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Iceskulls

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-06-24T12:49:19+00:00

Left wrote:
[hey Celsius]
eyyyy
- really thx for using AR3.3 for spread with my map but it's lower than normal. 3.5 or sth looks cool wait i think it's CS lol the difficulty looks more like a hard diff so i think it would be fine
- 00:32:769 - 1/2 or 1/1 from here isn't better? I think the current rhythm got the nice transition from the calm part to the next intense part
- 00:38:015 (4,1) - looks heavy for this parrt. don't think it would be much problem , the CS is pretty low so it should make player easier to hit it and the pattern is very clear to hit it too

no change for me
thanks

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-01T12:05:46+00:00

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-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-03T02:05:57+00:00

UPDATE !!! NEW BACKGROUND + SKIN : )

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-06T16:41:55+00:00

Im really wasting my Kudos in here lol,,,,,,,,,,,,
But Kudosu is for star priority so Blah....whatever :3

What's the point if you got kudos but not using it huh ? just like Money if you got it then you have to spend it,,,,,

Summerleopard

196 posts

Joined May 2016

Summerleopard 2017-07-08T15:50:13+00:00

-Aerith- wrote:
Im really wasting my Kudos in here lol,,,,,,,,,,,,
But Kudosu is for star priority so Blah....whatever :3

What's the point if you got kudos but not using it huh ? just like Money if you got it then you have to spend it,,,,,

Well yes!
I will start modding where it is possible. Let's see.../

Bastionior

560 posts

Joined January 2013

Bastionior 2017-07-09T01:48:07+00:00

Shizuku's Shiny Rod

00:12:769 (2,3,4) - Seeing that your map is all geometrically standardized could further enhance this triangle, like here 01:23:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ?
U can down a bit this slider to equal ds on 00:23:261 (2) - and 00:24:081 (2) - ?
00:28:343 - 00:28:507 (7) - u can change the sampleset to normal like u did here 00:30:966 - 00:31:130 - I think it makes a lot of sense that way.
00:44:245 - well, I don't know if it would be nice to ignore this part of the song, which in my opinion is interesting. Take into account some observations:
You made a division of sequences according to the music 00:44:737 (1,2,3) - vocal, 00:46:212 (1,2,3,4) - instrumental, 00:47:360 (1,2,3) - vocal 00:48:835 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instrumental the last 4 notes vocal+instrumental. You can reinforce the previous sequence( 00:42:114 (1,2) - ) by adding notes on this spot 00:44:245 - for instrumental interpretation, sorry for long explanation @_@

Left's Insane

00:07:196 (2) - oh i think u can move to down and ctrl+g to take the same transition in relation to the previous pattern 00:05:065 (1,2) - ?
00:34:573 (2) - i can give 2 options well: 00:34:573 (2) - stack with 00:33:753 (2) - or 00:34:245 (1,2) - make a blanket xD if you want, of course hehe
00:44:245 (1) - Well, it's half distant from an object that has an opposite angular motion 00:44:737 (1) -
00:56:540 (2,2) - u can equal ds like these 00:55:884 (2,1) - to make similiar pattern 01:11:458 (2,1,2,3,4) - ?
01:17:196 (7) - and move a little too >> to equal ds between 01:16:868 (5,6) -

CelsiusLK's Hard

00:47:851 (2) - u can do a ctrl+g and move this note 00:48:343 (3) - to slider end on 00:47:851 (2) - (ctrl+g'ed) to make a good transition and distance to next note like u did here 00:47:032 (4,1) - and are some examples in the beginning
00:57:032 (3) - fix ds 00:56:376 (1,2) -

well nothing to add on normal
easy just make a curved shape 00:06:704 (3) - like > 00:09:327 (3) - and 00:04:081 (3) - wow

I'm wish good luck for all :3

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-09T05:53:28+00:00

Kalindraz wrote:
well nothing to add on normal
easy just make a curved shape 00:06:704 (3) - like > 00:09:327 (3) - and 00:04:081 (3) - wow Fixed ~

I'm wish good luck for all :3

Thanks for the Mod ~

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-07-09T07:26:34+00:00

Kalindraz wrote:
CelsiusLK's Hard

00:47:851 (2) - u can do a ctrl+g and move this note 00:48:343 (3) - to slider end on 00:47:851 (2) - (ctrl+g'ed) to make a good transition and distance to next note like u did here 00:47:032 (4,1) - and are some examples in the beginning ok im gonna try
00:57:032 (3) - fix ds 00:56:376 (1,2) - fixed

I'm wish good luck for all :3

thanks

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Blan_C

306 posts

Joined March 2016

Blan_C 2017-07-09T09:25:58+00:00

Hello, NM from my queue,
General

I think your skin is way too dark - people playing with black background will have trouble reading stacks etc. (at least i had)

Shizuku's Shiny Rod

00:03:425 (3,1) - DS is way too low - 00:03:917 (1) - shall be more spaced just like you did in 00:05:392 (1) - or 00:06:540 (1) -
00:58:999 (4) - Why is it spaced that much? There is no point to make space that big.
01:04:737 (3) - This circle should be spaced more as pitch of the vocal is much higher compared to previous one.

