, you should avoid throwing in rhythms that dont exist in the song
18:58 IceKalt: i need more opinions there - you are probably right there
18:58 IceKalt: but i wanna let this atm
18:58 Plaudible: your call, no worries
18:58 Plaudible: 00:46:895 (1,2,1,2) - imo these should be spaced a lot more
18:58 Plaudible: since the vocals get a lot stronger going into the chorus
18:58 Plaudible: im talkin like http://puu.sh/wzmDT/20640cfd4d.jpg
18:59 Plaudible: it'll make the jumps ahead be easier too
18:59 Plaudible: and feel a bit more natural
18:59 IceKalt: i can do this i guess
18:59 Plaudible: 00:58:987 - triple here, drums in te bg
19:00 IceKalt: fixed
19:00 Plaudible: 01:02:661 (4,5,6) - i get the vocals being followed here, but consider this rhythm maybe: http://puu.sh/wzmHc/30adb3bc6f.jpg since the drum gets sorta lost
19:00 Plaudible: on the sliderend
19:01 IceKalt: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8488322
19:02 IceKalt: that should work
19:02 Plaudible:  o7 looks good
19:02 Plaudible: 01:04:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
19:02 Plaudible: this isnt bad persay, but the way it's incorporated doesnt play too well
19:02 Plaudible: since for the strong parts you've been using sharp angled jumps
19:02 Plaudible: switching to linear jumps is extremely noticeable in gameplay and can be really awkward to play out
19:03 Plaudible: 01:18:426 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - consistency with the other part, it's a triple ;u
19:03 Plaudible: 01:23:630 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again the linear flow deal, and these jumps are a lot smaller than your others though i feel you could go bigger
19:04 IceKalt: i dont feel like making them bigger
19:04 Plaudible: compare it to 01:04:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - though :c
19:04 IceKalt: cause its like an introduction - the jumps should get more difficult to play
19:05 IceKalt: but here the jump part is much longer you see?
19:05 IceKalt: so starting off smaller makes it a bit easier
19:05 Plaudible: here lemme try another approach
19:05 Plaudible: compare 01:24:089 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - directly to 01:26:079 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - purely from the song
19:06 Plaudible: they're pretty much identical by sound, though they play a lot different
19:06 Plaudible: i get what you're going for, but this drastic of a change between the same section is a little much
19:06 Plaudible: also note in the final pattern at 01:28:528 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - there's a lot of 1/4 rhythms
19:07 IceKalt: but the mains are -1- 2 3 -1- 2 3...
19:08 IceKalt: you can check this when you turn off speed by 25%
19:08 IceKalt: like the other jump parts
19:08 Plaudible: wait wha
19:08 Plaudible: not complaining about how you emhpasize the jumps, it's right that 1 is emphasized
19:08 Plaudible: but it's just how the spacing devlops
19:09 IceKalt: hm
19:09 Plaudible: and in the last one the rhythm gets quite odd if you literally follow it as it is, something like: http://puu.sh/wzn0W/3bff62c9d8.jpg
19:12 IceKalt: uhm idk but i cant follow your thoughts :(
19:13 IceKalt: or do you mean that the rythm is like this how you showed me
19:13 Plaudible: yeah it is at 01:28:528 (1) - 
19:13 Plaudible: might be weird to incorporate but it could be something you could play around with
19:13 IceKalt: uh
19:14 IceKalt: i thinks thats like unplayable
19:14 IceKalt: and would fit in the map
19:14 IceKalt: i dint had like theese complicated rythms anywhere
19:14 IceKalt: well - they are not that complicated - but for the map they are
19:14 Plaudible: you could simplify it into something like this perhaps/
19:14 Plaudible: http://puu.sh/wznbJ/05484be790.jpg
19:16 IceKalt: i guess i let the ryth at it is cause thats like a compleatly other thing i did before
19:16 IceKalt: cause i mostly dont use triples in the map
19:17 IceKalt: and it would be unfitting if the final would be triple spam
19:17 Plaudible: well, not particularly
19:17 Plaudible: the point of mapping is to directly represent the song as much as possible
19:17 Plaudible: if the song gets weird it's okay if your map does too
19:17 IceKalt: or its just that i dislike it xD
19:17 Plaudible: triples arent too out of the ordinary, and it'd fit for sure
19:17 Plaudible:  /shrug again, your call
19:18 IceKalt: I'll try remapping that tomorrow with the triples
19:18 IceKalt: that would take too long now
19:18 Plaudible: kk
19:18 IceKalt: and i can decide then what i will choose ^^
19:18 Plaudible: same spiel about the ending as the intro, streaming would be dope for 01:33:440 (1) - 
19:18 Plaudible: cause of all the 1/4 drums
19:19 IceKalt: spiel? :D
19:19 Plaudible: those rolls definitely deserve it that drummers' hands are probably dead
19:19 Plaudible: uhh thing that i said earlier
19:19 Plaudible: dont overwrite the 1/4 rhythms, incorporate them
19:19 Plaudible: last little thing i got is that 01:42:624 (1) - the sliderend here should be clickable, it's a strong sound just as strong as the head's sound
19:20 IceKalt: probably yea
19:21 Plaudible: try to play around with some new aesethetics, everything just felt like blankets so it wasn't exciting visually
19:21 IceKalt: uhm :D
19:21 IceKalt: mapping around blankets is like the thing i do
19:22 *IceKalt is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1312305 Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori]
19:22 IceKalt: look for example this
19:22 Plaudible: i assure you everyone does XD
19:22 IceKalt: this is like purely blaking circular mapping
19:22 Plaudible: but
19:22 Plaudible: theres more you can do
19:22 Plaudible: overlaps arent necessarily bad, and you can incorporate them into your map
19:23 IceKalt: you see - im realtively new to mapping so things like handling overlaps - thats like a thing i need to learn
19:23 Plaudible: parallel structure really add to aesthetics, things like http://puu.sh/wznvN/52861698ee.jpg
19:23 Plaudible: yeah dude no worries
19:23 Plaudible: takes a while to figure out how to use them well
19:24 Plaudible: just look at how other maps incorporate them and play around with some ideas :)
19:24 IceKalt: well i did some of theese in the insane
19:24 IceKalt: 01:40:786 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) -
19:26 IceKalt: (and btw dont complain about spread/hitsounds/etc - this map is 3 days old :D
19:27 Plaudible: XD
19:27 Plaudible: yeah things like that are cool
19:29 IceKalt: in this map i used wide angle more consistently
19:29 IceKalt: diff*
19:30 Plaudible: oh last thing, nc slider SV changes and stuff like at 01:01:130 (8) -  in the insane
19:31 IceKalt: should i do it in the extra too?
19:31 IceKalt: cause i have the exact same sv change there (with the same pattern
19:35 Plaudible: oh yeah ofc
19:38 IceKalt: thanks for the mod ^^
19:38 IceKalt: you can post it in the thread - whats your overall opinion of the map?
19:39 Plaudible: sure sure
19:39 Plaudible: hmm
19:39 Plaudible: it's a good start and has some neat ideas but you can do a lot more with it
19:39 Plaudible: will be a while before this is near a quality that bn's might find worth pushing forward
19:39 Plaudible: but it's fairly solid nonetheless

h1b1k11

261 posts

Joined April 2014

h1b1k11 2017-07-14T15:17:35+00:00

Came from my Queue.

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00:00:812 (3) - The end of slider 3 should go to where this slider 00:01:579 (1) starts: https://puu.sh/wJo4J/54412d1fa0.jpg
This is so slider 3 can line up and be parallel to slider 1 (and look neater). If you do do this, then you'll have to move circle 2 more to the right.
00:01:272 (5,1) - Make these sliders vertical because it's looks a bit random tilted to the side. Another way you could do is to tilt slider 1 the same way as slider 5.
00:02:499 (5) - Already a lot of straight short sliders. Make this one curve: https://puu.sh/wJojt/282e4922a7.jpg
00:02:346 (4,5,1) - Circle 4 looks uneven between slider 4 and slider 1. Make it so that it's in the middle of those sliders because circle 4 is more off towards slider 1's direction and like I said, it looks uneven.
00:03:727 (5) - Make this one curve
00:06:183 (3) - Ctr + G and make this slider straight, and bring it down by slider 4: https://puu.sh/wJouq/7153dc76ac.jpg
The area around 00:05:262 (1,2) is so crowded that you need to give it some space.
00:08:178 (4,5) - I'm not a fan of long sliders so this is just imo, but make the sliders curve: https://puu.sh/wJoFe/886d85f35a.jpg
(Also make the end of slider 4 go where slider 6 starts.)
00:11:079 (6) - Make this circle have more space - make the spacing equal like 00:10:773 (4,5)
00:11:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could do more with these circle. Make 00:11:538 (1,2,3,4,5) into a star shape pattern and put circle 6 on top of 00:12:609 (1)
00:14:599 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern here is a bit..unusual. Put circle 2 under where 00:13:681 (4) was just at so the circles look like even: https://puu.sh/wJp5I/c3fb614c30.jpg
00:20:722 (6,7) - I don't understand why there is a huge gap between these two.. Since there isn't enough space to spread them out evenly, put circle 7 between circle 6 and circle 3, and pit circle 8 under where circle 4 was just at: https://puu.sh/wJpcU/64f2c860ea.jpg
And since there is a timing gap at 00:21:181 the jump from 00:21:028 (8) to 00:21:334 (1) is ok.
00:44:599 (2,1,2) - Curve this slider 00:44:599 (2) upwards and curve these sliders downward 00:45:058 (2) / 00:45:518 (2) / 00:45:977 (2) so that it visually looks good.
00:46:283 (1,2) - Curve these sliders the other way and Ctrl + G slider 2, and bring 00:46:895 (1) between those sliders: https://puu.sh/wJpH4/4be6b9b6ad.jpg
And this is optional but timing-wise, you could switch 00:46:589 (2) and 00:46:895 (1) around: https://puu.sh/wJpK4/1d3798e93e.jpg (You may also want to remove the circle's nc if you're gonna do this)
I do recommend that since fhana is going to sing a high-note at the next part and that would be a good time to add in a jump 00:46:742 (2) to 00:47:048 (3)
00:49:650 (2,3,4,5,6) - You could keep this pattern the way it is, but I would suggest a star shape pattern
00:56:385 (5) - Slider looks out of place in that position. Another way is to curve it around 00:56:844 (2) https://puu.sh/wJq02/3445c52cac.jpg
(You'll need to bring circle 2 down to fit slider 5 so that the slider isn't way too out of the map.)
00:56:997 (3) - ^ Curve this slider around 00:57:609 (6)
00:59:446 (2) - The circle could be put on top of 00:59:752 (1) which is basically a jump. Imo it's ok since fhana sings "souto" as two words with an accent ("sou" "to"). I don't know if you're getting what I'm saying so I'm sorry for the confusion ;;;
01:01:589 (1,2) - ^ Move circle 2 to where 01:02:201 (1) starts
01:00:824 (7) - Ctrl + G and make it so this slider is parallel to 01:01:130 (1)
01:01:130 (1) - You should extend this slider here 01:01:436 since fhana extends her note further than when you ended the slider
01:01:130 (1) - Ctrl + G and make the slider parallel to 01:01:130 (1)
01:05:875 (5,6) - Make these curve around each other: https://puu.sh/wJqDb/ef931a7ce7.jpg
01:07:712 (6) - nc
01:08:936 (2) - Good place to do a jump so move this circle on top of 01:09:242 (1)
01:13:222 (3,4,5) - Imo the flow here is a bit odd, so it could be changed to this instead: https://puu.sh/wJqL6/f2ea24bf3e.jpg
01:14:446 (3) - Make this circle go on top of the end of this slider 01:15:365 (2)
01:17:814 (2,3) - Make this sliders curve around each other
01:19:038 (2) - Put this circle on top of 01:19:344 (1)
01:21:487 (2) - ^ Move on top of 01:21:793 (1)
01:20:722 (1) - End this slider here 01:21:028
01:24:556 (3) - This straight slider looks out of place so curve it around 01:24:097 (2)
01:25:015 (4) - Also curve this one downward
01:27:005 (5) - Optional but extend this slider to 01:27:311
01:33:440 - 01:38:184 - Through out this whole part, you may want to reduce the amount of straight sliders

