Syadow- wrote:

Oni chwan ?

00:29:688 (29688|0) - double pianos

00:32:133 (32133|2) - double owo for pianos

00:50:207 (50207|2,50281|1) - in red tick owo, wrong offset check out in new offset

00:59:228 (59228|1,59297|2,59366|0,59435|1,59504|2) - 1/4 wrong offset check out in new offset

01:00:884 (60884|1,60953|0,61022|2,61090|1,61159|0) - 1/4 ^

01:05:159 (65159|0,65228|1,65297|2) - ^

01:05:573 (65573|0,65642|1,65711|2) - ^

01:35:726 - till 01:36:615 - 1/4 beat

01:51:281 - how about dis https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8540335 more balance Good

01:53:948 (113948|1,114022|2,114096|3,114170|1,114244|2,114318|3) - 1/2 beat LN check out in new offset melody

01:55:615 (115615|2,115837|3) - double plz like 01:48:503 - second part of the chorus was intended for drums

01:56:503 (116503|2,116726|1) - ^ 01:56:948 (116948|2) - uh same

01:59:892 - 01:59:781 - 1/4

skip the outro

Litharrale wrote:

NM
1|2|3|4

the new meta


BG looks bad because it's really low res. take this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/eZ2GSYs.jpg and redo your edit.

no hitsounds zzzzzzzz

call me back and I'll finish my mod when you apply the above two changes

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General

For all General Mods I have already fixed. Thanks!

MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP

1. Not needed.

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS

1. Original taiko mode spread. wait. . .

Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: PASS

1. Looking good.

Hitsound: SKIP

1. Waiting for good d r u m experience. . .

Hitsound Volume: MISS

1. From Lude's Oni: https://puu.sh/wJ8nk.png I rather use 40% as always.

Kiai Time: MISS

1. Two difficulties lack of the first kiai time:
   
   1. Eedow's Muzukashii: 00:55:022 to 01:21:504.
   2. Lude's Oni: 00:55:022 to 01:21:504.

Metadata: MISS

1. ...So one week after his release, you already have the song!? lol. This was hard to find (because the official site still doesn't update with the new songs...?) Links: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mckT4Db3xIg , https://twitter.com/taiko_team/status/865034027975049216 , http://taiko.namco-ch.net/taiko/songlist/list04.php#namco <- not updated? lol.
   
   1. Tags1: "Taiko no Tatsujin" -> "Taiko no Tatsujin Yellow Ver." (I just have that doubt, to be consistent with the source label.)
   2. Tags2: "CS" (Duplicated? You need the real Nickname not the Guest Difficulty name again...)

Widescreen Support: MISS

1. Uncheck Widescreen Support in Lude's Oni.

Preview Point: MISS

1. I rather adjust the preview point at 01:36:559 or 01:36:503 . Since 01:36:560 - is bad adjusted, no snaps there.

AiMod Things: MISS

1. Some things:
   
   1. Lude's Oni Low volume sections (Already said above, use 40% to be consistent.)
   2. Eedow's Muzukashii: https://puu.sh/wJ8wh.png <- Translation: There is a note behind the Longnote end at 01:13:228 and 02:02:624 (122624|1) - should be snapped at 02:02:622 .
   3. CS' Inner Oni: https://puu.sh/wLEqS.png <- Normalization left here? I mean using SV's for keeping the chart speed.
   4. Lude's Oni and Eedow's Muzukashii: Use Soft sampleset only like all the rest.

Mod!

[Kantan]

00:08:799 (8799|1,9133|2,9466|0,9799|3) - I think that for this bpm is a bit hard to use 1/2 Longnotes here. I rather change to notes and use roll pattern, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601066 Or use 1/1 Longnotes, some kicks are covered for these longnotes: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601070 fixed

00:12:133 (12133|2,12244|1) - I can hear the drumroll here until 00:12:355 like the last two Longnotes. So i rather replace these notes with a Longnote: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601078 keep cuz here a little bit different

00:15:911 (15911|1,16244|2,16577|0,16911|3) - Same suggestion here, for the bpm i think is a bit hard. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601096 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601101 fixed


00:18:577 (18577|3,19022|2) - I think two in the same hand is a bit difficult here. It can be better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601119 <- Some rearrange too for the next Longnotes, up to you.

00:28:244 (28244|3,28355|2,28688|1,28911|0) - I think this can be arranged better, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601149

00:29:466 (29466|2,29799|2) - I rather move 00:29:799 (29799|2) - to |1| instead to evade this stack.

00:31:911 (31911|1,32244|1) - I rather move 00:31:911 (31911|1) - to |3| instead to evade this stack.

00:33:688 (33688|3,34022|2,34244|0,34577|3,34911|2,35133|0) - I rather move 00:35:133 (35133|0) - to |1| for change the pattern.

00:35:799 (35799|1,36022|0,36355|1,36466|0) - Seems a bit dense in my opinion, you can move 00:36:022 (36022|0) - to |2| for better rest.

00:39:022 (39022|1,39355|1,40466|0,40799|0) - A better rearrange here so you can use both: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601175 <- Just changing hands.

00:42:133 (42133|1,42577|2) - I think you follow the pitch here, but if you like for changing between hands: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601185

00:44:355 (44355|1,44355|0,45244|1,46133|1,47022|1,47911|1) - I rather move the notes to the right hand instead, for less effort: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601193 all above follow the pitch so keep


00:56:677 (56677|0,57090|1) - I rather spread these two Longnotes to emphasize the use of different sounds, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601210 <- Some change too. fixed


01:04:435 (64435|2) - I think this can be replaced with a note for that sound, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601227 fixed


01:07:849 (67849|3,68677|2,69504|1) - I rather change these, can be placed better for more emphasize in that drop, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601244 fixed


01:10:746 (70746|3,70746|0) - Chord with Longnote? I think this will be better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601255 fixed


01:14:056 (74056|0,74470|1) - Like before, i rather spread these to emphasize better the different sound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601264 fixed


01:17:677 (77677|2) - I think this part can be arranged better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601277 fixed


01:19:022 - The Longnote here, is for vocal? the snare? If is for vocal it should end on 01:19:435 . fixed


01:19:435 (79435|1,79849|0) - I think this part is like 01:06:194 (66194|2,66401|1,66608|3,66608|0,66815|2,67022|1) . So I rather change to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601300fixed


01:31:281 (91281|0,91726|1) - I rather change the second Longnote for the use of different sound (that vocal) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601310fixed


01:35:726 (95726|2,96615|3) - I prefer to spread these two Longnotes, for better use of the sounds. Also, to follow better the piano sounds: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601344fixed


01:44:615 (104615|3,104837|2,105059|0,105281|1) - I prefer roll pattern to follow better the piano sounds: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601350fixed


01:45:503 (105503|3,105726|2,105948|0,106170|3) - Also like above, here a bit different: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601357
rearranged