Left's Insane

00:34:245 (1,2) - Imo blanketing this or making this like that will have better effect.
01:04:737 (1,2,3,4) - I am not sure if its good idea to make it wide angled like that - people will have trouble aiming + you do not emphazise 01:05:065 (3,4) - where is important vocal. Try this
01:17:196 (7) - Maybe move this to 197:254?

CelsiusLK's Hard

I suggest you to change 00:57:032 (3) - into 2 circles ans there are vocals with the same importance 00:57:032 - and 00:57:196 -
01:02:278 (3,4) - This looks like bad blanket to me. Make blanket from it like this to make it look good and emphasize clap.
01:05:065 (4) - Please emphasize this more as vocal sound more important/louder here.

Good luck!

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-09T13:29:17+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
Hello, NM from my queue,
General
I think your skin is way too dark - people playing with black background will have trouble reading stacks etc. (at least i had) .
Yeah you're right i kinda agree for what you said back there :3 i probably have to delete the skin and change it to default so people not having trouble to play it

Good luck!

Thank you so much for your opinion ~

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-07-10T08:11:41+00:00

~~Placeholder mod reply (unable to use pc currently)~~

Kalindraz wrote:
Shizuku's Shiny Rod

00:12:769 (2,3,4) - Seeing that your map is all geometrically standardized could further enhance this triangle, like here 01:23:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ? it isn't meant to be a triangle tho, 00:12:606 (1,2,3) - is meant to be a 75% of a whole square
U can down a bit this slider to equal ds on 00:23:261 (2) - and 00:24:081 (2) - ? not entirely sure what you meant but, i moved 00:24:081 (2) - few pixels down anyway
00:28:343 - 00:28:507 (7) - u can change the sampleset to normal like u did here 00:30:966 - 00:31:130 - I think it makes a lot of sense that way. done
00:44:245 - well, I don't know if it would be nice to ignore this part of the song, which in my opinion is interesting. Take into account some observations:
You made a division of sequences according to the music 00:44:737 (1,2,3) - vocal, 00:46:212 (1,2,3,4) - instrumental, 00:47:360 (1,2,3) - vocal 00:48:835 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instrumental the last 4 notes vocal+instrumental. You can reinforce the previous sequence( 00:42:114 (1,2) - ) by adding notes on this spot 00:44:245 - for instrumental interpretation, sorry for long explanation @_@ added a slider

Blan_C wrote:
00:03:425 (3,1) - DS is way too low - 00:03:917 (1) - shall be more spaced just like you did in 00:05:392 (1) - or 00:06:540 (1) - fixed ds
00:58:999 (4) - Why is it spaced that much? There is no point to make space that big. toned down ds
01:04:737 (3) - This circle should be spaced more as pitch of the vocal is much higher compared to previous one. gonna keep this as it is since it's fine for me

My Angel Settia wrote:
Shining rod Diff

00:13:261 (1) - spaced further apart compared to the previous 4 notes even tho the sound is very weak ok toned down
00:28:015 (5,6,7,8) - 5 and 6 spacing is bigger than 7 and 8 but 8 has a louder sound than 6 moved 8
00:28:999 (1) - maybe spaced slightly further away don't need to since i increased the spacing of 8
01:00:392 (7) - i dont hear a sound on this note maybe im just going deaf ok removed
01:25:228 (2) - why isnt there a note after this circle? there's a drum beat there made a check, and actually there is so, i added it

Thanks for modding! Sorry if it's quite late tho

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Last edited by Ayesha Altugle 2017-07-15T02:46:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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Left 2017-07-10T10:16:48+00:00

Kalindraz wrote:
Shizuku's Shiny Rod

Left's Insane

00:07:196 (2) - oh i think u can move to down and ctrl+g to take the same transition in relation to the previous pattern 00:05:065 (1,2) - ?don't like it and no need to
00:34:573 (2) - i can give 2 options well: 00:34:573 (2) - stack with 00:33:753 (2) - or 00:34:245 (1,2) - make a blanket xD if you want, of course hehe i don't want
00:44:245 (1) - Well, it's half distant from an object that has an opposite angular motion 00:44:737 (1) - looks ok and ok when played
00:56:540 (2,2) - u can equal ds like these 00:55:884 (2,1) - to make similiar pattern 01:11:458 (2,1,2,3,4) - ? right
01:17:196 (7) - and move a little too >> to equal ds between 01:16:868 (5,6) - fixed

I'm wish good luck for all :3

thx for mod!

Blan_C wrote:
Hello, NM from my queue,
Left's Insane
00:34:245 (1,2) - Imo blanketing this or making this like that will have better effect. don't want it
01:04:737 (1,2,3,4) - I am not sure if its good idea to make it wide angled like that - people will have trouble aiming + you do not emphazise 01:05:065 (3,4) - where is important vocal. Try this this is why you guy's jumps are all same and boring
01:17:196 (7) - Maybe move this to 197:254? fixed
Good luck!

thx for mod!