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00:07:717 (1,2) - Make these sliders curve around each other: https://puu.sh/wJreM/27ed46acb6.jpg
I also did change the way these sliders 00:08:638 (3,4) were positioned so they could fit with slider 1 and slider 2: https://puu.sh/wJrgT/e3f2f1cb5c.jpg
00:59:140 (1) - This slider looks out of place besides all the straight sliders. I don't think it's at a good timing point to make it curved too so it could be changed into a straight slider and put it beside 00:58:834 (4)
If you're going to do this, Ctrl + G this slider 00:59:140 (1) to reduce the amount of sliders that go up
01:10:467 (6,7,8) - Change these into curve sliders: https://puu.sh/wJrBA/64de8e02ab.jpg
01:16:742 - Add a circle since fhana is still singing at this part
01:39:715 (5) - This shape doesn't look good against the other sliders nor does it really go well with the flow. Change it into a reversible slider: https://puu.sh/wJrNd/b7654d4c1c.jpg
01:40:786 (1,2,3,4) - Curve these sliders around each other
01:48:133 - I think a circle should be fine here

Hoped my mod helped

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-07-14T17:04:49+00:00

imaikiseta wrote:
Came from my Queue.

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00:00:812 (3) - The end of slider 3 should go to where this slider 00:01:579 (1) starts: https://puu.sh/wJo4J/54412d1fa0.jpg
This is so slider 3 can line up and be parallel to slider 1 (and look neater). If you do do this, then you'll have to move circle 2 more to the right.
00:01:272 (5,1) - Make these sliders vertical because it's looks a bit random tilted to the side. Another way you could do is to tilt slider 1 the same way as slider 5.
00:02:499 (5) - Already a lot of straight short sliders. Make this one curve: https://puu.sh/wJojt/282e4922a7.jpg
00:02:346 (4,5,1) - Circle 4 looks uneven between slider 4 and slider 1. Make it so that it's in the middle of those sliders because circle 4 is more off towards slider 1's direction and like I said, it looks uneven.
00:03:727 (5) - Make this one curve uhh - i copied 00:00:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - every time and turned it (so it when i change them as you mentioned it wouldnt be the same anymore
00:06:183 (3) - Ctr + G and make this slider straight, and bring it down by slider 4: https://puu.sh/wJouq/7153dc76ac.jpg i want to have the up and down movement in this section (3 silders)
The area around 00:05:262 (1,2) is so crowded that you need to give it some space. nah - i want to have the up and down movement in theese 3 sliders
00:08:178 (4,5) - I'm not a fan of long sliders so this is just imo, but make the sliders curve: https://puu.sh/wJoFe/886d85f35a.jpg
(Also make the end of slider 4 go where slider 6 starts.) i like it more this way (btw when i would pit (6) there the DS would be too short~
00:11:079 (6) - Make this circle have more space - make the spacing equal like 00:10:773 (4,5) i did cange it but it couls be that the DS is now to high
00:11:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could do more with these circle. Make 00:11:538 (1,2,3,4,5) into a star shape pattern and put circle 6 on top of 00:12:609 (1) This wouldnt make much sense when you hear the intense beats - so the DS shouldnt be equal there - then a star pattern is not possible
00:14:599 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern here is a bit..unusual. Put circle 2 under where 00:13:681 (4) was just at so the circles look like even: https://puu.sh/wJp5I/c3fb614c30.jpg same as above - i want that the intense beats are shown in the map with DS - theese pattern would destroy that
00:20:722 (6,7) - I don't understand why there is a huge gap between these two.. Since there isn't enough space to spread them out evenly, put circle 7 between circle 6 and circle 3, and pit circle 8 under where circle 4 was just at: https://puu.sh/wJpcU/64f2c860ea.jpg ^ (btw
And since there is a timing gap at 00:21:181 the jump from 00:21:028 (8) to 00:21:334 (1) is ok. because i want to emphasize the intense beats (like in the other patterns) so the jumps are not random/just for patterns
00:44:599 (2,1,2) - Curve this slider 00:44:599 (2) upwards and curve these sliders downward 00:45:058 (2) / 00:45:518 (2) / 00:45:977 (2) so that it visually looks good. did a bit
00:46:283 (1,2) - Curve these sliders the other way and Ctrl + G slider 2, and bring 00:46:895 (1) between those sliders: https://puu.sh/wJpH4/4be6b9b6ad.jpg that would destroy that pattern 00:46:895 (1,2,1,2) - what i use very often in this map/set
And this is optional but timing-wise, you could switch 00:46:589 (2) and 00:46:895 (1) around: https://puu.sh/wJpK4/1d3798e93e.jpg (You may also want to remove the circle's nc if you're gonna do this) i want her voice on the sliderhead (i did so equaly in every diff)
I do recommend that since fhana is going to sing a high-note at the next part and that would be a good time to add in a jump 00:46:742 (2) to 00:47:048 (3) this voice pattern is the same as 00:44:446 (1,2,1,2) - so i would use this more than a jump(and i also think that theese long jumpsections with 00:47:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is not so good for an insane diff at 195 bpm
00:49:650 (2,3,4,5,6) - You could keep this pattern the way it is, but I would suggest a star shape pattern you like starpatters huh - well i want to emphasize 00:50:263 (6) - cause of increased intensity so a star pattern woulndt be so nice
00:56:385 (5) - Slider looks out of place in that position. Another way is to curve it around 00:56:844 (2) https://puu.sh/wJq02/3445c52cac.jpg
(You'll need to bring circle 2 down to fit slider 5 so that the slider isn't way too out of the map.)that would mess up the DS in the part (i dont see a problem with the slider imo)
00:56:997 (3) - ^ Curve this slider around 00:57:609 (6) then 00:56:844 (2,3) - would have a unfitting DS and the pattern 00:57:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - wouldnt be possible anymore
00:59:446 (2) - The circle could be put on top of 00:59:752 (1) which is basically a jump. Imo it's ok since fhana sings "souto" as two words with an accent ("sou" "to"). I don't know if you're getting what I'm saying so I'm sorry for the confusion ;;; uhm the thing with the souto is - that it should be seperated from the rest like 01:01:589 (1,2) - cause its a huge change in the music - i know what you getting at but i think its fine that way
01:01:589 (1,2) - ^ Move circle 2 to where 01:02:201 (1) starts
01:00:824 (7) - Ctrl + G and make it so this slider is parallel to 01:01:130 (1)
01:01:130 (1) - You should extend this slider here 01:01:436 since fhana extends her note further than when you ended the slider i want to emphasize the strong beat on 01:01:283 - (maybe i change it later idk)
01:01:130 (1) - Ctrl + G and make the slider parallel to 01:01:130 (1) it would make sense when its the kind of beat - but that isnt the case here
01:05:875 (5,6) - Make these curve around each other: https://puu.sh/wJqDb/ef931a7ce7.jpg
01:07:712 (6) - nc fixed
01:08:936 (2) - Good place to do a jump so move this circle on top of 01:09:242 (1) i use the same pattern here as 01:01:589 (1,2) -
01:13:222 (3,4,5) - Imo the flow here is a bit odd, so it could be changed to this instead: https://puu.sh/wJqL6/f2ea24bf3e.jpg changed it (but not your way ^^)
01:14:446 (3) - Make this circle go on top of the end of this slider 01:15:365 (2) it would mess up the DS and you dont see the overlap while playing so i guess its ok
01:17:814 (2,3) - Make this sliders curve around each other (very objective)
01:19:038 (2) - Put this circle on top of 01:19:344 (1)
01:21:487 (2) - ^ Move on top of 01:21:793 (1) ^
01:20:722 (1) - End this slider here 01:21:028 ^
01:24:556 (3) - This straight slider looks out of place so curve it around 01:24:097 (2) it doesnt -> look at 00:08:178 (4,5,6) -
01:25:015 (4) - Also curve this one downward ^
01:27:005 (5) - Optional but extend this slider to 01:27:311 dont see why cause even the vocal stops there
01:33:440 - 01:38:184 - Through out this whole part, you may want to reduce the amount of straight sliders its the same part as the beginning (with copy paste etc)

Light Insane
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00:07:717 (1,2) - Make these sliders curve around each other: https://puu.sh/wJreM/27ed46acb6.jpg i did like this in the upper diff too so i want to stay it like that
I also did change the way these sliders 00:08:638 (3,4) were positioned so they could fit with slider 1 and slider 2: https://puu.sh/wJrgT/e3f2f1cb5c.jpg
00:59:140 (1) - This slider looks out of place besides all the straight sliders. I don't think it's at a good timing point to make it curved too so it could be changed into a straight slider and put it beside 00:58:834 (4) 0:59:140 (1) - / 01:01:589 (1) - etc (btw they are the same) should look different from the rest cause the music changed there how it never did before
If you're going to do this, Ctrl + G this slider 00:59:140 (1) to reduce the amount of sliders that go up
01:10:467 (6,7,8) - Change these into curve sliders: https://puu.sh/wJrBA/64de8e02ab.jpg did it a but different but equal - changed
01:16:742 - Add a circle since fhana is still singing at this part i think its fine but could be changing it after other mods
01:39:715 (5) - This shape doesn't look good against the other sliders nor does it really go well with the flow. Change it into a reversible slider: https://puu.sh/wJrNd/b7654d4c1c.jpg changes
01:40:786 (1,2,3,4) - Curve these sliders around each other i will let it cause of the other multiple ones
01:48:133 - I think a circle should be fine here i do it like in the other dffs ^^

Hoped my mod helped

Even when there is alot red - mods always help (i felt like the mod was more subjective so there is always a chance that i wil/ can disagree)

Thank you very much for the mod and have a nice day^^

Juiceys

530 posts

Joined June 2016

Juiceys 2017-07-18T23:46:19+00:00

Normal :

Slider velocity is too fast! Look at the songs with a similar difficulty, the sliders are all way slower, You need to make it slower, maybe 0.7 would work

Light Insane:

Your nc pattern seems to be a bit inconsistent. At first you NC on downbeats, and then 00:14:446 (1,2,3,4) - Here you don't
00:16:589 (1,2,3) - Here you don't
00:19:956 (1) - And then you do it again.
00:26:385 (1,2,3) - and then you don't

I don't see much consistency and it's really weird

00:21:487 (2) - Why is there a jump here when the sounds and vocals 00:21:640 (3,4) - here are equal in volume

00:54:548 (5,6,7) - Believe DS should be reduced a bit more, Not many prominent noises compared to other sections
01:13:222 (6,7) - ^

Pretty good set!

