Bentham - White · forum

A r M i N

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-07-29T22:48:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 25. Januar 2018 at 13:01:32

Artist: Bentham
Title: White
Source: 潔癖男子！青山くん
Tags: armin A_r_M_i_N Tvsize Feb Chalwa Battle Akitoshi NeoSL Neoskylove Football Soccer Pony Canyon Cleanliness Boy Keppeki Danshi Aoyama kun OP Opening 鈴木敬 Takashi Suzuki 小関竜矢 Tatsuya Ozeki 須田原生 Motoki Suda 辻怜次 Reiji Tsuji TV SIZE
BPM: 190
Filesize: 18760kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Insane (4,23 stars, 291 notes)
Battle's Extra (5,59 stars, 385 notes)
Chalwa's Normal (2,22 stars, 161 notes)
Easy (1,56 stars, 123 notes)
Feb's Extra (5,28 stars, 348 notes)
Hard (3,59 stars, 260 notes)
NeoSL's Insane (4,98 stars, 327 notes)
Ultra (5,64 stars, 360 notes)

Download: Bentham - White
Download: Bentham - White (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #4
(mapset by Me, Chalwa, Neoskylove, Akitoshi, Battle and Feb)

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Difficulties

Easy ~ by Me

Normal ~ by Chalwa

Hard ~ by Me

Insane ~ by Akitoshi

Insane ~ by Neoskylove

Extra ~ by Feb

Extra ~ by Battle

Ultra ~ by Me[/centre]

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Hitsounds ~ by Feb
Video & MP3 ~ by Doormat
Metadata ~ by Lama Poluna

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Thanks for Icons

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Last edited by A r M i N 2020-02-23T16:27:04+00:00, edited 75 times in total.

Kilabarus

999 posts

Joined May 2015

Kilabarus 2017-07-29T23:13:26+00:00

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01:49 A r M i N: hey
01:49 A r M i N: u wanna  check out my diff i did?
01:49 MashaSG: hey
01:49 A r M i N: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741
01:49 A r M i N: need some feedback
01:49 MashaSG: sure
01:52 MashaSG: 00:02:766 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think mapping drums here would be better, they are on completely different level then guitar sounds
01:52 MashaSG: Or you can do like Monstrata and map jumps
01:52 MashaSG: Yohooo
01:52 MashaSG: Many jumps
01:53 A r M i N: already enough jumps i guess lol
01:53 MashaSG: 00:10:976 (9) - NC I think?
01:53 MashaSG: 00:09:713 (9) - here as well
01:53 A r M i N: sure
01:54 MashaSG: 00:16:503 (1) - I would move it to 00:16:661 - here
01:55 MashaSG: Just feelin
01:55 A r M i N: hmm nah i like it that way ^^
01:55 MashaSG: 00:21:555 (6) - A bit more spacing pls o>o
01:56 A r M i N: alright
01:57 MashaSG: 00:33:713 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Drums getting high, but your spacing not just stays the same, it's lowering lol
01:57 MashaSG: This applies to all of these sections though
01:58 MashaSG: You can start with low spacing again and again, I think this would be better
01:58 A r M i N: i always start low tho
01:58 MashaSG: Hmm
01:58 MashaSG: Like
01:59 MashaSG: 00:33:713 (1,2) - 2,86 spacing
01:59 A r M i N: alright i made it a bit more clear
01:59 MashaSG: 00:35:292 (1,2) - 2,84
01:59 MashaSG: Ok
02:00 MashaSG: 00:41:687 (9,10,11,1) - I don't know why you do such turn in stream, but if you want to emphasize the end of the drums, you can NC (9) and give other circles much more spacing, at this SR this would be just fine
02:01 A r M i N: i tought its an interesting pattern
02:01 MashaSG: It is
02:01 MashaSG: But it is kinda not supported with music because nothing is changing
02:02 MashaSG: You can keep it sure
02:02 MashaSG: Patterns like this is in every tv size now i think LOL
02:03 MashaSG: 00:46:976 (1) - I think you can make this slider an unique slider, as it is supported by unique vocal
02:03 MashaSG: But your version is solid as well
02:04 MashaSG: 01:17:134 (1,2) - Blanket maybe?
02:05 A r M i N: naah
02:05 MashaSG: 01:21:713 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hi kneesocks
02:05 MashaSG: How ya doin
02:05 MashaSG: :p
02:05 A r M i N: i didnt want to copy it exactly
02:05 A r M i N: i was thinking the same thing haahaha
02:06 A r M i N: decided to change it up a liiittle bit
02:06 MashaSG: 01:26:608 (4,5,1,2) - Same thing as in the beginning, drums here is louder and more important than guitar imo
02:07 MashaSG: That's all I think~
02:07 MashaSG: Though I like it
02:07 MashaSG: Really
02:07 A r M i N: alright thanks a lot :D
02:07 A r M i N: one last question
02:07 A r M i N: do you think i should make set and rank it?
02:08 MashaSG: Sure lol
02:08 A r M i N: like.. would it take lots of mods and shit or is it going to go kinda quick
02:08 MashaSG: Nono
02:08 MashaSG: This diff is awesome
02:08 A r M i N: <3
02:08 MashaSG: It needs kinda 1-2 mods from experienced mappers