Left's Insane

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Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia fantasy op short ver Left CelsiusLK Shizuku- YURiKA
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Prinsep

117 posts

Joined October 2014

Prinsep 2017-07-14T17:42:31+00:00

Shining rod Diff

00:13:261 (1) - spaced further apart compared to the previous 4 notes even tho the sound is very weak
00:28:015 (5,6,7,8) - 5 and 6 spacing is bigger than 7 and 8 but 8 has a louder sound than 6
00:28:999 (1) - maybe spaced slightly further away
01:00:392 (7) - i dont hear a sound on this note maybe im just going deaf
01:25:228 (2) - why isnt there a note after this circle? there's a drum beat there

Left's Insane

00:08:015 (5) - start a new combo hear? couldnt find the loud sound and had to replay that small section so many times just to check which note had the loud beat
00:12:769 (1,2,3) - feels so under mapped maybe atleast make them jump a bit?
01:25:556 (1,2,3) - undermapped?

PS* im not that great at modding cause i only make high star shit maps
Gl with map

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-15T06:06:03+00:00

Sorry guys i always changing the BG

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-07-15T23:41:22+00:00

as your request :3

Advanced

osu file format v14

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hitsound was copied from CelsiusLK's Hard

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2017-07-16T14:13:31+00:00

You don't need to add "[ TV Size ]" in the title due to RC.

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Do not alter the song's title. This includes placing official preferred romanisation at the highest priority and not adding any marker to describe cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size", "Long Version" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source. If possible, copy and paste the exact title directly from an official source and use official markers as they are when they are present. However, songs with official metadata exceeding any field limits should be subject to reasonable modifications under a case by case basis. Please refer to the supplementary information section for some examples.

In anime opening. There is no TV size included in op.

There is also no TV version in album too. (reference to [url=https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/tvアニメ-リトルウィッチアカデミア-オープニングテーマ-shiny-ray-ep/id1199323010]itunes[/url])

However, this might not 100% sure.

Edit: can some bn denied kds for me.

Last edited by - Frontier - 2017-07-16T23:26:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-16T14:49:52+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
You don't need to add "[ TV Size ]" in the title due to RC.

Ranking Criteria wrote:
Do not alter the song's title. This includes placing official preferred romanisation at the highest priority and not adding any marker to describe cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size", "Long Version" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source. If possible, copy and paste the exact title directly from an official source and use official markers as they are when they are present. However, songs with official metadata exceeding any field limits should be subject to reasonable modifications under a case by case basis. Please refer to the supplementary information section for some examples.
In anime opening. There is no TV size included in op.

There is also no TV version in album too. (reference to [url=https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/tvアニメ-リトルウィッチアカデミア-オープニングテーマ-shiny-ray-ep/id1199323010]itunes[/url])

However, this might not 100% sure.

Oh ~ i kinda agree for what you said back there :3 so...... im gonna change the title now
and Thank you very much for the information and your time to actually searching the right one
I really appreciate it

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

-Latias- 2017-07-18T20:08:55+00:00

bido

ya, for the metadata frontier is right imo

ez

i dont really like the 40 % volume for everything, makes everything sound the same, but with sections like 00:44:737 - 00:54:573 -, these sections are way more intense than the other ones like 00:23:753 - . so consider adding different volume to match the section accordingly this also applies for normal
00:02:769 (1,2,1,2) - should copy and paste these since expressing same rhythm, and having them both diffrent is meh. you can always just copy and paste 00:02:769 (1,2) - , and ctrl+j it to fit where it need to fit
00:04:081 (3,3) - same thing here, using the same rhythm but different shapes. try to keep things consistent and copy and paste, instead of creating every single slider by hand. makes it look really inconsistent
00:39:491 (4) - nc this to keep it consistent with 00:34:245 (1) -
01:03:097 (1) - flows in the opposite direction of where 01:03:753 (2) - is. you can ctrl+h this. and if you want to keep the pattern
01:04:409 (3,4) - from the previous point i said, u can something here where 3 flows in the opposite direction to where 4 is suppose to flow to give it more emphasis and u cant experiment with 3 to get it like the pattern u use to have. the reason why it doesnt work with 01:03:097 (1,2) - is b/c 2 isn't really anything special to emphasize since its not on any downbeat and there's not significant space after that that's not mapped like 01:05:065 (4) -
01:25:556 (2) - try to avoid 1/2 rhythms in easy since its rather unexpected since the rhythm u used was mostly 1/1 or slower, and 1/2 rhythm are usually found in normal's not easy

hi Celsius

00:44:737 (1,2,3) - whistle feels a little underwhelming in this part :/
01:25:556 (1) - missing hitsound on repeat ?

shizuku

00:05:065 (5,1) - the spacing here is really weird compared to 00:03:753 (4,1) - which is expressing the same sound
01:17:851 (2,3) - 3 is a lot weaker thaan 2, so maybe turn in to slider instead
01:23:425 (1,2,3,4) - feels off that this needs more movement than 01:24:081 (1,2,3) - which 01:24:081 (1,2,3) - is more intense but needs less movement. consider reducing the spacing off 01:23:425 (1,2,3,4) - to fix this

left is too clean

k_hand:
hope the mod helps !