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-07-19T00:06:21+00:00

Juiceys wrote:
Normal :

Slider velocity is too fast! Look at the songs with a similar difficulty, the sliders are all way slower, You need to make it slower, maybe 0.7 would work
very sorry not to say to you but ill delete the diff anyway so dont matter (its shit )

Light Insane:

Your nc pattern seems to be a bit inconsistent. At first you NC on downbeats, and then 00:14:446 (1,2,3,4) -
00:16:589 (1,2,3) - Here you don't
00:19:956 (1) - And then you do it again. 2 abouve fixed
00:26:385 (1,2,3) - and then you don't here i did this so the player can better see that there is a 1/2 gap

I don't see much consistency and it's really weird

00:21:487 (2) - Why is there a jump here when the sounds and vocals 00:21:640 (3,4) - here are equal in volume
its because of the strong sound on 00:21:487 (2) - (i did the jumps there to emphasize them like in 00:20:875 (6,7) -
but thanks to you i saw the emphasis maistake on 00:21:946 (5,6) - ^^

00:54:548 (5,6,7) - Believe DS should be reduced a bit more, Not many prominent noises compared to other sections uhm did a tiny bit but the DS isnt really high her ein the first place^^
01:13:222 (6,7) - ^ ^

Pretty good set!thanks!

Thanks for the mod and have a nice day

timemon

Beatmap Nominator

1,305 posts

Joined November 2012

timemon 2017-07-21T06:08:09+00:00

mod
[Insane]
Volume is quite loud

slider shape inconsistency at 00:00:352 - and similar parts
00:02:499 (5,1) - for example, you should use copy pasting sliders more often especially when they are both visible. You could just copy paste the (5) and ctrl + H it and it will work as 1

00:23:783 (5,6) - you seem to be focusing on the vocal before and definitely at 00:24:089 (7,8,9,10) - . should just make (5, 6) a 1/2 slider as emphasizing both instruments and vocal will end up emphasizing nothing

00:29:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it's better to map to the vocal as the song isn't really calm at this part

01:01:130 (1) - why sudden SV change? I dont see anything would warrant such a change

01:28:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the 3 of each combos are silent might as well just make every one of them 1/1 slider

[Light Insane]
00:58:222 (2,3,4) - why do these sliders have so little spacing emphasis they're quite loud, same for similar pattern in this section

01:28:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - stick with one way as it's inconsistent and I prefer the long sliders than those circles

the diff is very similar to the Insane so the previous diff suggestions should also apply here

Good luck!

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-07-21T12:26:22+00:00

timemon wrote:
mod
[Insane]
Volume is quite loud

slider shape inconsistency at 00:00:352 - and similar parts
00:02:499 (5,1) - for example, you should use copy pasting sliders more often especially when they are both visible. You could just copy paste the (5) and ctrl + H it and it will work as 1 uh . i copy pastet 00:00:352 (1,2,3,4,5) - and turned it multiple times in this section- made it more visible now with 00:02:807 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - turning this so that 00:02:499 (5,1) - are parallel

00:23:783 (5,6) - you seem to be focusing on the vocal before and definitely at 00:24:089 (7,8,9,10) - . should just make (5, 6) a 1/2 slider as emphasizing both instruments and vocal will end up emphasizing nothing i didnt really liked how that emphasis with the music/map so i made (5) to a reverse (this is better imo)

00:29:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it's better to map to the vocal as the song isn't really calm at this part huh - in my view this is a very calm section (in vomparison with the rest) and i like to have a chilly phase in my map so i let that ^^

01:01:130 (1) - why sudden SV change? I dont see anything would warrant such a change i changed the SV here to emphasis that the music stops there and the vocal is fading a bit away - it fits quite good with the section

01:28:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the 3 of each combos are silent might as well just make every one of them 1/1 slider I changed the patterns in the section with making in the 1st two 1,2,3s into 1 (cirlce) with 2 (slider) - i want to have the 1,2,3 at the end to empasize the most intense section of the song

[Light Insane]
00:58:222 (2,3,4) - why do these sliders have so little spacing emphasis they're quite loud, same for similar pattern in this section i guess thats just a pattern i like to do (and it fits with the music imo) but incresed DS slightly - when other point out this section i will chnange it more likely

01:28:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - stick with one way as it's inconsistent and I prefer the long sliders than those circles when i make one section only with 1/1 there it would destroy the emphasis with the most intense part of the song

the diff is very similar to the Insane so the previous diff suggestions should also apply here

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod and have a nice day^^

Kimi

37 posts

Joined June 2015

Kimi 2017-07-24T15:25:11+00:00

Rikoukz' extra

Hey a noob short mod coming your way

00:19:344 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is quite a mess and unnecessary. There is nothing that follows this logic later in the map and i cant quite wrap my head around it. 00:19:727 (2,3) - Why the spacing change here but then the white tick isn't emphasized with spacing but these are?

01:06:487 (1) - This is mapped to the end of the stream which is fine but 01:09:089 (1) - This is also mapped to the end of the stream and its half a beat gap, but still the same spacing as the first one, so the player sees the spacing and expects it to be same as the last part but it isn't.

00:22:099 (6,1) - Huge gap but then with same rhythm 00:23:477 (3,1) - This spacing is non existent since it even overlaps. The song doesn't change a whole lot but these two similar sections are mapped completely different

Sakurauchi Riko

1,579 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2017-07-25T22:42:08+00:00

Fr4mes wrote:
Rikoukz' extra

Hey a noob short mod coming your way

00:19:344 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - This pattern is quite a mess and unnecessary. There is nothing that follows this logic later in the map and i cant quite wrap my head around it. 00:19:727 (2,3) - Why the spacing change here but then the white tick isn't emphasized with spacing but these are? guess thats true after all... hey you have to admit - it looked beautiful ! changed

01:06:487 (1) - This is mapped to the end of the stream which is fine but 01:09:089 (1) - This is also mapped to the end of the stream and its half a beat gap, but still the same spacing as the first one, so the player sees the spacing and expects it to be same as the last part but it isn't. yes true, kind of missleading heree

00:22:099 (6,1) - Huge gap but then with same rhythm 00:23:477 (3,1) - This spacing is non existent since it even overlaps. The song doesn't change a whole lot but these two similar sections are mapped completely different the idea behind that is, 00:22:405 - is a strong vocal that is complimented also by a strong sound therefore it is spaced for emphasis, unlike 00:23:936 (1) - which is a weak vocal (and not special vocal because the following 1/2 vocals are pretty much the same) and therefore deserves no emphasis, thats why this is stacked under the sliderend

thank for mod ! !!

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Kawashiro

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Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-08-08T04:32:47+00:00

Hard / *3.02 / No HS

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396,232,64497,2,0,L|272:232,1,120
196,271,64956,2,0,P|187:300|190:330,2,60
116,231,65416,2,0,P|138:177|120:121,1,120
127,31,65875,2,0,P|98:32|71:45,1,60
40,128,66181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,66334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,231,66487,6,0,L|236:231,1,120
320,259,66946,2,0,B|336:235|320:199|320:199|304:163|320:139,1,120
368,72,67405,2,0,P|398:65|427:69,1,60
461,152,67712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,152,67865,2,0,P|431:156|402:149,1,60
373,236,68171,2,0,P|402:229|431:233,1,60
465,316,68477,2,0,P|408:332|349:323,1,120
260,332,68936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,272,69242,6,0,P|85:242|92:208,1,60
72,124,69548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,124,69701,2,0,L|144:128,1,60
184,200,70007,2,0,L|320:192,1,120
392,172,70467,2,0,P|384:200|385:230,1,60
472,204,70773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,204,70926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,204,71079,2,0,P|473:174|465:145,1,60
400,84,71385,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,71691,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,71844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,71997,2,0,L|272:292,1,60
252,372,72303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,72456,2,0,B|156:288|156:288|72:288,1,120
12,224,72916,2,0,P|11:194|21:166,1,60
92,108,73222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,108,73375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,108,73528,2,0,L|168:120,1,60
240,132,73834,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,74140,2,0,P|404:252|398:281,1,60
420,368,74446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,368,74599,2,0,L|324:360,1,60
292,304,74905,2,0,B|272:317|236:301|236:301|200:285|176:301,1,120
104,352,75365,2,0,P|91:325|87:295,1,60
40,220,75671,2,0,L|168:228,1,120
248,236,76130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,76283,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,76436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,192,76589,2,0,P|356:185|385:191,1,60
386,281,76895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,280,77048,2,0,P|356:286|327:280,1,60
248,236,77354,2,0,L|248:84,1,120
188,48,77814,2,0,P|168:70|159:99,1,60
128,184,78120,2,0,P|157:189|186:182,1,60
276,196,78426,2,0,P|305:189|334:194,1,60
412,236,78732,6,0,L|416:304,1,60
420,384,79038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,79344,2,0,P|476:188|453:169,1,60
364,156,79650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,220,79803,2,0,B|296:272|296:272|316:304|309:336,1,120
220,324,80263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,336,80416,2,0,B|123:303|143:271|143:271|135:219,1,120
88,144,80875,2,0,P|63:161|48:186,1,60
4,264,81181,6,0,L|76:276,1,60
152,288,81487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,191,81793,2,0,P|315:164|314:134,1,60
256,64,82099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,148,82252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,40,82558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,208,82865,2,0,P|437:237|429:266,1,60
347,308,83171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,308,83324,2,0,L|288:302,1,60
156,368,83638,6,0,P|126:370|100:357,2,60
144,280,84097,2,0,L|156:144,1,120
28,92,84556,2,0,P|19:63|27:34,2,60
112,56,85015,2,0,L|244:60,1,120
320,36,85474,2,0,P|321:65|312:94,1,60
248,160,85780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,160,85933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,264,86086,6,0,P|386:251|416:253,2,60
292,324,86546,2,0,B|245:331|245:331|175:310,1,120
67,188,87005,2,0,P|37:180|8:187,2,60
152,232,87464,2,0,L|148:112,1,120
76,60,87923,2,0,P|62:86|61:116,1,60
10,188,88229,2,0,P|36:201|66:202,1,60
160,280,88535,6,0,L|165:340,2,60
240,176,88995,2,0,L|244:116,2,60
297,292,89454,2,0,L|441:280,1,120
452,156,89913,2,0,P|481:162|510:159,2,60
344,88,90372,2,0,P|314:82|285:85,1,60
164,172,90678,2,0,P|157:202|160:231,1,60
40,144,90984,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,24,93440,6,0,P|92:17|62:20,2,60
185,89,93899,2,0,L|189:161,2,60
245,21,94358,2,0,P|273:11|303:11,1,60
381,57,94664,6,0,L|445:41,2,60
313,113,95123,2,0,L|249:97,2,60
381,173,95582,2,0,P|390:202|388:232,1,60
452,292,95888,6,0,L|528:280,2,60
368,325,96348,2,0,P|360:353|364:383,2,60
300,264,96807,2,0,L|241:274,1,60
156,304,97113,6,0,P|159:334|149:362,1,60
68,320,97419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,320,97572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,320,97725,2,0,L|80:248,1,60
92,172,98031,2,0,L|80:100,1,60
116,28,98337,6,0,P|88:21|58:24,2,60
185,89,98797,2,0,L|189:161,2,60
248,24,99256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,99562,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,99715,2,0,P|410:149|404:178,1,60
340,240,100021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,240,100174,2,0,L|280:236,1,60
192,228,100480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,325,100786,6,0,P|355:353|353:382,2,60
264,368,101246,2,0,L|128:376,1,120
72,320,101705,2,0,B|56:296|72:260|72:260|88:224|72:200,1,120
36,124,102164,2,0,L|172:132,1,120
248,140,102623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,236,103235,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,103388,12,0,108133,0:0:0:0:

