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Left 2017-08-30T13:44:15+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi

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• 00:31:458 - dont hear any note in the song on this circle, probably overmapped agree, fixed

• 00:39:491 (1) - the curve on the last part of this slider looks skewed to the left, it can look much aesthetically nicer. can you try rounding this out more? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8971468 example maybe mine is better with next slider,

• 00:56:376 (1,2,1,2) - 01:00:966 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - 01:11:622 (1,2,3,4) - warning: overexplanation the main concern i have with these particular jumps is that they're mapped to so many things at once that you cant tell where emphasis is placed (even if you use different spacing techniques it still feels like repetitive tapping). For example at 01:00:966 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - notes maps appear to be mapped to vocals the first 3 notes, then snare, vocal, strings, vocal, snare. In game play it just feels all over the place. Replacing some circles with passive rhythms (sliderends) and pin pointing where you want emphasis placed with clickable rhythms will make this feel better. actually i don't think i should map one sound, i can map what looks important and what looks better to show song for me. but yea i agree last one was suck so fixed

Maps that follow the music like this can get ranked, but pinpointing which notes you want to emphasize or not will improve rhythm a lot

• 01:15:556 (1,2,1) - You could possibly use more spacing here, for a strong snare roll it feels like there's not much movement here. i thought tension goes lower and also vocal so this is correct for me instead of jumps

its a cool diff overall but its that rhythm choice that bugs me

okay good luck

thx for mod!

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-08-30T16:12:21+00:00

Weber wrote:
hi

Hard

00:39:491 (1) - This slider should be extended by 1/1 if you want it to accurately play with the vocals like all of the following sliders do this slider serve as a transition to the slow part here from the previous part so i want it to be as simple for player to reaction to the change here

Good luck!

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi

hard
• 00:07:687 (6,1) - space these farther? You usually show emphasis on these notes with spacing increases 00:03:753 (4,1) - 00:06:376 (4,1) - in this case it's the circle to triplet which can be pretty hard to play if use jumps there so no

• 00:16:376 (2) - since the note here isn't really audible i think a passive rhythm such as a sliderend would work better here the rhythm just doesn't sound right and a bit weird for me , i would prefer to have something like circle to tell the concept of rhythm here

• 00:49:655 (7) - would recommend rotating this to blanket the note on the stack, this aesthetic is more noticable https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/0Gq6mOJ.png meh ok

01:08:179 - no , i want this to be a small break for player since the rhythm here is pretty calm and i find this to be a good transition to the next rhythm for hard difficulty

• 01:15:720 (2) - I feel like this is undermapped to the drum roll that you're trying to map to, since it continues was past it until 01:16:212 - . Putting a note at 01:16:048 - or somewhere in between would help solve this intentionally , i don't feel like wanting the rhythm to a bit more intense since this is like the changing point of music and the first 3 drum is loud enough to map it but after that is a new part now so suddenly putting note and making player changing it suddenly like that doesn't feel right for me so i put small break there to make player prepare for the changing part of music there

okay good luck

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Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-08-30T16:33:56+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi

advanced
• 01:00:474 (1,2,3) - feels odd how slider 2 is surrounded by strong notes at 01:00:802 - 01:01:130 - but they get skipped over, besides for a slidertail aaaaa want to follow vocal here just like 00:57:851 (1,2,3) - so sorry no change

okay good luck

fixed some minor things

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54245
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny Ray -TV size-
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray -TV size-
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:-Aerith-
Version:Ametrin's Advanced
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:LWA yuri kobayashi yoshida eri opening tv size Left CelsiusLK Shizuku- Ametrin
BeatmapID:1358439
BeatmapSetID:622793

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
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SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-09-01T04:04:31+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi

rod
• 00:08:671 - put something here? the string note that 00:08:507 (1) - is clickable to is also present here I don't see the need to put something on that time.

• 00:15:228 (4,5,6) - this seems to be the only part of this section not mapped to vocals, its mainly the double that makes this feel odd that part isn't really meant to follow the vocals tho

• 01:15:228 (2,3,4) - It's hard to tell what these jumps are mapped to because you're mapping to different things at once. 1 and 4 are mapped to a kick drum and 3 is mapped to a vocal. Consider a different rhythm choice here to clarify this ( i went in depth about this on left's diff) actually went to follow the kick drum so replaced that with 2 1/2 sliders.

Thanks for modding!