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-07-31T16:28:47+00:00

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2017-07-31 18:10 A r M i N: check my diff
2017-07-31 18:10 A r M i N: XD
2017-07-31 18:10 A r M i N: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1370229 Bentham - White (TV Size)]
2017-07-31 18:10 A r M i N: u had no time last time lol
2017-07-31 18:10 Venix: and post it when I'll submit it
2017-07-31 18:10 Venix: xD
2017-07-31 18:10 Venix: dling
2017-07-31 18:10 Venix: xD
2017-07-31 18:12 A r M i N: polski interneta
2017-07-31 18:12 Venix: dzięki
2017-07-31 18:12 Venix: which diff?
2017-07-31 18:13 Venix: or który diff? XD
2017-07-31 18:14 A r M i N: ultra
2017-07-31 18:15 Venix: 00:07:187 (4,5) - go away
2017-07-31 18:15 Venix: with this overlap
2017-07-31 18:15 Venix: xD
2017-07-31 18:16 A r M i N: naaah xD
2017-07-31 18:16 A r M i N: i like it :P
2017-07-31 18:16 Venix: it's
2017-07-31 18:16 Venix: uglyyyyy
2017-07-31 18:17 Venix: 00:41:687 (9) - should be nc for change of stream direction
2017-07-31 18:17 Venix: but btw
2017-07-31 18:17 Venix: this shape should curve 00:41:608 (8) - here cuz here's more important sound
2017-07-31 18:18 A r M i N: i know xD
2017-07-31 18:18 A r M i N: but how
2017-07-31 18:18 A r M i N: thinking
2017-07-31 18:19 Venix: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8728513
2017-07-31 18:19 Venix: like this
2017-07-31 18:19 Venix: xD
2017-07-31 18:20 Venix: 00:53:134 (7,1) - should be spaced more I think
2017-07-31 18:21 A r M i N: http://puu.sh/wXVGW/7b23b8c83c.jpg
2017-07-31 18:22 Venix: 00:58:345 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - i'd nc all of circles cuz here is 3/4 beat
2017-07-31 18:22 Venix: also 00:58:818 (3) - this circle is wrongly snapped
2017-07-31 18:23 A r M i N: sure
2017-07-31 18:23 Venix: should be one 1/6 tick eariel
2017-07-31 18:23 Venix: earlier*
2017-07-31 18:23 Venix: 00:59:450 (3) - same here
2017-07-31 18:24 A r M i N: they are all 1/6 right?
2017-07-31 18:24 Venix: 01:00:871 - dat pitch
2017-07-31 18:24 Venix: xD
2017-07-31 18:24 A r M i N: 00:58:555 (1) - 00:59:187 (1) -  those two?
2017-07-31 18:24 Venix: 00:58:345 (1,2) - these are snapped correctly
2017-07-31 18:24 Venix: yeah these two are should be one 1/6 tick earlier
2017-07-31 18:25 Venix: 01:21:555 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - huge amount of pp XD
2017-07-31 18:26 Venix: 01:23:608 (1) - what are you think about moving this circle like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8728560
2017-07-31 18:26 Venix: I think flow will be better
2017-07-31 18:26 A r M i N: who doesnt love peppy points <3
2017-07-31 18:27 A r M i N: its fine i think
2017-07-31 18:27 Venix: ok that's all
2017-07-31 18:27 Venix: now gimme kudos XD
2017-07-31 18:27 A r M i N: thanks <3
2017-07-31 18:27 A r M i N: hhahahaha
2017-07-31 18:27 A r M i N: xD
2017-07-31 18:27 A r M i N: sure post

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-08-05T05:36:27+00:00

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Tarrasky

1,203 posts

Joined March 2014

Tarrasky 2017-08-05T22:56:54+00:00

just some tips

Easy

Maybe you can remove these break time, not sure if is necessary, actually can be confuse so many break times for beginners
00:43:063 (1) - maybe is better in x86 y316, avoi a bit be so close for the border

Chalwa's Normal

00:58:221 (1) - In my opinion is better the slider finish in 00:59:484 -, there's a intense song here and is more logical following the song
01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - hm not sure about this mapping, maybe is better you normal map here, with 1/1 sliders for example, if you want do this 2/1 circles sequence i recommend you do in 01:23:484 (1) - (look easy diff for example)

Akitoshi's Insane

Maybe this spacing 01:11:800 (5,1) - is a bit high, you can stack 01:11:800 (5) - in the end of 01:11:168 (2) - slider for example

NeoSL's Insane

00:13:221 (3) - move to x451 y265 to blanket with 00:13:063 (2) -

Feb's diff looks really unecessary for the mapset, the mapping are using a lot of technical sequences that in my opinion isn't so necessary for the song, for example this sequences 00:53:010 (1,1,1,1) - that the important song isn't clickable just for aesthetics (i cant even hear what the instrument are following in 00:54:273 -, a small guitar that repeats in every 1/2? if yes is more important than the beat 00:54:431 -? this guitar have too in 00:54:589 - 00:54:747 - etc and isn't mapped)
anyway is just my opinion, the map looks very good but i disagree with you map like this for this song

gl, hope this helps ^^

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2017-08-06T06:11:10+00:00

still deciding if I keep these, since they are actually only there for the passive mapping here, but might be better to have single notes here.
I'm currently working on a new style for my mapping with my last few maps so yeah.

Lama Poluna

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Lama Poluna 2017-08-06T12:33:01+00:00

privet, from metadata help queue.
Artist: Bentham
Title: White
Source: 潔癖男子！青山くん
Tags: Pony Canyon Cleanliness Boy Keppeki Danshi Aoyama kun OP Opening 鈴木敬 Takashi Suzuki 小関竜矢 Tatsuya Ozeki 須田原生 Motoki Suda 辻怜次 Reiji Tsuji tv size
Source:
1) http://www.bentham-web.com/discography/detail/7/
2) http://kda-anime.com/music.html

no kudosu

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-08-06T12:45:16+00:00

@tarra fix both

@lama ty :3

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-08-07T00:34:18+00:00

as per request

[easy]
hitsounds where
00:10:221 - for here i think its better if you follow the guitar like youve been doing : https://puu.sh/x3wtN/9e937391f7.png or something like that
00:20:958 (2) - nitpicky, but maybe stack this slider end on 00:17:484 (4) -
01:00:747 (1,2,3,4) - hm.. this sounds really off to me since youre skipping important drum beats on the red ticks. althought it would require a lot of remapping, i think you should focus on the drums since its more prominent (for example, the first part of kiai : https://puu.sh/x3wJ8/24ba020235.png).
01:04:537 - like it sounds really off here.. maybe its just me but its not really clear on what youre following. its not drums obviously, but its not vocals either cause you wouldnt end this slider 01:04:537 (3) - on a prominent vocal sound :thinking:
01:22:221 (3,2) - try to position it so that these stack? xd
01:24:116 (2,1) - or at least this stack

[chalwa's normal]
00:02:642 (1) - okie so youre following the drums right? so ending the sliders on a significant drum sound rhythmically sounds bad (ex. 00:03:116 (2) - 00:05:642 (2) - ) maybe do something like : https://puu.sh/x3wXk/ea59ab92a1.png cause theres no point in starting the slider on a red tick where the guitar is when youre following drums
00:11:800 (2) - what is this repeat following? if its the drums, it starts here 00:12:273 - . if youre following that sound here 00:11:642 - , its better if you just make it a long slider without repeat cause it isnt hitting anything right now
00:17:168 (4) - (where my cursor is) https://puu.sh/x3x4S/f1b9cae7db.png doing something like this sounds better since youre missing a really loud guitar beat here 00:16:379 - and youve been following the guitar since this section started.
00:17:800 - please be consistent on your rhythmm. you were following the guitar here 00:12:747 (1,2) - but you changed to drums.
00:25:379 (1) - actually the sound here isnt as "technical" as you think so a slider like this just looks out of place imo. a linear slider will work fine

00:39:273 - change to sliders for consistency?
00:45:589 (1) - whoa what happened to the middle of this slider
00:44:642 - since you were following vocals before, i think you should continue it : https://puu.sh/x3xgM/f597617a0a.png
00:51:116 - same thing here. i think you know how to fix this now~
00:59:484 - too prominent of a beat to miss. better to end the long slider here imo since its a nice finisher before the kiai
01:01:852 - i explained this in easy, but i think its better to follow the drums on the red tick during the kiai since theyre a lot more prominent :/
01:10:852 - from here to 01:24:747 - it sounds great though
01:26:326 (2) - change to note + 1/2 slider to hit the guitar sound here 01:26:484 - since youre following it based on 01:27:116 (4) -
01:29:010 - same thing here
01:30:431 (2,3) - change this to a 1/2 repeat?

[hard]
00:02:010 (4) - this is kind of hard to read imo. maybe just make it a kick slider with repeats
00:02:326 (6) - also maybe change this to a 3/4 slider with a note to hit the downbeat
00:10:221 (1,2,3,4) - this is too intense for a hard. 1/4 spacing should be toned down a bit

its spaced out like a 1/2 so its easy to misread for beginners. even the insane doesnt space it out like this (applies to other ones like this as well)
01:19:379 (5,1) - stacking the slider ends look better~ if youre worried about spacing emphasis, i think its fine since flow changes here

ganbatte

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Cheri 2017-08-07T14:23:51+00:00

Feel free to ignore anything I say - this is a small mod and really just an opinion base on what I see

NeoSL's Insane

01:00:116 - Honestly this just feel empty - I understand u want a pause but the sounds in the background makes it feel like I should be pressing some circles at least -

01:04:379 (1) - the distance right here and right here 01:06:905 (1) - is different - they both capture the same impact but the first 1 jump distance is a bit longer than the 2nd - This may be my poor judgment but may reduce the distance bit?

Also I notice that 01:09:273 (1) - has less emphasis than I feel it should when comparing it to 2 previously mentions - a simply change in the distance to have a bigger jump could fix this

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- Hard to see what I can mod out of the Extras and didn't see anything below insane -

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-08T03:54:35+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane

Maybe this spacing 01:11:800 (5,1) - is a bit high, you can stack 01:11:800 (5) - in the end of 01:11:168 (2) - slider for example didn't stack but i did changes for spacing

thanks!

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Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2017-08-08T09:11:19+00:00

i was halfway through and then my browser crashed kms ill just mod the higher diffs because the easier ones didnt seem to have any major problems

[Ultra]
00:07:694 (1) - imo a 1/2 slider would fit here better since a tense part is bout to beginn here and you leave a 1/2 pause
00:35:168 (3) - i think the nc spam is not really necessary here.also it looks better without nc because the jumps looks like they have a patternjust nc on every second white tick so you have 1-2-3-4 as a combo

the diffname is also a bit missleading because usually Ultra diffs are very hard and 6+ but i honestly dont know how this is 6* lol

[Battle's Extra]
00:04:694 - why dont follow the guitar here?
pretty solid diff i really like the 1/4 memes you put in the kiai

[Feb's Extra]
00:02:010 (1) - i know this is intended but how is someone supposed to know that its a reverse slider? slidertail has to be visible or something yada yada
nice fucking meme diff

[NeosSKL]
00:14:010 (1) - move this to x68 y312 or something to have a nice hexagon
pretty solid
somehow the video doesnt play in this diff :thonkang:

yeah hitsounds are missing but i guess they are just wip

Sluggo1000

34 posts

Joined February 2015

Sluggo1000 2017-08-08T16:35:54+00:00

#modreqs

M4M ^^, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/647955

Easy

00:25:379 (1,1) - Switch these out with half beat sliders, it puts more emphasis on the bass! http://prntscr.com/g5xnt5
00:14:010 (3) - 00:35:484 (1) - 00:39:905 (4) - 01:05:168 (4) - 01:13:379 (1) - 01:20:958 (1) - 01:26:010 (1) - 01:28:537 (1) - These sliders exit the screen at some point. This would go against you in terms of quality, so I'd suggest you fix them. uwu
Otherwise, this map has a good slider-to-circle rhythm and alternation!

Chalwa's Normal

00:19:694 (5) - 01:02:010 (3) - 01:15:273 (6) - Same thing here with the sliders

Hard

00:02:010 (4) - 00:04:537 (4) - 00:09:905 (4) - 00:18:273 (2) - 00:34:221 (1) - 00:56:326 (3) - 01:07:694 (3) - 01:09:905 (1) - Outside the playfield again (sorry if I seem picky xd)

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Despite the objects outside the map, the maps above have a decently professional style and placement. I would mod the higher diffs, but I don't find myself qualified for that uwu Good luck with your mapping career!

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2017-08-08T17:18:01+00:00

Normal modding request in my modding queue.
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Easy

00:02:326 - strong sound here, what I expected is a clickable objects. You can reverse 00:01:379 (2) - and place a circle at 00:02:326 -
00:21:589 (1) - will this spinner suitable here? I think it is quite short for Easy diff,
00:33:589 - what are this slider end follow for? vocal started 00:33:431 - .
00:58:694 - again, why reverse at this timing? here got no strong beat or vocal. I think it is better to reverse 2/1 beats slider to follow vocal. (reverse at 00:58:852 - )
01:18:431 (1,2) - ctrl+g for consistent pattern with 01:08:326 (1,2) -
I see you use repeated rhythm, which is good in Easy.

Normal

00:11:642 (1) - remove nc for consistent the combo chain. you use nc per 2 beats, better to follow. (and there are few more)
00:39:273 (4,5) - You use circle here, but not for others with same rhythm. Please map it consistent
00:58:221 (1) - I am not oppose you use long slider to skip beats in the middle, but do not miss the strong beats. I think you can shorten the slider to 00:59:484 - and it is more reasonable and fit music.
01:19:379 (4) - I think you can have a better shape.
01:21:273 - ignoring the beat sound? why?
01:25:379 - why skipped, I think it is better to map this sound also, as you are following vocal at 01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - and you still map for the forth sound. I suggest you can use 2/1 slider on 01:23:484 - and 01:24:747 - . and 01:24:747 - strong beat can be also mapped.
01:30:431 - it feels better for 1/2 reverse to me.

