Tarrasky wrote:
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Chalwa's Normal
00:58:221 (1) - In my opinion is better the slider finish in 00:59:484 -, there's a intense song here and is more logical following the song I think it's fine >.<
01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - hm not sure about this mapping, maybe is better you normal map here, with 1/1 sliders for example, if you want do this 2/1 circles sequence i recommend you do in 01:23:484 (1) - (look easy diff for example) Yes, i agree, but then SR is omre than 2.25* :/
gl, hope this helps ^^
Shiratoi wrote:
as per request
[chalwa's normal]
00:02:642 (1) - okie so youre following the drums right? so ending the sliders on a significant drum sound rhythmically sounds bad (ex. 00:03:116 (2) - 00:05:642 (2) - ) maybe do something like : https://puu.sh/x3wXk/ea59ab92a1.png cause theres no point in starting the slider on a red tick where the guitar is when youre following drums
00:11:800 (2) - what is this repeat following? if its the drums, it starts here 00:12:273 - . if youre following that sound here 00:11:642 - , its better if you just make it a long slider without repeat cause it isnt hitting anything right now
00:17:168 (4) - (where my cursor is) https://puu.sh/x3x4S/f1b9cae7db.png doing something like this sounds better since youre missing a really loud guitar beat here 00:16:379 - and youve been following the guitar since this section started. I can't understand your thing, it's a bit weird for me, so I'm keeping my pattern
00:17:800 - please be consistent on your rhythmm. you were following the guitar here 00:12:747 (1,2) - but you changed to drums.
00:25:379 (1) - actually the sound here isnt as "technical" as you think so a slider like this just looks out of place imo. a linear slider will work fineIs this any good reason and is it really bad for make here other slider? I don't think so
00:39:273 - change to sliders for consistency? For consistency with what?
00:45:589 (1) - whoa what happened to the middle of this slider square, cause it's easier way for me to make curve?
00:44:642 - since you were following vocals before, i think you should continue it : https://puu.sh/x3xgM/f597617a0a.png Your rhythm choise is worse for me than min, so no changes
00:51:116 - same thing here. i think you know how to fix this now~ no, i don't know C:
00:59:484 - too prominent of a beat to miss. better to end the long slider here imo since its a nice finisher before the kiai
01:01:852 - i explained this in easy, but i think its better to follow the drums on the red tick during the kiai since theyre a lot more prominent :/ I don't want to make this diff >2.25*
01:10:852 - from here to 01:24:747 - it sounds great though
01:26:326 (2) - change to note + 1/2 slider to hit the guitar sound here 01:26:484 - since youre following it based on 01:27:116 (4) -
01:29:010 - same thing here
01:30:431 (2,3) - change this to a 1/2 repeat? nope?
ganbatte
Sluggo1000 wrote:
#modreqs
M4M ^^, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/647955
Chalwa's Normal
00:19:694 (5) - 01:02:010 (3) - 01:15:273 (6) - Same thing here with the sliders If you test the map you'll see nothing is exciting a screeen in-game c:
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Despite the objects outside the map, the maps above have a decently professional style and placement. I would mod the higher diffs, but I don't find myself qualified for that uwu Good luck with your mapping career!
Kyle Y wrote:
Normal modding request in my modding queue.
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Normal
- 00:11:642 (1) - remove nc for consistent the combo chain. you use nc per 2 beats, better to follow. (and there are few more) I wanted here to emphasise this guitar by new combo here.
- 00:39:273 (4,5) - You use circle here, but not for others with same rhythm. Please map it consistent
- 00:58:221 (1) - I am not oppose you use long slider to skip beats in the middle, but do not miss the strong beats. I think you can shorten the slider to 00:59:484 - and it is more reasonable and fit music.
- 01:19:379 (4) - I think you can have a better shape. I think this M is fine here
- 01:21:273 - ignoring the beat sound? why? Make a rest for newbie's fingers
- 01:25:379 - why skipped, I think it is better to map this sound also, as you are following vocal at 01:20:958 (1,2,3,4) - and you still map for the forth sound. I suggest you can use 2/1 slider on 01:23:484 - and 01:24:747 - . and 01:24:747 - strong beat can be also mapped.
- 01:30:431 - it feels better for 1/2 reverse to me. I think my rhythm is as good as yours
[*] Sorry I am lazy on modding Insane[/list][/notice]
I'm the worst person from who you can accepted request for this map XD
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