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Kawada Mami - No buts! (TV Size)

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Shana
awsome song Star!
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
Thank you Shana!
Nekoo's helping me in IRC!
Foster Don
good map friend, but the offset is 240
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi

lordfoster wrote:

good map friend, but the offset is 240
arleady decreased it by ( 35(frost-b-spec) and 14(cesc) ) then don't want to increase it by 20
Inamaru
Rifai un upload completo della beatmap...
La easy appena la fai partire crasha...
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
fatto

oreimo is powa!
Inamaru
Approfitto per darti una star meritata :)
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
thank you 8-)
maal
320 kbps mp3's are a waste of space. Please re-encode to 128-256 kbps!
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi

Emaal wrote:

320 kbps mp3's are a waste of space. Please re-encode to 128-256 kbps!
it's arleady reencoded to 256 Kbps
Armin
~L'audio dell'mp3 è decisamente basso. Scarica questo, sostituiscilo nella tua cartella e poi dopo fai una full submission: http://www.mediafire.com/?fvax0b6d37dzqsx
~L'offset è sbagliato. Aggiustalo a 248 e dopo non dimenticare di fare il resnap di tutte le note (Timing > Resnap All Notes)
~In generale, nelle tue difficoltà, ci sono degli sbalzi audio che sono brutti da ascoltare (cambiamenti da Normal a Soft, e così via). Considera di risolvere il problema usando solo un tipo di hitsounds.

Per il momento inizia a fixare questo, successivamente darò un'occhiata approfondita alle diff (ti preannuncio che non mi piacciono molto, a parte la Normal e la guest di Nekoo)
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
fatto ^.^
Inamaru
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
Aggiunta!
Kodoshi
Stella~
fuffolo
Actually i'm glad to know that there is still some-one that have fun making some new skin, well done :D
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
grazie ^.^
Ana Kagura
I like it *---*
it' a very good map
here's your star babe *-*
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
thank you!
Saixina_x3
starred
Yama Chan_old
staaar!!
Barney Stinson
Yea! I like It! Star!
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
thank to you all XD
Sanji
Bella e bravo ^^
[Shalon]
Maps are so fine.

star.
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
Thank!
Celycchan
yay! Great song!
Star~~
Mutsui
Rick Starred !
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
thank!
thekillerhjkhjk
General:

the skin =.= its way too complicated. its way too hard to see with the also-complicated background video, making many parts unrankable.
Also, you can't see the cursor on the spinner. i dont have a problem, but i think some people will. do as you will

[nekoo's insane]

00:15:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the skin makes this area a tad bit hard to read
01:01:559 (1,2,3,4) - don't have blue combocolour. it makes this part unfairly hard to read against the video

[hard]
00:13:362 (1) - add break after this note
00:19:920 (1) - this slider is abnormally ugly. please fix
00:23:198 (6,7,8,9) - add one more note after
00:28:444 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:29:100 (1,2,1) - this underlapping is very confusing and not very good
00:40:903 (5) - make less scrunched up and ugly
00:55:329 (1,2,3,4) - these are just uneccesary
01:23:526 (6) - make the end of the slider zero volume

[normal]
00:47:133 (6) - this is uneven and may be confusing at which way to go at first for people who play normal
01:01:887 (1,1,1,1) - remove extra combos
01:12:051 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:16:313 (1) - end this spinner in a less awkward place

[easy]
00:13:362 (1) - add break after this note
00:41:559 (6) - easy is for noobs, and a noob probably wouldnt be able to see this note.


map is alright, but needs a bit of work.

i'm not starring this JUST yet. at least fix the skin problems, repost in my queue, and ill recheck for starring.
wmfchris
[general]
mp3@ 256 kbps, compres it to 128~192
unique audio lead-in in each diff

[31]
yeah fine

[Nekoo's Insane]
0:04:838 (7) stack on ending of (5)
0:55:821 (4) up 1 grid
1:08:608 (2) right 1 grid

[hard]
0:23:526 (x) add one here
0:28:772 (x) ^?
0:34:018 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing, so as (5,6,7,8)
0:47:133 (4) right 1 grid
1:28:772 (6) make this symmetrical?