Hard

00:02:010 (4,5) - it is much more reasonable to reverse them, becasue 00:02:010 - and 00:02:089 - got even strength of beat sound. However, as a rubbish player, of course I hope you can use 1/4 reverse for twice instead of having a circle in the middle.
00:02:642 - strong beat, where you should place clickable object to emphasis the beat. Therefore, we usually avoid place slider end at big white tick.
01:19:379 (5,1) - not really a good pattern as the overlap is hard to read
01:30:116 (2) - are you sure to space out? It is rankable in Hard, but seems you definite continue 1/4 reversed slider stream is look like 00:10:537 (2) - this. If you spaced out, player may mis-read as 1/2 pattern.
In fact, you can add little jump for Strong beats, like 00:02:642 - 00:05:168 - 01:30:905 (6) - etc. It is more fun to have jumps, otherwise, it may be boring.

Aki's Insane

00:17:326 (5,6) - flowing break from (5) to (6), which is not suitable to use becasue you didn't need to emphasis (6). But you can have breaking flow on 00:17:484 (6,1) - as 00:17:800 - is a strong beat.
00:21:510 (1) - should be start at 00:21:589 - , which here has a strong beat
Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-08T17:41:20+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
Aki's Insane
[notice]
00:17:326 (5,6) - flowing break from (5) to (6), which is not suitable to use becasue you didn't need to emphasis (6). But you can have breaking flow on 00:17:484 (6,1) - as 00:17:800 - is a strong beat. uhhh made more circular-flow like
00:21:510 (1) - should be start at 00:21:589 - , which here has a strong beat ok
Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane

thanks!

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Creator:A r M i N
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:潔癖男子！青山くん
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A r M i N 2017-08-08T18:20:03+00:00

@mazziv no fix
@Sluggo no fix, the objects dont leave the playing area

Kyle Y wrote:

Normal modding request in my modding queue.
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Easy
00:02:326 - strong sound here, what I expected is a clickable objects. You can reverse 00:01:379 (2) - and place a circle at 00:02:326 -
00:21:589 (1) - will this spinner suitable here? I think it is quite short for Easy diff, i want at least 1 spinner in the map
00:33:589 - what are this slider end follow for? vocal started 00:33:431 - . its fine like that imo
00:58:694 - again, why reverse at this timing? here got no strong beat or vocal. I think it is better to reverse 2/1 beats slider to follow vocal. (reverse at 00:58:852 - )
01:18:431 (1,2) - ctrl+g for consistent pattern with 01:08:326 (1,2) -
I see you use repeated rhythm, which is good in Easy.

Hard
00:02:010 (4,5) - it is much more reasonable to reverse them, becasue 00:02:010 - and 00:02:089 - got even strength of beat sound. However, as a rubbish player, of course I hope you can use 1/4 reverse for twice instead of having a circle in the middle. ive seen a lot of other hard diffs use it so ill keep that
00:02:642 - strong beat, where you should place clickable object to emphasis the beat. Therefore, we usually avoid place slider end at big white tick.
01:19:379 (5,1) - not really a good pattern as the overlap is hard to read its okay imo
01:30:116 (2) - are you sure to space out? It is rankable in Hard, but seems you definite continue 1/4 reversed slider stream is look like 00:10:537 (2) - this. If you spaced out, player may mis-read as 1/2 pattern.
In fact, you can add little jump for Strong beats, like 00:02:642 - 00:05:168 - 01:30:905 (6) - etc. It is more fun to have jumps, otherwise, it may be boring.

Chalwa

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Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2017-08-08T18:35:11+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
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Chalwa's Normal

00:58:221 (1) - In my opinion is better the slider finish in 00:59:484 -, there's a intense song here and is more logical following the song I think it's fine >.<
01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - hm not sure about this mapping, maybe is better you normal map here, with 1/1 sliders for example, if you want do this 2/1 circles sequence i recommend you do in 01:23:484 (1) - (look easy diff for example) Yes, i agree, but then SR is omre than 2.25* :/

gl, hope this helps ^^

Shiratoi wrote:
as per request

[chalwa's normal]
00:02:642 (1) - okie so youre following the drums right? so ending the sliders on a significant drum sound rhythmically sounds bad (ex. 00:03:116 (2) - 00:05:642 (2) - ) maybe do something like : https://puu.sh/x3wXk/ea59ab92a1.png cause theres no point in starting the slider on a red tick where the guitar is when youre following drums
00:11:800 (2) - what is this repeat following? if its the drums, it starts here 00:12:273 - . if youre following that sound here 00:11:642 - , its better if you just make it a long slider without repeat cause it isnt hitting anything right now
00:17:168 (4) - (where my cursor is) https://puu.sh/x3x4S/f1b9cae7db.png doing something like this sounds better since youre missing a really loud guitar beat here 00:16:379 - and youve been following the guitar since this section started. I can't understand your thing, it's a bit weird for me, so I'm keeping my pattern
00:17:800 - please be consistent on your rhythmm. you were following the guitar here 00:12:747 (1,2) - but you changed to drums.
00:25:379 (1) - actually the sound here isnt as "technical" as you think so a slider like this just looks out of place imo. a linear slider will work fine Is this any good reason and is it really bad for make here other slider? I don't think so
00:39:273 - change to sliders for consistency? For consistency with what?
00:45:589 (1) - whoa what happened to the middle of this slider square, cause it's easier way for me to make curve?
00:44:642 - since you were following vocals before, i think you should continue it : https://puu.sh/x3xgM/f597617a0a.png Your rhythm choise is worse for me than min, so no changes
00:51:116 - same thing here. i think you know how to fix this now~ no, i don't know C:
00:59:484 - too prominent of a beat to miss. better to end the long slider here imo since its a nice finisher before the kiai
01:01:852 - i explained this in easy, but i think its better to follow the drums on the red tick during the kiai since theyre a lot more prominent :/ I don't want to make this diff >2.25*
01:10:852 - from here to 01:24:747 - it sounds great though
01:26:326 (2) - change to note + 1/2 slider to hit the guitar sound here 01:26:484 - since youre following it based on 01:27:116 (4) -
01:29:010 - same thing here
01:30:431 (2,3) - change this to a 1/2 repeat? nope?

ganbatte

Sluggo1000 wrote:
#modreqs

M4M ^^, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/647955

Chalwa's Normal

00:19:694 (5) - 01:02:010 (3) - 01:15:273 (6) - Same thing here with the sliders If you test the map you'll see nothing is exciting a screeen in-game c:

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Despite the objects outside the map, the maps above have a decently professional style and placement. I would mod the higher diffs, but I don't find myself qualified for that uwu Good luck with your mapping career!

