I'm not good with maps above 3.5*, or longs maps, but i'll give it my best shot.
By the way, these are all suggestions. If you disagree or i made a mistake, don't apply it.
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good luck with your map!
By the way, these are all suggestions. If you disagree or i made a mistake, don't apply it.
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Insane
00:00:788 - Should be a double
00:01:082 - Shouldn't be a double
^^ there is an second chime in the background every 2 beats. It is not where you placed the doubles for some of them. Please change it for the whole section until the singer
00:18:214 - Something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8533075
00:30:641 - Place another note here
00:32:405 (32405|1) - move to column 4
00:32:479 (32479|2) - delete it..? i can't here any sound
00:34:244 (34244|1) - ^^
00:37:185 (37185|2) - ^^
00:37:552 - like this..? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8533150
00:39:464 (39464|2,39538|1) - no sound
00:41:817 (41817|1) - ^^
00:41:670 (41670|0) - extend to 00:41:964
00:41:964 (41964|0) - move to column 2
00:44:170 (44170|1) - no sound
00:46:376 (46376|2) - extend to 00:46:670
00:46:523 (46523|1) - no sound
00:46:670 (46670|2) - move to column 2
00:47:847 - i recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85331830
01:15:494 (75494|0,75494|2,75494|1,75494|3,75788|1,75788|0,75788|2,75788|3,76082|3,76082|2,76082|1,76082|0) - these 3 quads emphasise the snare way to much imo. I would change them to doubles but it's up to you
01:17:111 - add one
01:17:994 - ^^
01:26:523 - ^^
01:27:405 - ^^
01:28:288 - ^^
01:29:170 - ^^
01:40:935 - like this..? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8533216
02:23:729 (143729|1,143729|3,143729|0,143729|2,144023|0,144023|1,144023|3,144023|2,144317|3,144317|2,144317|0,144317|1) - again with the quads
02:25:347 - add one
02:26:229 - ^^
02:30:052 (150052|1,150347|0,150641|2,150935|2,151229|0,151523|3,151817|3) - these seem out of place from the song and the other kiai times. I recommend getting rid of them
02:34:758 - add one
02:35:641 - ^^
02:36:523 - ^^
02:37:405 - ^^
03:06:082 to 03:07:258 - this doesn't seem accurate. The doubles every beat are the same sound as the singles in between, and there is a different sound afterwards. Change to something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8534600 (i couldn't find the correct timing for those drums, you may want to tweak it if you apply it)
03:15:494 to 03:16:670 - same as above
03:24:905 - ^^
03:33:141 - ^^ (i recommend all doubles for this section)
03:46:523 - add one
03:47:405 - ^^
03:55:935 - ^^
03:56:817 - ^^
03:57:700 - ^^
03:58:582 - ^^
03:58:876 - ^^
04:05:347 - ^^
04:06:229 - ^^
04:35:494 (275494|0) - extend this to 04:46:082
04:41:376 - use the same principles with the chimes at the beginning until the singer again
05:09:023 (309023|2) - delete this
00:01:082 - Shouldn't be a double
^^ there is an second chime in the background every 2 beats. It is not where you placed the doubles for some of them. Please change it for the whole section until the singer
00:18:214 - Something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8533075
00:30:641 - Place another note here
00:32:405 (32405|1) - move to column 4
00:32:479 (32479|2) - delete it..? i can't here any sound
00:34:244 (34244|1) - ^^
00:37:185 (37185|2) - ^^
00:37:552 - like this..? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8533150
00:39:464 (39464|2,39538|1) - no sound
00:41:817 (41817|1) - ^^
00:41:670 (41670|0) - extend to 00:41:964
00:41:964 (41964|0) - move to column 2
00:44:170 (44170|1) - no sound
00:46:376 (46376|2) - extend to 00:46:670
00:46:523 (46523|1) - no sound
00:46:670 (46670|2) - move to column 2
00:47:847 - i recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85331830
01:15:494 (75494|0,75494|2,75494|1,75494|3,75788|1,75788|0,75788|2,75788|3,76082|3,76082|2,76082|1,76082|0) - these 3 quads emphasise the snare way to much imo. I would change them to doubles but it's up to you
01:17:111 - add one
01:17:994 - ^^
01:26:523 - ^^
01:27:405 - ^^
01:28:288 - ^^
01:29:170 - ^^
01:40:935 - like this..? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8533216
02:23:729 (143729|1,143729|3,143729|0,143729|2,144023|0,144023|1,144023|3,144023|2,144317|3,144317|2,144317|0,144317|1) - again with the quads
02:25:347 - add one
02:26:229 - ^^
02:30:052 (150052|1,150347|0,150641|2,150935|2,151229|0,151523|3,151817|3) - these seem out of place from the song and the other kiai times. I recommend getting rid of them
02:34:758 - add one
02:35:641 - ^^
02:36:523 - ^^
02:37:405 - ^^
03:06:082 to 03:07:258 - this doesn't seem accurate. The doubles every beat are the same sound as the singles in between, and there is a different sound afterwards. Change to something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8534600 (i couldn't find the correct timing for those drums, you may want to tweak it if you apply it)
03:15:494 to 03:16:670 - same as above
03:24:905 - ^^
03:33:141 - ^^ (i recommend all doubles for this section)
03:46:523 - add one
03:47:405 - ^^
03:55:935 - ^^
03:56:817 - ^^
03:57:700 - ^^
03:58:582 - ^^
03:58:876 - ^^
04:05:347 - ^^
04:06:229 - ^^
04:35:494 (275494|0) - extend this to 04:46:082
04:41:376 - use the same principles with the chimes at the beginning until the singer again
05:09:023 (309023|2) - delete this
good luck with your map!