im bad at modding

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-19T01:55:13+00:00

-Latias- wrote:
bido

ya, for the metadata frontier is right imo
ez
i dont really like the 40 % volume for everything, makes everything sound the same, but with sections like 00:44:737 - 00:54:573 -, these sections are way more intense than the other ones like 00:23:753 - . so consider adding different volume to match the section accordingly this also applies for normal Fixed Volume :3
00:02:769 (1,2,1,2) - should copy and paste these since expressing same rhythm, and having them both diffrent is meh. you can always just copy and paste 00:02:769 (1,2) - , and ctrl+j it to fit where it need to fit Alright
00:04:081 (3,3) - same thing here, using the same rhythm but different shapes. try to keep things consistent and copy and paste, instead of creating every single slider by hand. makes it look really inconsistent Fixed
00:39:491 (4) - nc this to keep it consistent with 00:34:245 (1) - Fixed
01:03:097 (1) - flows in the opposite direction of where 01:03:753 (2) - is. you can ctrl+h this. and if you want to keep the pattern
01:04:409 (3,4) - from the previous point i said, u can something here where 3 flows in the opposite direction to where 4 is suppose to flow to give it more emphasis and u cant experiment with 3 to get it like the pattern u use to have. the reason why it doesnt work with 01:03:097 (1,2) - is b/c 2 isn't really anything special to emphasize since its not on any downbeat and there's not significant space after that that's not mapped like 01:05:065 (4) -
01:25:556 (2) - try to avoid 1/2 rhythms in easy since its rather unexpected since the rhythm u used was mostly 1/1 or slower, and 1/2 rhythm are usually found in normal's not easy Fixed

left is too clean k_hand:
hope the mod helps !
im bad at modding aww... Dont say that :3 i like your mod its easy to understand

Thanks for the Mod ~

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-07-19T05:16:01+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
CelsiusLK's Hard
I suggest you to change 00:57:032 (3) - into 2 circles ans there are vocals with the same importance 00:57:032 - and 00:57:196 - that would make a transition to the next drum weird and confusing imo
01:02:278 (3,4) - This looks like bad blanket to me. Make blanket from it like this to make it look good and emphasize clap. intentional not blanket
01:05:065 (4) - Please emphasize this more as vocal sound more important/louder here. no that pretty a bit too much for me i would love to starting from the low spacing then work my way to higher spacing 01:04:901 (3,4,5) - for better emphasis imo
Good luck!

-Latias- wrote:
00:44:737 (1,2,3) - whistle feels a little underwhelming in this part :/ finish sound kinda weird tho lul idk
01:25:556 (1) - missing hitsound on repeat ? added whistle

thanks guys

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Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-07-19T11:10:47+00:00

~~Placeholder reply. This means that I've seen but can't reply to the mod just yet since I'm not allowed to use the computer during weekdays~~

-Latias- wrote:
00:05:065 (5,1) - the spacing here is really weird compared to 00:03:753 (4,1) - which is expressing the same sound i believe that section is less intense than before (sorry if my wording is wrong), hence, the lower spacing
01:17:851 (2,3) - 3 is a lot weaker thaan 2, so maybe turn in to slider instead adding a slider will make 01:18:015 (3,4) - section weird.
01:23:425 (1,2,3,4) - feels off that this needs more movement than 01:24:081 (1,2,3) - which 01:24:081 (1,2,3) - is more intense but needs less movement. consider reducing the spacing off 01:23:425 (1,2,3,4) - to fix this made some changes to reflect that part of the song better

Thanks for modding! Here's an update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54245
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Shiny Ray
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:歌手
Creator:-Aerith-
Version:Shizuku's Shiny Rod
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia fantasy YURiKA yuri kobayashi yoshida eri op short ver Left CelsiusLK Shizuku- Ametrin
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-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-25T08:47:48+00:00

I need more Mod

MaridiuS

878 posts

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2017-07-26T14:36:36+00:00

mod from my queue
generally, please get a new mp3, this one is too quiet compared to other mp3's.

[hi shizuku]
00:03:917 (1,2,3,5) - think that you should remap this pattern, because objects don't form a connection with the wave slider, like you form a connection with the 1/1 slider on following and previous pattern.
00:09:655 (2,3) - this should have same visual distance from the slider as 00:09:983 (1) - does.
00:11:130 (1) - this should get more emphasis: its the same as 00:10:638 (1) - basically, and 00:10:638 (1) - is the spacing after a 1/4 beat.
00:10:802 (2,2) - at least should be bigger than these two imo.
00:20:146 (4,5) - this also imo could look better if you connect them in a different way. You weren't really connectin previous patterns in a linear way, so I don't think it should be done here, a wave slider being placed like this feels so out of place.
00:24:901 (4,5) - isn't this spacing for a 1/2 a bit misleading, since in the seciton this spacing for 1/2 timing after slider is being often used 00:27:032 (2,3) -
00:40:802 (2) - http://i.imgur.com/SDooRAF.jpg doing this should look better
00:46:212 (1,2) - think you could add some more energy into this (increased spacing). Feels rather boring to follow that note with stacks, at least that's how I feel. http://i.imgur.com/H3lOKfL.jpg my idea xd

Kiai section core criticism: 00:55:065 (1,2) - this concept is imo not used to its fullest extent. If you look at other sections 01:16:212 (1,2) - which is much less intense, its the same spacing. I suggest increasing overall spacing on those kind of 1/2 beats after sliders to follow the intensity of the song.