Kyle Y wrote:

Normal modding request in my modding queue.
[]

Normal
00:11:642 (1) - remove nc for consistent the combo chain. you use nc per 2 beats, better to follow. (and there are few more) I wanted here to emphasise this guitar by new combo here.
00:39:273 (4,5) - You use circle here, but not for others with same rhythm. Please map it consistent
00:58:221 (1) - I am not oppose you use long slider to skip beats in the middle, but do not miss the strong beats. I think you can shorten the slider to 00:59:484 - and it is more reasonable and fit music.
01:19:379 (4) - I think you can have a better shape. I think this M is fine here
01:21:273 - ignoring the beat sound? why? Make a rest for newbie's fingers
01:25:379 - why skipped, I think it is better to map this sound also, as you are following vocal at 01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - and you still map for the forth sound. I suggest you can use 2/1 slider on 01:23:484 - and 01:24:747 - . and 01:24:747 - strong beat can be also mapped.
01:30:431 - it feels better for 1/2 reverse to me. I think my rhythm is as good as yours

[*] Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane[/list][/notice]

I'm the worst person from who you can accepted request for this map XD

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Venix

Global Moderator

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Venix 2017-08-08T18:35:43+00:00

when you have no bn friends XD

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-08-08T18:36:30+00:00

Venix wrote:

when you have no bn friends XD

meaaan

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2017-08-08T19:11:34+00:00

nice meme not even explaining why you dont apply anything

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-08-08T22:59:46+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
nice meme not even explaining why you dont apply anything

sigh.. no 1/2 slider since the sound on red tick is not prominent enough for me
1 2 1 2 1 2 1 2 is a pretty common pattern to use so ill keep it
Ultra, as the highest diff is pretty alright imo

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2017-08-09T07:35:03+00:00

I see no reason for it other than it allows 6 digits to pass that part for free due to nc spam.

0109-

337 posts

Joined June 2013

0109- 2017-08-09T07:42:08+00:00

hi!

m4m back

[artlu]

hs?

00:00:116 (1,2,3) - oh gosh big jumps at the beginning looks so silly and uncomfortable, players are like crash the retry button, furthermore, the density here is even higher than the guitar parts which starts from 00:02:642 (1) - and that's so inappropriate. At lease reduce the spacing a bit
00:09:352 (6,7,8) - make these streams blanket with 00:08:642 (3) - would visually better
00:30:510 (1) - placing a spinner here doesn't fit tbh, idk like it doesn't worth to move the cursor around. A long slow slider would defenitely do a better job. If you still want to keep the spinner, please extend to 00:32:326 - to cover all the vocal. There's no reason to have such a long recovery time like that
00:33:589 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam is meaningless, the music all stay the same. This looks like providing free hp, please consider controlling the nc appropriately
00:59:484 (1) - would suggest to stack this with 00:58:431 (2) - 's tail or the head. The drum sounds so strong that worth more spacing u know
01:00:747 (1,2,3) - idk if this is ok since the jumps are so sudden @@. Map the previous guitar sounds would be nice
01:01:063 (3,4,5) - i cant get why you place a triplet here like there's nothing sounds 1/4. why not place a 1/2 slider like 01:11:484 (4) - would be less sudden as well

[feb]

00:02:010 (1) - i actually can't see the reverse in default skin
01:30:905 (1) - this is so unpredictable and the music ended at 01:31:063 - pls don't try to make it complicated you can just place the same stuff as 01:30:589 (2) -
complicate maps are good but sometime i don't know what you're trying to emphasize, please map things that the music provided
like 00:53:010 (1) - i understand the concept of the maps that you use sv pretty much to emphasize things but this actually doesn't fit tbh, players would expect the same intense drum sounds and leave the slider after 1 tap. For the sake of playability, this would be much better if you replace with 2 circles to indicate that you're following the vocal.
And here 00:53:642 (1) - you're making players clicking the place where there isn't anything please make 00:53:800 - clickable.

[chalwa]

Check ai mod for distance snap things
00:13:221 (2,3,4,5) - wtf with this patterns this is so questionable lol xdd, pls map like 00:18:431 (2,3,4,5) - for consistency
00:44:642 (2) - what happened with this, you're following the vocal pretty well unless this, would suggest replacing this to a circle at 00:44:800 -

the gap between normal and hard is pretty big that the hard diff already have some kick sliders stuff and the big spacing overall

gl :>

Feb

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Feb 2017-08-09T09:27:13+00:00

0109- wrote:
hi!

m4m back
[artlu]

[feb]
00:02:010 (1) - i actually can't see the reverse in default skin hmm ye it is, on the other hand its visible a bit as well, so either i make the sv higher or let the player retry the 2 secs he missed in his life.
01:30:905 (1) - this is so unpredictable and the music ended at 01:31:063 - pls don't try to make it complicated you can just place the same stuff as 01:30:589 (2) - 01:31:221 - the guitar string actually ends here tho. and its predictable judging from other maps where i did the exact same thing and not even on the end of the map
complicate maps are good but sometime i don't know what you're trying to emphasize, please map things that the music provided
like 00:53:010 (1) - i understand the concept of the maps that you use sv pretty much to emphasize things but this actually doesn't fit tbh, players would expect the same intense drum sounds and leave the slider after 1 tap. For the sake of playability, this would be much better if you replace with 2 circles to indicate that you're following the vocal. yea i kinda wanted to have the passive sound as the strongest sound, but it doesn't fit with the song if i leave out ther est of the guitar right. uh yeah these are circles now.
And here 00:53:642 (1) - you're making players clicking the place where there isn't anything please make 00:53:800 - clickable. isn't this the same thingy ou mentioned above.

gl :>

Thinking about making the slidervelocity higher so the arrow is seen more. Even tho its almost impossible to sliderbreak on the slider since the sliderball doesn#t leave from where you are clicking initially. Uh yeah let's wait.