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray -TV size-
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Jemzuu

Beatmap Nominator

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-24T13:37:39+00:00

Q

[Shizuku]
00:30:638 (2,3,1) - minor but maybe make perfect line
00:36:704 (7,3) - stack them?
00:37:687 (3,5) - ^
00:55:720 (3,5) - make a perfect blanket :>
01:23:425 (1) - remove NC since sound still same
01:24:737 (2,3) - not sure about (2) stack these two instead?

[Collab Insane]
00:06:704 (1) - idk but the flow here isnt just right imo i'd just overlap it to the other side and move 00:07:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - until it overlaps like this
00:15:392 - idk but in this part ur kinna missing a sound here make it look like this ?
00:23:589 (6,1) - swap ncs
00:44:245 (4) - not sure about this repeat i'd just make it 1/4 slider instead and add a note on the red tick
00:46:704 (3) - i'd nc
00:48:671 - not sure why u ignored this sound but can hear a drum here idk but i'd do something like this
01:06:212 (3) - why not make the slidershape same as 01:06:540 (4) -
01:09:983 (2) - ~ 01:10:310 (3) - dunno why u didn't ctrl g these two sliders here flow works better imo
01:25:556 (1,2,3) - why not make this a jump D: something like this plsss

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-09-24T14:56:27+00:00

AJamez wrote:
Q

[Collab Insane]
00:06:704 (1) - idk but the flow here isnt just right imo i'd just overlap it to the other side and move 00:07:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - until it overlaps like this hmmm .... im not sure if i wanna change it .... it looks fine for me tho , Let me think about it later
00:15:392 - idk but in this part ur kinna missing a sound here make it look like this ? Yeah it does , Fixed it ~
00:23:589 (6,1) - swap ncs Okay
00:44:245 (4) - not sure about this repeat i'd just make it 1/4 slider instead and add a note on the red tick No Thanks Im Following the Violin
00:46:704 (3) - i'd nc Sure
00:48:671 - not sure why u ignored this sound but can hear a drum here idk but i'd do something like this Okay sounds Good

Thanks for The Mod ~

Last edited by -Aerith- 2017-09-30T23:29:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-09-30T04:25:03+00:00

AJamez wrote:
[Shizuku]
00:30:638 (2,3,1) - minor but maybe make perfect line minor but ok
00:36:704 (7,3) - stack them? ^
00:37:687 (3,5) - ^ ^
00:55:720 (3,5) - make a perfect blanket :> ^
01:23:425 (1) - remove NC since sound still same ok
01:24:737 (2,3) - not sure about (2) stack these two instead? I want to keep the decreasing spacing tho so no fix

thanks for modding!

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Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-09-30T09:10:03+00:00

AJamez wrote:
Q

[Collab Insane]
01:06:212 (3) - why not make the slidershape same as 01:06:540 (4) - meh, I dunno, I do it this way quite a lot
01:09:983 (2) - ~ 01:10:310 (3) - dunno why u didn't ctrl g these two sliders here flow works better imo It was intentional, I wanted to emphasize 01:10:310 (3) -
01:25:556 (1,2,3) - why not make this a jump D: something like this plsss Considering but want to keep the difficulty low.

No changes, Thanks

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Lokidoki 2017-10-21T18:27:00+00:00

[Shizuku's Shiny Rod]
01:04:737 (3,4,1,2) - isn't this a bit overkill? the last jumps seem way less spaced compared to these

[Left's Insane]
00:45:720 (3,1) - i don't think it's stacked properly
00:48:343 (3) - this too

[Ametrin's Advanced]
00:42:114 (1,1,1,1) - those are a bit too spaced imo
00:52:606 (1) - maybe end it on the first important sound, rather than the second. it would give players some more time to focus

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2017-10-23T10:09:05+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
[Ametrin's Advanced]
00:42:114 (1,1,1,1) - those are a bit too spaced imo actually they just keep the ds (and i wanna draw a big star here lol)
00:52:606 (1) - maybe end it on the first important sound, rather than the second. it would give players some more time to focus then sound at 00:54:737 - turns pretty strange imo

Thank you! no change tho

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2017-10-29T04:31:54+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
[Shizuku's Shiny Rod]
01:04:737 (3,4,1,2) - isn't this a bit overkill? the last jumps seem way less spaced compared to these for me, the jumps are justified to contrast the previous section which is a semi-calm one. Lesser spacing, meant lesser emphasis on the intensity so no changes here.

