Very good song choice, I am satisfied listening to it.
ModI N S A N E
Comments:
Pretty well mapped for the first try, I loved it! It's awfully slow, but it makes a great Insane difficulty for its speed (and some nice DT pp). The flow was very nice and there weren't too many objective issues to point out. There was one section that I noted could have a subjectively better design, and I went ahead and showed you what design I would've used via the code in the box below. I also highlighted which section it was for you to easily delete, paste, and erase in case you either wanted to keep your pattern or use the one I listed. All-in-all, very nicely done! Keep up the good mapping.
Mod:
• 00:00:047 (1) - Delete the bend in the slider. It's inconsistent to the sliders following it and applies an unappealing aesthetic.
• 00:01:824 (1,1) - Blanket the second slider a bit better with the first one. A sliderend overlap of the second slider with the beginning of 00:01:380 (5) - would be the best approach.
• 00:05:380 (1) - Delete New Combo, 00:06:046 (2) - New Combo this.
• 00:08:935 (1) - Delete New Combo, 00:09:602 (3) - New Combo this, 00:09:824 (1) - Delete New Combo. I get what you were trying to do, but the listed change would give a better aesthetic to the map.
• 00:08:491 (6,1) - Fix these slider shapes; try to center the middle joint a bit more.
• 00:12:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Inconsistent shape; try to lower the triplet slightly closer to the (1).
• 00:36:935 (6,1) - Blanket is slightly off; use grid size tiny and move (1) to (x394 y119).
• 00:37:380 (1,2) - Same here; move (2) to (x440 y276) then adjust the distance of the following notes. (You will need to temporarily turn off distance snap for this and the above change).
• 00:48:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Below I have linked a better aesthetic design for this combo. Whether you use it or not is up to your discretion, though it's rankable either way.
H A R D
Comments:
Nothing objectively wrong with this difficulty. A few subjective aesthetic fixes, though nothing major. It's well mapped in its current state!
Mod:
• 00:13:158 (2) - Center and stretch the middle joint a tad more so that it has a consistent shape as the rest of the curved sliders.
• 00:40:046 (4) - Use tiny grid, move slider to (x132 y244) to blanket better, then readjust the circles back on top of the slider accordingly.
• 01:05:380 (4,1) - Either remove the overlap or fix the blanket; I leave that up to your discretion.
N O R M A L
Comments:
Nothing worth noting in this difficulty. It's rankable as it is! Great job! :3
Mod:
Comments:
Pretty well mapped for the first try, I loved it! It's awfully slow, but it makes a great Insane difficulty for its speed (and some nice DT pp). The flow was very nice and there weren't too many objective issues to point out. There was one section that I noted could have a subjectively better design, and I went ahead and showed you what design I would've used via the code in the box below. I also highlighted which section it was for you to easily delete, paste, and erase in case you either wanted to keep your pattern or use the one I listed. All-in-all, very nicely done! Keep up the good mapping.
Mod:
• 00:00:047 (1) - Delete the bend in the slider. It's inconsistent to the sliders following it and applies an unappealing aesthetic.
• 00:01:824 (1,1) - Blanket the second slider a bit better with the first one. A sliderend overlap of the second slider with the beginning of 00:01:380 (5) - would be the best approach.
• 00:05:380 (1) - Delete New Combo, 00:06:046 (2) - New Combo this.
• 00:08:935 (1) - Delete New Combo, 00:09:602 (3) - New Combo this, 00:09:824 (1) - Delete New Combo. I get what you were trying to do, but the listed change would give a better aesthetic to the map.
• 00:08:491 (6,1) - Fix these slider shapes; try to center the middle joint a bit more.
• 00:12:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Inconsistent shape; try to lower the triplet slightly closer to the (1).
• 00:36:935 (6,1) - Blanket is slightly off; use grid size tiny and move (1) to (x394 y119).
• 00:37:380 (1,2) - Same here; move (2) to (x440 y276) then adjust the distance of the following notes. (You will need to temporarily turn off distance snap for this and the above change).
• 00:48:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Below I have linked a better aesthetic design for this combo. Whether you use it or not is up to your discretion, though it's rankable either way.
Comments:
Nothing objectively wrong with this difficulty. A few subjective aesthetic fixes, though nothing major. It's well mapped in its current state!
Mod:
• 00:13:158 (2) - Center and stretch the middle joint a tad more so that it has a consistent shape as the rest of the curved sliders.
• 00:40:046 (4) - Use tiny grid, move slider to (x132 y244) to blanket better, then readjust the circles back on top of the slider accordingly.
• 01:05:380 (4,1) - Either remove the overlap or fix the blanket; I leave that up to your discretion.
Comments:
Nothing worth noting in this difficulty. It's rankable as it is! Great job! :3
Mod:
Better Design CodeC O D E
As mentioned in the Insane difficulty mod, here is the combo that I would have used.
If you decide to use it, simply delete 48380-51380 in the notepad and paste this in its place, then save the file. However, be very careful not to upload it like this unless you are certain you want to use this combo.
If you decide to use it, simply delete 48380-51380 in the notepad and paste this in its place, then save the file. However, be very careful not to upload it like this unless you are certain you want to use this combo.
171,207,48046,6,0,L|160:319,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,351,48380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,351,48491,2,0,P|264:356|319:325,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,48935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,196,49046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,49158,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,304,49380,2,0,L|390:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,139,49713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,139,49824,6,0,P|382:128|344:139,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,50269,2,0,P|156:239|199:228,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,50713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,116,50824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,116,50935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,204,51158,1,10,0:0:0:0:
81,355,51380,1,0,0:0:0:0: