Hey! Ayyri requested so im gonna take a look
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That's all I have. I'm very inexperienced with higher diffs and the jazzy swing types so sorry if its a bad mod.
Hope its helpful anyway. Best of luck~
Easy
Well tbh I don't really agree with the concept of easy. Rhythms are really sparse and simplified, which newbies could have problems following the progression of the song. Then, even with cs2, sr bumped over 1.5. I strongly believe the reason lies in your sv, which imo is too fast for an easy at this bpm. I'd suggest you consider lowering it to 0.8 which seems to be the typical easy sv for this bpm, then make your rhythm denser to include in more strong notes you missed. Also, with 1x sv, your spacing seems to be pretty high.
Well tbh I don't really agree with the concept of easy. Rhythms are really sparse and simplified, which newbies could have problems following the progression of the song. Then, even with cs2, sr bumped over 1.5. I strongly believe the reason lies in your sv, which imo is too fast for an easy at this bpm. I'd suggest you consider lowering it to 0.8 which seems to be the typical easy sv for this bpm, then make your rhythm denser to include in more strong notes you missed. Also, with 1x sv, your spacing seems to be pretty high.
- 00:06:828 - imo this is stronger than 00:07:136 - and should be mapped instead, the latter can be ignored. also 00:08:059 - 00:08:367 - these high pitch piano notes deserves a slider too. suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8509400
- 00:12:675 - a break here seems questionable since its just 13s into the map and map length is pretty long. Also that part is just as intensive and is no different. A break somewhere in the middle and in a calmer part is more feasible imo. 01:52:367 - like here?
- 01:50:828 (2) - maybe this is too simplified for an intense piano part and the downbeat deserves to be clickable than released. something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8509496?
- 00:48:059 - rhythm this part of the kiais are pretty sparse consider that you follow vocals mostly and vocals there are pretty strong and unique. 00:43:136 (1,2,3) - if this vocal part is dense then the latter deserves to be denser too. At least put circles between your 2/1 sliders like this 00:48:982 - since if you listen again those notes are actually a lot louder than others. my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8509574
- 00:52:367 - i'd add a 1/1 slider here as the vocals have no reason to be ignored
- Same with 00:54:828 - you used circles to build 2/1 rhythm as vocals suggest but leaving the last one out is extremely questionable. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8509601
- 02:37:598 (3,4) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8509618
Normal
Again I think 1.2 sv is also high, especially since you have an advanced, this should be an easier normal
Again I think 1.2 sv is also high, especially since you have an advanced, this should be an easier normal
- 00:04:982 - I'd like to know why you have nc inconsistency. Here you nc every downbeat and in a lot of other occurrences like 00:39:444 - you nc every measure?
- 00:27:752 - vocal and piano are the main factors of the song. I mean you dont have to map every note but leaving a gap while there's still one isn't what id prefer. Id add another 1/1 slider here or extend the previous slider here. 00:32:675 - same with this
- 00:48:059 - idk why this part is suddenly less intensive and inconsistent with that of 2 other kiais. imo this is the strongest vocal part of the song
Advanced
- 00:54:726 (3) - way too confusing. This is not a typical straight song and at an extremely fast bpm. For hard and under try to avoid placing circles on a purple tick.Those swing melodies should be represented by sliders only for lower diffs
- 00:59:649 - try to have a slider here for the drums like you mapped them before like 00:23:957 (3) - Otherwise feels weird to have something on a weaker drum but nothing on a stronger one
- 02:38:521 (4) - nc for emphasis?
Hard
Your hard is way too confusing. Those fast clickable offbeat swing melodies are brutal. I'm not exactly new to the game but I failed this. Consider simplify your rhythms a bit and use sliders more often than circles for the confusing notes.
Again still same stuff with advanced. I just found these 00:43:033 (5,1,2,3,4) - are too clustered and can give some reading troubles (they don't look nice to me also)
For the last diff, 01:17:290 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - are you sure this is playable? 195/4=292.5/6 you're streaming at nearly 300bpm and unless you've SSed everything will freeze I don't think anyone could perfect this (also ewf is only 240 :>)Your hard is way too confusing. Those fast clickable offbeat swing melodies are brutal. I'm not exactly new to the game but I failed this. Consider simplify your rhythms a bit and use sliders more often than circles for the confusing notes.
Again still same stuff with advanced. I just found these 00:43:033 (5,1,2,3,4) - are too clustered and can give some reading troubles (they don't look nice to me also)
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That's all I have. I'm very inexperienced with higher diffs and the jazzy swing types so sorry if its a bad mod.
Hope its helpful anyway. Best of luck~