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-11-20T13:50:21+00:00

:3

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-11-20T13:52:10+00:00

i love big hard shiny rods

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2017-11-20T13:55:34+00:00

Wow lol

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2018-02-15T02:26:59+00:00

Im back !!!

Gonna rework some diff's first cause the old one was shitty then i will make this map go for ranked ~(this time for real) XD

N0thing

104 posts

Joined October 2015

N0thing 2018-02-17T08:20:11+00:00

Easy:

00:52:687 (1) - Let spinner end on yellow stuff and properly map the beginning of the kiai
Additionally try to use DS for the lower diffs, and either disable grid snap, or use a big grid.

Normal

00:42:114 (3) - Bad slidershape that doesn't even reflect the music
00:52:687 (1) - Let spinner end on yellow stuff and properly map the beginning of the kiai

Ametrin's Advanced

00:21:130 (1) - Not too sure whether that's readable, but considering this maphas been around for so long it's probably nothing
00:30:638 (4) - Slight bad overlap

CelsiusLK's Hard

00:11:786 (1) - Personal opinion, but I don't think this sound needs to be emphasized THAT much. Also, bad overlap
00:33:589 (3,4) - I don't think they need to be emphasized that much

Collab Insane

00:46:704 (3,4,5) - Better don't use such a complicated pattern in an insane if it's only going to appear once
00:58:999 (5) - Not 100% sure whether this is readable

Left's Insane

This feels more like an expert than an insane, due to all that interpretations of DS and complicated patterns
00:22:933 (3) - I doubt this is that readable
00:25:884 (2) - I don'T agree with this overlap because of that different emphasis, but ok

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2018-02-17T10:40:22+00:00

N0thing wrote:
Easy:
00:52:687 (1) - Let spinner end on yellow stuff and properly map the beginning of the kiai
Additionally try to use DS for the lower diffs, and either disable grid snap, or use a big grid. nope not going to do that it feels weird in my opinion

Normal
00:42:114 (3) - Bad slidershape that doesn't even reflect the music gonna fixed it somehow
00:52:687 (1) - Let spinner end on yellow stuff and properly map the beginning of the kiai same reason like easy

CelsiusLK's Hard
00:11:786 (1) - Personal opinion, but I don't think this sound needs to be emphasized THAT much. Also, bad overlap feels fine for me
00:33:589 (3,4) - I don't think they need to be emphasized that much Thats alright xd

Collab Insane
00:46:704 (3,4,5) - Better don't use such a complicated pattern in an insane if it's only going to appear once i just felt like the instrument on that part is kinda strong so sorry not going to change it
00:58:999 (5) - Not 100% sure whether this is readable it feels fine 4 me

Thanks for the Mod !

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2018-02-20T12:38:47+00:00

i remembered that i posted about metadata when i wasn't a bn.

[General]

since "リトルウィッチアカデミア" is in source, romanised word should be added in tags.
i'd recommend to add main characters in tags since most of the anime opening & ending maps nowadays always add this in their maps. but you don't have to add them if you feel uncomfortable to.

[Easy]

00:02:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - in my perspective, this part doesn't seem really represent the instrumentals really well, they seems to be placed anticlimactically. i suggested that using patterns like this https://puu.sh/zrMdR/628a9eaa50.jpg, to make the hitobjects be represented the song's rhythm better. as same as the part 01:16:212 - if you fix this suggestion that i mentioned.
00:55:065 - looks like you're failed to make the hitobjects represent the song well. this cymbal sound is pretty dominant and it is the beginning of the peakest part. being just a spinner's end doesn't emphasize the song's intensity really well. that would be such better if this spot is where the hitobject is started. if you fix this issue, i'ld recommend to fix in normal difficulty as well since normal also have a problem in emphasizing the song's intensity here also.
01:01:130 (2) - this hitobject has been overlapped by a health point bar. even this is not unrankable, i'd highly suggest moving this hitobject away from the health point bar. because this difficulty is an easy difficulty, having hitobjects overlapping the health point bar could easily cause an unfair reading issue to newbie players who play this difficulty. so i'd recommend to move this hitobject further away from the health point bar.