01:48:170 (108170|1,108392|2,108615|0,108837|1,109059|3,109281|2,109503|0,109726|3) - Also here, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601368 rearranged

01:52:615 (112615|2,112837|1,113059|3,113281|0,113503|2,113726|3,113948|1,114170|0) - Again here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601386 rearranged

01:59:059 (119059|3,119281|2,119503|1,119726|0) - The first one different, i rather do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601402 fixed

[Sacred Faith]

00:16:577 (16577|2,16688|2,16799|2,16799|3,16911|3,17022|3) - I rather move some note here, to keep balanced with the left hand: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625575 changed in a different way

00:44:133 (44133|3,44244|2) - I thinking of this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625594 but i still wanna use triple on 00:44:355 - for this heavy drum

01:03:711 (63711|2,63711|3,64125|0,64125|3,64125|1) - I prefer something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625604 the sound that my LN represents here is not strong enough for me to put double LNs to emphasize them, so i would like to keep

01:21:090 (81090|1) - I would try this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625612 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625617 changed in a different way

01:33:059 - I think you can alternate to this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625646 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625655 (By the way in the second one, I change the 1/12 snaps that you did before in my opinion were odd, because doesn't follow the vocal.) i mean, it is just here that raise the difficulty of this diff, without such chordtrills how can this be the main difficulty? XD

01:43:392 (103392|2,103503|3) - I think this one is different on pitch, i rather do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625696 this is just the same as before, the C sound on piano

02:02:622 (122622|3) - I think you can do chords to emphasize those different in pitch, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625722 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625724 for me they are just single melodic sounds, which dont need double tbh

D r u m c o m m e n t .

Good Luck to all!

Protastic101 wrote:

"check my hs pls"
"but ur hs r 2 gud"

00:29:355 (29355|5) - you're missing C#6 in the folder rip
00:36:355 (36355|6) - B4 is also missing from the folder
00:40:799 - starting here in the violin section, the samples are .wav, but it's imported as .ogg. I dont really know how that works, but anyways, just do a find and replace in the .osu and replace .ogg to .wav like this http://puu.sh/wOevK.png
00:44:133 (44133|2,44244|3) - You've gotta shorten these somehow cause they overlap with each other annoyingly and because they're only halfsteps apart, it's dissonant sounding.
00:45:540 (45540|6) - this is supposed to be at 00:45:577 -
00:48:577 (48577|5) - Should be E6
00:48:651 (48651|6) - should be A6
00:48:725 (48725|5) - B6
00:50:355 (50355|5) - G6 I don think so. Here the piano HS resembles the previous pattern in about 00:48

01:11:987 - Not really 100% accurate to the music since the sound here is more like hitting a wooden block, but you could probs add A6 here as I think it goes nicely there in the music.
01:41:059 - Add A5 to complete the 1/2 piano that's paired with 01:40:948 (100948|5) -
01:41:948 - Not gonna map the chord here? I think it's B but it sounds a bit off imo.
01:47:503 - Might also consider mapping the piano here, but if you didn't map the whole piano line at 00:26:577 - , then I think it's fine to leave it out.
01:54:726 - 01:55:059 - D#6 01:55:059 -it is suppoed to be no piano sound here XD

01:58:281 - Sounds like a grace here from F#7 to G7

Pretty cool otherwise, have fun o/

Ryzen wrote:

Another Lie wrote:

[box=CS' Inner Devil [color=#0000FF:1337:1337]meow ]00:39:577 - i heard dum sound, maybe add note like 00:40:133 - 00:40:355 - 00:40:577 - oklol
i don't find much for the pattern. As expected from CS >w< 'x'

No_sync wrote:

[CS' Inner Oni]

00:20:355 (20355|0) - No chord? I think it will fit.

00:53:985 (53985|1,54059|2,54133|1,54133|3) - I think will look more even like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625435

01:01:487 (61487|3) - 1/8? I think is 1/6, also to keep consistent the pattern.

01:42:948 (102948|2,102948|3,103170|2,103170|3,103392|2,103392|3,103503|0,103503|1,103615|2,103615|3) - Why the change of chords to follow the piano to this? (After that the pattern change to chord again.) Skipping from now on. this is just to variate the pattern here instead normal note

01:51:281 - I think you can do a change here to follow the drumroll sounds: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625516

02:00:615 - As above, here too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625535 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625540 hmm somehow i still like my current flow better,i will keep my current flow for now, but i will consider again !

No_sync wrote:

[Eedow's Muzukashii]

From 00:00:800 to 00:04:355 - I think that you can add the notes here, is the Hard difficulty after all: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617821 <- 1/4 snap is the maximum used here for the drums. Also, is somewhat odd that only from Insane (and above) this section was mapped.

00:10:133 (10133|1,10355|2,10577|3,10799|0,11022|1,11244|2) - In my opinion is somewhat empty this part. So, after the piano sounds this part become simple notes instead of chords as before. I think there is a high density part: 00:05:244 to 00:08:799 and after that only simples for kicks. My suggestion is to use chords here, so the density of this part will maintain balanced: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617913

00:17:244 (17244|0,17466|0) - Chords here too, explained above.

00:18:244 (18244|2,18577|3,19022|1) - You can make some changes to these Longnotes so you can accentuate better the drumroll and also adding an extra note for the cymbal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617936
I'll reconsider
00:30:133 (30133|0,30133|3) - Intended chord? But the piano sound here is the same as the others. I think the only chord here is 00:32:799 to finish this part.
But I think double notes here are still better, just for emphasis
I've seen a lot of this in this map to be honest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617980 I think you can move the next note to better places in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617999 Take in mind that the current arrange makes columns |1| and |2| more empty compared to |0| and |3| . I think there is some reason behind (because later still happening... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624513 ) but I don't know what trying to do here. So, skipping the next ones too that has this kind of pattern. (intended shield?)
Yes,it's intended. I want to try a new pattern here
00:57:090 (57090|3,57297|3,57504|3,57711|3,57918|3) - Stack here, i think you can make some rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618052 <- I have to erase one note of triple/hand there in the middle, but i think a chord serves as well to do this pattern that fits better the sounds here.

01:01:487 (61487|1) - This one is 1/8 snapped, i think must to be 1/6 to keep consistent with the patterns that you use here.
Maybe consistency is not a serious problem... But this sound happens on 1/8
01:02:470 - I think you can improve this part like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618091
OK,but I keep 01:03:401 (63401|1,63504|0,63608|1)
01:03:711 (63711|2) - Maybe you can try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624194 <- For me, that longnote will fit better shorter than larger, for that sound.
But I feel a bit weird
01:04:746 (64746|0) - Move to |2| like 01:04:435 (64435|2) I think you follow the vocal better in that way.
This vocal sound is lower than last
01:04:953 - I think this will fit better, up to you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624271

01:14:728 (74728|2) - Again 1/8 snap here? I rather use 1/6, like before, also i prefer an arrange different for those 1/6 whistles on 01:14:125 (74125|3,74194|2,74263|0,74332|1,74401|2) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624339
^
01:17:677 (77677|3) - Move to |2| to follow better the vocal.

