Was about to finish the mod then I got sniped zZZzzzzz
Some points might just be repeated from Benny's mod so just skip those if there's any
[General]
Call me back once these are replied.
Some points might just be repeated from Benny's mod so just skip those if there's any
[General]
- C O L O U R S P L S
- There are some questionnable delays in some of the hitsounds so take this, they are without delays.
- 00:03:445 (1,2) - Vocals different and all but it's not stronger than those on 00:00:536 (1,2,3,4) - so reduce the distance here. Looks oddly far. Same goes for 00:09:263 (5,6) - (also NC on (5) pls)
- 00:03:808 (2,3) - However this is quite strong with the instruments, so I would rather have this spaced out further. Same goes for 00:09:626 (6,1) - .
- 00:19:445 (1,2) - This pair looks too far relative to the other notes. As beginners will most likely stand still in duration of each of the sliders, movement here can be tight. Would try to reduce the distance here. Also I would do a little on 00:22:354 (1,2,1) - cause they look a little too far as well.
- 00:28:172 (1,2) - Can be seen as intimidating for beginners as the lack of movement in (1) cane make the sudden movement intensity change in (2) unexpected. To make this look more linear, I would reduce distance. Same goes for 00:33:990 (1,2) - .
- 00:44:172 (1,2) - Ok come on, this is way too far already, it feels like a dash. Reduce it.
- 00:59:445 (2,1) - With how much you are travelling to the other direction, the distance here can be quite far for a newbie. Would try to reduce it for linearity.
- The second part of kiai uses some very horizontal sliders, which can look quite intimidating because of how 'fast' the movement needs to be made for a beginner. (Second part I mean from 01:05:990 - until 01:26:354 - ). Would try to make all the horizontal sliders in this section more vertical.
- 01:06:717 (2,1) - In addition this distance looks oddly far, kinda standing out over the others in this section. Would try to reduce it(even after my suggestion above).
- 00:00:536 - to 00:12:172 - I know all those downbeats are strong enough to support dashes, but having on all of them could be quite difficult, especially when this is only a Salad and it is only the beginning of the song. The only place where it feels like there should be dashes are 00:04:899 - , 00:06:354 - and 00:10:717 - , where the dashes will be supported by the strong trumpet or the cymbals - because of these strong instruments, these sets apart from the 'non-special' downbeats(ya know, 00:01:990 - 00:03:445 - these, where it didn't include those instruments), and therefore should only be dashes. Yea so long story short I'm asking you to remove the dashes on those non-special ticks.
- And srsly can't you just stick to NC every big white tick or every 2 big white ticks, it's getting hard to notice which one you want to follow =-= (Although I recommend using NC every big white tick cause of how much 1/2 you use)
- 00:36:899 (4) - Clap on tail pls, feels really empty without one emphasizing the snare there
- 00:51:445 (3,4) - This oddly feels a little too far imo, would try to reduce a bit to clearly distinguish this walk and the dash coming up after this.
- I like that vocal emphasis in the kiai lul
- 01:02:172 - Can't you fill this tick with a circle at least, feels weird to leave it out when it clearly has a vocals and it won't hurt adding one.
- 01:07:990 (2,3) - 01:10:717 (4,5) - Feels weird to not have these dashes of some sort, seeing that 00:55:808 (4,5) - and 00:58:717 (3,4) - were dashes emphasizing the same vocal synth in the previous section of the chorus.
- 01:15:445 (2,1) - If you intended these to be a dash, increase the distance. It can easily be walked currently.
- 01:22:717 (2,1) - Feels like you wanted this to be a dash as well, so increase the distance. It also can be walked quite easily.
- 00:16:899 (2,3,4) - This is an awkward spot for a dash... The dominant instrument here is the trumpets, and they don't land on (4)'s head so the dash towards it feels kinda weird. Would rather have it on (3) instead as it has trumpets on it and it is a downbeat (which most people are able to follow in the song).
- 00:27:808 (4,1) - Distance currently feels underwhelming for a place which should be having a dash for the downbeat. Would try increasing the distance between (4) and (1) to show that better (and also reduce the distance between (3) and (4) just so double dash isn't a thing).
- 00:37:990 (2,1) - Downbeats like this coulda got emphasized better with a normal dash really. It has a cymbal on it so it could be a nice addition.
- 00:47:445 (2,3) - This also feels underwhelming, you did add dashes for every downbeat so it feels awkward to have it low here.
- 00:48:536 (1,2) - Kind of a special thing for the trumpet to go this high up in the pitch for this part ain't it? Maybe you could emphasize it further with another dash. Right now it can be easily walked, which shouldn't be the case imo.
- 00:51:445 (1,2,3,4) - Feels bad to have them like tap dashes, it's somewhat awkward to play in platter tbh. They are nothing too special so I would rather have them as clearer walks.
- The difficulties are getting better higher up, I expected something much more worse :^)
- 00:06:354 (1,2) - Consistency with 00:00:536 (1,2) - , add dash pls ;-;
- 00:07:808 (1,2) - 00:09:445 (2,3) - Ya know what I mean, add for more consitency!
- 00:10:717 (1,2) - Feels like a good place to have a dash for those toms but its kinda hard to make it but aaaaaa maybe you can work something out xd
- 00:15:081 (1,2) - Coulda make this dashes cause the trumpet's pitch here is louder than 00:12:172 (1,2) - , which calls for a dash even more. Same goes for 00:20:899 (1,2) - .
- 00:21:808 (3,1) - You did a hyper at 00:16:172 (4,1) - , and now it's even more stronger here with a cymbal, so you should really add one here to highlight that.
- 00:41:263 - to 00:51:445 - You really did miss a lot of opportunities for normal dashes here. The fact that this part's like a build-up towards the kiai, right now it feels really weak, or built up way too 'quick'(from 00:49:808 - you started adding lots of dashes). The only real dashes I can see is 00:44:536 (2,3) - and 00:48:354 (4,1) - , which could really have been applied for all other downbeats as well. I suggest adding dashes to only big white ticks for the first 4 measures(so they will be at 00:42:536 (4,1) - and 00:45:445 (4,1) - ), then after that adding it to every downbeats(so stuff like 00:47:445 (2,3) - and 00:49:081 (2,3) - are included as well, for build-up).
- 01:04:536 (1,2,3) - Aw come on, these notes are quite strong with the trumpets and all, at least give them normal dashes
- 00:05:626 (2,3) - Ehhh somewhat of a weird rhythm choice here. You gone for drums at 00:11:445 (2,3,4) - but you gone for vocals here, so I'm kinda confused what are you putting focus on. Would have both of these rhythm emphasize the same thing(either only drums or vocals), so that the second instance of the rhythm won't come as unexpected.
- I'm kinda having mixed feelings about the last few bell hitsound usage(from 01:17:626 - to 01:26:354 - ). The previous ones sound to be fitting because the song also had the similar sound playing around the same area of the song, but during this part there's none at all, which makes the usage kinda overdone at the moment. If I were you I would remove all of those in the mentioned section(and I highly recommend you to do so), but if you can give me a good reason I'll let it pass.
- 00:40:899 (4,1) - Kinda sad that this isn't a hyper, I was thinking this place would have it cause of part transition and because its overdose already ;-;
- 00:59:080 (3,4) - Such a good place to have a normal dash for that vocal pitch, heck even a hyper at that. You choose what to use. Personally I would go for a dash for consistency with 01:10:717 (3,4) - .
- 01:07:445 (1,2) - Same as above but a hyper wouldn't really make sense here cause the vocal pitch ain't high like 01:10:717 (3,4) - .
- Yea good diff tho
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