[Normal]

00:05:065 (6,1) - using stacks here gives really minor feedback for players since it gives no movement for players to move, making these hitobjects looks sloppy and boring to play. it might be justified if you make these hitobjects stack at 00:07:687 (6,1) - because the piano's pitch here is pretty low. as same as this part here 00:10:310 (6,1) -, this stack is really unacceptable in my perspective since the song's intensity here is increasing, so it's inappropriate here to make these hitobjects stacked to each other. i'd recommend to space these hitobjects further rather than just making them stacked, making this part here become more interesting. as same as 00:10:310 (6,1) - if you agree with this suggestion above.
00:17:851 (4) - looks like this part here you mainly make the hitobjects in this part to follow the vocals, but this slider seems to follow the instrumental sound instead of vocal sound which most of the hitobjects in this part are followed, creating inconsistency in this part. so i'd recommend to change the slider length here to be 1/2-beat long so it will represent the vocals better. this hitobject 00:28:343 (4) - has the same issue with the previous hitobject i suggested before, but i'd recommend to make this part 1/2-beat long slider and a circle with the gap between hitobjects 1/2-beat, to represent both the vocals and instrumentals.
00:48:343 (3,1) - the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1) - isn't perfectly stacked with the hitcircle 00:48:343 (3) -. let's see the captured screenshot to see how it looks like when the stacking is enabled http://puu.sh/zrNbd/6c95fe5d86.jpg you could clearly see that the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1) - isn't actually stacked with the hitcircle 00:48:343 (3) - which gives no sense because players' intuition is that after the break, players will think that the following hitobjects should be exactly at the same coordinate where the previous hitobjects has landed, but because of this issue, players could actually miss because the following hitobject 00:49:655 (1) - isn't placed at the same coordinate where the hitobject 00:48:343 (3) - is landed. so in order to improve this stack, kindly moving the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1,2) - 4 pixels rightwards and 4 pixels downwards (to the coordinate x:116 y:316) to make the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1) - perfectly stacked with the hitcircle 00:48:343 (3) -, creating the nice pleasant-looking aesthetics to the players.
01:05:228 - neglecting to map this spot, which has the discernibly dominant vocal sound, is quite inappropriate here. and since the hitobject 01:05:556 (1) - is stacked on the exactly same coordinate with the hitobject 01:05:065 (5) -, players could actually misunderstand that the gap between the hitobject 01:05:065 (5) - and the hitobject 01:05:556 (1) - is spaced 1/2-beat gap, making players gathered 100s or even a miss! i'd recommend to map this spot 01:05:228 -.

[Ametrin's Advanced]

the combo colours don't seem to represent the background image really well, in the other's hand it fits with the background image in easy and normal difficulties better.
widescreen support doesn't seem necessary in this map since this map has not used any storyboard. consider untick the widescreen support here.
00:03:917 (5) - due to the osu! mode specific ranking criteria, it said that hitobjects must never be off-screen in 4:3 aspect ratios, even partially off-screen can create an unfair reading difficulties to players. so in this case the slider border must not be off-screen as well. consider looking at the link of the screenshots from the game with 800x600 resolution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10302016 you could clearly see that the slider border is partially off-screen. so i'd highly recommend to move this slider upwards to make this hitobject not be off-screen.
00:03:917 (5) - this slider doesn't seem to represent the instrumental's rhythm pretty well, both sound at here 00:04:245 - and 00:04:573 - are pretty discernible that these sounds shouldn't be skipped. i'd recommend to make this part like this http://puu.sh/zrOjU/c803ee17fb.jpg so the hitobjects will represent the song's rhythm better. as same as 00:06:540 (5) -, 00:09:163 (5) - and the rest of your map which has the same rhythm as this part.
00:19:163 (1) - looks like this part here you mainly make the hitobjects in this part to follow the vocals, but this slider seems to follow the instrumental sound instead of vocal sound which most of the hitobjects in this part are followed, creating inconsistency in this part. so i'd recommend to change the slider length here to be 1/1-beat long so it will represent the vocals better.
01:20:802 (6) - enabling the stacking here, you could clearly notice that this hitobject is placed at the coordinate x:-3 y:374. the hitobject here is off-editor-screen. so i'd recommend to unstack this to make this hitobjects not become off-editor-screen.
01:24:573 (2,1) - because the hitobject 01:24:573 (2) - hasn't fully disappeared while the hitobject 01:25:556 (1) - is appearing, they both become overlap on each other, appearing unpleasant-looking aesthetics to the players. so i'd recommend to avoid making these bome overlapped on each other to make a nice pleasant-looking aesthetics to the players.