00:58:343 (2) - ugh if you made the spacing 1/2 after slider always consistent without breaking it, so it shouldn't be done here imo. http://i.imgur.com/KqRCUL4.jpg my suggestion.
01:06:048 (2,4) - something is odd here
01:14:901 (2,2,2) - this should be NC's meaning you should rearrange the pattern, also my opinion is that the jumps are a bit overscaled, consider reducing a bit. The notes I linked should be NC because its a downbeat and you hitsounded it with finish/whistle, therefore they're stronger and strong notes usually start a pattern, like downbeats, so yea, nc pls and rearrange xd.
01:24:081 (1,2) - I don't believe that this should be vastly different than 01:24:573 (1,2,3) -

-Aerith-

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Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-27T03:12:18+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
mod from my queue
generally, please get a new mp3, this one is too quiet compared to other mp3's.

Thats the best quality i got for the mp3 , kinda hard to find it : (
Maybe someone can help me ?

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-07-28T05:11:39+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
[hi shizuku]
00:03:917 (1,2,3,5) - think that you should remap this pattern, because objects don't form a connection with the wave slider, like you form a connection with the 1/1 slider on following and previous pattern.
00:09:655 (2,3) - this should have same visual distance from the slider as 00:09:983 (1) - does.
00:11:130 (1) - this should get more emphasis: its the same as 00:10:638 (1) - basically, and 00:10:638 (1) - is the spacing after a 1/4 beat.
00:10:802 (2,2) - at least should be bigger than these two imo.actually went for a remap on that part xd
00:20:146 (4,5) - this also imo could look better if you connect them in a different way. You weren't really connectin previous patterns in a linear way, so I don't think it should be done here, a wave slider being placed like this feels so out of place. changed some stuffs
00:24:901 (4,5) - isn't this spacing for a 1/2 a bit misleading, since in the seciton this spacing for 1/2 timing after slider is being often used 00:27:032 (2,3) -replaced 5 with a 1/2 slider
00:40:802 (2) - http://i.imgur.com/SDooRAF.jpg doing this should look better a very very minor change but ok
00:46:212 (1,2) - think you could add some more energy into this (increased spacing). Feels rather boring to follow that note with stacks, at least that's how I feel. http://i.imgur.com/H3lOKfL.jpg my idea xd followed the general idea, but i did something other than that

Kiai section core criticism: 00:55:065 (1,2) - this concept is imo not used to its fullest extent. If you look at other sections 01:16:212 (1,2) - which is much less intense, its the same spacing. I suggest increasing overall spacing on those kind of 1/2 beats after sliders to follow the intensity of the song. can't really think of anything better to do this one just yet. I have plans to remap it, but i'm not sure yet. so for now i'll keep it like this until i get a better plan

00:58:343 (2) - ugh if you made the spacing 1/2 after slider always consistent without breaking it, so it shouldn't be done here imo. http://i.imgur.com/KqRCUL4.jpg my suggestion. ^
01:06:048 (2,4) - something is odd here tried fiddling around with the visual spacing so it doesn't look that odd
01:14:901 (2,2,2) - this should be NC's meaning you should rearrange the pattern, also my opinion is that the jumps are a bit overscaled, consider reducing a bit. The notes I linked should be NC because its a downbeat and you hitsounded it with finish/whistle, therefore they're stronger and strong notes usually start a pattern, like downbeats, so yea, nc pls and rearrange xdremapped that section
01:24:081 (1,2) - I don't believe that this should be vastly different than 01:24:573 (1,2,3) - for me it looks fine currently

Mijn Aim Zuigt wrote:
[Shizuku's Shiny Rod]

01:06:868 (1) - move the middle sliderpoint like so to create a more equal curve in the slider actually no. it's unecessary for me to do that

same applies to: 00:02:769 (1) - 00:13:261 (1) - 00:23:753 (1,2) - 00:25:556 (6) - 00:27:524 (4) - 00:28:999 (1) - 00:34:901 (3) - 00:36:868 (1) - 00:37:360 (2) - 00:38:507 (2) - 00:46:376 (2) - 00:47:360 (1,2,3) - 00:51:294 (1) - 00:56:048 (5) - 01:00:474 (1) - 01:03:589 (2) - 01:12:278 (1) - 01:19:983 (1) - Which are all slightly off-curve

~~reply not done yet will edit while progressing~~

thanks for modding! sorry if it's so so overdue.