Didn't reply to mazziv because they said the same thing.

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A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-08-09T14:55:56+00:00

0109- wrote:
hi!

m4m back
[artlu]
hs?
00:00:116 (1,2,3) - oh gosh big jumps at the beginning looks so silly and uncomfortable, players are like crash the retry button, furthermore, the density here is even higher than the guitar parts which starts from 00:02:642 (1) - and that's so inappropriate. At lease reduce the spacing a bit since the sounds at the start are pretty strong i think jumps arent such a bad idea here
00:09:352 (6,7,8) - make these streams blanket with 00:08:642 (3) - would visually better cool idea
00:30:510 (1) - placing a spinner here doesn't fit tbh, idk like it doesn't worth to move the cursor around. A long slow slider would defenitely do a better job. If you still want to keep the spinner, please extend to 00:32:326 - to cover all the vocal. There's no reason to have such a long recovery time like that i would like to keep at least 1 spinner in the diff, but i also dont want it to reach that far since there is a prominent vocal sound on the big white tick
00:33:589 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam is meaningless, the music all stay the same. This looks like providing free hp, please consider controlling the nc appropriately Mazziv also suggested it but i dont really see a problem with a lot of other maps also doing the same concept
00:59:484 (1) - would suggest to stack this with 00:58:431 (2) - 's tail or the head. The drum sounds so strong that worth more spacing u know i originally had it like that but i fixed it in some irc, he said that it would just look better and i agreed, i dont want to change it back again tbh
01:00:747 (1,2,3) - idk if this is ok since the jumps are so sudden @@. Map the previous guitar sounds would be nice in the end its the kiai right, and i think there should be a noticible change when going from non kiai to kiai
01:01:063 (3,4,5) - i cant get why you place a triplet here like there's nothing sounds 1/4. why not place a 1/2 slider like 01:11:484 (4) - would be less sudden as well fixed

the gap between normal and hard is pretty big that the hard diff already have some kick sliders stuff and the big spacing overall

gl :> ty

i had to think like 5min what you mean with artul xDD

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2017-08-09T15:59:07+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
Normal Modding
Song: [url=https://osu.ppy.sh/s/646741]
Bentham - White (TV SIZE) [/url]

thanks

How a smart way to break my format.

-Sylvari

402 posts

Joined October 2013

-Sylvari 2017-08-12T08:39:45+00:00

Hello it's mod from my queue

[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:05:168 (1,2,3,4) - Why this has exactly same distance between this circles? 00:05:168 (1,2) - These two sounds are much stronger than rest.
00:44:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here the intensivity of the song is equal on each circle. So why 00:44:958 (3,4) - are diffrent length.
01:27:116 (6,3) - Stack it.

[NeoSL's Insane]
Good Diff.

[Feb's Extra]
00:02:010 (1) -

osu! Ranking Criteria wrote:
Reverse arrows on sliders must not be completely visually obstructed by other hit objects with the default or beatmap-specific skin. Covering up reverse arrows on sliders can result in sliders being ambiguous to read.

Actually it's unreadble. At least I couldn't sightread that

00:04:853 (3) - NC?
00:48:747 (1,2,1,2) - It's same intensivity of song. So why you made bigger spacing between 00:49:063 (1,2) ?

[Battle's Extra]
01:10:537 (6,3) - This overlap is not nice.

[Ultra]
01:01:852 (7,2) - Stack it.
01:13:537 (2,4) - Same ^

Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2017-08-12T13:50:22+00:00

Man

Manteith wrote:
[Battle's Extra]
01:10:537 (6,3) - This overlap is not nice. Well, the overlap is visible for maybe like .5 seconds and it's gone, plus I'm not gonna restructure an entire pattern just for something that's barley noticable in gameplay lol

Mazz

Mazziv wrote:
[Battle's Extra]
00:04:694 - why dont follow the guitar here? I chose to follow the drums here, which is why each like white tick has a jump for them so ye
pretty solid diff i really like the 1/4 memes you put in the kiai thx me2

I added a few hitsounds to the kiai for my diff so lol ya

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JiruPiru

183 posts

Joined April 2014

JiruPiru 2017-08-13T17:15:47+00:00

Hi there! This is your mod from my queue.

The Easy and Hard diffs are fine I think

Insane

00:25:379 (1,1) - These do not need to be mapped as they are not important sounds in the song (same for any other diff)

Nice pp map lol

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-08-13T18:28:19+00:00

General Stuff

Correct your SB directory, it is not working atm.
You could make the combo colours consistent between diffs.
Feb's Extra's Kiai is not the same of others for no reason.
116 ms leadin is nothing. Edit it to 2000ms at least, because your map starts so fast.

Easy

This 1/4 custom hitsound on the first part is a bit annoying ew I would set it each 2 white ticks instead.The kiai looks so poor without the same hitsounding. It should be the opposite XD
00:08:642 (3,4) - Is this variation of hitsounding intentional? If not, I guess you forgot to set on "Addition" the option "Normal".
00:20:958 (2) - Finish on this slider's head sounds pretty good, it would emphasize more the one on the tail as well. I would add it because after all those drums this one sounds so empty without a forced hitsound.
00:21:589 (1) - Add finish on the end
00:25:379 (1,1,1) - Add whistles on first 2 and adf whistle + finish on the 3rd
01:20:958 (1) - This slider is unrankable, it's set out of screen.
01:30:431 (4) - Try to place this somewhere else, it touches the HP bar and it's not good to watch

Chalwa's Normal

00:08:958 (4) - I would add an addition normal hitsound here, this slider looks so empty @.@
00:12:747 (1,2,3,4,5) - As I said above about this part, it looks so empty without hitsounds compared to the next part that it's full of 1/1 drum hitsounds
00:21:431 (1) - Finish on this slider's tail would be great
00:32:484 (1) - I would avoid this for a normal diff, it looks weird to play after a long break time. I would just start an 1/1 slider 1/2 earlier, on 00:32:326 - to 00:32:642 -, it would be the best thing to do, IMO.
00:42:589 (1,2) - I do not like this rhythm choice, honestly. I would set this other one, instead: https://puu.sh/x97Kh.png
01:07:063 (4) - This slider would flow much better if flipped horizontally. Just move the 2nd point to x:76 y:264
01:19:379 (4) - I think this slider is ugly to watch, no offense :c Try to make something else more beautiful