[CelsiusLK's Hard]

I would mod in thai but i guess you won't probably reply my mod if i do that.
As same issue as Ametrin's Advanced, the combo colours should be more relevant to the background image better
00:20:802 (4) - looks like this part here you mainly make the hitobjects in this part to follow the vocals, so this part could be 2 circles with 1/2-beat gap instead, that will represent the vocal's rhythm better.
00:52:606 (1) - since the clock's ticking sound is looping until 00:54:245 -, it might be better to extend the slider reverses to 00:54:245 - as well, because having hitobjects at 00:53:917 (1) - and 00:54:245 (2) - even they have mostly the same sound as 00:52:606 (1) - doesn't seem to be justified.
00:54:573 (3) - in my perspective, adding new combo in this hitobject might fit better because the transition from clock's ticking sound to drum sound.
01:03:097 (1,2) - since the violin sound is crescendo here, making the spacing here bigger than the previous hitobjects would represent the song's intensity better.

Pretty neat difficulty.

[Collab Insane]

00:10:474 - neglecting to map this spot, which has the discernibly dominant violin sound, is quite inappropriate here. so i'd recommend to add a hitobject in this spot here to represent the violin sound.
00:15:884 (1,2) - players could actually misunderstand that the gap between the hitobject 00:15:884 (1) - and the hitobject 00:16:540 (2) - is spaced 1/2-beat gap, making players gathered 100s or even a miss! so i'd recommend to move the hitobject 00:16:540 (2) - further enough to indicate the players that these hitobjects are spaced 1/1-beat.
01:08:343 - neglecting to map this spot, which has the discernibly dominant cymbal sound, is quite inappropriate here. i understand that the hitobjects in
this part are followed the vocals rhythm, but skipping the cymbal sound which has more dominant than any other instrumental sounds seems to be nonsense. i'd recommend to change the slider to hitcircle at 01:08:179 - and instead adding a 1/2-beat slider at 01:08:343 -, to represent the cymbal sound intensity and gives impact to the song also.
01:20:802 (4,5,6,7) - after i listened conscientiously in this part where these hitobjects are spotted, i literally notice that the song doesn't really have the sound at 01:20:884 -, 01:21:048 -, 01:21:212 -, and 01:21:376 - on both instrumentals nor vocals. It seems like you have made these hitobjects followed any discernible sound. Remember that the main purpose of mapping is to reflect the song's rhythm, that means the rhythm of the song is the most prioritized aspect in the game. It seems like these spammed hitobjects which are spaced with short gap between each hitobjects (which is 1/4 beat) are just for the sake of emphasizes the whole atmosphere of the difficulty's intensity, which is honestly doesn't reflect how the song's rhythm is much. so in oorder to improve the overemphasizing the song's rhythm here, i'd recommend to remove the hitobject 01:20:884 (5) -, which is followed the indiscernible sound, and reduce the usage of 1/4 buzz slider at 01:20:966 (6) -, to make these hitobjects in this part followed the song's rhythm better.
01:21:458 (1,2,3) - It looks like most of the hitobjects which land on the part which has mostly the same rhythm as this part are followed the violin sound here, so should these hitobjects also. But these hitobjects oesn't seem to follow the violin sound which the hitobjects that has mostly the same violin sound like 01:16:212 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:18:835 (1,2,3,4) - are followed at all. In order to emphasize the violin sound better at this part, i'd recommend to make the hitobjects in this part to be remapped by arranging the hitobjects in this part like this: https://puu.sh/ztafH/94a9081bc8.jpg to reflect the drums' rhythm better.
01:25:556 (1,2,3) - making these hitobjects to space pretty near to one another doesn't seem to be appropriate with the song's intensity here. since the sound where these hitobjects 01:25:556 (1,2,3) - are spotted has the most intense than the previous part of the song. so these part should represent the song's intensity by spacing these hitobjects further than how the distance where the previous hitobjects 01:24:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - are spaced, to represent the song's intensity and to give players impact in playing these hitobjects.

in my perspective, i think overall of your map is ready in order to be eligible for pushing this map towards ranking process. but for me i think the mapset doesn't really represent the song's rhythm pretty well. so i guess i won't going to help you pushing this map towards ranked section by nominating this map, but i will support this map towards ranked section as much as possible.
good luck!

Last edited by - Frontier - 2018-02-22T08:35:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2018-02-22T08:22:16+00:00

Frontier's Mod Reply

- Frontier - wrote:
i remembered that i posted about metadata when i wasn't a bn.