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Last edited by Ayesha Altugle 2017-08-07T11:00:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mijn Aim Zuigt

88 posts

Joined June 2014

Mijn Aim Zuigt 2017-07-30T10:28:46+00:00

Hi, nm from #modreqs

[Easy]

01:05:065 (4,1) - you shouldn't stack notes in easy diffs, it confuses the hell out of the new(er) players that play these kinds of diffs

[Normal]

00:49:983 (1,3) - make these sliders the same shape for consistency and a e s t h e t i c s

[Left's Insane]

00:24:901 (1,2,1,2) - spacing difference between these sliders is too wild in comparison to the vocal difference in the music, increase spacing between 00:25:556 (1,2) - these sliders

00:34:245 (1,2) - pls blanket

00:51:950 (3,4) - more slightly off blankets

00:09:655 (2,3) - here too

00:32:278 (2,3) - off by a few pixels :^)

[Shizuku's Shiny Rod]

01:06:868 (1) - move the middle sliderpoint like so to create a more equal curve in the slider

same applies to: 00:02:769 (1) - 00:13:261 (1) - 00:23:753 (1,2) - 00:25:556 (6) - 00:27:524 (4) - 00:28:999 (1) - 00:34:901 (3) - 00:36:868 (1) - 00:37:360 (2) - 00:38:507 (2) - 00:46:376 (2) - 00:47:360 (1,2,3) - 00:51:294 (1) - 00:56:048 (5) - 01:00:474 (1) - 01:03:589 (2) - 01:12:278 (1) - 01:19:983 (1) - Which are all slightly off-curve

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-07-30T14:08:11+00:00

Mijn Aim Zuigt wrote:
Hi, nm from #modreqs

[Easy]

01:05:065 (4,1) - you shouldn't stack notes in easy diffs, it confuses the hell out of the new(er) players that play these kinds of diffs Fixed

[Normal]

00:49:983 (1,3) - make these sliders the same shape for consistency and a e s t h e t i c s I was going to do that in the first place but i dont like how it looks so no change :3

Thank you very much

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-07-31T04:44:22+00:00

i won't fix blanket lol
and first one i think it's ok

thx~

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-08-01T15:20:30+00:00

oppai quick m4m
im not good at english.

general
pls fix ArtistUnicode. not "歌手" xd

Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA

add tags :
"LWA" (an official abbreviation for "little witch academia")
"opening" instead of "op"

remove tags :
"YURiKA" (this is already written in Artist, remove better.)
"op" (if you add "opening")

you can use these site as meta references:
http://tv.littlewitchacademia.jp/music/op.html
http://www.yu-ri-ka.com/discography/sin ... 10000.html

[]

Normal
00:10:638 - remove green line. https://i.gyazo.com/5e29063acd16f2c5098 ... d114f0.png
00:34:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - should avoid 1/1 spam imo.
00:45:720 - clickable better. because here have strong vocal. change to like 00:47:360 (1,2,3) -
01:05:556 (1) - HP bar.

Ametrin
00:10:638 - 00:21:786 - 00:42:769 - 00:44:081 - remove green line https://i.gyazo.com/8f69504fe5fb76724af ... 1caf3c.png
00:39:491 (1,2) - these slider's sv dont match music imo. here is very calm part. i think you kept sv whole the diff for the player who can play only sd3. but you can change sv here exceptionally because the rhytym you chosen is 3/4 reverse, calm part rhythm, not match sv1.0 in testplay (for me).
change to x0.9 ? (00:39:491 - )

CelsiusLK
00:40:474 - 00:41:786 - there sound are indentical for me. consistent them? maybe like this https://i.gyazo.com/53ada59c6c8954ea499 ... 5ca2be.png
(00:40:474 - mapped ver. xD)
00:46:212 (1,2) - stack miss
01:14:901 (1) - bit wierd first time, but good now lol.but you can add whistle 01:15:146 - to emphasize vocal.

Left
1nazi (＝nothing)
01:08:835 (2) - good patarn? https://i.gyazo.com/d87b2a22c1dd0c304aa ... 7198a1.png
(good for now lolol)
pls teach me how to make map.

Shizuku-
00:57:032 (3,4) - if i were you, i don stack it. because i couldnt feel that the stacking does a good work in kiai.
maybe chage to like https://i.gyazo.com/67226a80044ef00a39d ... 0e6460.png ?? then you can emphasize next (5) without stacking it.
(00:59:819 (3,4) - the stack is good. i like this.)

gl

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-08-02T02:47:29+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2017-08-01T16:55:26+00:00

This seems to be the TV Size version, right?
Then I think you need to use this:

Unicode Artist: YURiKA
Unicode Title: Shiny Ray -TV size-
Source: リトルウィッチアカデミア

References:
http://tv.littlewitchacademia.jp/music/ost.html (This one should be more directly related to the TV Size version. It's right there: https://doyak.s-ul.eu/sa4LIcqx )
http://tv.littlewitchacademia.jp/music/op.html (These two Asuka suggested are good too)
http://www.yu-ri-ka.com/discography/sin ... 10000.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnw2NHeUgBs (This map is not Short Ver, so no reference for that.)