Hard

00:02:247 (5) - I would remove this circle honestly, I think it's unnecessary on an Hard diff there
00:05:958 (5,1) - This overlap is horrible to watch.. Set it 1.30x further than previous one and earlier than next one to keep consistency
00:12:747 (1,3) - Just stack them, it's much better to watch. Same for next ones like 00:15:273 (1) - and 00:18:432 (3) - and 00:20:958 (3) - . Same for next ones like 00:33:590 (3) - , but I won't mention them anymore, I guess you got it.
00:21:431 (5) - This circle looks so bad placed there, I would make a triangle with previous (4) and (3)'s tail. Place it to x:172 y:208
00:21:589 (1) - Same then normal, add finish on the end
00:55:694 (1,2) - I would swap New combo, if yes, do the same for 00:56:958 (1,2) -
01:20:010 (1) - Don't do this please. Playing it with HD for an hard diff is pretty cancer :\ Just try to make something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835598

Akitoshi's Insane

00:21:589 (1,1) - This sounds bad. Just remove the circle and extend the spinner by 1/2 The spinner on that red tick is just useless, there is not any sound there!
00:47:800 (5) - I am not sure about this slider. It looks like we can avoid this trying something else. What about if you moved it's tail up? For 2 reasons: it plays much better, it is not hidden anymore under previous slider. I mean something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835686 I can already imagine you will hesitate this because it would break the flow with next slider, but you could move and fix the 00:48:116 (1) as well if you decide to follow this suggestion.
00:51:747 (1,2) - Switch NC, and add NC on 00:52:694 (5) -
01:05:484 (5) - It's covered by HP bar. I would move this a bit down. Maybe restack it with (3) and move the tail on up-right
01:16:221 (3) - HP bar :S
01:30:905 (4) - What about setting a NC here? It would be a nice trolling but good choice

NeoSL's Insane

I already told the mapper I won't mod all maps because I do not have the time, but I gave a fast look and I found this that absolutely needs to be fixed: 00:01:852 (4) - this antijump is so random, just place it somewhere else following the same logic of previous jumping pattern and set a new combo on 00:02:010 (5) to balance it

Ultra

00:02:010 (5) - I would set NC here because it's a different jump from previous elements. I would even do it because it would warn about the stream and to reduce the combo of this pattern compared to the previous ones
00:21:510 (1) - Same of other diff
I have nothing to say for this diff. I testplayed it before checking the editor and it was just fine and fun to play.

Battle's Extra

00:21:431 (1) - Same of other diffs
00:41:326 (5,6,7,1) - I think this is a bit exagerated xD I would reduce their distance a bit
01:12:668 (4,5) - Stack it with 01:12:431 (3)'s tail or just place it a bit down it, i do not like where you placed it actually :\
01:12:905 (6) - Remove grid snap and perfectly on the same line of the slider, at x:395 y:8
01:28:852 (3) - Place to x:256 y:336 to make a triangle and to make it more comfortable to play
01:30:905 (1) - Placing it to x: 256 y:368 makes the jump from 01:30:747 (9) - better to play (for both suggestions, I testplayed the map).

That's it. I wish you good luck and I hope it helped!

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-08-13T19:07:42+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General Stuff
Correct your SB directory, it is not working atm. Venix is working on a new Storyboard anyways ^^
You could make the combo colours consistent between diffs.
Feb's Extra's Kiai is not the same of others for no reason. kiais can differ from each diff, he probably changed it
116 ms leadin is nothing. Edit it to 2000ms at least, because your map starts so fast.

Easy
This 1/4 custom hitsound on the first part is a bit annoying ew I would set it each 2 white ticks instead.The kiai looks so poor without the same hitsounding. It should be the opposite XD I dont get what you mean i am sorry xD
00:08:642 (3,4) - Is this variation of hitsounding intentional? If not, I guess you forgot to set on "Addition" the option "Normal".
00:20:958 (2) - Finish on this slider's head sounds pretty good, it would emphasize more the one on the tail as well. I would add it because after all those drums this one sounds so empty without a forced hitsound. I agree, it sounds emty but i added a normal clap
00:21:589 (1) - Add finish on the end doesnt sound good imo sorry^^
00:25:379 (1,1,1) - Add whistles on first 2 and adf whistle + finish on the 3rd
01:20:958 (1) - This slider is unrankable, it's set out of screen.
01:30:431 (4) - Try to place this somewhere else, it touches the HP bar and it's not good to watch

Hard
00:02:247 (5) - I would remove this circle honestly, I think it's unnecessary on an Hard diff there
00:05:958 (5,1) - This overlap is horrible to watch.. Set it 1.30x further than previous one and earlier than next one to keep consistency sorry but what overlap haha
00:12:747 (1,3) - Just stack them, it's much better to watch. Same for next ones like 00:15:273 (1) - and 00:18:432 (3) - and 00:20:958 (3) - . Same for next ones like 00:33:590 (3) - , but I won't mention them anymore, I guess you got it. i did it that way for better reading^^
00:21:431 (5) - This circle looks so bad placed there, I would make a triangle with previous (4) and (3)'s tail. Place it to x:172 y:208 its fine imo ^^
00:21:589 (1) - Same then normal, add finish on the end doesnt sound good ^^
00:55:694 (1,2) - I would swap New combo, if yes, do the same for 00:56:958 (1,2) - no sorry^^
01:20:010 (1) - Don't do this please. Playing it with HD for an hard diff is pretty cancer :\ Just try to make something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835598

Ultra
00:02:010 (5) - I would set NC here because it's a different jump from previous elements. I would even do it because it would warn about the stream and to reduce the combo of this pattern compared to the previous ones
00:21:510 (1) - Same of other diff i think a finish hitsound doesnt fit here ^^
I have nothing to say for this diff. I testplayed it before checking the editor and it was just fine and fun to play. <3

That's it. I wish you good luck and I hope it helped! probably the best mod i got so far thanks
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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-08-14T05:33:17+00:00

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Tarrasky wrote:
NeoSL's Insane

00:13:221 (3) - move to x451 y265 to blanket with 00:13:063 (2) - I don't wany to blanket this one.

DJ Lucky wrote:
01:00:116 - Honestly this just feel empty - I understand u want a pause but the sounds in the background makes it feel like I should be pressing some circles at least - I don't add a beat here, doesn't have any sounds.

01:04:379 (1) - the distance right here and right here 01:06:905 (1) - is different - they both capture the same impact but the first 1 jump distance is a bit longer than the 2nd - This may be my poor judgment but may reduce the distance bit?Well......doesn't matter imo.