01:21:090 (81090|1) - I think you can follow better this vocal like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624365
It can be supposed as one longnote
01:26:392 (86392|3,86466|2,86541|1,86615|0,86689|3,86763|2,86837|1,86837|0) - I think you can alternate these to be different to the last one, changing the roll direction from left to right, and so on: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624398

01:28:615 - To alternate a bit here, changing the roll direction of the middle one to left: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624432
Accepted but I used a different pattern
01:37:726 (97726|3,97837|1,98059|2,98615|3,98726|1,98948|2) - Same? Some alternation will be look good.

01:38:392 (98392|0,101948|0) - I can hear these two piano sounds, but compared with the others are blended too much. I rather replace them with notes instead.

01:41:281 (101281|3,101392|1,101615|2,102170|3,102281|1,102503|2) - Here you can alternate again, also the pitch is different too.

01:54:170 (114170|0,114226|1,114281|2,114337|3) - What sound is represented here? This will be like this in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624541

01:58:392 (118392|2,118837|1,118837|0) - I prefer emphasize those piano sounds better, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624556

01:59:059 (119059|0,119059|3,120837|0,120837|3) - I think these only needs simple notes like all this section. Because if you do in this way, these notes should be chords as well: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624576 At least is what i thinking about the pitch emphasis you did here.

02:03:481 (123481|3,123576|2,123671|0,123814|1) - This part can be better to fit the piano sounds with a roll pattern, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624627
Accepted but I used a different pattern

No_sync wrote:

[Lude's Oni]

00:11:688 (11688|3,11688|2,11799|0,11799|1,12022|3,12022|0,12077|2,12133|0,12133|1) - I see an inconsistency here. I rather do like the first one: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624759 That or adding the note that left on 00:11:744. 00:12:077 - Deleted this instead

00:20:355 (20355|2,20577|2) - No chord here? These are snares too. Emphasized on comparatively louder snare sounds

00:22:133 (22133|2) - ^

00:23:911 (23911|0) - ^

00:24:466 - I would add a note here on |3| like the others. Not sure, there were no sounds here supposedly, leaving as it is.

00:27:466 (27466|2,27494|3) - These sounds are late, starts on 00:27:438 : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625051 Fixed

00:30:133 (30133|2,30161|3) - Same here, this time on 00:30:105 : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625062 Fixed

00:39:911 (39911|0,39911|1,40022|1,40022|0,40133|2,40133|3,40244|2,40244|3,40355|1,40355|0,40466|0,40466|1) - I rather arrange this to follow better the tom sounds, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625117 Followed the relative pitch of tomtoms

00:43:799 (43799|0,43911|1) - I think these two need two be chords instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625132 <- Suggestion. Piano (low pitch melody line) has double here, not drums

01:10:332 (70332|0,70332|3,70539|3,70539|0,70642|3,70642|0,70746|0,70746|3) - Maybe this part can be more easier, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625276 Re-arranged

01:21:194 (81194|1) - I think that this vocal one starts on 01:21:297 instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625291 Pitch shift starts on red i think

01:36:170 (96170|0,96244|1,96318|2,96392|0,96466|1,96541|2) - I rather continue the same pattern to be honest, the vocal doesn't change at all: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625303 Re-arranged

01:36:615 - Good work! But i don't understand why the next difficulties are more easier in this part... like a lot more easier.

01:51:281 (111281|2,111281|3,111337|0,111392|1,111448|2,111503|0,111503|3,111559|2,111615|0,111670|1,111726|0,111726|3,111726|2) - The drumroll here changes a bit compared with the last one on 01:50:837 so you can do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625346 <- Also, the stack on 01:51:948 (111948|2,112059|2) - is now in the |1| column and balance the amount of stacks/anchors in this section. Fixed

02:00:615 - I think you can rearrange this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625377 Tried to complicate a bit, I'll think about this one

Those Longnotes were really good. Good work.

Good Luck to all!

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3

General

MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP

1. Not needed.

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS

1. Original taiko mode spread. wait. . .

Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: PASS

1. Looking good.

Hitsound: SKIP

1. Waiting for good d r u m experience. . .

Hitsound Volume: MISS

1. From Lude's Oni: https://puu.sh/wJ8nk.png I rather use 40% as always.

Kiai Time: MISS

1. Two difficulties lack of the first kiai time:
   
   1. Eedow's Muzukashii: 00:55:022 to 01:21:504.
   2. Lude's Oni: 00:55:022 to 01:21:504.

Metadata: MISS

1. ...So one week after his release, you already have the song!? lol. This was hard to find (because the official site still doesn't update with the new songs...?) Links: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mckT4Db3xIg , https://twitter.com/taiko_team/status/865034027975049216 , http://taiko.namco-ch.net/taiko/songlist/list04.php#namco <- not updated? lol.
   
   1. Tags1: "Taiko no Tatsujin" -> "Taiko no Tatsujin Yellow Ver." (I just have that doubt, to be consistent with the source label.)
   2. Tags2: "CS" (Duplicated? You need the real Nickname not the Guest Difficulty name again...)

Widescreen Support: MISS

1. Uncheck Widescreen Support in Lude's Oni.

Preview Point: MISS

1. I rather adjust the preview point at 01:36:559 or 01:36:503 . Since 01:36:560 - is bad adjusted, no snaps there.

AiMod Things: MISS

1. Some things:
   
   1. Lude's Oni Low volume sections (Already said above, use 40% to be consistent.)
   2. Eedow's Muzukashii: https://puu.sh/wJ8wh.png <- Translation: There is a note behind the Longnote end at 01:13:228 and 02:02:624 (122624|1) - should be snapped at 02:02:622 .
   3. CS' Inner Oni: https://puu.sh/wLEqS.png <- Normalization left here? I mean using SV's for keeping the chart speed.
   4. Lude's Oni and Eedow's Muzukashii: Use Soft sampleset only like all the rest.

Mod!

[Kantan]

00:08:799 (8799|1,9133|2,9466|0,9799|3) - I think that for this bpm is a bit hard to use 1/2 Longnotes here. I rather change to notes and use roll pattern, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601066 Or use 1/1 Longnotes, some kicks are covered for these longnotes: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601070

00:12:133 (12133|2,12244|1) - I can hear the drumroll here until 00:12:355 like the last two Longnotes. So i rather replace these notes with a Longnote: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601078

00:15:911 (15911|1,16244|2,16577|0,16911|3) - Same suggestion here, for the bpm i think is a bit hard. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601096 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601101

00:18:577 (18577|3,19022|2) - I think two in the same hand is a bit difficult here. It can be better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601119 <- Some rearrange too for the next Longnotes, up to you.