[Normal]
fine for me

star~
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
General:

the skin =.= its way too complicated. its way too hard to see with the also-complicated background video, making many parts unrankable. -> Most of the skin problem are derived from the fact i'm not using custom colors and it depend on the basic colours of the skin
Also, you can't see the cursor on the spinner. i dont have a problem, but i think some people will. do as you will

[nekoo's insane]

00:15:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the skin makes this area a tad bit hard to read
01:01:559 (1,2,3,4) - don't have blue combocolour. it makes this part unfairly hard to read against the video

[hard]
00:13:362 (1) - add break after this note - Done
00:19:920 (1) - this slider is abnormally ugly. please fix - Done - Now it is a curves
00:23:198 (6,7,8,9) - add one more note after - Done
00:28:444 (5,6,7,8) - ^ - Done
00:29:100 (1,2,1) - this underlapping is very confusing and not very good - moved some notes
00:40:903 (5) - make less scrunched up and ugly - Done - Now it is a quasi-circle
00:55:329 (1,2,3,4) - these are just uneccesary - Done - Substited with 4 jump disposed like a pentagon
01:23:526 (6) - make the end of the slider zero volume - Done

[normal]
00:47:133 (6) - this is uneven and may be confusing at which way to go at first for people who play normal - moved the start a little
01:01:887 (1,1,1,1) - remove extra combos - Done
01:12:051 (1,1,1,1) - ^ - Done
01:16:313 (1) - end this spinner in a less awkward place - Done

[easy]
00:13:362 (1) - add break after this note - done
00:41:559 (6) - easy is for noobs, and a noob probably wouldnt be able to see this note.- I don't know how to correct this ...
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
[general]
mp3@ 256 kbps, compres it to 128~192 - Done
unique audio lead-in in each diff - Done

[31]
yeah fine

[Nekoo's Insane]
0:04:838 (7) stack on ending of (5)
0:55:821 (4) up 1 grid
1:08:608 (2) right 1 grid

[hard]
0:23:526 (x) add one here - Done
0:28:772 (x) ^? - Done
0:34:018 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing, so as (5,6,7,8) - Done
0:47:133 (4) right 1 grid - Done
1:28:772 (6) make this symmetrical? - Done

[Normal]
fine for me
ShanaTan
thekillerhjkhjk
the new combocolours make it better. starring now~
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
thank!
Jaltan
Starred! °O°
yongtw123
Hi hi~

Overall:
I'm sorry but I can't stand the skin... It's distracting.
And so is the Insane bg...
Simplicity is good.
I have to delete a large part of skin so that I can mod regularly...

OMG the offset is wayyyy off. Use 265 for start. Fix this before advancing to mods below.

[Easy]
Use x0.8 or x1.0 distance spacing. Right now it's so cramped.
It's best not to stack objects under the end of a slider in easy diff.

00:24:855 (3) - doesn't look good
00:26:494 (x) - add a note here?
00:26:822 (5) - end this slider either at previous white tick or the next one
01:13:379 (4) - make this look better

Fix the spacing and this diff is okay.

[Normal]
Some sliders aren't well-curved. Make them look better.

00:31:084 (5,7) - although spacing is correct, find another way to arrange them so that there's space between objects. Looks nicer that way.
00:33:707 (10) - just use finish hitsound?
00:52:724 - start kiai here instead? (if you fix this, fix it across all diffs)
01:02:068 (2,3) - make them linear
01:06:822 (2,3,4,5,1) - I'd find a way to make them look less cramped...
01:11:084 (3) - I don't really like how this slider is placed...
01:12:068 (1,2,3,4) - try follow the vocal? You can use sliders for example.

[Hard]
Please use a larger spacing... At least x0.8...
You can use a smaller spacing for streams though.
Since this is already a hard diff, you can follow the vocals more closely. Otherwise the rhythm is just awkward.

00:26:658 (1) - start this at the previous white tick?
01:12:724 (3,4) - follow the vocal

Fix the spacing and the rhythm.

[Inamaru CTB Insane]
Why two spaces between the words? [Inamaru CTB Insane]?
OMG, fix the offset first lol
After you fix the offset, go through entire diff to check for notes that are snapped incorrectly.
Can't mod CTB...

[31's Taiko]
Can't mod taiko too...

[Nekoo's Insane]
Circle Size larger by 1?
I don't really like using 1/32 holding sliders as part of the rhythm...
But basically it's alright I guess.


I'll recheck at a later time.
Maybe I'll star at that time.
Keep on the work~
Topic Starter
HakuNoKaemi
Overall:
I'm sorry but I can't stand the skin... It's distracting.
And so is the Insane bg...
Simplicity is good.
I have to delete a large part of skin so that I can mod regularly...
i will insert the (No Custom Skin) version near the normal download.

OMG the offset is wayyyy off. Use 265 for start. Fix this before advancing to mods below.
feeling like i am juggling with the offset ...but i accept (listened and it is ok)

[Easy]
Use x0.8 or x1.0 distance spacing. Right now it's so cramped.
It's best not to stack objects under the end of a slider in easy diff.

00:24:855 (3) - doesn't look good
00:26:494 (x) - add a note here?
00:26:822 (5) - end this slider either at previous white tick or the next one
01:13:379 (4) - make this look better

Fix the spacing and this diff is okay.
did all

[Normal]
Some sliders aren't well-curved. Make them look better.