GL

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-08T13:31:35+00:00

i will add hs immediatly and upload it ^^

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2017-08-14T19:50:24+00:00

https://puu.sh/xa27c/a9ad898873.osu

add "cool" to tags as well pls

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2017-08-15T01:28:07+00:00

cool told me to post

he changed a NC

anyways theres some unrankable stuff. cool's metadata is screwed up by puush so you gotta fix the unicode. also in more diffs in the mapset there are a lot of diffs with 2 green lines at the same point. listing here
- Normal
- Hard
- Light Insane
- Insane
- Extra
might wanna get those out of the way

the following diffs have unsnapped objects:
- Light Insane
- Extra

let CTRL+SHIFT+A be with you.

log with C00L on his diff

2017-08-15 02:57 HighTec: Akitoshi's Normal
2017-08-15 02:57 HighTec: tfw i didnt even know i had osu open
2017-08-15 02:57 C00L: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1387076 fhana - little secret magic]
2017-08-15 02:58 HighTec: o its gonna be a dense one
2017-08-15 02:58 HighTec: wait
2017-08-15 02:58 HighTec: icekalt is currently a mentee
2017-08-15 02:59 HighTec: ok i found some stuff
2017-08-15 02:59 HighTec: want me to complain?
2017-08-15 02:59 HighTec: wont make you drop, just like a mod
2017-08-15 02:59 C00L: ugh
2017-08-15 02:59 C00L: its finisehd
2017-08-15 02:59 C00L: so complain all u want i gues
2017-08-15 02:59 C00L: its just a normal
2017-08-15 02:59 C00L: xd
2017-08-15 03:00 HighTec: 00:11:538 (4,5) - questionable. since the vocals keep on going on the same spam but the song makes it look like it are 2 different rhythms
2017-08-15 03:00 C00L: changes
2017-08-15 03:01 C00L: plus guitar
2017-08-15 03:01 HighTec: o yea the guitar
2017-08-15 03:01 HighTec: tru nvm then Xd
2017-08-15 03:01 C00L: 1/4 vocals too
2017-08-15 03:01 HighTec: 00:16:589 (1,2,3) - risky for a normal diff. usually you want both head and tails to emphasise equal sounds in the song, so keeping that in mind using the sliderends as filler seems like a big risk
2017-08-15 03:02 HighTec: making it 1/1 circles would also help the density of the map out a bit
2017-08-15 03:02 HighTec: since currently it's really dense
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: this is
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: one of the harder normals
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: therefore thats fine
2017-08-15 03:02 HighTec: IS THAT YOUR REASONING
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: im doing a u
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: nah but
2017-08-15 03:02 HighTec: Bitch
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: sliders like that
2017-08-15 03:02 C00L: have been introduced early
2017-08-15 03:03 C00L: plus 1/2 sliders are everywhere in the map
2017-08-15 03:03 C00L: just because its a bit denser doesnt make it that harder
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: im just saying its risky
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: dude
2017-08-15 03:03 C00L: ure mum is risky
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: density = difficulty
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: in normals
2017-08-15 03:03 C00L: bro
2017-08-15 03:03 C00L: its
2017-08-15 03:03 C00L: 3 taps
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: im just saying
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: geez
2017-08-15 03:03 HighTec: dont attack me
2017-08-15 03:04 C00L: ITS
2017-08-15 03:04 C00L: 3 TRES Trzy UNos Quatres
2017-08-15 03:04 HighTec: .
2017-08-15 03:04 C00L:

2017-08-15 03:04 C00L: bro im barelly lookin at screen so if i dont answer at one point just be aware that i might have crashed on my desk
2017-08-15 03:04 HighTec: o
2017-08-15 03:05 HighTec: 00:43:834 (4) - idk about this slider
2017-08-15 03:05 HighTec: cause vocals start on the end of it
2017-08-15 03:05 HighTec: which stands out more ya
2017-08-15 03:05 C00L: drumz
2017-08-15 03:05 C00L: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
2017-08-15 03:05 C00L: 00:46:283 (1) -
2017-08-15 03:05 C00L: here too
2017-08-15 03:05 C00L: like
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: vocals are on slider ends sometimes sometimes not
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: meh
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: plus ending on it
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: gives that sort of impact before the 00:44:446 (1,2) -
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: little break
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: cuz vocals are kinda meh intensity tbf
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: they are fading
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: so
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: leaving them on the end actually bring the 1/2 sliders here 00:44:446 (1,2) -
2017-08-15 03:06 HighTec: 00:46:283 (1) - delet nc
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: to feel more intense
2017-08-15 03:06 C00L: donut
2017-08-15 03:07 HighTec: having the 1-2 combo suddenly pop up out of nowhere is meh
2017-08-15 03:07 C00L: donut as in done
2017-08-15 03:07 HighTec: oo
2017-08-15 03:07 HighTec: people say donut as do not more often
2017-08-15 03:07 HighTec: so
2017-08-15 03:07 HighTec: d
2017-08-15 03:09 C00L: d
2017-08-15 03:09 HighTec: 00:59:140 (1) - you could definetly have done something cooler here
2017-08-15 03:09 HighTec: to emphasise the big instrument change
2017-08-15 03:09 C00L: actuly
2017-08-15 03:09 C00L: i tried other stuff
2017-08-15 03:10 C00L: but a repeat kinda makes it feel as if the vocals and the instruments are colliding together
2017-08-15 03:10 C00L: thats what the repeat does
2017-08-15 03:10 C00L: so i kept it
2017-08-15 03:10 HighTec: iknow but i feel like
2017-08-15 03:10 HighTec: since you used that in other occations too
2017-08-15 03:10 HighTec: this doesn't stand out anymore
2017-08-15 03:10 HighTec: try stacking notes on 1/1
2017-08-15 03:10 C00L: meh
2017-08-15 03:10 C00L: havnt used stacks
2017-08-15 03:10 HighTec: you have
2017-08-15 03:11 C00L: would seem out of place
2017-08-15 03:11 C00L: i mean
2017-08-15 03:11 C00L: as in
2017-08-15 03:11 HighTec: isnt that the point im trying to make
2017-08-15 03:11 C00L: like individual circles
2017-08-15 03:11 HighTec: to make it look out of place
2017-08-15 03:11 HighTec: cuz the crash in the instruments is out of place too
2017-08-15 03:11 C00L: disagreed
2017-08-15 03:11 HighTec: doing something usual actually fits here tho
2017-08-15 03:12 C00L: dk
2017-08-15 03:13 C00L: i like the current one tbh
2017-08-15 03:13 C00L: dont see any point to change it
2017-08-15 03:13 C00L: 1/1 woudnt be as cool as current
2017-08-15 03:13 HighTec: overall im just kinda
2017-08-15 03:13 C00L: neither would be 1/1 split into 1/2's
2017-08-15 03:13 HighTec: thrown off by the rhythm you choose
2017-08-15 03:13 HighTec: cause you are the first one
2017-08-15 03:13 HighTec: i ever see
2017-08-15 03:13 HighTec: to tend more to bg noises than the prominent noises
2017-08-15 03:14 HighTec: in a low diff
2017-08-15 03:14 C00L: everyone interprets stuff differently
2017-08-15 03:14 HighTec: it's more of a
2017-08-15 03:14 HighTec: people map normals to prominent stuff cause it's the easiest to follow for the beginning player
2017-08-15 03:14 HighTec: which is mostly taken in mind when mapping this kinda diffs
2017-08-15 03:14 C00L: i mean
2017-08-15 03:15 C00L: so do i
2017-08-15 03:15 C00L: lol
2017-08-15 03:15 C00L: everything is easy to follow
2017-08-15 03:15 HighTec: also gz on 00:37:405 -
2017-08-15 03:15 HighTec: the drums arent prominent, you know the piano and vocals are mostly stronger :vv
2017-08-15 03:16 C00L: d
2017-08-15 03:16 HighTec: (the timepoint has 2 green lines!!!!)
2017-08-15 03:16 C00L: wel
2017-08-15 03:16 C00L: i copied lines from easy
2017-08-15 03:16 HighTec: LOL
2017-08-15 03:16 HighTec: also u shud tell ur guy to get unicode fixed
2017-08-15 03:16 HighTec: cause yours is fucked
2017-08-15 03:16 HighTec: did u send it with puush
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuush
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: yea
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: lol
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: then ur unicode is fucked
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: my unicode is gret
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: tell ur host
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: bVR o
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: u post
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: for kds
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: or something
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: not worth
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: i didnt make apoint
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: im only confused xd
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: meta and unrankable line
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: dud u post that urself for kd
2017-08-15 03:17 C00L: lo
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: i dont care about posting
2017-08-15 03:17 HighTec: unless somethign happened in the map
2017-08-15 03:18 C00L: post
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: i wont
2017-08-15 03:18 C00L: "C00L ur rhythms SUx Ass"
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: u can post the log
2017-08-15 03:18 C00L: ez kds
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: WAIT
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: WTF
2017-08-15 03:18 C00L: cba
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: WHY AR5
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: ARE YOU DRUNK
2017-08-15 03:18 C00L: ugh
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: this SR and bpm
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: is an instant
2017-08-15 03:18 C00L: no why
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: 4 - 4,5
2017-08-15 03:18 HighTec: you don't even have
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: 2.29*
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: stacks
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: so why have the ar so high
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: cuz
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: ez is 3
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: hard is 8,5
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: zd
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: WOT
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: WAT ARE ALL THOSE ARS
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: xddd
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: WHY IS HARD 8,5
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: .
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: dk
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: its too late
2017-08-15 03:19 C00L: post
2017-08-15 03:19 HighTec: i should just go to bed

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-15T11:38:35+00:00

Fixed everything

How the heck did this with the green lines happen zzzzz

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Saileach 2017-08-15T14:16:34+00:00

m4m from mentorship xd

Journey

00:10:467 (2,3,4) - 90 degree angles like this are pretty annoying to hit during gameplay especially if you consider the player not following 1 as a slider and only hitting the head as it comes from a sharp angle
00:16:589 (2,3,4) - While this pattern looks cute, the actual movement required is pretty low which just loses all emphasis you were trying to get
00:17:661 (2,3,1) - perhaps even spacing to make it neater
00:18:121 (2,3,1) - ^
00:27:763 (2) - Not really a fan of this slider shape, just looks a little messy while everything else is trying to be organised
00:55:314 (1) - This is offscreen
01:04:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel changing from sharp to linear patterns isnt the greatest of ideas here as linear patterns have a different feel of emphasis compared to sharp while you are trying to use them both to represent intense vocals