00:28:244 (28244|3,28355|2,28688|1,28911|0) - I think this can be arranged better, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601149

00:29:466 (29466|2,29799|2) - I rather move 00:29:799 (29799|2) - to |1| instead to evade this stack.

00:31:911 (31911|1,32244|1) - I rather move 00:31:911 (31911|1) - to |3| instead to evade this stack.

00:33:688 (33688|3,34022|2,34244|0,34577|3,34911|2,35133|0) - I rather move 00:35:133 (35133|0) - to |1| for change the pattern.

00:35:799 (35799|1,36022|0,36355|1,36466|0) - Seems a bit dense in my opinion, you can move 00:36:022 (36022|0) - to |2| for better rest.

00:39:022 (39022|1,39355|1,40466|0,40799|0) - A better rearrange here so you can use both: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601175 <- Just changing hands.

00:42:133 (42133|1,42577|2) - I think you follow the pitch here, but if you like for changing between hands: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601185

00:44:355 (44355|1,44355|0,45244|1,46133|1,47022|1,47911|1) - I rather move the notes to the right hand instead, for less effort: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601193

00:56:677 (56677|0,57090|1) - I rather spread these two Longnotes to emphasize the use of different sounds, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601210 <- Some change too.

01:04:435 (64435|2) - I think this can be replaced with a note for that sound, maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601227

01:07:849 (67849|3,68677|2,69504|1) - I rather change these, can be placed better for more emphasize in that drop, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601244

01:10:746 (70746|3,70746|0) - Chord with Longnote? I think this will be better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601255

01:14:056 (74056|0,74470|1) - Like before, i rather spread these to emphasize better the different sound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601264

01:17:677 (77677|2) - I think this part can be arranged better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601277

01:19:022 - The Longnote here, is for vocal? the snare? If is for vocal it should end on 01:19:435 .

01:19:435 (79435|1,79849|0) - I think this part is like 01:06:194 (66194|2,66401|1,66608|3,66608|0,66815|2,67022|1) . So I rather change to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601300

01:31:281 (91281|0,91726|1) - I rather change the second Longnote for the use of different sound (that vocal) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601310

01:35:726 (95726|2,96615|3) - I prefer to spread these two Longnotes, for better use of the sounds. Also, to follow better the piano sounds: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601344

01:44:615 (104615|3,104837|2,105059|0,105281|1) - I prefer roll pattern to follow better the piano sounds: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601350

01:45:503 (105503|3,105726|2,105948|0,106170|3) - Also like above, here a bit different: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601357

01:48:170 (108170|1,108392|2,108615|0,108837|1,109059|3,109281|2,109503|0,109726|3) - Also here, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601368

01:52:615 (112615|2,112837|1,113059|3,113281|0,113503|2,113726|3,113948|1,114170|0) - Again here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601386

01:59:059 (119059|3,119281|2,119503|1,119726|0) - The first one different, i rather do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601402

[Wonki's Futsuu]

00:07:466 (7466|0,7688|0,8355|0,8577|0) - The last two again in the same column? I rather move the last two notes to |1|

00:10:577 (10577|3,10799|3,11022|0,11244|0,11466|3,11799|0) - I prefer to move the last Longnotes like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601462 <- Less empty for those columns.

00:15:911 (15911|2,16022|3,16244|1,16355|3,16577|2,16688|3,16911|0,17022|3) - Some Ctrl+H or variation here? Because is exactly like: 00:08:799 (8799|2,8911|3,9133|1,9244|3,9466|2,9577|3,9799|0,9911|3) .

00:19:466 - Add a note in |1| for cymbal.

00:49:022 (49022|2,49244|1,49466|0,49688|2,50133|3,50577|1,51022|0) - I rather rearrange these Longnotes, to be different to Kantan difficulty: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601487

00:58:746 (58746|3,59159|3,59573|3) - I think the snare on the middle can be arranged like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601516

01:05:159 - I think you can add an extra note here and 01:05:573 - here for that vocal sound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601522

01:07:435 - Snare here, No chord? I would add it on |3|.

01:22:837 - I rather add a note here for snares.

01:24:615 - ^

01:26:392 - ^

01:27:726 - ^

01:29:059 - ^

01:29:948 - ^

01:30:837 - ^

01:31:726 - I prefer to add a Longnote or note here for the vocal.

01:48:170 (108170|0,108392|0,109059|0,109281|0) - I think these are for pitch. But i rather use the other column since is a bit empty there: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601591

01:58:170 (118170|3,118170|2) - Is this chord really necessary there with that Longnote? I think is a bit unexpected, I prefer this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8601620

02:06:096 (126096|1) - I rather move this note to |0| to emphasize better the end.

[Eedow's Muzukashii]

From 00:00:800 to 00:04:355 - I think that you can add the notes here, is the Hard difficulty after all: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617821 <- 1/4 snap is the maximum used here for the drums. Also, is somewhat odd that only from Insane (and above) this section was mapped.

00:10:133 (10133|1,10355|2,10577|3,10799|0,11022|1,11244|2) - In my opinion is somewhat empty this part. So, after the piano sounds this part become simple notes instead of chords as before. I think there is a high density part: 00:05:244 to 00:08:799 and after that only simples for kicks. My suggestion is to use chords here, so the density of this part will maintain balanced: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617913

00:17:244 (17244|0,17466|0) - Chords here too, explained above.

00:18:244 (18244|2,18577|3,19022|1) - You can make some changes to these Longnotes so you can accentuate better the drumroll and also adding an extra note for the cymbal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617936

00:30:133 (30133|0,30133|3) - Intended chord? But the piano sound here is the same as the others. I think the only chord here is 00:32:799 to finish this part.

I've seen a lot of this in this map to be honest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617980 I think you can move the next note to better places in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8617999 Take in mind that the current arrange makes columns |1| and |2| more empty compared to |0| and |3| . I think there is some reason behind (because later still happening... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624513 ) but I don't know what trying to do here. So, skipping the next ones too that has this kind of pattern. (intended shield?)

00:57:090 (57090|3,57297|3,57504|3,57711|3,57918|3) - Stack here, i think you can make some rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618052 <- I have to erase one note of triple/hand there in the middle, but i think a chord serves as well to do this pattern that fits better the sounds here.

01:01:487 (61487|1) - This one is 1/8 snapped, i think must to be 1/6 to keep consistent with the patterns that you use here.

01:02:470 - I think you can improve this part like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618091

01:03:711 (63711|2) - Maybe you can try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624194 <- For me, that longnote will fit better shorter than larger, for that sound.

01:04:746 (64746|0) - Move to |2| like 01:04:435 (64435|2) I think you follow the vocal better in that way.