also no kds please

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-08-02T12:18:30+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
oppai quick m4m
im not good at english.

general
pls fix ArtistUnicode. not "歌手" xd
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA 
add tags :
"LWA" (an official abbreviation for "little witch academia")
"opening" instead of "op"

remove tags :
"YURiKA" (this is already written in Artist, remove better.)
"op" (if you add "opening")

you can use these site as meta references:
http://tv.littlewitchacademia.jp/music/op.html
http://www.yu-ri-ka.com/discography/sin ... 10000.html

Normal
00:10:638 - remove green line. https://i.gyazo.com/5e29063acd16f2c5098 ... d114f0.png Fixed
00:34:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - should avoid 1/1 spam imo. Okay
00:45:720 - clickable better. because here have strong vocal. change to like 00:47:360 (1,2,3) - Fixed
01:05:556 (1) - HP bar. Fixed this one too

gl Thanks ! I will mod your map A.S.A.P !!

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-08-04T05:49:37+00:00

Doyak wrote:
This seems to be the TV Size version, right?
Then I think you need to use this:

Unicode Artist: YURiKA
Unicode Title: Shiny Ray -TV size-
Source: リトルウィッチアカデミア

References:
http://tv.littlewitchacademia.jp/music/ost.html (This one should be more directly related to the TV Size version. It's right there: https://doyak.s-ul.eu/sa4LIcqx )
http://tv.littlewitchacademia.jp/music/op.html (These two Asuka suggested are good too)
http://www.yu-ri-ka.com/discography/sin ... 10000.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bnw2NHeUgBs (This map is not Short Ver, so no reference for that.)

also no kds please

All Fixed for metadata , Thank you very much for Asuka_- and Doyak

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-08-06T00:11:30+00:00

@Asuka_-: All the green ticks are deleted. About the sliders, I don't want to change the sv in this diff so no change ;-;

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54245
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2769,13261,23753,28343,34245,44737,55065,65556,70966,76212,86048
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny Ray -TV size-
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray -TV size-
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:-Aerith-
Version:Ametrin's Advanced
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:LWA yuri kobayashi yoshida eri opening tv size Left CelsiusLK Shizuku- Ametrin
BeatmapID:1358439
BeatmapSetID:622793

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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ReFaller

1,233 posts

Joined August 2014

ReFaller 2017-08-13T18:29:59+00:00

NM from my queue.
[Aeris' Difficulties]
Both are good.
[Ametrin's Advanced]
Good.
[CelsiusLK's Hard]
Your rhythms somehow are following vocals less or more accurate, so what do you think if you add a beat on 00:40:474 to catch vocal note?
[Left's Insane]
I fell tha some spacing sets like 00:10:638 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 01:24:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) should have increased spacing time to time instead of decreasing.
Btw, do you enjoy to decrease stack leniency from 7 to 5 to unstack some objects like 00:22:278 (6,3,2) caused by kind of hub and spoke pattern?

Good luck.

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-08-14T09:10:13+00:00

My Angel Settia wrote:
Shining rod Diff

Left's Insane

00:08:015 (5) - start a new combo hear? couldnt find the loud sound and had to replay that small section so many times just to check which note had the loud beat agree fixed
00:12:769 (1,2,3) - feels so under mapped maybe atleast make them jump a bit? np it's ok
01:25:556 (1,2,3) - undermapped? np it's ok

PS* im not that great at modding cause i only make high star shit maps
Gl with map

thx for mod~

ReFaller wrote:
NM from my queue.
[Left's Insane]
I fell tha some spacing sets like 00:10:638 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 01:24:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) should have increased spacing time to time instead of decreasing.my interpretion is different lo
Btw, do you enjoy to decrease stack leniency from 7 to 5 to unstack some objects like 00:22:278 (6,3,2) caused by kind of hub and spoke pattern? sure i have to

Good luck.

thx for mod~

@asuka ok fixed thx for mod!

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Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-08-14T14:55:08+00:00

Asuka_- wrote:
CelsiusLK
00:40:474 - 00:41:786 - there sound are indentical for me. consistent them? maybe like this https://i.gyazo.com/53ada59c6c8954ea499 ... 5ca2be.png
(00:40:474 - mapped ver. xD) i want itto be simple 1/1 rhythm , 00:41:786 - is mapped for the transition of strong vocal
00:46:212 (1,2) - stack miss it's very slight
01:14:901 (1) - bit wierd first time, but good now lol.but you can add whistle 01:15:146 - to emphasize vocal. ok

ReFaller wrote:
[CelsiusLK's Hard]
Your rhythms somehow are following vocals less or more accurate, so what do you think if you add a beat on 00:40:474 to catch vocal note? what do you mean "less or more accurate" ? as for that part i want it to be simple 1/1 rhythm , 00:41:786 - is mapped for the transition of strong vocal

Good luck.

thanks

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Raiyn

151 posts

Joined October 2015

Raiyn 2017-08-16T13:29:15+00:00

(So very sorry that this came late, it's almost the end of the semester and I needed to catch things up)

So!