Rikoukz' Extra

00:21:487 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel visual spacing here could be improved here, while the entire map is so neat, this pattern just feels like it sticks out to me
00:39:548 (1,3) - Probably could use some more breathing room, this blanket is pretty tight
00:47:048 (1,2) - fix stack?
01:33:440 (1) - since this is the end of the song, you could probably make this rhythm a bit more dense instead of just the same as the beginning to show progression of intensity or smth
01:37:878 (1,2,3,4) - If you were going to keep if as the same as the start then perhaps dont use a linear pattern here as in the start you used more sharps and imo more confortable

Insane

00:00:812 (3,4,5) - Visual spacing with these could be much better, right now they look messy and rushed as 3 and 5 look much closer to each other than 3 to 4 and 4 to 5, this could be fixed with blankets
00:04:801 (4,5,6) - Probably just make this a triangle and rotate it a bit, looks a bit messy, the 6 overlap doesnt really fit imo
00:19:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This honestly just isnt that appealing to me, it feels so out of place and could be represented in other ways to which i feel 8 consecutive 1/2s are a little much
00:24:089 (6,7,8,9) - just make a triangle on both sides like this and just rotate it, makes it so much neater imo and looks better http://puu.sh/xaFcC/1af4b77f27.png
00:25:773 (4) - ends on such a strong sound, feels a little off to prioratise the vocal over this imo
00:43:069 (5) - Curve could use some improvement, the start is close to the 3 than the end
01:04:497 (2) - ^
01:11:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - as said before in your top diff, sharp angles into wide play often poorly
01:13:222 (3) - stack on 01:11:691 (1) - ?
01:33:440 (1) - same as 00:00:812 (3,4,5) - since its a repeat of the start

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-15T14:58:21+00:00

DakiniBrave wrote:
m4m from mentorship xd

Journey
00:10:467 (2,3,4) - 90 degree angles like this are pretty annoying to hit during gameplay especially if you consider the player not following 1 as a slider and only hitting the head as it comes from a sharp angle replaced the slider
00:16:589 (2,3,4) - While this pattern looks cute, the actual movement required is pretty low which just loses all emphasis you were trying to get rearanged pattern without losing circluar flow
00:17:661 (2,3,1) - perhaps even spacing to make it neater
00:18:121 (2,3,1) - ^ oups - fixed
00:27:763 (2) - Not really a fan of this slider shape, just looks a little messy while everything else is trying to be organised made it better
00:55:314 (1) - This is offscreen zzzzzzz
01:04:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel changing from sharp to linear patterns isnt the greatest of ideas here as linear patterns have a different feel of emphasis compared to sharp while you are trying to use them both to represent intense vocals see this pattern maybe more open with 01:06:487 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i wanted like to do two different pattern and create with both another one with the mixture of both
it may plays different but fits personally well (and even if they are wide angles the 3rd section is the hardest)

Insane
00:00:812 (3,4,5) - Visual spacing with these could be much better, right now they look messy and rushed as 3 and 5 look much closer to each other than 3 to 4 and 4 to 5, this could be fixed with blankets
00:04:801 (4,5,6) - Probably just make this a triangle and rotate it a bit, looks a bit messy, the 6 overlap doesnt really fit imo rearanged the jump pattern (not to a triangle but to a jump where the DS highers every jump
00:19:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This honestly just isnt that appealing to me, it feels so out of place and could be represented in other ways to which i feel 8 consecutive 1/2s are a little much after some time i really hated this pattern - changed it
00:24:089 (6,7,8,9) - just make a triangle on both sides like this and just rotate it, makes it so much neater imo and looks better http://puu.sh/xaFcC/1af4b77f27.png oups - that was so unclean by me
00:25:773 (4) - ends on such a strong sound, feels a little off to prioratise the vocal over this imo made this a reverse
00:43:069 (5) - Curve could use some improvement, the start is close to the 3 than the end improved
01:04:497 (2) - ^ ok now what is this shit
01:11:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - as said before in your top diff, sharp angles into wide play often poorly i think thats fine here
01:13:222 (3) - stack on 01:11:691 (1) - ? changed the pattern there a bit
01:33:440 (1) - same as 00:00:812 (3,4,5) - since its a repeat of the start ^

Thank you very much for the mod ~

Sakurauchi Riko

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Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2017-08-15T15:07:34+00:00

DakiniBrave wrote:
Rikoukz' Extra
00:21:487 (2,3,4,5,6) - I feel visual spacing here could be improved here, while the entire map is so neat, this pattern just feels like it sticks out to me oki
00:39:548 (1,3) - Probably could use some more breathing room, this blanket is pretty tight its because rhythm is 1/4 that introduce the pattern
00:47:048 (1,2) - fix stack? did
01:33:440 (1) - since this is the end of the song, you could probably make this rhythm a bit more dense instead of just the same as the beginning to show progression of intensity or smth ok
01:37:878 (1,2,3,4) - If you were going to keep if as the same as the start then perhaps dont use a linear pattern here as in the start you used more sharps and imo more confortable linear fits more to the increasing intesity of sounds, its shlightly shaped now cuz changes from above

thank

#oü

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Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2017-08-16T05:35:09+00:00

C00L sent me here

Easy

00:13:987 (1) - idk what's following here tbh i assume u followed the vocals on 00:13:069 (5) - so the next object should b started on 00:14:446 - from the vocal rhythm's logic, similar thing goes to 00:23:783 (1) - as well
00:39:548 (3) - NC? I guess you following the measure but ye the calm part ended so i guess you need it
00:49:344 (1,2,3) - Since you used to followed the vocals how about using this rhythm? This can be also be more consistent with 00:54:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - as well cuz u followed vocals thereee
yh u have som potential

C00L

00:31:589 (4) - I don't think the stack would be great here as it has strong drum compared to 00:30:671 (2) - , consider to unstack this or just reverse the 00:30:977 (3) -
00:39:242 (4) - unstack pls it has finishhh
00:44:446 (1,2,3,4) - 00:47:048 (1,2) - those 1/2 sliders usage is kinda questionable as normal diff imo, 1/1 sliders with 1/2 beat gap plays more natural as low diff but idk it's just my taste ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (or u can just get the reference from 01:23:638 - for rhythm)
01:09:242 (1,2,3,4) - 01:11:691 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm fits more with vocals tbh, since their vocal rhythm is different from 01:13:834 (1,2,3,4) -
yh it's ok

Kawashiro

00:56:691 (1,2,3) - 1/1 slider + circle for held sound from vocals? 1/2 triples looks kinda spammd from 00:56:079 (7,8) - since u using too much 1/2 rhythm xd same for 01:16:283 (1,2,3) -
00:58:528 (8) - also 1/2 slider + circle fits bettr here i guess
those 3 stacks on kiais aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa u can unstack every 3rd object there alr but yehaj i know its ur style anyways w nice flow btw

Riko

00:04:034 (4,5) - isn't should be like 00:02:807 (5,1,2) - ? adding kick on 00:04:341 - can be unify as new pattern from 00:02:807 -
00:02:807 (5,1) - also u should've swap nc w
00:12:609 (1,2) - 01:26:086 (1,2) - stack w
00:49:956 (3,4) - 00:52:405 (3,4) - they are really undermapped with vocals rhythm compared to others
01:30:066 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uhh i don't think circular flow work here as u did this kind of pattern for first time, maybe move 01:30:525 (6,7,1) - to somewhere u like as zigzag/triangle pattern should b work
interesting rhythm

idk if this mod is useful tho i suck w
goodluck

Kawashiro

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Kawashiro 2017-08-16T05:53:38+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
Kawashiro
00:56:691 (1,2,3) - 1/1 slider + circle for held sound from vocals? 1/2 triples looks kinda spammd from 00:56:079 (7,8) - since u using too much 1/2 rhythm xd same for 01:16:283 (1,2,3) - Hmm, im following vocal and drum. so it seems following both sounds correctly cuz the bass sound is in 00:56:691 (1,2) - here. btw i fould some problem at 00:55:773 (6) - here lol
00:58:528 (8) - also 1/2 slider + circle fits bettr here i guess - Ohhhh thanks to point this. here is two 1/2 slider like 01:18:120 (8,9) - here. my cute mistake :3
those 3 stacks on kiais aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa u can unstack every 3rd object there alr but yehaj i know its ur style anyways w nice flow btw - Thanks mama <3

世界一可愛いにとりちゃん's Hard

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Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-16T11:12:45+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
C00L sent me here

Easy

00:13:987 (1) - idk what's following here tbh i assume u followed the vocals on 00:13:069 (5) - so the next object should b started on 00:14:446 - from the vocal rhythm's logic, similar thing goes to 00:23:783 (1) - as well fixed it as requested
00:39:548 (3) - NC? I guess you following the measure but ye the calm part ended so i guess you need it i guess too ~
00:49:344 (1,2,3) - Since you used to followed the vocals how about using this rhythm? This can be also be more consistent with 00:54:548 changed here - good idea(1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - as well cuz u followed vocals thereee mmh - i dislike it here ~
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yh u have som potential thanks ^^

idk if this mod is useful tho i suck w same w
goodluck

Thanks for you mod and have a nice day

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2017-08-16T13:48:35+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
C00L sent me here oWO

C00L
00:31:589 (4) - I don't think the stack would be great here as it has strong drum compared to 00:30:671 (2) - , consider to unstack this or just reverse the 00:30:977 (3) - nah since this section is rather less intese (drums, vocals etc.) I wanted to keep stacks there to underline that. That part is actually one of the parts of that section so woudn't really make sense tbf
00:39:242 (4) - unstack pls it has finishhh same reason as above
00:44:446 (1,2,3,4) - 00:47:048 (1,2) - those 1/2 sliders usage is kinda questionable as normal diff imo, 1/1 sliders with 1/2 beat gap plays more natural as low diff but idk it's just my taste ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (or u can just get the reference from 01:23:638 - for rhythm) reason why it wasnt the same as the one you referenced is cuz the vocals are sharper and repeat every 6/8 beats whilst other is kinda just like softer
01:09:242 (1,2,3,4) - 01:11:691 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm fits more with vocals tbh, since their vocal rhythm is different from 01:13:834 (1,2,3,4) - I disagree tbh since the reason why this is like it is, is because of the 01:10:314 (3) - pitch changes at this, rest goes with vocals as well relating to the pitches and vocals as i see it. The rhythm you suggested is ok i guess but i prefer the tension my rhythm creates, especially here 01:09:854 (2,3) - , undelining all the 1/2's and pitch changes better imo.
yh it's ok sik ko

Thanker!