01:04:953 - I think this will fit better, up to you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624271

01:14:728 (74728|2) - Again 1/8 snap here? I rather use 1/6, like before, also i prefer an arrange different for those 1/6 whistles on 01:14:125 (74125|3,74194|2,74263|0,74332|1,74401|2) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624339

01:17:677 (77677|3) - Move to |2| to follow better the vocal.

01:21:090 (81090|1) - I think you can follow better this vocal like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624365

01:26:392 (86392|3,86466|2,86541|1,86615|0,86689|3,86763|2,86837|1,86837|0) - I think you can alternate these to be different to the last one, changing the roll direction from left to right, and so on: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624398

01:28:615 - To alternate a bit here, changing the roll direction of the middle one to left: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624432

01:37:726 (97726|3,97837|1,98059|2,98615|3,98726|1,98948|2) - Same? Some alternation will be look good.

01:38:392 (98392|0,101948|0) - I can hear these two piano sounds, but compared with the others are blended too much. I rather replace them with notes instead.

01:41:281 (101281|3,101392|1,101615|2,102170|3,102281|1,102503|2) - Here you can alternate again, also the pitch is different too.

01:54:170 (114170|0,114226|1,114281|2,114337|3) - What sound is represented here? This will be like this in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624541

01:58:392 (118392|2,118837|1,118837|0) - I prefer emphasize those piano sounds better, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624556

01:59:059 (119059|0,119059|3,120837|0,120837|3) - I think these only needs simple notes like all this section. Because if you do in this way, these notes should be chords as well: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624576 At least is what i thinking about the pitch emphasis you did here.

02:03:481 (123481|3,123576|2,123671|0,123814|1) - This part can be better to fit the piano sounds with a roll pattern, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624627

[Lude's Oni]

00:11:688 (11688|3,11688|2,11799|0,11799|1,12022|3,12022|0,12077|2,12133|0,12133|1) - I see an inconsistency here. I rather do like the first one: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8624759 That or adding the note that left on 00:11:744.

00:20:355 (20355|2,20577|2) - No chord here? These are snares too.

00:22:133 (22133|2) - ^

00:23:911 (23911|0) - ^

00:24:466 - I would add a note here on |3| like the others.

00:27:466 (27466|2,27494|3) - These sounds are late, starts on 00:27:438 : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625051

00:30:133 (30133|2,30161|3) - Same here, this time on 00:30:105 : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625062

00:39:911 (39911|0,39911|1,40022|1,40022|0,40133|2,40133|3,40244|2,40244|3,40355|1,40355|0,40466|0,40466|1) - I rather arrange this to follow better the tom sounds, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625117

00:43:799 (43799|0,43911|1) - I think these two need two be chords instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625132 <- Suggestion.

01:10:332 (70332|0,70332|3,70539|3,70539|0,70642|3,70642|0,70746|0,70746|3) - Maybe this part can be more easier, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625276

01:21:194 (81194|1) - I think that this vocal one starts on 01:21:297 instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625291

01:36:170 (96170|0,96244|1,96318|2,96392|0,96466|1,96541|2) - I rather continue the same pattern to be honest, the vocal doesn't change at all: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625303

01:36:615 - Good work! But i don't understand why the next difficulties are more easier in this part... like a lot more easier.

01:51:281 (111281|2,111281|3,111337|0,111392|1,111448|2,111503|0,111503|3,111559|2,111615|0,111670|1,111726|0,111726|3,111726|2) - The drumroll here changes a bit compared with the last one on 01:50:837 so you can do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625346 <- Also, the stack on 01:51:948 (111948|2,112059|2) - is now in the |1| column and balance the amount of stacks/anchors in this section.

02:00:615 - I think you can rearrange this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625377

Those Longnotes were really good. Good work.

[CS' Inner Oni]

00:20:355 (20355|0) - No chord? I think it will fit.

00:53:985 (53985|1,54059|2,54133|1,54133|3) - I think will look more even like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625435

01:01:487 (61487|3) - 1/8? I think is 1/6, also to keep consistent the pattern.

01:42:948 (102948|2,102948|3,103170|2,103170|3,103392|2,103392|3,103503|0,103503|1,103615|2,103615|3) - Why the change of chords to follow the piano to this? (After that the pattern change to chord again.) Skipping from now on.

01:51:281 - I think you can do a change here to follow the drumroll sounds: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625516

02:00:615 - As above, here too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625535 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625540

[Sacred Faith]

00:16:577 (16577|2,16688|2,16799|2,16799|3,16911|3,17022|3) - I rather move some note here, to keep balanced with the left hand: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625575

00:44:133 (44133|3,44244|2) - I thinking of this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625594

01:03:711 (63711|2,63711|3,64125|0,64125|3,64125|1) - I prefer something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625604

01:21:090 (81090|1) - I would try this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625612 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625617

01:33:059 - I think you can alternate to this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625646 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625655 (By the way in the second one, I change the 1/12 snaps that you did before in my opinion were odd, because doesn't follow the vocal.)

01:43:392 (103392|2,103503|3) - I think this one is different on pitch, i rather do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625696

02:02:622 (122622|3) - I think you can do chords to emphasize those different in pitch, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625722 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8625724

D r u m c o m m e n t .

Good Luck to all!

MEGAtive wrote:

Mod here

Kaneko Chiharu - Kaiden Kai Dan

DdKk

Column
|1|2|3|4|

[Sacred Faith]

Mods

1. 00:01:688 - Just my 2 cents here, but I think it's more interesting if you put the notes on one column for a more rhythmical challenge. You may use trill when the snapping went 1/2 and such.
2. 00:06:355 - You may do something like http://puu.sh/wTiOa/b320094d54.jpg for emphasis on the melody of the lead sound. You may apply it as well on parts like 00:07:244 - 00:08:133 - 00:13:466 - etc.
3. 00:13:355 (13355|3,13466|0,13577|1,13688|2,13799|2,13911|1) - You can Ctrl+H this for notes balancing. You put too much notes for the right hand.
4. 00:15:688 (15688|0,15688|1,15799|0,15911|1,16022|0,16022|1,16133|1,16244|0,16355|1,16466|1,16577|0,16688|1,16799|0,16911|1,16911|0,17022|0,17133|1,17244|0) - Pretty relentless, if I would say. Maybe try something like
   
   1. 00:16:244 - http://puu.sh/wTj4F/87fc2d0593.jpg
   2. 00:16:799 - http://puu.sh/wTjb2/aa913cdef3.png (If you were asking about 00:17:688 - I think it's fine since 1/2 in BPM270 is easier to determine than 3/4 BPM270)
5. 00:24:022 (24022|0,24133|0) - Don't really think this is necessary IMO. The music in this section doesn't have that much of impact to be emphasized by jack. Instead you may do one on 00:24:133 - 00:24:244 - instead for emphasize on big hat sound. just avoid jacks
6. 00:28:244 - Should be double for big piano sounds like the other sections. This section has weak and strong piano sounds, I doubled all strong ones
7. 00:36:466 - 00:36:688 - You may add an additional note for emphasizing the big piano sound. Tryna double all heavy piano notes in this part
8. 00:57:504 - http://puu.sh/wTkfz/c64a849365.jpg I think this one here is more intuitive to how the frequency of the bass here.
9. 01:03:504 (63504|0,63608|1) - I think jacking these two would emphasize the vocal sample more and giving a more dynamic-feeling pattern. Though for the sake of PR, i wanna keep
   
10. 01:03:504 (63504|0,63608|1) - You should map the vocal sound here if you aim to map the vocals at place like 01:04:435 - 01:04:539 - Did u quote the wrong time?