Also I notice that 01:09:273 (1) - has less emphasis than I feel it should when comparing it to 2 previously mentions - a simply change in the distance to have a bigger jump could fix thisNo.

Mazziv wrote:
[NeosSKL]
00:14:010 (1) - move this to x68 y312 or something to have a nice hexagonJust I made triangle. hexagon doesn't matter in this part at all.

Chewin wrote:
I already told the mapper I won't mod all maps because I do not have the time, but I gave a fast look and I found this that absolutely needs to be fixed: 00:01:852 (4) - this antijump is so random, just place it somewhere else following the same logic of previous jumping pattern and set a new combo on 00:02:010 (5) to balance itMusic gets lower, so I reduced little bit, and players don't misread it as 1/4.

Thanks for mod!
@Armin could you add a video in my map?

Last edited by Affirmation 2017-08-19T10:46:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

xStillo

16 posts

Joined January 2014

xStillo 2017-08-15T00:51:21+00:00

Man, I love this anime and the opening. Thanks for the awesome beatmap guys! Great job.

A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

A r M i N 2017-08-17T23:14:44+00:00

xStillo wrote:
Man, I love this anime and the opening. Thanks for the awesome beatmap guys! Great job.

Thanks a lot <3

ABD007

547 posts

Joined August 2016

ABD007 2017-08-25T23:54:02+00:00

Ultra
00:47:800 (6) - bad flow imo, ctrl+g would be nice . here too 00:48:116 (1) -

Battle's Extra
00:50:168 (4) - i think u can stacked properly that sliderend

Feb's Extra
i think this slider 00:56:326 (2) - should at the red tick instead white imo, add a circle at white is good i think
01:09:273 (3) - maybe nc at here? speed suddenly change
i think u can make this sliderend 01:17:484 (3) - stacked on the head of this 01:18:431 (1) -
overmap ? 01:30:905 (1) - i think at here 01:31:063 - is good

NeoSL's Insane
00:56:800 - missing note?

Akitoshi's Insane
01:27:905 (3) - not stacked properly imo

Hard
00:18:432 (3) - not stacked properly
would be nice make this reverse 00:49:694 (2) - , and remove this 00:50:010 (3) -

Chalwa's Normal
00:05:168 (1) - can u stacked this sliderend on sliderend 00:07:063 (4) - ?

Easy
00:03:589 (2) - it's good i think if stacked on head 00:03:905 (3) -
this sliderend 01:26:010 (1) - should stacked on 01:24:116 (2) -

gl with the set xD

Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-08-26T13:57:52+00:00

hello from queue xd

[General]
i tihnk offset is a bit too early maybe add +10 or smth

[Hard]
00:21:273 (4) - fix ds a bit to make gud triangle
01:19:063 (4,2) - looks better overlapped

[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:11:326 (7) - idk maybe nc this
00:15:747 (2,1) - idk if intended to not overlap this
01:20:642 (4,5,6) - adjust ds pls
01:29:642 (7,1) - swap nc perhaps

[NeoSL's Insane]
00:01:389 (1) - nc 00:01:547 (2) - remove nc
00:56:800 - feels kinda empty lo
01:10:073 (2) - this seem out of place tbh i'd overlap it to 01:09:126 (5) - insted
01:10:705 (2) - ctrl g pls ;w;
01:14:494 (5) - this looks hard to read lolll mayb just overlap it to 01:13:704 (2) - idk
01:17:020 (1,4) - idk if intended not to overlap xd
01:19:231 (5) - ye same here do it with 01:19:862 (2) - idk
01:29:020 (4,7) - NC?

[Ultra]
00:11:326 (7) - idk maybe nc this
00:52:537 (4) - ^

looking forward to see this ranked soon xd

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-27T16:38:38+00:00

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Manteith wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:05:168 (1,2,3,4) - Why this has exactly same distance between this circles? 00:05:168 (1,2) - These two sounds are much stronger than rest. i care on structure
00:44:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here the intensivity of the song is equal on each circle. So why 00:44:958 (3,4) - are diffrent length. vocals
01:27:116 (6,3) - Stack it. ye

DilPil111 wrote:
Hi there! This is your mod from my queue.

The Easy and Hard diffs are fine I think

[Insane]00:25:379 (1,1) - These do not need to be mapped as they are not important sounds in the song (same for any other diff) there's an instrument sound obviously

Nice pp map lol

Chewin wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
00:21:589 (1,1) - This sounds bad. Just remove the circle and extend the spinner by 1/2 The spinner on that red tick is just useless, there is not any sound there! used slider instead uwu
00:47:800 (5) - I am not sure about this slider. It looks like we can avoid this trying something else. What about if you moved it's tail up? For 2 reasons: it plays much better, it is not hidden anymore under previous slider. I mean something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8835686 I can already imagine you will hesitate this because it would break the flow with next slider, but you could move and fix the 00:48:116 (1) as well if you decide to follow this suggestion. let me think about this
00:51:747 (1,2) - Switch NC, and add NC on 00:52:694 (5) - fixed
01:05:484 (5) - It's covered by HP bar. I would move this a bit down. Maybe restack it with (3) and move the tail on up-right moved down the entire 345
01:16:221 (3) - HP bar :S ye
01:30:905 (4) - What about setting a NC here? It would be a nice trolling but good choice ok

Kyousukee wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
01:27:905 (3) - not stacked properly imo ye

AJamez wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:11:326 (7) - idk maybe nc this nah
00:15:747 (2,1) - idk if intended to not overlap this o
01:20:642 (4,5,6) - adjust ds pls i donnt get it w
01:29:642 (7,1) - swap nc perhaps lol why tho

thank you all!

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Mayuzumi Sayaka

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Mayuzumi Sayaka 2017-08-27T21:40:54+00:00

me ranting about comfort mostly
Ultra
01:23:484 (1,1,1,1) - You could really make sliders out of those circles, following the voice
00:59:484 - You really could map the sounds you know?
01:01:063 (3,4) - idk if its just me but they're really uncomfortable
You could also make some sliders to lead into the circles for comfort you know, we'll that's just my opinion
AR: 9.3 and OD: 8.6 would be nice.

Battle's Extra
01:00:984 (2,3,4,5)
01:02:247 (2,3,4,5) This guy really loves doubles doesn't he, I don't see any reason for them
01:03:510 (2,3,4,5)
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