00:31:084 (5,7) - although spacing is correct, find another way to arrange them so that there's space between objects. Looks nicer that way. - rearranged
00:33:707 (10) - just use finish hitsound? - did
00:52:724 - start kiai here instead? (if you fix this, fix it across all diffs) - nothing changes and the start coincide with a sound
01:02:068 (2,3) - make them linear - did
01:06:822 (2,3,4,5,1) - I'd find a way to make them look less cramped... - changed the spacing
01:11:084 (3) - I don't really like how this slider is placed...- i did a little change...
01:12:068 (1,2,3,4) - try follow the vocal? You can use sliders for example.- nah... i like it as now
As for some slider ... i wanted them to look like this, sorry
[Hard]
Please use a larger spacing... At least x0.8...
You can use a smaller spacing for streams though.
Since this is already a hard diff, you follow the vocals more closely. Otherwise the rhythm is just awkward.

00:26:658 (1) - start this at the previous white tick? - did
01:12:724 (3,4) - follow the vocal - Improved it more than you said - i changed it and timed like Daka(1/2 double slider)-ra(hit)-I(hit)_ma(hit)_su(Slider)_gu(Slider)( - = 1/2, _=1

Fix the spacing and the rhythm.
1/4 streams leaved as they are
1/2 streams at 0.5x
1/1 streams and normal at 0.8x
and improved the last part


[Inamaru CTB Insane]
Why two spaces between the words? [Inamaru CTB Insane]?
OMG, fix the offset first lol
After you fix the offset, go through entire diff to check for notes that are snapped incorrectly.
Can't mod CTB...

[31's Taiko]
Can't mod taiko too...

[Nekoo's Insane]
Circle Size larger by 1?
I don't really like using 1/32 holding sliders as part of the rhythm...
But basically it's alright I guess.
changed the offset, for the circle size change on the Insane i should talk Nekoo
going thru then difficulty isn't needed when you change the Offset in the Timing window ( not the panel ) with "Move arleady selected note when chengin the Offset/BPM" actived
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Il kiai dovrebbe iniziare a 00:52:724 :P
    Credo che la "arrow.png" nella storyboard debba essere specifica per difficoltà (cioè solo per la Normal)
    Alcuni comboburst sono leggermente crossi (cerca di racchiuderli in 500px di larghezza se riesci) inoltre il 3 penso vada specchiato
    Magari l'hit300.png fallo vuoto dentro come l'hit100.png
- Storyboard:
  • lyricspart12: sparisce troppo all'improvviso, fallo stare un po' di più e aggiungi un fade.
- Easy:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    Sarebbe meglio se evitassi cose come 00:39:281 (3,4) - 00:42:888 (3,4) - etc nella Easy, ma sinceramente mi smbrano leggibili lo stesso dato che non vanno a cozzare con cose simili.
    01:00:920 (1,2,3) - sinceramente trovo molto più intuitiva una cosa tipo (non badare allo spacing per ora, ma alla timeline):
    01:10:101 (1) - allungalo di 1/2
    01:10:101 (1,2,3) - anche qui, come in 01:00:920 (1,2,3):
    01:16:002 (1) - accorcialo di 1/1
    .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:07:478 (2,3) - 3 più lontano please
    01:08:789 (3,4,1) - bilancia lo spacing qui
- Normal:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:31:740 (6) - 00:54:363 (5) - metterei la ripetizione rivolta verso il basso (cioè ruotata di 90° verso destra)
    00:47:150 (6) - sposta il punto finale un po' più in basso a destra
    01:02:560 (4) - 01:12:724 (4) - spostalo 1/2 prima (e correggi spacing)
    01:16:330 (1) - accorcialo di 1/1
    01:28:789 (1) - allunga di 1/2
- Hard:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    01:07:150 (3,1,2,3) - lol, devo dire che è leggibile, ma non me lo aspettavo.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:36:658 (8) - magari impilalo per bene sopra la fine dello slider che lo segue :P
    00:41:904 - se riesci, aggiungi un beat qui
    01:12:068 (1,2,3) - 01:22:887 (4,5,6,1) - equidistanzia, dai
    01:26:166 (5) - 01:28:789 (6) - accorcia di 1/2
- Nekoo's Insane:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:45:674 - i expected a beat here
- 31's Taiko:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Watched autoplay, seems ok.
- Inamaru's CTB:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:29:773 (5) - cancellalo?
    00:32:068 (7,8) - forse troppo improvviso, dai.
    01:21:412 - aggiungi un beat qui?

Good effort, just need some more improvements ;)
Star hoping this improves a little bit more.
First time i see/mod a CTB specific diff xD
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