Not really a fan of how the layering is. The most dense part is in the Start while the kiai in the end is far easier. Nevertheless GJ

Hmm, just my personal opinion, in the start the music indeed is far stronger than the kiai time, and focus on the heavier drums more, which leads to a more dense part. However, the kiai time mainly focused on the melody, but the drums arent the most important thing, and what's more in the beginning the drums are exactly the same, if I put doubles for all of them, how am i supposed to make this the top diff? =w=Anyway I suppose that this start should be harder, but I will change some if there are good suggestions for me. Now I really dont know where to start. I guess Lilin is similar to this? (cuz same artist XD)
ANYWAY I STILL CHANGED THEM

I can only provide this as for now. Probably will do the other but I don't think it will be done in short time.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

1. 00:00:800 (800|3,5244|3) - please... if there's no collum to put note, you can make this shield pattern Didn't quite get you here, it fits the sound
2. 00:22:911 - still hear drum instrument here, add note I've repeated this on previous mods
3. 00:37:133 (37133|1,37244|2,37355|1) - Ctrl+H to avoid mini achord Done
4. 00:43:911 - missing chord, check consistency snare 00:41:244 - 00:42:133 - 00:43:022 - Chords for piano vocal
5. 00:47:244 - delete a note, there's no any insrument like piano There are piano sound
6. 01:22:837 - 01:24:615 - 01:26:392 - 01:27:726 - there's a lot jumptrill |1|2| - |3|4|, BN will mad if see it XD. Try use |1|4| - |2|3| or |2|4| - |1|3| for variety Not necessarily, I personally dislike 1-4 2-3
7. 01:28:170 (88170|1,88170|0,88392|0,88392|1) - what's sound you're follow it? vocal woman? if that, should be on blue line 01:28:337 - and remove 01:28:170 (88170|1,88170|0) - it look Unnecessary Fixed snap, but didn't delete LN below, it fits for the vocal breathing out
8. 02:02:392 (122392|2) - move to |2|, avoid mini anchor Done

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Tofu, Wonki, Eedow, Lude and CStar

Mod Via PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Please insert your hitsounds
2. 01:21:504 - Unnecessary green line, please delete. because it's already your main BPM. Apply to all diff
3. 02:02:392 - Wrong green line timing normalization, should be 1,04x (270/26). Apply to all diff

Kantan

OD : 6,5
HP : 6,5

1. 00:12:133 (12133|2,12244|1) - seem it's a bit hard for easy diff, try change to LN like 00:11:466 (11466|2,11799|1) -
2. 00:29:244 (29244|0,29355|1,29466|2,29577|3) - used stair 1/2 pattern is really hard for high BPM and this's easy diff, considering change to LN. Also avoid same pattern like normal diff
3. 00:36:355 (36355|1,36466|0,36577|2,36688|3) - same as above, and this pattern really hard than normal diff, i know this is depend your mapping style, but considering make pattern more easy than higher diff, or discussion about pattern with GDer. i was noticed some pattern :
   01:00:401 (60401|1,60608|2) -
   01:06:194 (66194|2,66401|1,66815|2) -
   01:19:435 (79435|1,79642|2,80056|1) -
4. 02:02:622 - is okay to add a note here for piano
5. 02:02:994 - add a LN here until 02:03:386 - and add again until 02:03:814 - also mapping :
   02:04:115 - LN?
   02:05:295 - 02:05:562 - 02:05:829 - 1/3 add SN, still fine

Notes : Sorry, nazy mod from me ;w;, just considering to avoid 1/2 pattern for high BPM and make it more easier than normal diff

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

84

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

raiden got clickbaited as i expected
mark this for mod

edit cuz making a new post is wasting a click

Sacred Faith

i suggest you if you used taiko diff, make it consistent with this diff (maybe change to sacred oni or were oni, ura oni, these two are often used for harder diff after inner oni)
00:01:688 - make it trill 1-4-1-4 instead 1-1-1-1 on the beginning and suddenly changed into 1-4-1-4 for consistency and keep the representations of kat-kat-kat-kat
00:09:688 - should consistent with 00:16:799 -
00:12:077 - i dont hear any sounds here, if there any i think its just weak sound, and its weaker than in 00:12:299 -
00:27:466 - i think this sound is not separated 1/8 beat, i think it was 1/12 or 1/16 because that was definitely different with 00:32:799 - (i might be wrong about 1/12 or 1/16 snap, if i wrong 00:32:799 - must be 1/4 instead), this case is same to 00:30:133 - 00:32:466 -
00:39:466 - double would be good
00:41:244 - 1/3 sound start here
why 00:42:355 - and 00:42:799 - double?
00:44:022 - should be double i think
00:47:466 - why triple?
00:48:022 - why double?
01:35:781 (95781|3) - must be snappend 1/12 in 01:35:800 -

Map is too good, i cant find much thing
good luck

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Tofu, Wonki, Eedow, Lude and CStar

Mod Via PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Please insert your hitsounds
2. 01:21:504 - Unnecessary green line, please delete. because it's already your main BPM. Apply to all diff
3. 02:02:392 - Wrong green line timing normalization, should be 1,04x (270/26). Apply to all diff

Wonki's Futsuul

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:19:466 - add a note for cymbal?
2. 00:36:355 - try catch piano to make your diff more variety, example : 00:36:466 - 00:36:688 - 00:36:911 -
3. 00:57:504 - add a note for crash snare
4. 00:58:953 - add a note, there's kick, also 01:00:608 - 01:03:918 -
5. 01:05:159 - add a LN for electronic sounds, also 01:05:573 -
6. 01:06:401 - 01:06:815 - try catch this sound, really interesting if you mapping that
7. 01:08:884 - missing beat here? and you can 01:09:090 (69090|0) - change it to LN until 01:09:401 - , since you also mapped 01:09:504 (69504|3) -
8. 01:10:125 - add a note for electronic sound
9. 01:10:746 - make it chord for crash snare+electronic
10. 01:11:780 - there's kick, also 01:13:435 - 01:15:504 - 01:17:159 - 01:18:815 - 01:20:470 -
11. 01:13:642 (73642|1) - should be end on here 01:13:849 - and then add a note 01:13:849 - 01:13:953 - you can try like this
    