Anyways from my modding queue!

Easy

SPOILER

00:12:606 (3,1) - What's with this 10 second break, it may bore some new players when this occurs

Nothing wrong here~ other than that ^

Normal

SPOILER

00:54:573 (6,7) - replace 6 and 7 with a half slider then put another circle on the slider tail of 7, so it's a bit more pronounced (suggestion)
01:05:065 (5) - turn this into a half slider following the vocal a bit

Ametrin's Advanced

No Problems but:
Change AR to 7.5? (suggestion)

Left's Insane

SPOILER

00:07:032 (1,2) - make this a jump
00:22:606 (1,2,3,1,2) - make this into an interesting pattern instead of this (suggestion)
00:25:556 (1,2) - spread this a bit more so the slider heads dont cover each other
00:33:917 (3) - move this to the side a bit?
00:38:999 (1,2,3) - make this point to the actual hit circle instead of a random place(?)
00:52:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the sound here is a bit too soft, try 30% or 40%
01:04:737 (1,2,3,4) - This difficulty spike (no other part, i think, in the song before this has this kind of jump. try making it a little bit more closer)
01:06:868 (4,1) - stack?

(fun to play with hidden)

Shizuku's Shiny Rod

That name doe lol

SPOILER

00:02:769 (1) - why not just make this into a perfect curve?
00:07:606 (4,5,6,7,8) - This is a bit awkward to play since the stream speed instantly switches
00:52:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too soft try 30% or 40%
00:57:032 (3) - clap instead of whistle?
01:04:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - no complaints, i just choke here a LOT when i test played this
01:13:753 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

Cool Difficulty

No Problems on Hard that's why i didnt put anything there

But that part where it has 20% volume is too soft in my opinion, increase it to something like 30% or 40% so it's hearable at least

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2017-08-16T15:57:09+00:00

hi

Easy

00:23:753 (1,2) - These two are a little misaligned in (1)'s slider direction, this can be fixed by bringing (2) up a bit: https://puu.sh/xbzfz/1647c6c477.png
00:44:737 (1) - I'd like to see this ctrl-g'd to make a nice parallel with 00:47:360 (1) -

Normal

00:35:556 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - This seems reeeeeeeally complex for players around this level, you should generally avoid doing square formations until at LEAST around hard+. I'd maybe replace 00:36:212 (5,6) - with a slider and make the angles a little more beginner friendly.

Advanced

00:52:606 (1) - 1/1 gap seems pretty short here between this and the next note, i'd cut it down to maybe 00:54:573 - or shorter. 00:54:573 - seems like a better end for it regardless.

Hard

00:39:491 (1) - This slider should be extended by 1/1 if you want it to accurately play with the vocals like all of the following sliders do

Insane

00:59:491 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This spacing seems way too varied for this skill level to comfortably play, i'd normalize these a bit.
01:24:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It seems really weird how you have this section the most spaced at the start when it should be the other way around, with the spacing building from the start up until 01:25:556 (1,2,3) - which are the most impactful sounds in the outro, but are just stacked. I'd like to see the spacing reversed for a more satisfying end to the map.

Extra

00:11:130 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Please do something else with this, the bamboozle i received here was not too kind

Good luck!

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-08-16T23:37:30+00:00

Zxozmo wrote:
(So very sorry that this came late, it's almost the end of the semester and I needed to catch things up)

So!

Anyways from my modding queue!

Easy

SPOILER
00:12:606 (3,1) - What's with this 10 second break, it may bore some new players when this occurs thats a recovery time for newbie player

Nothing wrong here~ other than that ^

Normal

SPOILER
00:54:573 (6,7) - replace 6 and 7 with a half slider then put another circle on the slider tail of 7, so it's a bit more pronounced (suggestion) Nah probably not gonna do that
01:05:065 (5) - turn this into a half slider following the vocal a bit no , its kinda hard for a newbie if im doing that

But that part where it has 20% volume is too soft in my opinion, increase it to something like 30% or 40% so it's hearable at least

Thanks for the Mod ~

Last edited by -Aerith- 2017-08-16T23:42:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-08-16T23:41:31+00:00

Weber wrote:
hi

Easy

00:23:753 (1,2) - These two are a little misaligned in (1)'s slider direction, this can be fixed by bringing (2) up a bit: https://puu.sh/xbzfz/1647c6c477.png Fixed
00:44:737 (1) - I'd like to see this ctrl-g'd to make a nice parallel with 00:47:360 (1) - Sure

Normal

00:35:556 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - This seems reeeeeeeally complex for players around this level, you should generally avoid doing square formations until at LEAST around hard+. you're right XD , Fixed ~
I'd maybe replace 00:36:212 (5,6) - with a slider and make the angles a little more beginner friendly Okay

Good luck!

Thanks for the Mod

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