[General]
since "リトルウィッチアカデミア" is in source, romanised word should be added in tags. Fixed !i'd recommend to add main characters in tags since most of the anime opening & ending maps nowadays always add this in their maps. but you don't have to add them if you feel uncomfortable to. sorry maybe not , no reason i just dont wanna put it lol[Easy]
00:02:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - in my perspective, this part doesn't seem really represent the instrumentals really well, they seems to be placed anticlimactically. i suggested that using patterns like this https://puu.sh/zrMdR/628a9eaa50.jpg, to make the hitobjects be represented the song's rhythm better. as same as the part 01:16:212 - if you fix this suggestion that i mentioned.00:55:065 - looks like you're failed to make the hitobjects represent the song well. this cymbal sound is pretty dominant and it is the beginning of the peakest part. being just a spinner's end doesn't emphasize the song's intensity really well. that would be such better if this spot is where the hitobject is started. if you fix this issue, i'ld recommend to fix in normal difficulty as well since normal also have a problem in emphasizing the song's intensity here also.01:01:130 (2) - this hitobject has been overlapped by a health point bar. even this is not unrankable, i'd highly suggest moving this hitobject away from the health point bar. because this difficulty is an easy difficulty, having hitobjects overlapping the health point bar could easily cause an unfair reading issue to newbie players who play this difficulty. so i'd recommend to move this hitobject further away from the health point bar. applied all of your mod ![Normal]
00:05:065 (6,1) - using stacks here gives really minor feedback for players since it gives no movement for players to move, making these hitobjects looks sloppy and boring to play. it might be justified if you make these hitobjects stack at 00:07:687 (6,1) - because the piano's pitch here is pretty low. as same as this part here 00:10:310 (6,1) -, this stack is really unacceptable in my perspective since the song's intensity here is increasing, so it's inappropriate here to make these hitobjects stacked to each other. i'd recommend to space these hitobjects further rather than just making them stacked, making this part here become more interesting. as same as 00:10:310 (6,1) - if you agree with this suggestion above.00:17:851 (4) - looks like this part here you mainly make the hitobjects in this part to follow the vocals, but this slider seems to follow the instrumental sound instead of vocal sound which most of the hitobjects in this part are followed, creating inconsistency in this part. so i'd recommend to change the slider length here to be 1/2-beat long so it will represent the vocals better. this hitobject 00:28:343 (4) - has the same issue with the previous hitobject i suggested before, but i'd recommend to make this part 1/2-beat long slider and a circle with the gap between hitobjects 1/2-beat, to represent both the vocals and instrumentals.00:48:343 (3,1) - the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1) - isn't perfectly stacked with the hitcircle 00:48:343 (3) -. let's see the captured screenshot to see how it looks like when the stacking is enabled http://puu.sh/zrNbd/6c95fe5d86.jpg you could clearly see that the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1) - isn't actually stacked with the hitcircle 00:48:343 (3) - which gives no sense because players' intuition is that after the break, players will think that the following hitobjects should be exactly at the same coordinate where the previous hitobjects has landed, but because of this issue, players could actually miss because the following hitobject 00:49:655 (1) - isn't placed at the same coordinate where the hitobject 00:48:343 (3) - is landed. so in order to improve this stack, kindly moving the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1,2) - 4 pixels rightwards and 4 pixels downwards (to the coordinate x:116 y:316) to make the hitcircle 00:49:655 (1) - perfectly stacked with the hitcircle 00:48:343 (3) -, creating the nice pleasant-looking aesthetics to the players.01:05:228 - neglecting to map this spot, which has he discernibly dominant vocal sound, is quite inappropriate here. and since the hitobject 01:05:556 (1) - is stacked on the exactly same coordinate with the hitobject 01:05:065 (5) -, players could actually misunderstand that the gap between the hitobject 01:05:065 (5) - and the hitobject 01:05:556 (1) - is spaced 1/2-beat gap, making players gathered 100s or even a miss! i'd recommend to map this spot 01:05:228 -. applied all of your mod !

[Collab Insane]
00:10:474 - neglecting to map this spot, which has the discernibly dominant violin sound, is quite inappropriate here. so i'd recommend to add a hitobject in this spot here to represent the violin sound. Fixed !00:15:884 (1,2) - players could actually misunderstand that the gap between the hitobject 00:15:884 (1) - and the hitobject 00:16:540 (2) - is spaced 1/2-beat gap, making players gathered 100s or even a miss! so i'd recommend to move the hitobject 00:16:540 (2) - further enough to indicate the players that these hitobjects are spaced 1/1-beat. Fixed !Pretty neat difficulty.