    
12. 01:21:948 - 01:22:392 - 01:23:726 - 01:24:170 - 01:25:504 - 01:25:948 - 01:27:281 - you can add a note for variety

Notes : Nazy mod again from me ;w;, pattern in some section more easy than easy diff, try to catch other sounds

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

84

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Хорошо~ Good Luck.. [/notice]

Mentholzzz wrote:

Kaneko <3

Futsuu
01:16:539 - and 01:18:194 - missing double here ?
01:32:170 - same as in Kantan
01:58:170 - I don't think this should be double

Mentholzzz wrote:

Oni
00:32:688 - Here use the different snap from the hardest diff Fixed
01:36:837 - , 01:37:059 - and 01:37:281 - Why double here ? Each base snap 1/3 was given double, but i'll reconsider this
01:46:281 - I see you map this part use double for the kick and the piano, so this shouldn't be double because it doesn't have both deleted
01:54:170 - I think this should be on 1/4 snap instead melody
01:57:726 - same sound as 01:57:281 - , should be triple added
02:00:670 (120670|0,120726|2,120781|1,120837|3,120837|0,120892|2,120948|0,121003|1,121059|3,121059|2,121115|0,121170|2,121226|1,121281|3,121281|0,121337|2,121392|1,121448|0) - the kick here is in 1/3 re-arranged

Mentholzzz wrote:

Kaneko <3

Sacred Faith
Honestly, i think OD 9 would be a trouble with a LN wall at 01:36:615 -
00:12:133 - Did u miss the sound at 00:12:188 - and 00:12:299 - is missing a note or it is your intention ? There is sound. Didnt miss anything
00:24:022 - I suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8892043 because 00:24:022 - and 00:24:133 - has the same pitch, but 00:24:355 - and 00:24:466 - has the different pitch.
00:40:688 - Double here ? same sound like the previous note
00:49:022 - Move the LN to like 3-2-1 or 4-3-2 for PR
01:04:435 - Double here ?

Kantan
00:29:244 (29244|1) - this Ln should end at 00:29:577 - if this LN represent the piano there
00:36:355 (36355|2) - ^
01:19:849 - triple in ez diff ?
01:32:170 - ctrl-H for PR
02:05:295 - move to col.4 for PR

Noxus wrote:

Doing this mod as a M4M requested through discord.


Sacred Faith:

00:16:799 (16799|0) - would recommend deleting this note 00:15:911 (15911|2,15911|3,15911|0) - since it basically sounds like this part yet is emphasized heavier with a 3 note chord.

00:18:577 (18577|1,18577|0,18633|2,18688|3,18688|0,18744|1,18744|2,18799|3,18799|0,18855|1,18855|2,18911|0,18911|3,18966|1,18966|2,19022|3,19022|0) - this is extremely uncomfortable, I would recommend changing this to: https://i.imgur.com/8N0mWSt.png makes both the transition in the middle and into the burst at the end a lot more comfortable.

00:22:466 (22466|0) - would delete since the sound doesn't really call for it to match a heavy snare the next note later

00:22:688 (22688|3) - ^

00:23:022 (23022|3) - delete I do hear heavy snare here.

00:24:022 (24022|1) - add a note to column 4 Why? It's the same snare as before

00:35:244 (35244|1,35244|3,35244|0,35355|2,35466|1,35466|3,35466|0,35688|1,35688|3,35688|0) - I'm sure you can be a little more inventive with the patterning here.

00:40:022 (40022|3,40022|2,40133|0,40133|1,40244|3,40244|2,40355|1,40355|0,40466|3,40466|2,40577|0,40577|1,40688|2,40688|3) - make this not just be a stale jumptrill, make them jumpjacks

00:41:022 (41022|0,41244|0,41466|0,41688|0) - and 00:41:022 (41022|3,41244|3,41466|3,41688|3) - I'd rearrange it to avoid a stack like that, it looks visually unappealing

00:44:577 (44577|0,44577|3,44577|2,44799|3,44799|0) - same sound, yet two different type of chords? They are different kind. You can tell them from my hitsound too.

00:48:688 (48688|2,48688|3,48799|1,48799|2) - explanation for why these are chords? Because in the background cymbals are on these lines mixing with the piano.

00:51:466 (51466|2,51577|1,51688|0,51799|1,51911|2,52022|1,52133|0,52244|1,52355|2,52466|1,52577|0,52688|1,52799|2,52911|1,53022|0,53133|1) - I think the sound changes in this little segment call for more variety in patterning and not just the same thing all over again.

01:02:884 (62884|2,62884|3,62953|1,63022|3,63022|0,63090|1,63159|2,63159|0,63228|3,63297|0,63297|1,63297|2,63401|3) - would recommend charting it this way: https://i.imgur.com/cqcYA5L.png

01:08:780 (68780|1,68780|0,68884|2,68884|3,68987|1,68987|0,69090|2,69090|3,69194|1,69194|0,69297|2,69297|3,69401|1,69401|0,69504|2,69504|3,69642|0,69642|1,69780|2,69780|3) - this all starts to slow down and also starts to lower in tone, use a variety of chords to make a jumpjack at this section not just a constant running 12/34 jumptrill

01:11:918 (71918|3) - delete..

01:11:987 (71987|0,71987|3) - would do something to make the vocal cut in the background stand out more, maybe some SVs? Nice idea but sadly I can't figure it out on my own about how to do it uwu. Maybe you can do it for me? Or maybe I will ask about other BNs and modders to help me with this.

01:21:504 (81504|3,81504|2,81504|0,81615|1,81615|0,81726|3,81726|2,81837|2,81837|1,81948|3,81948|0,82059|3,82059|2,82170|1,82170|0,82281|2,82281|1,82392|3,82392|0,82504|1,82504|0,82615|3,82615|2,82726|2,82726|1) - i would make these all triple chords to add the much needed intensity to this build up

01:23:392 (83392|3,83392|1,83504|2,83504|0,83615|3,83615|2,83726|1,83726|0,83837|2,83837|0,83948|3,83948|1,84059|3,84059|2,84170|1,84170|0,84281|3,84281|1,84392|2,84392|0,84504|1,84504|0) - ^

01:25:170 (85170|2,85170|0,85281|3,85281|1,85392|1,85392|0,85504|3,85504|2,85615|3,85615|1,85726|2,85726|0,85837|1,85837|0,85948|3,85948|2,86059|2,86059|0,86170|3,86170|1,86281|2,86281|1) - ^

01:26:948 (86948|3,86948|1,87059|0,87059|2,87170|3,87170|2,87281|1,87281|0,87392|3,87392|1,87504|0,87504|2,87615|2,87615|3) - ^