Sakurauchi Riko

1,579 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2017-08-16T14:04:13+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
Riko
00:04:034 (4,5) - isn't should be like 00:02:807 (5,1,2) - ? adding kick on 00:04:341 - can be unify as new pattern from 00:02:807 - yes, really missleading ..
00:02:807 (5,1) - also u should've swap nc w did
00:12:609 (1,2) - 01:26:086 (1,2) - stack w fixed
00:49:956 (3,4) - 00:52:405 (3,4) - they are really undermapped with vocals rhythm compared to others i did 1/1 sliders almost everywhere when the vocals are "hold" and long, also i think its good seperation in the spread if i use lower rhythm density compared to the top diff .. idk maybe you are right - will see what other say
01:30:066 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - uhh i don't think circular flow work here as u did this kind of pattern for first time, maybe move 01:30:525 (6,7,1) - to somewhere u like as zigzag/triangle pattern should b work yes works better
interesting rhythm

とても感謝ですアキさん

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Celektus

695 posts

Joined April 2014

Celektus 2017-08-16T19:34:11+00:00

hi hope this might be helpful and not annoying/too much

[Overall]

I think the dark green could maybe be a bit brighter, adjusting it's saturation might also be good and going more into a blue-green-ish shade.
Just some ideas tho

[

Journey]

I know it's probably not your intend, but I think you could change these stream a bit to additionally emphasize strong sounds in the stream moew like 00:00:658 (5) - 00:00:352 (1,5,7) - you could maybe pull off moving 1-4 to create a different gap into 5 like this.
In case you keep that the blanket is really off, You have a few other blankets that could be fixed like 00:02:039 (4) - look through your map if you can make the distance between all parts of the slider and the approach circle the same, I won't point out more sine it's redundant
why does this have a finish? 00:01:272 (9) - there's no crash in the song here you do that the whole section and then also don't map finishes onto crashes like this 00:00:352 (1) - you don't map crashes in the song a lot please hitsound them ;_;
this spacing could be lower since it's a really unimportant sound 00:13:069 (2,3) - you for comparison spaced out the vocals here less than that one 00:11:232 (7,1) - Overlapping with 00:12:609 (1) - might be a good idea that would still look fine imo and express lower spacing than the vocals
this jump also is pretty big and I don't get why 00:14:140 (2,3) -
overall I don't really get what your following in this section
since sometimes you have Vocals over drums and 00:11:997 (4) - 00:12:609 (1) - (Snare on slider end while head is Vocal)
and sometimes Drums over Vocals 00:14:140 (2) - (Vocals is on slider end while head is a Snare)
why a clap here? 00:15:977 (9) - there's no Snare like sound it's a hi hat which you never hitsounded particularly before in this section
this sound is placed on nothing 00:17:661 (2) - it's even more confusing that it gets more spacing than this Snare? 00:17:814 (3) -
that's not a Snare sound it's a Kick drum 00:17:967 (1) - so there should be no clap I guess at this point I can say that either you have a really weird way to hitsound I don't get or that your histounding needs to be re done.
to me It sounds like these notes aren't actually mapped to sounds 00:19:421 (2,2,4) - tho in this case it's kinda vague... also now you do emphasize with this spacing so maybe doing it in the intro might be a little additional introduction to this 00:19:574 (4,1) - :3... or not up to you
the movement from 1 into 2 here is kinda meh 00:21:028 (1,2) - if you ctrl + G the whole pattern 00:21:487 (2,3,4,5) - you go from 1s implied slider direction directly into 2 (former 5) and then 5 (former 2) into 6 is still comfortable with all the sharp angles, only the rotation change might be a bit harsh, but I would prefer that over the slider not going smoothly into 2
00:30:977 (1,2,3) - is actually slightly more intense than 00:29:752 (1,2,3,4) - so slightly bigger gaps would reflect that well I think.
Also the Drum-hitwhistle Hitsound is mostly used for open hi hats like this 00:30:977 (1,2,3) - so you might wanna use it. In this section are overall a lot of places where you could accent certain beats really nicely.

on this diff nearly every point I made is usually a problem in several places so go through your stuff with this all in mind maybe.

[

Rikoukz' Extra]

why are the sort of 2 different spacing in this pattern? 00:00:352 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you either use something like 00:00:812 (2,1) - or 00:01:272 (1,2) - and there doesn't seem to be a sort of obvious logic behind it, I first off though your tried to emphasize every big white tick tho that's not really the case 00:02:039 (3,4) - it's kinda fine though if you care enough maybe try and make them relate to the song somehow even more.
why is this big 00:06:490 (1,2) - but this smaller 00:06:643 (2,3) - ?
I don't really get why you under mapped some of the Vocals rather than any other instruments like here 00:10:314 (2) - and even then starting sliders on drums like the Snare or the kick might've been better and you could've also been more consistent about how you use filler rhythm and so on. This is more like criticisms than actually suggesting you to change your rhythm, but you could improve some parts I think in ways I suggested.
why is this one bigger than the others? 00:10:773 (4,5) - If I think bigger spacing into 00:10:773 (4) - would make more sense since there is a Snare drum on it
theoretically this should be bigger since it's a strong sound 00:12:303 (6,1) - tho I can understand if that's hard to solve.
I think 1/2 sliders might fit for these 1/1 gaps 00:22:099 (6) - tho it comes down to preference I think since you are using not a lot of filler rhythm.
maybe use a 5% volume change here 00:30:900 - to mute the blue tick in this extended slider, it's a commonly used hitsound technique that's why I'm suggesting it. This applies to most extended sliders in the map if you want to use them.
I think you could emphasize these Vocals in that jump pattern with more than just spacing increases 01:06:487 (1,1,1,1,2) - something like rotation changes, different angles or just more spacing into them specifically would be great if not a combination of these, If you think it's just "fine" here maybe consider it in other maps.
A slow slider as long as the Bass is still audible might be nice here 01:30:984 -
wait why streams now? 01:34:358 (3,4,5,6,7) - I can understand if you think after a lot of harder parts that this is ok, but it's kinda lame in my opinion to deviate even though it's the same as in the intro. I would prefer if you would be more consistent here and use the same rhythms as the intro.
as far as I can tell this is the fist linear jump pattern in the map so far 01:37:878 (1,2,3) - which is really unexpected and weird to play if you didn't introduce it earlier... ok I looked it's not the first, but it's the 2nd one in the map and I think you might wanna make both sharp angles instead of wide ones since they play really uncomfortably. 01:37:878 (1,2,3) - 00:24:089 (2,3,4) - they mostly just add more unnecessary emphasis which you might not want. Not sure if you were looking for to use as much comfortable movement as possible, but they seem unintentional, so if make 'em sharp.

I think that's enough maybe if you want more feedback on the other diffs I can mod those too on another day, but for now this seems pretty big. gl wih the set~

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-16T20:36:59+00:00

Celektus wrote:
hi hope this might be helpful and not annoying/too much

[Overall]
I think the dark green could maybe be a bit brighter, adjusting it's saturation might also be good and going more into a blue-green-ish shade.
Just some ideas tho

[ Journey]
I know it's probably not your intend, but I think you could change these stream a bit to additionally emphasize strong sounds in the stream moew like 00:00:658 (5) - 00:00:352 (1,5,7) - you could maybe pull off moving 1-4 to create a different gap into 5 like this. i like your idea but i think it just looks wierd if you have a group with 4 and 2 circles - when it would be and 8/9er stream it would be better ~
In case you keep that the blanket is really off, You have a few other blankets that could be fixed like 00:02:039 (4) - look through your map if you can make the distance between all parts of the slider and the approach circle the same, I won't point out more sine it's redundant
why does this have a finish? 00:01:272 (9) - there's no crash in the song here you do that the whole section and then also don't map finishes onto crashes like this 00:00:352 (1) - (but there isnt a finish)you don't map crashes in the song a lot please hitsound them ;_; this is like the first set i hitsounded sooooo mistakes could be made)
this spacing could be lower since it's a really unimportant sound 00:13:069 (2,3) - you for comparison spaced out the vocals here less than that one 00:11:232 (7,1) - Overlapping with 00:12:609 (1) - might be a good idea that would still look fine imo and express lower spacing than the vocals lowered DS a tiny bit but 1,9 wasnt high to begin with - i dont really like the suggestion with 00:12:609 (1) - tho
this jump also is pretty big and I don't get why 00:14:140 (2,3) - first - jump which begin from slider are easier to hit than circle jumps + i wanted to held the upcoming jumps tinier so i had that jump a bit bigger
overall I don't really get what your following in this section
since sometimes you have Vocals over drums and 00:11:997 (4) - 00:12:609 (1) - (Snare on slider end while head is Vocal)
and sometimes Drums over Vocals 00:14:140 (2) - (Vocals is on slider end while head is a Snare) well - its not like i should stop the map when there is no vocal - and here the drums are from tiem to time (expecially where the vocal stops) ver intense so it would be wierd if i just ignore them
why a clap here? 00:15:977 (9) - there's no Snare like sound it's a hi hat which you never hitsounded particularly before in this section fixed it and a few other of theese
this sound is placed on nothing 00:17:661 (2) - it's even more confusing that it gets more spacing than this Snare? 00:17:814 (3) - i mapped this how should i put it uhhh.. indirect so. hm i know what you getting at but ill let this for now (but got your opinion in mind ^^)
that's not a Snare sound it's a Kick drum 00:17:967 (1) - so there should be no clap I guess at this point I can say that either you have a really weird way to hitsound I don't get or that your histounding needs to be re done.thats just to support that mapping (like pattern wise) its fine imo
to me It sounds like these notes aren't actually mapped to sounds 00:19:421 (2,2,4) - tho in this case it's kinda vague... also now you do emphasize with this spacing so maybe doing it in the intro might be a little additional introduction to this 00:19:574 (4,1) - :3... or not up to you uhm there is rolling sound which kinda (rolled over) at 5 so i made groups - fit well imo
the movement from 1 into 2 here is kinda meh 00:21:028 (1,2) - if you ctrl + G the whole pattern 00:21:487 (2,3,4,5) - you go from 1s implied slider direction directly into 2 (former 5) and then 5 (former 2) into 6 is still comfortable with all the sharp angles, only the rotation change might be a bit harsh, but I would prefer that over the slider not going smoothly into 2 uhm i just rotated that shit
00:30:977 (1,2,3) - is actually slightly more intense than 00:29:752 (1,2,3,4) - so slightly bigger gaps would reflect that well I think. its not really more intense enough to make a difference in the map imo (i didnt really hear the increasing intensity tho)
Also the Drum-hitwhistle Hitsound is mostly used for open hi hats like this 00:30:977 (1,2,3) - so you might wanna use it. In this section are overall a lot of places where you could accent certain beats really nicely. i will taliking about my hitsounding with others anyway later so ill let thsi for now

on this diff nearly every point I made is usually a problem in several places so go through your stuff with this all in mind maybe.

I think that's enough maybe if you want more feedback on the other diffs I can mod those too on another day, but for now this seems pretty big. gl wih the set~

Thanks for you mod ~

Botan

212 posts

Joined May 2017

Botan 2017-08-18T06:21:34+00:00

started: 10:41pm

EasyUh, no kiai?
00:14:446 (6) - NC here for 3 objects?
00:23:783 (1) - Shouldn't this play on the white tick to it's right? This is the only object to not play on a vocal hit in the entire section.
00:41:997 - NC here for 3 objects?
00:47:048 (4) - NC here for 2 objects? Represent change in vocals.
00:47:814 - Add circle here, the pause without it feels so awkward.
01:38:031 - Add circle here?
All the clap hitsounds got really annoying because they were on nearly every note and every sliderend. Didn't feel like it was enhancing the map for me.