~~my intuition says that i'm too young to nominate this, so i will stop modding at here. good luck!~~ will mod later

Love your mod even tho the explanation is long but im cool with it so , Thank you so much !!

Last edited by -Aerith- 2018-02-22T11:30:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Aerith-

843 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

-Aerith- 2018-02-22T08:27:00+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
i remembered that i posted about metadata when i wasn't a bn.

[CelsiusLK's Hard]
I would mod in thai but i guess you won't probably reply my mod if i do that. inactive so i will replace him for the reply ~
As same issue as Ametrin's Advanced, the combo colours should be more relevant to the background image better
00:20:802 (4) - looks like this part here you mainly make the hitobjects in this part to follow the vocals, so this part could be 2 circles with 1/2-beat gap instead, that will represent the vocal's rhythm better.
00:52:606 (1) - since the clock's ticking sound is looping until 00:54:245 -, it might be better to extend the slider reverses to 00:54:245 - as well, because having hitobjects at 00:53:917 (1) - and 00:54:245 (2) - even they have mostly the same sound as 00:52:606 (1) - doesn't seem to be justified.
00:54:573 (3) - in my perspective, adding new combo in this hitobject might fit better because the transition from clock's ticking sound to drum sound.
01:03:097 (1,2) - since the violin sound is crescendo here, making the spacing here bigger than the previous hitobjects would represent the song's intensity better. applied all of it except for the combo colours tho , i think its good just the way it is
Pretty neat difficulty.[/notice]

~~my intuition says that i'm too young to nominate this, so i will stop modding at here. good luck!~~ will mod later

Thank you ~

Ametrin

717 posts

Joined May 2012

Ametrin 2018-02-22T14:49:05+00:00

N0thing wrote:
Ametrin's Advanced
00:21:130 (1) - Not too sure whether that's readable, but considering this maphas been around for so long it's probably nothing yeah i repeated it many times
00:30:638 (4) - Slight bad overlap that's intended :<

- Frontier - wrote:
i remembered that i posted about metadata when i wasn't a bn.

[Ametrin's Advanced]
the combo colours don't seem to represent the background image really well, in the other's hand it fits with the background image in easy and normal difficulties better. changed as i like :3
widescreen support doesn't seem necessary in this map since this map has not used any storyboard. consider untick the widescreen support here. k
00:03:917 (5) - due to the osu! mode specific ranking criteria, it said that hitobjects must never be off-screen in 4:3 aspect ratios, even partially off-screen can create an unfair reading difficulties to players. so in this case the slider border must not be off-screen as well. consider looking at the link of the screenshots from the game with 800x600 resolution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10302016 you could clearly see that the slider border is partially off-screen. so i'd highly recommend to move this slider upwards to make this hitobject not be off-screen. my fault. Fixed
00:03:917 (5) - this slider doesn't seem to represent the instrumental's rhythm pretty well, both sound at here 00:04:245 - and 00:04:573 - are pretty discernible that these sounds shouldn't be skipped. i'd recommend to make this part like this http://puu.sh/zrOjU/c803ee17fb.jpg so the hitobjects will represent the song's rhythm better. as same as 00:06:540 (5) -, 00:09:163 (5) - and the rest of your map which has the same rhythm as this part. yeah remaped all these part
00:19:163 (1) - looks like this part here you mainly make the hitobjects in this part to follow the vocals, but this slider seems to follow the instrumental sound instead of vocal sound which most of the hitobjects in this part are followed, creating inconsistency in this part. so i'd recommend to change the slider length here to be 1/1-beat long so it will represent the vocals better. nice :3
01:20:802 (6) - enabling the stacking here, you could clearly notice that this hitobject is placed at the coordinate x:-3 y:374. the hitobject here is off-editor-screen. so i'd recommend to unstack this to make this hitobjects not become off-editor-screen. why i always made such mistake ;w;
01:24:573 (2,1) - because the hitobject 01:24:573 (2) - hasn't fully disappeared while the hitobject 01:25:556 (1) - is appearing, they both become overlap on each other, appearing unpleasant-looking aesthetics to the players. so i'd recommend to avoid making these bome overlapped on each other to make a nice pleasant-looking aesthetics to the players. remaped this part

Thx~

Update

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