01:33:948 (93948|3,93948|2,95726|0,95800|3,95874|0,95948|3,96022|0,96096|3,96170|0,96244|3,96318|0,96392|3,96466|0,96541|3) - i feel this part needs a little more intensity than it is given, so id make it jumpjacks like so: https://i.imgur.com/dRHZFbY.png

01:39:615 (99615|3,99726|2,99837|1,99948|2,99948|3,100059|1,100170|3,100170|2) - rearrange this to be a little more fun please

01:42:170 (102170|0,102392|0,102615|0,102837|0,103059|0,103281|0,103503|0) - awkward stack, try avoiding it to the best of your ability

01:49:837 (109837|1,109948|3,109948|0,110059|2,110059|1,110170|3,110170|0,110281|1,110281|2,110392|0,110392|3,110503|1,110503|2,110615|3,110615|0,110726|1,110726|2) - https://i.imgur.com/VlNQii5.png Would make the pattern have more variety instead of a repetitive 23/14 chord

01:50:170 (110170|3) - add note


All I have to say about the jumptrills is keep them if you want, but they are all replaceable with dense jumpstreams.
Do what you see fit with them, given the sound and style of song they are appropriate and there is not much else to do with the pattern tbh. Good luck with rank!

Jumptrills are mostly blamed when they are awkwardly placed in a song that have all easy 4* patterns in other parts of the song, which are obviously used to inflate the SR. But here, after adding these triples, that whole parts, not just the jumptrills are hard enough to fit into the pinnacle of this song, so I guess now things should be better.

Big fan of the song and artist so take some stars owo

1/2/3/4

00:17:696 - add note in 1, i think at this you need extra emphasize for the burst

00:27:474 (27474|1) - move this to col. 3 for give pitch attention

00:36:919 (36919|2,36919|3,37141|3,37141|2) - there are should be single for concistency

00:39:696 - it shoud snapped like this

00:56:685 (56685|3,56788|2,56892|1) - does'nt match with the song, rearrange little bit

01:02:478 -

01:11:064 (71064|2) - delete it, it does'nt have synth. and also the synth will more felt if you do

01:14:340 (74340|1,74409|0,74478|3) - i think will be better you change them into 1/4 snap

01:16:030 (76030|1) - move it to colomn 1

01:16:133 - if ^ accepted, u can try this one instead

01:28:345 - add LN

SpectorDG wrote:

Sorry for double post. Mods with new offset.

[Sacred Faith | Ura oni maybe?]

1. 00:11:696 (11696|2,11807|2,11974|2,12085|2) - These trills, [2] is too empty than [3] it's must be rearrange for the balance?
   
2. 00:36:919 (36919|3,37030|3,37141|2,37252|2) - Simple + LN jacks kinda strange to catching with right-hand also 270BPM is too awkard to handling this. This is the best solution I can think of currently in my map.
   
3. 00:36:585 - Add note for [4], following same rhythm as triple - double - triple
   
4. 00:50:085 - Missed drum same as mapped 00:49:641 - here Actually the drum here isn't quite strong and clear to hear so I didn't map it.
   
5. 00:57:573 - Wrong snapped It's should be fixed to 6/1, and they too 00:57:780 - 00:57:987 - 00:58:194 - 01:00:884 - 01:01:090 -
   
   
   
6. 01:01:487 (61487|2) - This one is starting to early from the music, Move to 01:01:504 - Not really, I have checked here for multiple times and I do want to keep my snaps.
   
7. 01:09:926 - It's can be multi-LN's for the playable? same as Inner oni
   
8. 01:14:823 - Ghost note. It was should be mapped 6/1 to 8/1 to following same rhythm as before 8/1 notes
   
9. 01:23:400 (83400|3,83512|1) - Ctrl+G. More impact to catching also it's keeps quad+ jacks from this part
   
10. 01:24:289 (84289|3) - It's continues with above Move to col2 also 01:24:400 (84400|1,84400|2) - move to [2][4] and 01:24:512 (84512|3) - move to [3] Added quadraple chords here.
    
11. 01:28:623 - Add note for [2] same reason as before
    
12. 01:56:948 - Add LN for missed synth, same as other 4/1 LNs

Goodluck !! also some stars here

SpectorDG wrote:

Sorry for double post. Mods with new offset.

[CS' Inner oni]

1. 00:11:807 (11807|0,11919|0,12030|0,12141|0,12252|0,12363|0) - How about rearranges to avoid this stacks ? Sacred Faith's didn't mapped any stack jacks here, so better to make something like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10286033
   
2. 00:17:030 (17030|3,17030|0,17252|0) - Ctrl+H Kinda awkard to catching for this multi-LN's from this part, Other LN's mapped mutli with only 2 and it's mapped different than others so https://i.imgur.com/s3LFCvi.png they represent the highest PR here, so i would like to keep it for now
   
3. 00:22:974 (22974|2,23030|3) - Ctrl+G to stacking same sounds 4/1 jacks with here?
   
4. 00:23:696 - Add note on [3] for mirror, same mapped as 00:22:807 also 00:23:863 (23863|1,23919|0) - Ctrl+G for same as above
   
5. 00:32:807 (32807|1) - Move to [3] for making good stairs pattern with 8/1 piano
   
6. 00:45:196 - It was Ghost note. There are have too lower piano sounds so it's can be delete
   
7. 01:04:754 - I suggested add for double LN's for vocal, for the playable
   
8. 01:25:067 (85067|0,85178|0) - 01:25:178 (85178|1,85289|1) - Feels strange to playing this, it's can be rearrange it ? https://i.imgur.com/mNtctPJ.png
   
9. 01:32:956 (92956|1,93011|0) - Backstream is hard to reading this one so Ctrl+G ? or makes balance pattern like that ? https://i.imgur.com/4AgtcL2.png
   01:33:067 - the sound velocity changed here so i made it reverse flow from previous one, it shouldn't be too hard to play so
   
10. 01:44:845 (104845|0,104845|1,104845|3,104956|2,105067|0,105178|3,105289|0,105289|1,105511|0,105511|1,105511|3,105734|0,105734|2,105734|3,105845|1,105956|3,106067|0,106178|2,106178|3) - How about Ctrl+H these? this part focused only right-hand cause 01:42:956 - this part LN's mapped mostly right-hand it should be fine le, i don't this this will be a big issue. i will keep this

SpectorDG wrote:

Sorry for double post. Mods with new offset.



[Wonki's Futsuu]

1. 00:16:585 (16585|2,16696|3,16919|0,17030|3) - Ctrl+H? This parts 2/1 piano sounds mapped only Left. Also all patterns Left-to-Right so it's need to rearrange something for making balance on here. fixed
   
2. 01:13:443 - Add note for whistle? There are haven't any LNs so it's can be possible. it's intended
   
3. 01:35:734 - Can you make 2/1 LN's here? Making difference than Kantan https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10287531 nope

Goodluck !! also some stars here