M4M
[General]
I'm sure your BPM is wrong there, it is not 86 BPM but rather 172 BPM, try to follow BPM from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597111 , since it's from ranked beatmap, it's trustable source.
[Atmosphere]
00:26:101 (26101|2) - Idk bout you, but personally having 1/16 just to follow vocal isn't exactly good idea imo as it's really redundant, moreover i'm quite sure it's actually quite late to be 1/16.. simplification already allowed in the current RC so you better snap to 1/4.
00:29:371 (29371|2) - This isn't really same pitch with 00:29:022 (29022|2) - So it isn't fit to be trill, better move to col 4.
00:31:508 (31508|0) - and other places i'm not sure why you really want to use all the grace note here and there for vocal.. It's only making thing unnecessary more complicated that way.. not follow vocal if it causes broken snap seem to be the better option as you don't actually have to use all those ambiguous snap.
00:39:487 (39487|0) - Move to col 7 as that column really lacks note.
00:43:499 - This is kinda confusing as you wanna catch vocal but don't map 00:43:325 - With LN..
00:46:987 - 00:47:511 - This too, if you decide to follow a certain instrument, make sure you actually do it consistently so that you express your idea more coherent and properly.
00:50:127 (50127|1,50301|4) - You decided to put these complicated LN when you don't use it before such as 00:41:057 - is really inconsistent and vague..
00:57:787 (57787|6) - this is really ambiguous as this is out of structure you use for bracket.. this supposed to be moved to col 6.
00:54:416 - Try weaken the SV so the effect actually fits more with the soft clap there.. 1,3 and 0,7x fit the deal
01:28:967 - While i know you want to make structure revolving not use note for col 1 and col 7, the one thing you should notice is the fact that the instrument already rising differently enough from previous part, still limiting them to only 5 column doesn't really make any sense as you want to make sure the sudden loud drum get emphasized more properly, try arrange them so the col 1 and col 7 being used.
01:34:697 (94697|2,94865|2,95034|2,95202|5,95371|5,95540|5) - idk why you use this kind of layering towards instrument that doesn't even hold emphasize regard to only single jack.. use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8566640
01:39:922 - Same as above.
01:40:933 (100933|4,100954|5,100975|6) - And also the same grace notes, these are classified as dump, and i'm sure you won't get pass with this one as this doesn't have clear sound and instead an ambiguous one.
Good luck
[General]
I'm sure your BPM is wrong there, it is not 86 BPM but rather 172 BPM, try to follow BPM from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/597111 , since it's from ranked beatmap, it's trustable source.
[Atmosphere]
00:26:101 (26101|2) - Idk bout you, but personally having 1/16 just to follow vocal isn't exactly good idea imo as it's really redundant, moreover i'm quite sure it's actually quite late to be 1/16.. simplification already allowed in the current RC so you better snap to 1/4.
00:29:371 (29371|2) - This isn't really same pitch with 00:29:022 (29022|2) - So it isn't fit to be trill, better move to col 4.
00:31:508 (31508|0) - and other places i'm not sure why you really want to use all the grace note here and there for vocal.. It's only making thing unnecessary more complicated that way.. not follow vocal if it causes broken snap seem to be the better option as you don't actually have to use all those ambiguous snap.
00:39:487 (39487|0) - Move to col 7 as that column really lacks note.
00:43:499 - This is kinda confusing as you wanna catch vocal but don't map 00:43:325 - With LN..
00:46:987 - 00:47:511 - This too, if you decide to follow a certain instrument, make sure you actually do it consistently so that you express your idea more coherent and properly.
00:50:127 (50127|1,50301|4) - You decided to put these complicated LN when you don't use it before such as 00:41:057 - is really inconsistent and vague..
00:57:787 (57787|6) - this is really ambiguous as this is out of structure you use for bracket.. this supposed to be moved to col 6.
00:54:416 - Try weaken the SV so the effect actually fits more with the soft clap there.. 1,3 and 0,7x fit the deal
01:28:967 - While i know you want to make structure revolving not use note for col 1 and col 7, the one thing you should notice is the fact that the instrument already rising differently enough from previous part, still limiting them to only 5 column doesn't really make any sense as you want to make sure the sudden loud drum get emphasized more properly, try arrange them so the col 1 and col 7 being used.
01:34:697 (94697|2,94865|2,95034|2,95202|5,95371|5,95540|5) - idk why you use this kind of layering towards instrument that doesn't even hold emphasize regard to only single jack.. use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8566640
01:39:922 - Same as above.
01:40:933 (100933|4,100954|5,100975|6) - And also the same grace notes, these are classified as dump, and i'm sure you won't get pass with this one as this doesn't have clear sound and instead an ambiguous one.
Good luck