C00L's NormalUhh, no kiai?
00:13:987 (3) - Okay I know this is mapped to the guitar but it feels to play because we've been following the vocals everywhere else. Also, guitar sound only plays in left speaker/earphone so if someone is playing with 1 speaker/earphone they wouldn't be able to hear it.

00:16:130 (3) - Same as below...
00:23:783 (3) - This isn't mapped to anything or is this for consistency?
00:25:620 (3) - Sound doesn't start until the middle white tick. I'm all for consistency pattern wise but if the in all of these sections we're playing on vocal hits, shouldn't we be consistent with mapping circles and sliders on vocal hits instead of worrying about pattern consistency?
Ugh, the claps on every object... Ya'll gonna give me a headache. I swear to God, if the other difficulties do this too...
Note to every other difficulty that does this, I don't know cause I'm lazy af to check, but am I the only one that thinks this to be annoying? Like, no one claps to a song like that. To me, it doesn't enhance the song in any way and ends up just ruining the rhythm for me. /rant

Kawa's HardWell... at least the claps are quieter. I don't really have a problem with this difficulty although I found some of the stack circles into sliders a bit weird to play. 00:56:691 (1,2,3) - This one for example, maybe hitsound the kick drums so it's obvious that we're playing to the kick drums and not the vocals?
finished: 11:21pm

The rest of the freaking difficulties

>hears the claps

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-18T11:49:58+00:00

Botan wrote:

started: 10:41pm
EasyUh, no kiai?
00:14:446 (6) - NC here for 3 objects?
00:23:783 (1) - Shouldn't this play on the white tick to it's right? This is the only object to not play on a vocal hit in the entire section.
00:41:997 - NC here for 3 objects?
00:47:048 (4) - NC here for 2 objects? Represent change in vocals.
00:47:814 - Add circle here, the pause without it feels so awkward. -
01:38:031 - Add circle here? for both i dislike the idea - for the first - i like to have a small gap before the refrain so the player can now prepare himself for the refrain (expecially very new players at easy) in the 2nd gap i held it consistend like the beginning and i dont see need for that tbh
All the clap hitsounds got really annoying because they were on nearly every note and every sliderend. Didn't feel like it was enhancing the map for me.
about the hitsounds - this is like the first set i hitsounded so ofc here are mistakes how i handle everything - i planned anywhere to have a session with other guys do talk about it
finished: 11:21pm
The rest of the freaking difficulties
>hears the claps

unmentioned - fixed

Thank you for the mod and have a nice day~

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2017-08-18T17:49:51+00:00

Botan wrote:
C00L's NormalUhh, no kiai? oops
00:13:987 (3) - Okay I know this is mapped to the guitar but it feels to play because we've been following the vocals everywhere else. Also, guitar sound only plays in left speaker/earphone so if someone is playing with 1 speaker/earphone they wouldn't be able to hear it. haha, well rip monstrata then xd hes deaf on one ear xD also there are no vocals there anyway, just the breath take on the white tick of that slider, so I mapped it to the guitar so that it doesn't feel empty for no reason, 00:16:589 (1,2,3) - this is where i prioritised vocals doe
00:16:130 (3) - Same as below...
00:23:783 (3) - This isn't mapped to anything or is this for consistency? drums bro
00:25:620 (3) - Sound doesn't start until the middle white tick. I'm all for consistency pattern wise but if the in all of these sections we're playing on vocal hits, shouldn't we be consistent with mapping circles and sliders on vocal hits instead of worrying about pattern consistency? again mapped to drums, the thing that starts on the white tick is the vocals
Ugh, the claps on every object... Ya'll gonna give me a headache. I swear to God, if the other difficulties do this too... dont look at me xd,
didnt hitsounds this :p
Note to every other difficulty that does this, I don't know cause I'm lazy af to check, but am I the only one that thinks this to be annoying? Like, no one claps to a song like that. To me, it doesn't enhance the song in any way and ends up just ruining the rhythm for me. /rant Yea i agree with you actually hitsounds are kinda weird, but i guess they'll be fixed later /shrug

thanks for the modes https://puu.sh/xdqlY/a573baa1d0.osu

rockstarrzz

226 posts

Joined April 2014

rockstarrzz 2017-08-19T18:51:05+00:00

hi, from modrqs

Cos I cba to point it out 1000 time, there is a lot of times where the objects are outside the play area, not entirely sure if that's part of the criteria but should probably be looked and fixed regardless.

Easy

00:10:161 (1,2) - overlap is a little ugly
00:19:956 (1,2) - ^
00:38:936 (2,1) - ^
00:40:620 (3) - outside grid
00:16:589 (2) - ^
00:20:569 (2) - ^
00:21:793 (3,4,5) - ^
00:28:222 (2) - ^
00:59:752 (2) - ^
01:16:283 (4) - change this up a bit
01:21:181 (4) - outside
01:22:558 (6) - ^
just some petty, minor thing, good dif - nice hitsounding

cool's normal

Just a head's up - this dif is marked as Hard on the site, I don't think this is a massive problem, but might wanna tone down SR a tad
00:02:500 (3,1) - blanket
00:04:034 (1) - outside grid
00:24:242 (4) - ^
00:30:671 (2) - stack properly
01:39:256 (3) - ugly overlap
another good dif

kawa's hard

AR is way too high for a Hard of this SR, 7-7.5 max
OD too high, change to 5.5-6.5
00:06:490 (1) - maybe stack on 3?
00:08:638 (3) - neaten up
00:36:334 (2) - ^
01:14:905 (5) - ^
not much to say, really good map

Light Insane

00:00:352 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool patterns but slider shape is a bit repetitive, maybe 2nd and 4th sections curve them a bit for variety
ah, hexagonal grid mapping i see
01:04:497 (2,3) - big ugly overlap
01:33:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as before
good map - exceptionally easy to acc, maybe increase OD a little? even 8 wouldn't be a stretch I don't think, very basic rhythm throughout

Insane

00:29:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe space the different stacks apart so theres a bit of a jump between them
00:43:069 (5) - ugly slider shape
00:51:793 (6) - nc
00:52:099 (1) - remove nc
01:12:456 (1) - outside grid
01:42:623 (1) - ugly slider shape, you can make it look nicer and still follow the sound
Another solid map

Extra

00:04:495 (6) - rotate 30
00:08:178 (2) - eh, not a fan of this overlap
00:08:638 (3,4,5) - or these
00:19:344 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - seems unnecessarily intense for the song?
00:26:997 (6,1) - ew overlap
00:28:069 (3) - ^
00:28:681 (5,6) - make parallel
nice use of blanketing and sliderhead/tail overlaps
01:34:664 (7) - place under the stream properly
01:36:195 (8) - ^
01:36:807 (7) - ^
01:37:572 (7) - ^ - just looks a bit odd
01:37:878 (1,2,3) - distance snap

Journey

00:13:681 (1) - not a fan of this shape
00:15:518 (8) - ^
00:23:477 (4) - ^
Pretty fun map, looks good, not a fan of the jump spam at the end, but it's not really a problem, just a personal preference.

Great mapset, gl with rank

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-20T00:12:56+00:00

rockstarrzz wrote:
hi, from modrqs

Cos I cba to point it out 1000 time, there is a lot of times where the objects are outside the play area, not entirely sure if that's part of the criteria but should probably be looked and fixed regardless.

Easy
00:10:161 (1,2) - overlap is a little ugly intentional - think its ok (i even hgeld the pattern for the overlap equal)
00:19:956 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:38:936 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:40:620 (3) - outside grid (just becasue its a bit wierd in the editor it doesnt mean its offsceen - its ok here ^^
00:16:589 (2) - ^ uhm could be that is is slighty off at 4:3 need to recheck later
00:20:569 (2) - ^ ^
00:21:793 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:28:222 (2) - ^ ^
00:59:752 (2) - ^ ^
01:16:283 (4) - change this up a bit the angle would be too sharp then imo
01:21:181 (4) - outside nope ~
01:22:558 (6) - ^ ^
just some petty, minor thing, good dif - nice hitsounding thanks ^^

Light Insane
00:00:352 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool patterns but slider shape is a bit repetitive, maybe 2nd and 4th sections curve them a bit for variety thanks for reminding me (changed that before in insane - was only straight sliders too) ( changed only 5th slider tho)
ah, hexagonal grid mapping i see nope^^ everything from hand)
01:04:497 (2,3) - big ugly overlap hm - it was intentional too but dont really fit into that section - need more opinions about this ^^
01:33:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as before yea!
good map - exceptionally easy to acc, maybe increase OD a little? even 8 wouldn't be a stretch I don't think, very basic rhythm throughout ^^

Insane
00:29:752 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe space the different stacks apart so theres a bit of a jump between them i think it is fine as it is - i really like to have a really slow part in my map when song allows it
00:43:069 (5) - ugly slider shape yay! now i have to motivation to remove that shit xD
00:51:793 (6) - ncgood catch (for wrong NC pattern)
00:52:099 (1) - remove nc ^
01:12:456 (1) - outside grid but not offscreen ^^
01:42:623 (1) - ugly slider shape, you can make it look nicer and still follow the sound hmm i like it - but will remove it when more say so ^^
Another solid map ~

Journey
00:13:681 (1) - not a fan of this shape again i can finally change that *****
00:15:518 (8) - ^ looks fine to me
00:23:477 (4) - ^ slightly changed
Pretty fun map, looks good, not a fan of the jump spam at the end, but it's not really a problem, just a personal preference.

Great mapset, gl with rank

Thanks and have a nice day

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-08-20T05:22:23+00:00

Botan wrote:
Kawa's HardWell... at least the claps are quieter. I don't really have a problem with this difficulty although I found some of the stack circles into sliders a bit weird to play. 00:56:691 (1,2,3) - This one for example, maybe hitsound the kick drums so it's obvious that we're playing to the kick drums and not the vocals? - about 2circle-1/2slider stack patterns, i've felt they have something similar sounds as 00:37:712 (3,4,5) - here. it seems... drum? anyway i have an intent to this pattern.

rockstarrzz wrote:
kawa's hard
AR is way too high for a Hard of this SR, 7-7.5 max
OD too high, change to 5.5-6.5 - lmao i forgot to change this ><
00:06:490 (1) - maybe stack on 3? - wut? stack with 00:06:183 (3) - here? than an fucking big jump is in 00:06:490 (1,2) - here. no
00:08:638 (3) - neaten up
00:36:334 (2) - ^
01:14:905 (5) - ^ - Already "PERFECT" S shape slider.
not much to say, really good map - Thanks :3

@IceKalt : Change my diff's ar to 7.4, od to 6.9 and hp to 5.8. nothing changed about notes. and delete inherited point at 01:31:291 - here and 01:31:597 - here. sry, i'm really busy ;-;

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2017-08-20T12:25:38+00:00

rockstarrzz wrote:
cool's normal
Just a head's up - this dif is marked as Hard on the site, I don't think this is a massive problem, but might wanna tone down SR a tad This doesn't make a difference, there is already a diff below 2* (which is called easy but has a normal icon ) which makes this set rankable.
Also star rating is only a feature osu! provides for approximations for the amount of difficulty one diff provides, if however key elements of a diff are kept then the star rating can vary from diff to diff.
00:02:500 (3,1) - blanket doesnt make a difference xd
00:04:034 (1) - outside grid just because a part of a slider body or a note is outside of the editor grid doesn't mean it's bad in any way. The only time this matters is if a object is offscreen, you can test this by pressing the "test" button below to see if a object is offscreen. Or alternatively press f5, pause the beatmap at a given time by pressing ctrl+p incase you need more time. This will give you a accurate representation of the gameplay area (since the editor grid is inacurate to some extent)
00:24:242 (4) - ^
00:30:671 (2) - stack properly ok
01:39:256 (3) - ugly overlap 01:38:337 (1,2,3) - goes with the overlap logic of these 2 objects
another good dif

thank https://puu.sh/xeQsQ/9426d63907.osu

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-08-20T13:00:10+00:00

Is this map incomplete? Why WIP?
If this map is ready to rank it is advisable to change it to Pending

Easy

00:04:955 - Pattern should put a circle here
00:14:446 (3) - If you are picking up the lyrics sound 00:14:293 - you should start from here
00:23:783 (1) - Let's pick up lyrics through consistency
00:24:089 - Here is the beginning.
00:47:814 - Let's pick up the lyrics here
01:16:283 (4,1) - Avoid overlap of slider slide
image
01:21:181 (4) - Add NC
01:01:589 (1) - just like here
01:38:031 - Pattern should put a circle here

I will write a continuation.
Please do not reply

Cool's Normal

00:33:426 (1) - This NC makes no sense at all
Very combo is too short
00:44:446 (1,2,3,4) - This is rhythm strange
00:44:599 - You should start from here
00:47:048 (1) - just like here
00:59:293 - It is better to avoid picking up it because it is a very small sound when it is Normal
01:01:742 - 01:18:885 - 01:21:334 - ^
01:38:184 - Why are not you picking up the noticeable piano sound here?

Light Insane

00:38:171 (3,4) - You should Ctrl+G this rhythm
00:45:824 (3) -00:47:814 (3) - Why is not NC?
01:04:038 - 01:04:497 - 01:04:956 - 01:05:416 - Add finish
01:12:303 (3) - Added NC in pattern?

Good luck!

Last edited by DeletedUser_423548 2017-08-21T12:59:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-20T14:38:49+00:00

dont worry

~ i wont reply ~

Sakurauchi Riko

1,579 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2017-08-20T21:35:00+00:00

Celektus wrote:
[ Rikoukz' Extra]
why are the sort of 2 different spacing in this pattern? 00:00:352 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you either use something like 00:00:812 (2,1) - or 00:01:272 (1,2) - and there doesn't seem to be a sort of obvious logic behind it, I first off though your tried to emphasize every big white tick tho that's not really the case 00:02:039 (3,4) - it's kinda fine though if you care enough maybe try and make them relate to the song somehow even more. i did increased ds for every higher pitched sound, that isnt always on the downbeat thats why it might look weird at first
why is this big 00:06:490 (1,2) - but this smaller 00:06:643 (2,3) - ? because 00:06:643 (2,3) - is different from the circle before. those two sliders represent a similar sound so they look toegther in a pattern seperated fromn the circle that has a rather different sound
I don't really get why you under mapped some of the Vocals rather than any other instruments like here 00:10:314 (2) - and even then starting sliders on drums like the Snare or the kick might've been better and you could've also been more consistent about how you use filler rhythm and so on. This is more like criticisms than actually suggesting you to change your rhythm, but you could improve some parts I think in ways I suggested. when she holds a syllable the i use 1/1 slider, you may say it is undermapped because vocal is on slidertail but thats just my way to emphasis the holding syllable. in the end you can add the "its my style" meme here, fits pretty well
why is this one bigger than the others? 00:10:773 (4,5) - If I think bigger spacing into 00:10:773 (4) - would make more sense since there is a Snare drum on it it has higher spacing compared to the gap right before, and i tihnk thats important
theoretically this should be bigger since it's a strong sound 00:12:303 (6,1) - tho I can understand if that's hard to solve. its just fine, visual spacing is there and thats important
I think 1/2 sliders might fit for these 1/1 gaps 00:22:099 (6) - tho it comes down to preference I think since you are using not a lot of filler rhythm. since this is 2nd hardest diff, I like to have some actual spread towards the top diff. these sounds i didnt map are not strong at all and it is an interestign rhythm
maybe use a 5% volume change here 00:30:900 - to mute the blue tick in this extended slider, it's a commonly used hitsound technique that's why I'm suggesting it. This applies to most extended sliders in the map if you want to use them. yea sure, added them hopefully everywhere needed
I think you could emphasize these Vocals in that jump pattern with more than just spacing increases 01:06:487 (1,1,1,1,2) - something like rotation changes, different angles or just more spacing into them specifically would be great if not a combination of these, If you think it's just "fine" here maybe consider it in other maps. dont see any issues actually other than personal preference
A slow slider as long as the Bass is still audible might be nice here 01:30:984 - sure
wait why streams now? 01:34:358 (3,4,5,6,7) - I can understand if you think after a lot of harder parts that this is ok, but it's kinda lame in my opinion to deviate even though it's the same as in the intro. I would prefer if you would be more consistent here and use the same rhythms as the intro. to show progression in the map
as far as I can tell this is the fist linear jump pattern in the map so far 01:37:878 (1,2,3) - which is really unexpected and weird to play if you didn't introduce it earlier... ok I looked it's not the first, but it's the 2nd one in the map and I think you might wanna make both sharp angles instead of wide ones since they play really uncomfortably. 01:37:878 (1,2,3) - 00:24:089 (2,3,4) - they mostly just add more unnecessary emphasis which you might not want. Not sure if you were looking for to use as much comfortable movement as possible, but they seem unintentional, so if make 'em sharp. of course i want the heavy emphasis here, it is really strong in the music and so the player should pay attention to it. it fits VERY well here imo

rockstarrzz wrote:
Extra
00:04:495 (6) - rotate 30
00:08:178 (2) - eh, not a fan of this overlap
00:08:638 (3,4,5) - or these
00:19:344 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - seems unnecessarily intense for the song? that might be true, maybe ill nerf the spacing here - will see what other will say
00:26:997 (6,1) - ew overlap
00:28:069 (3) - ^
00:28:681 (5,6) - make parallel
nice use of blanketing and sliderhead/tail overlaps
01:34:664 (7) - place under the stream properly
01:36:195 (8) - ^
01:36:807 (7) - ^
01:37:572 (7) - ^ - just looks a bit odd those are pretty much a small concept to make the map look structured. in fact these sounds are kind of emphasized so a little flow change fits for them. it is consistent and should be no issue here
01:37:878 (1,2,3) - distance snap

everything unemntioned here, I consider as a personal preference and not worthy changing since I used it as my concept and visual appeal

Thanks for the mods

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:little secret magic
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Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-21T13:49:45+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
:!:
Is this map incomplete? Why WIP?
If this map is ready to rank it is advisable to change it to Pending i totally forgot that

Easy
00:04:955 - Pattern should put a circle here
00:14:446 (3) - If you are picking up the lyrics sound 00:14:293 - you should start from here i probably should ..yea
00:23:783 (1) - Let's pick up lyrics through consistency lets do that
00:24:089 - Here is the beginning. but this sonds just wierd ~
00:47:814 - Let's pick up the lyrics here
01:16:283 (4,1) - Avoid overlap of slider slide pssst - nobody saw this
image
01:21:181 (4) - Add NC !
01:01:589 (1) - just like here ~
01:38:031 - Pattern should put a circle here yea
I will write a continuation.
Please do not reply

Light Insane
00:38:171 (3,4) - You should Ctrl+G this rhythm seems better
00:45:824 (3) -00:47:814 (3) - Why is not NC? uhmm - oups
01:04:038 - 01:04:497 - 01:04:956 - 01:05:416 - Add finish
01:12:303 (3) - Added NC in pattern? would be better i guess
Good luck!

Thanks for your mod ~

Icekalt

507 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Icekalt 2017-08-23T16:38:30+00:00

Journey is in maintance now

Dont mod this diff atm~

ty ^^

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2017-08-24T03:00:21+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Cool's Normal
00:33:426 (1) - This NC makes no sense at all agreed
Very combo is too short
00:44:446 (1,2,3,4) - This is rhythm strange
00:44:599 - You should start from here
00:47:048 (1) - just like here no cuz first sliders are with guitar cuz vocals arent that dominant and second are with vocals cuz literally very high pitch
00:59:293 - It is better to avoid picking up it because it is a very small sound when it is Normal ugggghhh?
01:01:742 - 01:18:885 - 01:21:334 - ^ ^
01:38:184 - Why are not you picking up the noticeable piano sound here? I am picking them up, but you do realise that the thing you pointed out would literally increase the density of the notes by like 1 million ye? it's called simplifying rhythm to make it easier for the newer player base

thanks https://puu.sh/xi5MN/b9ed4681e2.osu

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-09-02T14:48:07+00:00

some minor update

sdfqqfsdfasdf

osu file format v14

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Title:little secret magic
TitleUnicode:little secret magic
Artist:fhana
ArtistUnicode:fhána
Creator:IceKalt
Version:Kawa's Hard
Source:
Tags:sakurauchi riko phyloukz kawashiro -unlock c00l cool
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Icekalt

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Icekalt 2017-09-06T18:10:46+00:00

remap done ~

open again

Joe Castle

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Joe Castle 2017-09-07T19:50:10+00:00

Hi there! you requested a mod from my queueueueueue (?)
Lets see what you have!

Easy PC Lemon Squishi

1. 00:06:490 (3) - you forgot to use a Finish Hitsound on the slider-end at 00:06:950
2. 01:05:875 (3,4) - the curve of 01:05:875 (3) doesnt fit quite well, maybe fixing the curve, so it can make a nice blanket?
3. 01:39:562 (3) - same problem as #1, it would sound better if you use a Finish Hitsound on the slider-end
4. NO CUSTOM COLORS??? REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE (?)

The COOL Normal

1. 00:02:500 (3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9036633 the curve of the slider doesnt look good, move the head of the slider a little bit up, so it can flow better with the circle
2. No custom colors either

Kawa's Hard looks fine to me

Light Insane, with extra dip and two number 9s

1. 01:04:497 (2,3) - this doesnt look good at all man

(sorry for assuming your gender xdddddd) the overlap makes it look weird, so you should change it.
2. 01:48:133 (1) - The slider should end at 01:48:899 in my opinion, since it would flow better that way

Insane

1. 00:14:599 (2,3,4) - this part looks weird, talking about the pattern IMO, maybe moving circle "3" a little bit more to the left?

2. 00:19:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part could flow better if 00:20:875 (7,8) had the same spacing that the rest of the combo has, i mean, make all this part have the same spacing between them
3. 01:23:638 (1,2) - maybe can you make this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9036902 it would make it look better
4. 01:48:133 (1) - end this slider at 01:48:899

The Extra Yummy Extra

1. 00:08:638 (3,4) - the slider "3" doesnt flow quite well witht he slider "4", maybe do the same thing that you made at 00:07:717 (1,2) ?

The Extra Yummier Extra

1. 01:48:133 (1) - end this slider at 01:48:899

Pretty solid map to be honest! I hope you can rank this! i wish you the best for this map!

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